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-->-- [[Creator/RobertAHeinlein Lazarus Long]]
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-->-- [[Creator/RobertAHeinlein '''[[Creator/RobertAHeinlein Lazarus Long]]Long]]'''
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Now filled with filth and foul disease.''\\
--'''"The Mariner's Revenge Song",''' Music/TheDecemberists
--'''"The Mariner's Revenge Song",''' Music/TheDecemberists
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Now filled with filth and foul disease.''\\
--'''"The''
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And she kept him 'til morning, that had slain her good man''.\\
--'''"Baron O' Brackley"'''
->"''Know what's going to happen afterwards, Gwyn? We're going to be assigned to help out your widow. Everyone else is busy with their own little plots of heaven. So it'll be the ivets who get dumped on. Once again. I'm going to be one of them, Gwyn. I'm going to be a regular visitor to poor, grieving Rachel. She'll like me, I'll make sure of that. Just like you and all the others, you want to believe that everything's so perfect on this planet. You convinced yourselves we're lust a bunch of regular lads who got a bad break in life. Anything else would have cracked your dream open and made you face reality. Illusion is easy. Illusion is the loses way out. Your way. You and all the others grubbing round in the dirt and the rain. In a couple of months I'll be in the bed you made, under the roof you sweated over, and I'll have my dick rammed up inside Rachel making her squeal like a pig in heat. I hope you hate that idea, Gwyn. I hope it makes you sick inside. Because that's not the worst. Oh, no. Once I'm through with her, I'll have Jason. Your shiny-eyed beautiful son. I'll be his new father. I'll be his lover. I'll be his owner.'' "
--> -- '''Quinn Dexter''', ''[[Literature/TheNightsDawnTrilogy The Reality Dysfunction]]''
--> "There's only one way to comfort a widow, but remember the risk."
--'''"Baron O' Brackley"'''
->"''Know what's going to happen afterwards, Gwyn? We're going to be assigned to help out your widow. Everyone else is busy with their own little plots of heaven. So it'll be the ivets who get dumped on. Once again. I'm going to be one of them, Gwyn. I'm going to be a regular visitor to poor, grieving Rachel. She'll like me, I'll make sure of that. Just like you and all the others, you want to believe that everything's so perfect on this planet. You convinced yourselves we're lust a bunch of regular lads who got a bad break in life. Anything else would have cracked your dream open and made you face reality. Illusion is easy. Illusion is the loses way out. Your way. You and all the others grubbing round in the dirt and the rain. In a couple of months I'll be in the bed you made, under the roof you sweated over, and I'll have my dick rammed up inside Rachel making her squeal like a pig in heat. I hope you hate that idea, Gwyn. I hope it makes you sick inside. Because that's not the worst. Oh, no. Once I'm through with her, I'll have Jason. Your shiny-eyed beautiful son. I'll be his new father. I'll be his lover. I'll be his owner.'' "
--> -- '''Quinn Dexter''', ''[[Literature/TheNightsDawnTrilogy The Reality Dysfunction]]''
--> "There's only one way to comfort a widow, but remember the risk."
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And she kept him 'til morning, that had slain her good man''.\\
--'''"Baronman''.
-->-- '''"Baron O' Brackley"'''
->"''Know what's going to happen afterwards, Gwyn? We're going to be assigned to help out your widow. Everyone else is busy with their own little plots of heaven. So it'll be the ivets who get dumped on. Once again. I'm going to be one of them, Gwyn. I'm going to be a regular visitor to poor, grieving Rachel. She'll like me, I'll make sure of that. Just like you and all the others, you want to believe that everything's so perfect on this planet. You convinced yourselves we're lust a bunch of regular lads who got a bad break in life. Anything else would have cracked your dream open and made you face reality. Illusion is easy. Illusion is the loses way out. Your way. You and all the others grubbing round in the dirt and the rain. In a couple of months I'll be in the bed you made, under the roof you sweated over, and I'll have my dick rammed up inside Rachel making her squeal like a pig in heat. I hope you hate that idea, Gwyn. I hope it makes you sick inside. Because that's not the worst. Oh, no. Once I'm through with her, I'll have Jason. Your shiny-eyed beautiful son. I'll be his new father. I'll be his lover. I'll be his owner.'' "
--> --''"
-->-- '''Quinn Dexter''', ''[[Literature/TheNightsDawnTrilogy The Reality Dysfunction]]''
--> "There's -> "''There's only one way to comfort a widow, but remember the risk."''"
--'''"Baron
-->-- '''"Baron O' Brackley"'''
->"''Know what's going to happen afterwards, Gwyn? We're going to be assigned to help out your widow. Everyone else is busy with their own little plots of heaven. So it'll be the ivets who get dumped on. Once again. I'm going to be one of them, Gwyn. I'm going to be a regular visitor to poor, grieving Rachel. She'll like me, I'll make sure of that. Just like you and all the others, you want to believe that everything's so perfect on this planet. You convinced yourselves we're lust a bunch of regular lads who got a bad break in life. Anything else would have cracked your dream open and made you face reality. Illusion is easy. Illusion is the loses way out. Your way. You and all the others grubbing round in the dirt and the rain. In a couple of months I'll be in the bed you made, under the roof you sweated over, and I'll have my dick rammed up inside Rachel making her squeal like a pig in heat. I hope you hate that idea, Gwyn. I hope it makes you sick inside. Because that's not the worst. Oh, no. Once I'm through with her, I'll have Jason. Your shiny-eyed beautiful son. I'll be his new father. I'll be his lover. I'll be his owner.
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-->-- '''Quinn Dexter''', ''[[Literature/TheNightsDawnTrilogy The Reality Dysfunction]]''
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--> -- '''Quinn Dexter''', ''[[Literature/TheNightsDawnTrilogy The Reality Dysfunction]]''Dysfunction]]''
--> "There's only one way to comfort a widow, but remember the risk."
-->-- [[Creator/RobertAHeinlein Lazarus Long]]
--> "There's only one way to comfort a widow, but remember the risk."
-->-- [[Creator/RobertAHeinlein Lazarus Long]]
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->''Oh, cam ye by Brackley's, and were ye in there?\\
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->''Oh, cam came ye by Brackley's, and were ye in there?\\
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And saw you his Peggy, a-tearing her hair?\\
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And I saw his Peggy, she was making good cheer\\
She was ranting and dancing and singing for joy,\\
She was ranting and dancing and singing for joy,\\
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She wasranting rantin' and dancing dancin' and singing singin' for joy,\\
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She laughed with him, drank with him, welcomed him in,\\
And she kept him 'til morning, that had slain her good man.\\
And she kept him 'til morning, that had slain her good man.\\
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She laughed with wi' him, drank with wi' him, welcomed him in,\\
And she kept him 'til morning, that had slain her goodman.man''.\\
And she kept him 'til morning, that had slain her good
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--'''"The Mariner's Revenge Song",''' TheDecemberists
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--'''"The Mariner's Revenge Song",''' TheDecemberists
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->''Came you by Brackley's, and were you in there?\\
And saw you his Peggy, a-tearing her hair?\\
Yes, I came by Brackley's, and I was in there,\\
And I saw his Peggy, she was making good cheer\\
She was ranting and dancing and singing for joy,\\
And vowing that very night she would feast Inveray,\\
She laughed with him, drank with him, welcomed him in,\\
And she kept him 'til morning, that had slain her good man.\\
--'''"Baron O' Brackley"'''
And saw you his Peggy, a-tearing her hair?\\
Yes, I came by Brackley's, and I was in there,\\
And I saw his Peggy, she was making good cheer\\
She was ranting and dancing and singing for joy,\\
And vowing that very night she would feast Inveray,\\
She laughed with him, drank with him, welcomed him in,\\
And she kept him 'til morning, that had slain her good man.\\
--'''"Baron O' Brackley"'''
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--> -- '''Quinn Dexter''', ''[[{{Literature/ptitleeiku6qu3}} The Reality Dysfunction]]''
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--> -- '''Quinn Dexter''', ''[[{{Literature/ptitleeiku6qu3}} ''[[Literature/TheNightsDawnTrilogy The Reality Dysfunction]]''
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->''You had a charming air\\
So cheap and debonair\\
My widowed mother found so sweet.\\
And so she took you in\\
Her sheets still warm with him\\
Now filled with filth and foul disease.''\\
--'''"The Mariner's Revenge Song",''' TheDecemberists
So cheap and debonair\\
My widowed mother found so sweet.\\
And so she took you in\\
Her sheets still warm with him\\
Now filled with filth and foul disease.''\\
--'''"The Mariner's Revenge Song",''' TheDecemberists
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--> -- '''Quinn Dexter''', ''[[NightsDawn ''[[{{Literature/ptitleeiku6qu3}} The Reality Dysfunction]]''
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"''Know what's going to happen afterwards, Gwyn? We're going to be assigned to help out your widow. Everyone else is busy with their own little plots of heaven. So it'll be the ivets who get dumped on. Once again. I'm going to be one of them, Gwyn. I'm going to be a regular visitor to poor, grieving Rachel. She'll like me, I'll make sure of that. Just like you and all the others, you want to believe that everything's so perfect on this planet. You convinced yourselves we're lust a bunch of regular lads who got a bad break in life. Anything else would have cracked your dream open and made you face reality. Illusion is easy. Illusion is the loses way out. Your way. You and all the others grubbing round in the dirt and the rain. In a couple of months I'll be in the bed you made, under the roof you sweated over, and I'll have my dick rammed up inside Rachel making her squeal like a pig in heat. I hope you hate that idea, Gwyn. I hope it makes you sick inside. Because that's not the worst. Oh, no. Once I'm through with her, I'll have Jason. Your shiny-eyed beautiful son. I'll be his new father. I'll be his lover. I'll be his owner.'' "
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