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-->-- ''WebAnimation/StarTrekLogicalThinking'', "Appeal to Emotion"
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-->-- ''WebAnimation/StarTrekLogicalThinking'', "Appeal to Emotion"Emotion"
->''On the fifth day, he found a corpse.''\\
''Its skull, spine, and arms poked out of the sand, stripped clean of flesh. The bones were dilapidated, cracked open where some scavengers had gotten at the marrow. Whatever clothes or supplies the person had carried were gone. Who knew how long the man had been dead?''\\
''No, not a man.''\\
''Not a woman either.''\\
''Even if it still wore flesh, the body would've been smaller than his own.''\\
''A child.''\\
''He buried the bones. Then he said a prayer for the soul of the departed, that it would find water and shade, and that it would be remembered truly. The prayer was a ritual everyone from the City of Lies had memorized, one every child spoke a hundred times before their [[TongueTrauma cutting]].''\\
''The next day, he found two more corpses. He buried them and prayed for them as well, though he felt uncertainty as he did so.''\\
''Where were the corpses coming from?''\\
''And why were they all so small?''
-->--''Literature/TheLiesOfTheAjungo''
->''On the fifth day, he found a corpse.''\\
''Its skull, spine, and arms poked out of the sand, stripped clean of flesh. The bones were dilapidated, cracked open where some scavengers had gotten at the marrow. Whatever clothes or supplies the person had carried were gone. Who knew how long the man had been dead?''\\
''No, not a man.''\\
''Not a woman either.''\\
''Even if it still wore flesh, the body would've been smaller than his own.''\\
''A child.''\\
''He buried the bones. Then he said a prayer for the soul of the departed, that it would find water and shade, and that it would be remembered truly. The prayer was a ritual everyone from the City of Lies had memorized, one every child spoke a hundred times before their [[TongueTrauma cutting]].''\\
''The next day, he found two more corpses. He buried them and prayed for them as well, though he felt uncertainty as he did so.''\\
''Where were the corpses coming from?''\\
''And why were they all so small?''
-->--''Literature/TheLiesOfTheAjungo''
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—>—Alexander Hamilton, ‘’Theatre/Hamilton’’
''Theatre/{{Hamilton}}'
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->See I never thought I’d live past twenty.
->Where I come some get half as many.”
—>—Alexander Hamilton, ‘’Theatre/Hamilton’’
->Where I come some get half as many.”
—>—Alexander Hamilton, ‘’Theatre/Hamilton’’
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->I had watched entire worlds die. [[LastOfHisKind I had lost my own race]]. How could I care so much about this one small, unsteady creature? How could her death cut me so deeply?
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-->--Music/TheCranberries, "Zombie"
->''Teddy sniffing glue, he was twelve years old.''\\
''Fell from a roof on East two nine.''\\
''Kathy was eleven when she pulled the plug''\\
''on twenty-six reds and a bottle of wine.''\\
''Bobby got leukemia, fourteen years old.''\\
''Looked like sixty-five when he died.''\\
''He was a friend of mine.''
-->--Jim Carroll, "People Who Died"
->''Teddy sniffing glue, he was twelve years old.''\\
''Fell from a roof on East two nine.''\\
''Kathy was eleven when she pulled the plug''\\
''on twenty-six reds and a bottle of wine.''\\
''Bobby got leukemia, fourteen years old.''\\
''Looked like sixty-five when he died.''\\
''He was a friend of mine.''
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''Fell
Fell from a roof on East two nine.
''Kathy
Kathy was eleven when she pulled the
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on twenty-six reds and a bottle of wine.
''Bobby
Bobby got leukemia, fourteen years old.
''Looked
Looked like sixty-five when he died.
''He
He was a friend of mine.''
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-->-- ''WebAnimation/StarTrekTheAnimatedSeries'', "Appeal to Emotion"
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-->--Jim Carroll, "People Who Died"Died"
->'''Janice Rand''': "So, what do ''you'' think happened to those colonists who were missing after the attack by that Andorian marauder? Three of those colonists were children! I hope they're okay."
->'''Christine Chapel''': "They're probably hiding somewhere safe and sound. It would be ''horrible'' if they were killed. They must be safe."
->'''Janice Rand''': "Maybe the reason they haven't been found is because they've been buried under the rubble!"
->'''Christine Chapel''': "That couldn't be! Imagine those poor kids dead! They ''have'' to be safe! They're just waiting for a search party to find them!"
-->-- ''WebAnimation/StarTrekTheAnimatedSeries'', "Appeal to Emotion"
->'''Janice Rand''': "So, what do ''you'' think happened to those colonists who were missing after the attack by that Andorian marauder? Three of those colonists were children! I hope they're okay."
->'''Christine Chapel''': "They're probably hiding somewhere safe and sound. It would be ''horrible'' if they were killed. They must be safe."
->'''Janice Rand''': "Maybe the reason they haven't been found is because they've been buried under the rubble!"
->'''Christine Chapel''': "That couldn't be! Imagine those poor kids dead! They ''have'' to be safe! They're just waiting for a search party to find them!"
-->-- ''WebAnimation/StarTrekTheAnimatedSeries'', "Appeal to Emotion"
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->'''Twas in the town of Sunderland, and in the year of 1883,''
->''That about 200 children were launch'd into eternity.''
-->--''[[https://www.mcgonagall-online.org.uk/gems/the-sunderland-calamity The Sunderland Calamity]]'' by William [=McGonagall=]
->''That about 200 children were launch'd into eternity.''
-->--''[[https://www.mcgonagall-online.org.uk/gems/the-sunderland-calamity The Sunderland Calamity]]'' by William [=McGonagall=]
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-->--Music/TheCranberries, "Zombie""Zombie"
->''Teddy sniffing glue, he was twelve years old.''\\
''Fell from a roof on East two nine.''\\
''Kathy was eleven when she pulled the plug''\\
''on twenty-six reds and a bottle of wine.''\\
''Bobby got leukemia, fourteen years old.''\\
''Looked like sixty-five when he died.''\\
''He was a friend of mine.''
-->--Jim Carroll, "People Who Died"
->''Teddy sniffing glue, he was twelve years old.''\\
''Fell from a roof on East two nine.''\\
''Kathy was eleven when she pulled the plug''\\
''on twenty-six reds and a bottle of wine.''\\
''Bobby got leukemia, fourteen years old.''\\
''Looked like sixty-five when he died.''\\
''He was a friend of mine.''
-->--Jim Carroll, "People Who Died"
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->''Another head hangs lowly.\\
Child is slowly taken.''
-->--Music/TheCranberries, "Zombie"
->''Another head hangs lowly.\\
Child is slowly taken.''
-->--Music/TheCranberries, "Zombie"
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->That wasn't the case for Ash, though. To him, death was a very ''real'' thing.
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->That wasn't the case for Ash, though. To him, death was a very ''real'' thing. Sid, Reid, Jack...Chance Chapman—all names of people he had once known whose lives were snatched away from them like it was nothing.
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-->--''The Unlicensed Magician,'' by Kelly BarnhillBarnhill
->Most ten-year-olds were under the assumption that they were immortal. Death was a concept that they were so far removed from that it almost didn't seem real.
->That wasn't the case for Ash, though. To him, death was a very ''real'' thing.
--> ''Fanfic/{{Essence}}''
->Most ten-year-olds were under the assumption that they were immortal. Death was a concept that they were so far removed from that it almost didn't seem real.
->That wasn't the case for Ash, though. To him, death was a very ''real'' thing.
--> ''Fanfic/{{Essence}}''
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-->--'''The Ellimist,''' ''Literature/{{Animorphs}} - The Ellimist Chronicles''
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-->--'''The Ellimist,''' ''Literature/{{Animorphs}} - The Ellimist Chronicles''Chronicles''
->There were large red flowers growing along the edges of the walls defining the rooftop patio - a gift from one of his [[ChildMage magic children]], right before she died. "[[LickedByTheDog To help you breathe]]," she said kindly, before she breathed her last. Her lips were pale, her eyes were the color of milk, her hair had fallen out months before. He usually did not learn the names of his magic children - or anyone, really. People die so quickly when they are not enhanced, and only the [[ImmortalitySeeker Minister]] is [[LongevityTreatment enhanced]]. He has [[BanOnMagic seen to that]]. But [[PoweredByAForsakenChild the magic children, they die quicker]]. Best not to know them.
->This one, though. This one he knew. Not her name, of course, just the ''fact'' of her - that inscrutable bit of the Self that cannot be drawn or recorded or named. And after all these years, he mourned her. [[VillainousBSOD A raw, painful, immediate feeling of loss]].
-->--''The Unlicensed Magician,'' by Kelly Barnhill
->There were large red flowers growing along the edges of the walls defining the rooftop patio - a gift from one of his [[ChildMage magic children]], right before she died. "[[LickedByTheDog To help you breathe]]," she said kindly, before she breathed her last. Her lips were pale, her eyes were the color of milk, her hair had fallen out months before. He usually did not learn the names of his magic children - or anyone, really. People die so quickly when they are not enhanced, and only the [[ImmortalitySeeker Minister]] is [[LongevityTreatment enhanced]]. He has [[BanOnMagic seen to that]]. But [[PoweredByAForsakenChild the magic children, they die quicker]]. Best not to know them.
->This one, though. This one he knew. Not her name, of course, just the ''fact'' of her - that inscrutable bit of the Self that cannot be drawn or recorded or named. And after all these years, he mourned her. [[VillainousBSOD A raw, painful, immediate feeling of loss]].
-->--''The Unlicensed Magician,'' by Kelly Barnhill
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->I had watched entire worlds die. [[LastOfHisKind I had lost my own race]]. How could I care so much about this one small, unsteady creature? How could her death cut me so deeply?
-->--'''The Ellimist,''' ''Literature/{{Animorphs}} - The Ellimist Chronicles''
-->--'''The Ellimist,''' ''Literature/{{Animorphs}} - The Ellimist Chronicles''
