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** [[AIIsACrapshoot Techtron]] is punished for [[KillAllHumans his many crimes]] by [[CruelMercy being turned]] [[KarmicTransformation into what he hated most, a human.]]
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** [[AIIsACrapshoot Techtron]] is punished for [[KillAllHumans his many crimes]] by [[CruelMercy being turned]] [[KarmicTransformation into what he hated most, most,]] [[HumanityEnsues a human.]]
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* '''Averted''': It's impossible to convert anything living to fully robotic.
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* '''Averted''': It's impossible to convert anything living to fully robotic. And even if it was, it would be impractical to do so, since you could just build a regular robot instead.
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** The [[PlayingWithSyringes experiment is the point]] for Evulz's selfish vision or dogma. That they don't last is why he hasn't done it to himseld but he is getting closer one victim at a time.
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** The [[PlayingWithSyringes experiment is the point]] for Evulz's selfish vision or dogma. That they don't last is why he hasn't done it to himseld himself but he is getting closer to his end goal, one victim at a time.
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* '''Conversed''': ???
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* '''Reconstructed''': After lots of refining and testing, robotizing becomes a streamlined evil emperor's dream-come-true and a hero's worst nightmare.
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* '''Reconstructed''': '''Reconstructed''':
** After lots of refining and testing, robotizing becomes a streamlined evil emperor's dream-come-true and a hero's worst nightmare.
** After lots of refining and testing, robotizing becomes a streamlined evil emperor's dream-come-true and a hero's worst nightmare.
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** Bob looks scared as he's about to be robotized, but then smiles because he ''wants'' this to happen.
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** Bob looks scared as he's about to be robotized, but then smiles only because he knows the process is painful. He actually ''wants'' this to happen.be a robot.
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** ...But then he starts screaming in terror as he's converted.
** ...But then the Emperor sees Bob smiling and quickly stops the process.
** ...But then the Emperor sees Bob smiling and quickly stops the process.
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** ...But then Until he starts screaming in terror as he's converted.
sees the parts that's going to replace his organs, and changes his mind about wanting to become a robot.
** ...But then he realises that his new robot body can't do any of theEmperor sees Bob smiling cool things he expects it to do, and quickly stops the process.that most of its functions (e.g. flexibility, mobility, etc.) is worse than his original body, causing him to be depressed.
** ...But then he realises that his new robot body can't do any of the
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** Bob is horrified at being "purified" by an EvilLuddite against his will.
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** The [[PlayingWithSyringes experiment is the point]] for Evulz's selfish vision or dogma. That they don't last is why he hasn't done it to himseld but he is getting closer one victim at a time.
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** Bob has his extensive cybernetics removed as punishment and to disarm him.
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** Bob has his extensive cybernetics removed as punishment and to disarm disarm[[note]]{{Pun}} optional[[/note]] him.
