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** [[CrapsackWorld The story takes place in a world where everyone fits this trope]] [[OnlySaneMan except for Evulz]]. When he tries to enforce world peace, [[EvilCannotComprehendGood people assume he's jealous that he's never had this kind of pleasure.]]
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** [[CrapsackWorld The story takes place in a world where everyone fits this trope]] [[OnlySaneMan except for Evulz]]. When he tries to enforce world peace, [[EvilCannotComprehendGood [[GoodCannotComprehendEvil people assume he's jealous that he's never had this kind of pleasure.]]
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Reverting to male pronouns since most of the text is meant for a male character and plenty of sentences are still on a male pronoun/name and lose all sense with a female name in it (we just don't know who we're talking about anymore).
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* '''Straight''': Emperor Evulz attempts to get Alice to talk through shocking him repeatedly with 2000 volts. Bob is moaning and writhing in pleasure.
* '''Exaggerated''': Evulz sets it to 1,000,000 volts. Alice is [[TheGruntingOrgasm is grunting and hollering for more]] and has [[JizzedInMyPants jizzed in his pants]].
* '''Exaggerated''': Evulz sets it to 1,000,000 volts. Alice is [[TheGruntingOrgasm is grunting and hollering for more]] and has [[JizzedInMyPants jizzed in his pants]].
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* '''Straight''': Emperor Evulz attempts to get Alice Bob to talk through shocking him repeatedly with 2000 volts. Bob is moaning and writhing in pleasure.
* '''Exaggerated''': Evulz sets it to 1,000,000 volts.Alice Bob is [[TheGruntingOrgasm is grunting and hollering for more]] and has [[JizzedInMyPants jizzed in his pants]].
* '''Exaggerated''': Evulz sets it to 1,000,000 volts.
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** Evulz attempts TickleTorture, and Alice, giggling, tells him he should get more feathers.
** Evulz punches her in the face repeatedly to torture her and Alice asks him to try harder next time.
** Alice simply FeelsNoPain, so Evulz' torture doesn't matter to her.
* '''Justified''': Alice is a CombatSadomasochist who enjoys inflicting pain and receiving pain, even in bed.
** Evulz punches her in the face repeatedly to torture her and Alice asks him to try harder next time.
** Alice simply FeelsNoPain, so Evulz' torture doesn't matter to her.
* '''Justified''': Alice is a CombatSadomasochist who enjoys inflicting pain and receiving pain, even in bed.
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** Evulz attempts TickleTorture, TickleTorture and Alice, Bob, giggling, tells him he should get more feathers.
** Evulz punchesher him in the face repeatedly to torture her him and Alice Bob asks him to try harder next time.
**Alice Bob simply FeelsNoPain, so Evulz' torture doesn't matter to her.
him.
* '''Justified''':Alice Bob is a CombatSadomasochist who enjoys inflicting pain and receiving pain, even in bed.
** Evulz punches
**
* '''Justified''':
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** At the very [[ToThePain mention]] of the electrical shock, Craven [[AintTooProudToBeg caves in]] and [[PleaseIWillDoAnything agrees to any of Evulz' terms]], all the while [[PoseOfSupplication kneeling]], shivering and [[TearsOfFear about to break into tears]].
** Bob tries to seduce Alice by messaging and kissing him gently on the neck... [[HatesBeingTouched and Bob feels like he's being tortured]] because he doesn't like feeling comfortable physically or because even that leaves him in pain.
** Alice can't get off, upon receiving physical pleasure and comfort which makes you wonder how he's even able to have sex.
** Bob tries to seduce Alice by messaging and kissing him gently on the neck... [[HatesBeingTouched and Bob feels like he's being tortured]] because he doesn't like feeling comfortable physically or because even that leaves him in pain.
** Alice can't get off, upon receiving physical pleasure and comfort which makes you wonder how he's even able to have sex.
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** At the very [[ToThePain mention]] of the electrical shock, Craven Bob [[AintTooProudToBeg caves in]] and [[PleaseIWillDoAnything agrees to any of Evulz' terms]], all the while [[PoseOfSupplication kneeling]], shivering and [[TearsOfFear about to break into tears]].
**Bob Evulz tries to seduce Alice Bob by messaging massaging and kissing him gently on the neck... [[HatesBeingTouched and Bob feels like he's being tortured]] because he doesn't like feeling comfortable physically or because even that leaves him in pain.
**Alice Bob can't get off, upon receiving physical pleasure and comfort which makes you wonder how he's even able to have sex.
**
**
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* '''Subverted''': Alice fakes orgasm for a few seconds before remarking "Okay, this actually hurts."
* '''Double Subverted''': It turns out it was a joke, and Alice tells Evulz to keep going.
* '''Double Subverted''': It turns out it was a joke, and Alice tells Evulz to keep going.
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* '''Subverted''': Alice Bob fakes orgasm for a few seconds before remarking "Okay, this actually hurts."
* '''Double Subverted''': It turns out it was a joke, andAlice Bob tells Evulz to keep going.
* '''Double Subverted''': It turns out it was a joke, and
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** Evulz cranks it up to [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill a billion volts]], then [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice shoves 20 knives]] in his head, thighs, arms, and calves, then slices him in half. Alice tells him that it was the best climax he ever experienced and thanks Evulz for having made him come so hard.
** Evulz [[SuckinessIsPainful forces Alice to]] [[CoolAndUnusualPunishment listen to]] Music/{{Nickelback}}, and [[{{Unishment}} he enjoys it]]. So Evulz assumes that he must be a hardcore masochist [[OpinionMyopia even though Alice clearly isn't and just likes their music]].
** Evulz [[SuckinessIsPainful forces Alice to]] [[CoolAndUnusualPunishment listen to]] Music/{{Nickelback}}, and [[{{Unishment}} he enjoys it]]. So Evulz assumes that he must be a hardcore masochist [[OpinionMyopia even though Alice clearly isn't and just likes their music]].
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** Evulz cranks it up to [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill a billion volts]], then [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice shoves 20 knives]] in his head, thighs, arms, and calves, then slices him in half. Alice Bob tells him that it was the best climax he ever experienced and thanks Evulz for having made him come so hard.
** Evulz [[SuckinessIsPainful forcesAlice Bob to]] [[CoolAndUnusualPunishment listen to]] Music/{{Nickelback}}, and [[{{Unishment}} he enjoys it]]. So Evulz assumes that he must be a hardcore masochist [[OpinionMyopia even though Alice Bob clearly isn't and just likes their music]].
** Evulz [[SuckinessIsPainful forces
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** When Evulz is defeated, Alice gets to take the torture device home. Nowadays, [[ADateWithRosiePalms he uses it every night.]]
* '''Zig Zagged''': Alice laughs it off, then realizes this actually hurts... but it turns out he was thinking about something else, and laughs again, only to realize that Evulz turned up the torture dial, and this times she [[TheGruntingOrgasm grunts in delight]]...
* '''Zig Zagged''': Alice laughs it off, then realizes this actually hurts... but it turns out he was thinking about something else, and laughs again, only to realize that Evulz turned up the torture dial, and this times she [[TheGruntingOrgasm grunts in delight]]...
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** When Evulz is defeated, Alice Bob gets to take the torture device home. Nowadays, [[ADateWithRosiePalms he uses it every night.]]
* '''Zig Zagged''':Alice Bob laughs it off, then realizes this actually hurts... but it turns out he was thinking about something else, and laughs again, only to realize that Evulz turned up the torture dial, and this times she [[TheGruntingOrgasm he[[TheGruntingOrgasm grunts in delight]]...
* '''Zig Zagged''':
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** Evulz has [[WeHaveWaysOfMakingYouTalk ways of making Alice talk]] besides torture, TruthSerum to name just one.
** Alice is just as susceptible to torture as everyone else is.
* '''Enforced''': The writers realize Alice is too vanilla, even as an ActionHero and she needs a quirk.
** Alice is just as susceptible to torture as everyone else is.
* '''Enforced''': The writers realize Alice is too vanilla, even as an ActionHero and she needs a quirk.
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** Evulz has [[WeHaveWaysOfMakingYouTalk ways of making Alice Bob talk]] besides torture, TruthSerum to name just one.
**Alice Bob is just as susceptible to torture as everyone else is.
* '''Enforced''': The writers realizeAlice Bob is too vanilla, even as an ActionHero and she he needs a quirk.
**
* '''Enforced''': The writers realize
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* '''Invoked''': Alice purposely obtains a MacGuffin from Evulz so that Evulz will attempt to torture her.
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* '''Invoked''': Alice Bob purposely obtains a MacGuffin from Evulz so that Evulz will attempt to torture her.
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* '''Straight''': Emperor Evulz attempts to get Bob to talk through shocking him repeatedly with 2000 volts. Bob is moaning and writhing in pleasure.
* '''Exaggerated''': Evulz sets it to 1,000,000 volts. Bob is [[TheGruntingOrgasm is grunting and hollering for more]] and has [[JizzedInMyPants jizzed in his pants]].
* '''Exaggerated''': Evulz sets it to 1,000,000 volts. Bob is [[TheGruntingOrgasm is grunting and hollering for more]] and has [[JizzedInMyPants jizzed in his pants]].
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* '''Straight''': Emperor Evulz attempts to get Bob Alice to talk through shocking him repeatedly with 2000 volts. Bob is moaning and writhing in pleasure.
* '''Exaggerated''': Evulz sets it to 1,000,000 volts.Bob Alice is [[TheGruntingOrgasm is grunting and hollering for more]] and has [[JizzedInMyPants jizzed in his pants]].
* '''Exaggerated''': Evulz sets it to 1,000,000 volts.
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** Evulz attempts TickleTorture, and Bob, giggling, tells him he should get more feathers.
** Evulz punches him in the face repeatedly to torture him and Bob asks him to try harder next time.
** Bob simply FeelsNoPain, so Evulz' torture doesn't matter to him.
* '''Justified''': Bob is a CombatSadomasochist who enjoys inflicting pain and receiving pain, even in bed.
** Evulz punches him in the face repeatedly to torture him and Bob asks him to try harder next time.
** Bob simply FeelsNoPain, so Evulz' torture doesn't matter to him.
* '''Justified''': Bob is a CombatSadomasochist who enjoys inflicting pain and receiving pain, even in bed.
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** Evulz attempts TickleTorture, and Bob, Alice, giggling, tells him he should get more feathers.
** Evulz puncheshim her in the face repeatedly to torture him her and Bob Alice asks him to try harder next time.
**Bob Alice simply FeelsNoPain, so Evulz' torture doesn't matter to him.
her.
* '''Justified''':Bob Alice is a CombatSadomasochist who enjoys inflicting pain and receiving pain, even in bed.
** Evulz punches
**
* '''Justified''':
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** Alice tries to seduce Bob by messaging and kissing him gently on the neck... [[HatesBeingTouched and Bob feels like he's being tortured]] because he doesn't like feeling comfortable physically or because even that leaves him in pain.
** Bob can't get off, upon receiving physical pleasure and comfort which makes you wonder how he's even able to have sex.
** Bob can't get off, upon receiving physical pleasure and comfort which makes you wonder how he's even able to have sex.
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** Alice Bob tries to seduce Bob Alice by messaging and kissing him gently on the neck... [[HatesBeingTouched and Bob feels like he's being tortured]] because he doesn't like feeling comfortable physically or because even that leaves him in pain.
**Bob Alice can't get off, upon receiving physical pleasure and comfort which makes you wonder how he's even able to have sex.
**
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* '''Subverted''': Bob fakes orgasm for a few seconds before remarking "Okay, this actually hurts."
* '''Double Subverted''': It turns out it was a joke, and Bob tells Evulz to keep going.
* '''Double Subverted''': It turns out it was a joke, and Bob tells Evulz to keep going.
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* '''Subverted''': Bob Alice fakes orgasm for a few seconds before remarking "Okay, this actually hurts."
* '''Double Subverted''': It turns out it was a joke, andBob Alice tells Evulz to keep going.
* '''Double Subverted''': It turns out it was a joke, and
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** Evulz cranks it up to [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill a billion volts]], then [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice shoves 20 knives]] in his head, thighs, arms, and calves, then slices him in half. Bob tells him that it was the best climax he ever experienced and thanks Evulz for having made him come so hard.
** Evulz [[SuckinessIsPainful forces Bob to]] [[CoolAndUnusualPunishment listen to]] Music/{{Justin Bieber}}, and [[{{Unishment}} he enjoys it]]. So Evulz assumes that he must be a hardcore masochist [[OpinionMyopia even though Bob clearly isn't and just likes his music]].
** Evulz [[SuckinessIsPainful forces Bob to]] [[CoolAndUnusualPunishment listen to]] Music/{{Justin Bieber}}, and [[{{Unishment}} he enjoys it]]. So Evulz assumes that he must be a hardcore masochist [[OpinionMyopia even though Bob clearly isn't and just likes his music]].
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** Evulz cranks it up to [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill a billion volts]], then [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice shoves 20 knives]] in his head, thighs, arms, and calves, then slices him in half. Bob Alice tells him that it was the best climax he ever experienced and thanks Evulz for having made him come so hard.
** Evulz [[SuckinessIsPainful forcesBob Alice to]] [[CoolAndUnusualPunishment listen to]] Music/{{Justin Bieber}}, Music/{{Nickelback}}, and [[{{Unishment}} he enjoys it]]. So Evulz assumes that he must be a hardcore masochist [[OpinionMyopia even though Bob Alice clearly isn't and just likes his their music]].
** Evulz [[SuckinessIsPainful forces
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** When Evulz is defeated, Bob gets to take the torture device home. Nowadays, [[ADateWithRosiePalms he uses it every night.]]
* '''Zig Zagged''': Bob laughs it off, then realizes this actually hurts... but it turns out he was thinking about something else, and laughs again, only to realize that Evulz turned up the torture dial, and this times he [[TheGruntingOrgasm grunts in delight]]...
* '''Zig Zagged''': Bob laughs it off, then realizes this actually hurts... but it turns out he was thinking about something else, and laughs again, only to realize that Evulz turned up the torture dial, and this times he [[TheGruntingOrgasm grunts in delight]]...
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** When Evulz is defeated, Bob Alice gets to take the torture device home. Nowadays, [[ADateWithRosiePalms he uses it every night.]]
* '''Zig Zagged''':Bob Alice laughs it off, then realizes this actually hurts... but it turns out he was thinking about something else, and laughs again, only to realize that Evulz turned up the torture dial, and this times he she [[TheGruntingOrgasm grunts in delight]]...
* '''Zig Zagged''':
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** Evulz has [[WeHaveWaysOfMakingYouTalk ways of making Bob talk]] besides torture, TruthSerum to name just one.
** Bob is just as susceptible to torture as everyone else is.
* '''Enforced''': The writers realize Bob is too vanilla, even as an ActionHero and he needs a quirk.
** Bob is just as susceptible to torture as everyone else is.
* '''Enforced''': The writers realize Bob is too vanilla, even as an ActionHero and he needs a quirk.
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** Evulz has [[WeHaveWaysOfMakingYouTalk ways of making Bob Alice talk]] besides torture, TruthSerum to name just one.
**Bob Alice is just as susceptible to torture as everyone else is.
* '''Enforced''': The writers realizeBob Alice is too vanilla, even as an ActionHero and he she needs a quirk.
**
* '''Enforced''': The writers realize
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* '''Invoked''': Bob purposely obtains a MacGuffin from Evulz so that Evulz will attempt to torture him.
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* '''Invoked''': Bob Alice purposely obtains a MacGuffin from Evulz so that Evulz will attempt to torture him.her.
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* '''Reconstructed''': Bob is able to weird out Evulz enough to leave him alone.
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* '''Reconstructed''': '''Reconstructed''':
** Bob is able to weird out Evulz enough to leave himalone.alone.
** Bob [[BackFromTheDead gets better.]]
** Bob gets his allies to accept his kink as just another part of who he is.
** Bob is able to weird out Evulz enough to leave him
** Bob [[BackFromTheDead gets better.]]
** Bob gets his allies to accept his kink as just another part of who he is.
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** The story takes place in a world where everyone fits this trope except for Evulz. When he tries to enforce world peace, people assume he's jealous that he's never had this kind of pleasure.
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** [[CrapsackWorld The story takes place in a world where everyone fits this trope trope]] [[OnlySaneMan except for Evulz. Evulz]]. When he tries to enforce world peace, [[EvilCannotComprehendGood people assume he's jealous that he's never had this kind of pleasure.]]
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** Evulz ends up traumatizing himself by torturing Bob.
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** [[HorrifyingTheHorror Evulz ends up traumatizing himself by torturing Bob.]]
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Feeling no pain from torture doesn't mean you'll enjoy it.
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* '''Justified''':
** Bob is a CombatSadomasochist who enjoys inflicting pain and receiving pain, even in bed.
** He simply FeelsNoPain, so it doesn't matter for him.
** Bob is a CombatSadomasochist who enjoys inflicting pain and receiving pain, even in bed.
** He simply FeelsNoPain, so it doesn't matter for him.
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* '''Justified''': Bob is a CombatSadomasochist who enjoys inflicting pain and receiving pain, even in
** He simply FeelsNoPain, so it doesn't matter for him.
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** Bob loves torture so much that when the team has to go undercover, Evulz tells his allies to pull out the whips and brands and roadblocks with random torture and keep an eye out for anybody that seems to be turned on by the horror.
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* '''Deconstructed''': By allowing the torture to happen Bob allows himself to get disfigured or killed.
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* '''Deconstructed''': '''Deconstructed''':
** By allowing the torture to happen Bob allows himself to get disfigured orkilled.killed.
** Bob's love of being tortured [[EveryoneHasStandards unnerves the rest of his team]] and (probably unfairly) label him the TokenEvilTeammate just because of it.
** By allowing the torture to happen Bob allows himself to get disfigured or
** Bob's love of being tortured [[EveryoneHasStandards unnerves the rest of his team]] and (probably unfairly) label him the TokenEvilTeammate just because of it.
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** Or he simply FeelsNoPain, so it doesn't matter for him.
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** Or he He simply FeelsNoPain, so it doesn't matter for him.
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** Bob [[TortureAlwaysWorks succumbs to Evulz' torture devices]] as his brain just can't take that much pain.
** '''Inverted ''and'' Exaggerated''': At the very [[ToThePain mention]] of the electrical shock, Craven [[AintTooProudToBeg caves in]] and [[PleaseIWillDoAnything agrees to any of Evulz' terms]], all the while [[PoseOfSupplication kneeling]], shivering and [[TearsOfFear about to break into tears]].
** '''Inverted ''and'' Exaggerated''': At the very [[ToThePain mention]] of the electrical shock, Craven [[AintTooProudToBeg caves in]] and [[PleaseIWillDoAnything agrees to any of Evulz' terms]], all the while [[PoseOfSupplication kneeling]], shivering and [[TearsOfFear about to break into tears]].
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** '''Inverted ''and'' Exaggerated''':
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** Evulz tortures Bob, and it's ''[[{{Sadist}} Evulz]]'' who gets off.
* '''Subverted''':
** Bob fakes orgasm for a few seconds before remarking "Okay, this actually hurts."
** Evulz knows Bob gets off on this sort of thing, and sends him into [[GoMadFromTheIsolation solitary confinement]] instead.
* '''Double Subverted''':
** It turns out it was a joke, and Bob tells Evulz to keep going.
** Bob soon learns the pleasures of neglect play, and begs Evulz to leave him in there again by the time he's done.
* '''Subverted''':
** Bob fakes orgasm for a few seconds before remarking "Okay, this actually hurts."
** Evulz knows Bob gets off on this sort of thing, and sends him into [[GoMadFromTheIsolation solitary confinement]] instead.
* '''Double Subverted''':
** It turns out it was a joke, and Bob tells Evulz to keep going.
** Bob soon learns the pleasures of neglect play, and begs Evulz to leave him in there again by the time he's done.
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** Evulz tortures Bob, and it's ''[[{{Sadist}} Evulz]]'' who gets off.
ends up traumatizing himself by torturing Bob.
*'''Subverted''':
**'''Subverted''': Bob fakes orgasm for a few seconds before remarking "Okay, this actually hurts."
** Evulz knows Bob gets off on this sort of thing, and sends him into [[GoMadFromTheIsolation solitary confinement]] instead.
* '''Double Subverted''':
**Subverted''': It turns out it was a joke, and Bob tells Evulz to keep going.
** Bob soon learns the pleasures of neglect play, and begs Evulz to leave him in there again by the time he's done.going.
*
**
**
** Bob soon learns the pleasures of neglect play, and begs Evulz to leave him in there again by the time he's done.
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* '''Deconstrcuted''':
** Bob ''can'' actually feel the pain, and he's simply faking it. On the inside, he feels as if he's dying.
** It's not (just) the pain that gets Bob off, but the possibility that he might die.
* '''Reconstructed''':
** But even then, it turns out that torture that is too mild actually turns him on.
** Bob's kink is a subconscious attempt to cope with the pain.
** Bob ''can'' actually feel the pain, and he's simply faking it. On the inside, he feels as if he's dying.
** It's not (just) the pain that gets Bob off, but the possibility that he might die.
* '''Reconstructed''':
** But even then, it turns out that torture that is too mild actually turns him on.
** Bob's kink is a subconscious attempt to cope with the pain.
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* '''Deconstrcuted''':
** Bob ''can'' actually feel'''Deconstructed''': By allowing the pain, and he's simply faking it. On the inside, he feels as if he's dying.
** It's not (just) the pain that gets Bob off, but the possibility that he might die.
* '''Reconstructed''':
** But even then, it turns out thattorture that to happen Bob allows himself to get disfigured or killed.
* '''Reconstructed''': Bob istoo mild actually turns able to weird out Evulz enough to leave him on.
** Bob's kink is a subconscious attempt to cope with the pain.alone.
** Bob ''can'' actually feel
** It's not (just) the pain that gets Bob off, but the possibility that he might die.
* '''Reconstructed''':
** But even then, it turns out that
* '''Reconstructed''': Bob is
** Bob's kink is a subconscious attempt to cope with the pain.
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** When Evulz is defeated, Bob gets to take the torture device home. Nowadays, [[ADateWithRosiePalms he uses it every night.]]
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* '''Exploited''': After finding out about Bob's liking for pain, a {{Dominatrix}} proposes him to engage into some SafeSaneAndConsensual UsefulNotes/{{BDSM}} action. He's quite happy to go along with it.
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* '''Exploited''': '''Exploited''':
** After finding out about Bob's liking for pain, a {{Dominatrix}} proposes him to engage into some SafeSaneAndConsensual UsefulNotes/{{BDSM}} action. He's quite happy to go along withit.it.
** Since Bob is kinky enough to enjoy torture, Evulz takes an alternate route and puts Bob through a rigorous run of it... and then offers to continue if Bob gives him the information he wants.
** After finding out about Bob's liking for pain, a {{Dominatrix}} proposes him to engage into some SafeSaneAndConsensual UsefulNotes/{{BDSM}} action. He's quite happy to go along with
** Since Bob is kinky enough to enjoy torture, Evulz takes an alternate route and puts Bob through a rigorous run of it... and then offers to continue if Bob gives him the information he wants.
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** Evulz immediately refuses attempting to use torture when someone mentions it, knowing it's a waste of time with Bob. He just keeps him prisoner.
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** Evulz knows Bob gets off on torture and decides that it's useless to try to probe him for actual information--so he decides to use him as a guinea pig and hopes to find a method that will truly BreakTheBadass for future use.
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* '''Justified''': Bob is a CombatSadomasochist who enjoys inflicting pain and receiving pain, even in bed.
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* '''Justified''': '''Justified''':
** Bob is a CombatSadomasochist who enjoys inflicting pain and receiving pain, even inbed.bed.
** Or he simply FeelsNoPain, so it doesn't matter for him.
** Bob is a CombatSadomasochist who enjoys inflicting pain and receiving pain, even in
** Or he simply FeelsNoPain, so it doesn't matter for him.
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** Alice tries to seduce Bob by messaging and kissing him gently on the neck and Bob feels like he's being tortured because he doesn't like feeling comfortable physically or because even that leaves him in pain.
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** Alice tries to seduce Bob by messaging and kissing him gently on the neck neck... [[HatesBeingTouched and Bob feels like he's being tortured tortured]] because he doesn't like feeling comfortable physically or because even that leaves him in pain.
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** Evulz cranks it up to [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill a billion volts]], then shoves 20 swords in his head, thighs, arms, and calves, then slices him in half. Bob tells him that it was the best climax he ever experienced and thanks Evulz for having made him come so hard.
** Evulz [[SuckinessIsPainful forces Bob to]] [[CoolAndUnusualPunishment listen to]] Music/{{Justin Bieber}} and [[{{Unishment}} he enjoys it]]. So Evulz assumes that he must be a hardcore masochist [[OpinionMyopia even though Bob clearly isn't and just likes his music]].
** Evulz [[SuckinessIsPainful forces Bob to]] [[CoolAndUnusualPunishment listen to]] Music/{{Justin Bieber}} and [[{{Unishment}} he enjoys it]]. So Evulz assumes that he must be a hardcore masochist [[OpinionMyopia even though Bob clearly isn't and just likes his music]].
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** Evulz cranks it up to [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill a billion volts]], then [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice shoves 20 swords knives]] in his head, thighs, arms, and calves, then slices him in half. Bob tells him that it was the best climax he ever experienced and thanks Evulz for having made him come so hard.
** Evulz [[SuckinessIsPainful forces Bob to]] [[CoolAndUnusualPunishment listen to]] Music/{{JustinBieber}} Bieber}}, and [[{{Unishment}} he enjoys it]]. So Evulz assumes that he must be a hardcore masochist [[OpinionMyopia even though Bob clearly isn't and just likes his music]].
** Evulz [[SuckinessIsPainful forces Bob to]] [[CoolAndUnusualPunishment listen to]] Music/{{Justin
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** Evulz has [[WeHaveWaysOfMakingYouTalk ways of making Bob talk]] besides torture.
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** Evulz has [[WeHaveWaysOfMakingYouTalk ways of making Bob talk]] besides torture.torture, TruthSerum to name just one.
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* '''Straight''': Emperor Evulz attempts to get Hank to talk through shocking him repeatedly with 2000 volts. Bob is moaning and writhing in pleasure.
* '''Exaggerated''': Evulz sets it to 1,000,000 volts. Hank is [[TheGruntingOrgasm is grunting and hollering for more]] and has [[JizzedInMyPants jizzed in his pants]].
* '''Exaggerated''': Evulz sets it to 1,000,000 volts. Hank is [[TheGruntingOrgasm is grunting and hollering for more]] and has [[JizzedInMyPants jizzed in his pants]].
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* '''Straight''': Emperor Evulz attempts to get Hank Bob to talk through shocking him repeatedly with 2000 volts. Bob is moaning and writhing in pleasure.
* '''Exaggerated''': Evulz sets it to 1,000,000 volts.Hank Bob is [[TheGruntingOrgasm is grunting and hollering for more]] and has [[JizzedInMyPants jizzed in his pants]].
* '''Exaggerated''': Evulz sets it to 1,000,000 volts.
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** Evulz attempts TickleTorture, and Hank, giggling, tells him he should get more feathers.
** Evulz punches him in the face repeatedly to torture him and Hank asks him to try harder next time.
* '''Justified''': Hank is a CombatSadomasochist who enjoys inflicting pain and receiving pain, even in bed.
** Evulz punches him in the face repeatedly to torture him and Hank asks him to try harder next time.
* '''Justified''': Hank is a CombatSadomasochist who enjoys inflicting pain and receiving pain, even in bed.
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** Evulz attempts TickleTorture, and Hank, Bob, giggling, tells him he should get more feathers.
** Evulz punches him in the face repeatedly to torture him andHank Bob asks him to try harder next time.
* '''Justified''':Hank Bob is a CombatSadomasochist who enjoys inflicting pain and receiving pain, even in bed.
** Evulz punches him in the face repeatedly to torture him and
* '''Justified''':
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** Hank [[TortureAlwaysWorks succumbs to Evulz' torture devices]] as his brain just can't take that much pain.
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** Hank Bob [[TortureAlwaysWorks succumbs to Evulz' torture devices]] as his brain just can't take that much pain.
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** Evulz tortures Hank, and it's ''[[{{Sadist}} Evulz]]'' who gets off.
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** Evulz tortures Hank, Bob, and it's ''[[{{Sadist}} Evulz]]'' who gets off.
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** Hank fakes orgasm for a few seconds before remarking "Okay, this actually hurts."
** Evulz knows Hank gets off on this sort of thing, and sends him into [[GoMadFromTheIsolation solitary confinement]] instead.
** Evulz knows Hank gets off on this sort of thing, and sends him into [[GoMadFromTheIsolation solitary confinement]] instead.
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** Hank Bob fakes orgasm for a few seconds before remarking "Okay, this actually hurts."
** Evulz knowsHank Bob gets off on this sort of thing, and sends him into [[GoMadFromTheIsolation solitary confinement]] instead.
** Evulz knows
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** It turns out it was a joke, and Hank tells Evulz to keep going.
** Hank soon learns the pleasures of neglect play, and begs Evulz to leave him in there again by the time he's done.
** Hank soon learns the pleasures of neglect play, and begs Evulz to leave him in there again by the time he's done.
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** It turns out it was a joke, and Hank Bob tells Evulz to keep going.
**Hank Bob soon learns the pleasures of neglect play, and begs Evulz to leave him in there again by the time he's done.
**
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** Evulz cranks it up to [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill a billion volts]], then shoves 20 swords in his head, thighs, arms, and calves, then slices him in half. Hank tells him that it was the best climax he ever experienced and thanks Evulz for having made him come so hard.
** Evulz [[SuckinessIsPainful forces Hank to]] [[CoolAndUnusualPunishment listen to]] Music/{{Justin Bieber}} and [[{{Unishment}} he enjoys it]]. So Evulz assumes that he must be a hardcore masochist [[OpinionMyopia even though Hank clearly isn't and just likes his music]].
* '''Zig Zagged''': Hank laughs it off, then realizes this actually hurts... but it turns out he was thinking about something else, and laughs again, only to realize that Evulz turned up the torture dial, and this times he [[TheGruntingOrgasm grunts in delight]]...
** Evulz [[SuckinessIsPainful forces Hank to]] [[CoolAndUnusualPunishment listen to]] Music/{{Justin Bieber}} and [[{{Unishment}} he enjoys it]]. So Evulz assumes that he must be a hardcore masochist [[OpinionMyopia even though Hank clearly isn't and just likes his music]].
* '''Zig Zagged''': Hank laughs it off, then realizes this actually hurts... but it turns out he was thinking about something else, and laughs again, only to realize that Evulz turned up the torture dial, and this times he [[TheGruntingOrgasm grunts in delight]]...
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** Evulz cranks it up to [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill a billion volts]], then shoves 20 swords in his head, thighs, arms, and calves, then slices him in half. Hank Bob tells him that it was the best climax he ever experienced and thanks Evulz for having made him come so hard.
** Evulz [[SuckinessIsPainful forcesHank Bob to]] [[CoolAndUnusualPunishment listen to]] Music/{{Justin Bieber}} and [[{{Unishment}} he enjoys it]]. So Evulz assumes that he must be a hardcore masochist [[OpinionMyopia even though Hank Bob clearly isn't and just likes his music]].
* '''Zig Zagged''':Hank Bob laughs it off, then realizes this actually hurts... but it turns out he was thinking about something else, and laughs again, only to realize that Evulz turned up the torture dial, and this times he [[TheGruntingOrgasm grunts in delight]]...
** Evulz [[SuckinessIsPainful forces
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** Evulz has [[WeHaveWaysOfMakingYouTalk ways of making Hank talk]] besides torture.
** Hank is just as susceptible to torture as everyone else is.
* '''Enforced''': The writers realize Hank is too vanilla, even as an ActionHero and he needs a quirk.
** Hank is just as susceptible to torture as everyone else is.
* '''Enforced''': The writers realize Hank is too vanilla, even as an ActionHero and he needs a quirk.
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** Evulz has [[WeHaveWaysOfMakingYouTalk ways of making Hank Bob talk]] besides torture.
**Hank Bob is just as susceptible to torture as everyone else is.
* '''Enforced''': The writers realizeHank Bob is too vanilla, even as an ActionHero and he needs a quirk.
**
* '''Enforced''': The writers realize
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* '''Invoked''': Hank purposely obtains a MacGuffin from Evulz so that Evulz will attempt to torture him.
* '''Exploited''': After finding out about Hank's liking for pain, [[{{Dominatrix}} Mistress Morella]] proposes him to engage into some SafeSaneAndConsensual UsefulNotes/{{BDSM}} action. He's quite happy to go along with it.
* '''Exploited''': After finding out about Hank's liking for pain, [[{{Dominatrix}} Mistress Morella]] proposes him to engage into some SafeSaneAndConsensual UsefulNotes/{{BDSM}} action. He's quite happy to go along with it.
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* '''Invoked''': Hank Bob purposely obtains a MacGuffin from Evulz so that Evulz will attempt to torture him.
* '''Exploited''': After finding out aboutHank's Bob's liking for pain, [[{{Dominatrix}} Mistress Morella]] a {{Dominatrix}} proposes him to engage into some SafeSaneAndConsensual UsefulNotes/{{BDSM}} action. He's quite happy to go along with it.
* '''Exploited''': After finding out about
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** Evulz knows that Hank gets off on torture, so he [[RevengeByProxy tortures his friends]] [[ForcedToWatch in front of him]] instead.
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** Evulz knows that Hank Bob gets off on torture, so he [[RevengeByProxy tortures his friends]] [[ForcedToWatch in front of him]] instead.
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* '''Discussed''': "Alright, Evulz is searching for us. If we get caught, I volunteer Hank for torture. He loves it."
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* '''Discussed''': "Alright, Evulz is searching for us. If we get caught, I volunteer Hank Bob for torture. He loves it."
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* '''Implied''': Evulz grunts in frustration after walking out of a room as Hank is smiling contently and slowly falling into slumber, strapped to an electric chair that looks like it's been recently used.
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* '''Implied''': Evulz grunts in frustration after walking out of a room as Hank Bob is smiling contently and slowly falling into slumber, strapped to an electric chair that looks like it's been recently used.
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** Hank ''can'' actually feel the pain, and he's simply faking it. On the inside, he feels as if he's dying.
** It's not (just) the pain that gets Hank off, but the possibility that he might die.
** It's not (just) the pain that gets Hank off, but the possibility that he might die.
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** Hank Bob ''can'' actually feel the pain, and he's simply faking it. On the inside, he feels as if he's dying.
** It's not (just) the pain that getsHank Bob off, but the possibility that he might die.
** It's not (just) the pain that gets
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** Hank's kink is a subconscious attempt to cope with the pain.
* '''Played For Laughs''': Hank has been sent to a torture chamber with a mook. When Evulz checks on them a stressed out mook tells Evulz that he isn't being paid enough for this, and Evulz tells him he's not being paid at all and tells him to get back to work. The mook nervously looks at Hank who winks at him, and the mook shudders.
* '''Played For Laughs''': Hank has been sent to a torture chamber with a mook. When Evulz checks on them a stressed out mook tells Evulz that he isn't being paid enough for this, and Evulz tells him he's not being paid at all and tells him to get back to work. The mook nervously looks at Hank who winks at him, and the mook shudders.
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** Hank's Bob's kink is a subconscious attempt to cope with the pain.
* '''Played For Laughs''':Hank Bob has been sent to a torture chamber with a mook. When Evulz checks on them a stressed out mook tells Evulz that he isn't being paid enough for this, and Evulz tells him he's not being paid at all and tells him to get back to work. The mook nervously looks at Hank Bob who winks at him, and the mook shudders.
* '''Played For Laughs''':
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** Hank writhes with pleasure during torture, but he's still bleeding badly, and before Evulz knows it, his TortureTechnician has killed the poor fella.
** Hank is deeply ashamed of his masochistic joy at the prospect of being tortured, and doesn't want his friends to know about it. Evulz knows this, and uses his shame to torment him far more effective than the actual torture itself does.
** Hank is deeply ashamed of his masochistic joy at the prospect of being tortured, and doesn't want his friends to know about it. Evulz knows this, and uses his shame to torment him far more effective than the actual torture itself does.
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** Hank Bob writhes with pleasure during torture, but he's still bleeding badly, and before Evulz knows it, his TortureTechnician has killed the poor fella.
**Hank Bob is deeply ashamed of his masochistic joy at the prospect of being tortured, and doesn't want his friends to know about it. Evulz knows this, and uses his shame to torment him far more effective than the actual torture itself does.
**
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Back to TooKinkyToTorture and hurt me harder!!
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** Evulz attempts TickleTorture, and Hank tells him he should get more feathers.
** Evulz punches him in the face repeatedly to torture him and Hank asks him to do it again.
** Evulz punches him in the face repeatedly to torture him and Hank asks him to do it again.
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** Evulz attempts TickleTorture, and Hank Hank, giggling, tells him he should get more feathers.
** Evulz punches him in the face repeatedly to torture him and Hank asks him todo it again.try harder next time.
** Evulz punches him in the face repeatedly to torture him and Hank asks him to
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** Hank writhes with pleasure during torture, but he's still bleeding badly, and before Evulz knows it, his TortureTechnician has killed Bob.
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** Hank writhes with pleasure during torture, but he's still bleeding badly, and before Evulz knows it, his TortureTechnician has killed Bob.the poor fella.
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** Hank succumbs to Evulz' torture devices as his brain just can't take that much pain.
** '''Inverted ''and'' Exaggerated''': At the very mention of the electrical shock, Craven [[AintTooProudToBeg caves in]] and [[PleaseIWillDoAnything agrees to any of Evulz' terms]], all the while [[PoseOfSupplication kneeling]], shivering and [[TearsOfFear about to break into tears]].
** '''Inverted ''and'' Exaggerated''': At the very mention of the electrical shock, Craven [[AintTooProudToBeg caves in]] and [[PleaseIWillDoAnything agrees to any of Evulz' terms]], all the while [[PoseOfSupplication kneeling]], shivering and [[TearsOfFear about to break into tears]].
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** Hank [[TortureAlwaysWorks succumbs to Evulz' torture devices devices]] as his brain just can't take that much pain.
** '''Inverted ''and'' Exaggerated''': At the verymention [[ToThePain mention]] of the electrical shock, Craven [[AintTooProudToBeg caves in]] and [[PleaseIWillDoAnything agrees to any of Evulz' terms]], all the while [[PoseOfSupplication kneeling]], shivering and [[TearsOfFear about to break into tears]].
** '''Inverted ''and'' Exaggerated''': At the very
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** Evulz knows Hank gets off on this sort of thing, and sends him into solitary confinement instead.
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** Evulz knows Hank gets off on this sort of thing, and sends him into [[GoMadFromTheIsolation solitary confinement confinement]] instead.
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** Evulz cranks it up to [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill a billion volts]], then shoves 20 swords in his head, thighs, arms, and calves, then slices him in half. Bob tells him that it was the best climax he ever experienced and thanks Evulz for having made him come so hard.
** Evulz [[SuckinessIsPainful forces Bob to]] [[CoolAndUnusualPunishment listen to]] Music/{{Celine Dion}} and [[{{unishment}} he enjoys it]]. So Evulz assumes that he must be a too kinky to torture masochist [[OpinionMyopia even though he clearly isn't and just likes her music]].
* '''Zig Zagged''': Bob laughs it off, then realizes this actually hurts...but it turns out she was thinking about something else, and laughs again, only to realize that Evulz turned up the torture dial, and this times he [[TheGruntingOrgasm grunts in delight]]...
** Evulz [[SuckinessIsPainful forces Bob to]] [[CoolAndUnusualPunishment listen to]] Music/{{Celine Dion}} and [[{{unishment}} he enjoys it]]. So Evulz assumes that he must be a too kinky to torture masochist [[OpinionMyopia even though he clearly isn't and just likes her music]].
* '''Zig Zagged''': Bob laughs it off, then realizes this actually hurts...but it turns out she was thinking about something else, and laughs again, only to realize that Evulz turned up the torture dial, and this times he [[TheGruntingOrgasm grunts in delight]]...
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** Evulz cranks it up to [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill a billion volts]], then shoves 20 swords in his head, thighs, arms, and calves, then slices him in half. Bob Hank tells him that it was the best climax he ever experienced and thanks Evulz for having made him come so hard.
** Evulz [[SuckinessIsPainful forcesBob Hank to]] [[CoolAndUnusualPunishment listen to]] Music/{{Celine Dion}} Music/{{Justin Bieber}} and [[{{unishment}} [[{{Unishment}} he enjoys it]]. So Evulz assumes that he must be a too kinky to torture hardcore masochist [[OpinionMyopia even though he Hank clearly isn't and just likes her his music]].
* '''Zig Zagged''':Bob Hank laughs it off, then realizes this actually hurts...hurts... but it turns out she he was thinking about something else, and laughs again, only to realize that Evulz turned up the torture dial, and this times he [[TheGruntingOrgasm grunts in delight]]...
** Evulz [[SuckinessIsPainful forces
* '''Zig Zagged''':
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** Evulz has [[WeHaveWaysOfMakingYouTalk ways of making Bob talk]] besides torture.
** Bob is just as susceptible to torture as everyone else is.
* '''Enforced''': The writers realize Bob is too vanilla, even as an ActionHero and he needs a quirk.
** Bob is just as susceptible to torture as everyone else is.
* '''Enforced''': The writers realize Bob is too vanilla, even as an ActionHero and he needs a quirk.
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** Evulz has [[WeHaveWaysOfMakingYouTalk ways of making Bob Hank talk]] besides torture.
**Bob Hank is just as susceptible to torture as everyone else is.
* '''Enforced''': The writers realizeBob Hank is too vanilla, even as an ActionHero and he needs a quirk.
**
* '''Enforced''': The writers realize
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* '''Invoked''': Bob purposely obtains a MacGuffin from Evulz so that Evulz will attempt to torture him.
* '''Exploited''': After finding out about Bob's liking for pain, [[{{Dominatrix}} Mistress Morella]] proposes him to engage into some SafeSaneAndConsensual UsefulNotes/{{BDSM}} action. He's quite happy to go along with it.
* '''Exploited''': After finding out about Bob's liking for pain, [[{{Dominatrix}} Mistress Morella]] proposes him to engage into some SafeSaneAndConsensual UsefulNotes/{{BDSM}} action. He's quite happy to go along with it.
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* '''Invoked''': Bob Hank purposely obtains a MacGuffin from Evulz so that Evulz will attempt to torture him.
* '''Exploited''': After finding out aboutBob's Hank's liking for pain, [[{{Dominatrix}} Mistress Morella]] proposes him to engage into some SafeSaneAndConsensual UsefulNotes/{{BDSM}} action. He's quite happy to go along with it.
* '''Exploited''': After finding out about
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** Evulz knows that Bob gets off on torture, so he [[RevengeByProxy tortures his friends]] [[ForcedToWatch in front of him]] instead.
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** Evulz knows that Bob Hank gets off on torture, so he [[RevengeByProxy tortures his friends]] [[ForcedToWatch in front of him]] instead.
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* '''Discussed''': "Alright, Evulz is searching for us. If we get caught, I volunteer Bob for torture. He loves it."
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* '''Discussed''': "Alright, Evulz is searching for us. If we get caught, I volunteer Bob Hank for torture. He loves it."
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* '''Implied''': Evulz grunts in frustration after walking out of a room as Bob is smiling contently and slowly falling into slumber, strapped to an electric chair that looks like it's been recently used.
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* '''Implied''': Evulz grunts in frustration after walking out of a room as Bob Hank is smiling contently and slowly falling into slumber, strapped to an electric chair that looks like it's been recently used.
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** Bob CAN actually feel the pain, and he's simply faking it. On the inside, he feels as if he's dying.
** It's not (just) the pain that gets Bob off, but the possibility that he might die.
** It's not (just) the pain that gets Bob off, but the possibility that he might die.
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** Bob CAN Hank ''can'' actually feel the pain, and he's simply faking it. On the inside, he feels as if he's dying.
** It's not (just) the pain that getsBob Hank off, but the possibility that he might die.
** It's not (just) the pain that gets
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** Bob's kink is a subconscious attempt to cope with the pain.
* '''Played For Laughs''': Bob has been sent to a torture chamber with a mook. When Evulz checks on them a stressed out mook tells Evulz that he isn't being payed enough for this, and Evulz tells him he's not being paid at all and tells him to get back to work. The mook nervously looks at Bob who winks at him, and the mook shudders.
* '''Played For Laughs''': Bob has been sent to a torture chamber with a mook. When Evulz checks on them a stressed out mook tells Evulz that he isn't being payed enough for this, and Evulz tells him he's not being paid at all and tells him to get back to work. The mook nervously looks at Bob who winks at him, and the mook shudders.
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** Bob's Hank's kink is a subconscious attempt to cope with the pain.
* '''Played For Laughs''':Bob Hank has been sent to a torture chamber with a mook. When Evulz checks on them a stressed out mook tells Evulz that he isn't being payed paid enough for this, and Evulz tells him he's not being paid at all and tells him to get back to work. The mook nervously looks at Bob Hank who winks at him, and the mook shudders.
* '''Played For Laughs''':
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** Bob writhes with pleasure during torture, but he's still bleeding badly, and before Evulz knows it, his TortureTechnician has killed Bob.
** Bob is deeply ashamed of his masochistic joy at the prospect of being tortured, and doesn't want his friends to know about it. Evulz knows this, and uses his shame to torment him far more effective than the actual torture itself does.
** Bob is deeply ashamed of his masochistic joy at the prospect of being tortured, and doesn't want his friends to know about it. Evulz knows this, and uses his shame to torment him far more effective than the actual torture itself does.
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** Bob Hank writhes with pleasure during torture, but he's still bleeding badly, and before Evulz knows it, his TortureTechnician has killed Bob.
**Bob Hank is deeply ashamed of his masochistic joy at the prospect of being tortured, and doesn't want his friends to know about it. Evulz knows this, and uses his shame to torment him far more effective than the actual torture itself does.
**
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* '''Straight''': Emperor Evulz attempts to get Bob to talk through shocking him repeatedly with 2000 volts. Bob is moaning and writhing in pleasure.
* '''Exaggerated''': Evulz sets it to 1,000,000 volts. Bob is [[TheGruntingOrgasm is grunting and hollering for more]] and has [[JizzedInMyPants jizzed in his pants]].
* '''Exaggerated''': Evulz sets it to 1,000,000 volts. Bob is [[TheGruntingOrgasm is grunting and hollering for more]] and has [[JizzedInMyPants jizzed in his pants]].
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* '''Straight''': Emperor Evulz attempts to get Bob Hank to talk through shocking him repeatedly with 2000 volts. Bob is moaning and writhing in pleasure.
* '''Exaggerated''': Evulz sets it to 1,000,000 volts.Bob Hank is [[TheGruntingOrgasm is grunting and hollering for more]] and has [[JizzedInMyPants jizzed in his pants]].
* '''Exaggerated''': Evulz sets it to 1,000,000 volts.
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** Evulz attempts TickleTorture, and Bob tells him he should get more feathers.
** Evulz punches him in the face repeatedly to torture him and Bob asks him to do it again.
* '''Justified''': Bob is a CombatSadomasochist who enjoys inflicting pain and receiving pain, even in bed.
** Evulz punches him in the face repeatedly to torture him and Bob asks him to do it again.
* '''Justified''': Bob is a CombatSadomasochist who enjoys inflicting pain and receiving pain, even in bed.
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** Evulz attempts TickleTorture, and Bob Hank tells him he should get more feathers.
** Evulz punches him in the face repeatedly to torture him andBob Hank asks him to do it again.
* '''Justified''':Bob Hank is a CombatSadomasochist who enjoys inflicting pain and receiving pain, even in bed.
** Evulz punches him in the face repeatedly to torture him and
* '''Justified''':
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** Bob succumbs to Evulz' torture devices as his brain just can't take that much pain.
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** Bob Hank succumbs to Evulz' torture devices as his brain just can't take that much pain.pain.
** '''Inverted ''and'' Exaggerated''': At the very mention of the electrical shock, Craven [[AintTooProudToBeg caves in]] and [[PleaseIWillDoAnything agrees to any of Evulz' terms]], all the while [[PoseOfSupplication kneeling]], shivering and [[TearsOfFear about to break into tears]].
** '''Inverted ''and'' Exaggerated''': At the very mention of the electrical shock, Craven [[AintTooProudToBeg caves in]] and [[PleaseIWillDoAnything agrees to any of Evulz' terms]], all the while [[PoseOfSupplication kneeling]], shivering and [[TearsOfFear about to break into tears]].
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** Evulz tortures Bob and gets off.
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** Evulz tortures Bob Hank, and it's ''[[{{Sadist}} Evulz]]'' who gets off.
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** Bob fakes orgasm for a few seconds before remarking "Okay, this actually hurts."
** Evulz knows Bob gets off on this sort of thing, and sends him into solitary confinement instead.
** Evulz knows Bob gets off on this sort of thing, and sends him into solitary confinement instead.
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** Bob Hank fakes orgasm for a few seconds before remarking "Okay, this actually hurts."
** Evulz knowsBob Hank gets off on this sort of thing, and sends him into solitary confinement instead.
** Evulz knows
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** It turns out it was a joke, and he tells Evulz to keep going.
** Bob soon learns the pleasures of neglect play, and begs Evulz to leave him in there again by the time he's done.
** Bob soon learns the pleasures of neglect play, and begs Evulz to leave him in there again by the time he's done.
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** It turns out it was a joke, and he Hank tells Evulz to keep going.
**Bob Hank soon learns the pleasures of neglect play, and begs Evulz to leave him in there again by the time he's done.
**
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** Evulz knows that Bob gets off on torture, so he tortures his friends in front of him instead.
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** Evulz knows that Bob gets off on torture, so he [[RevengeByProxy tortures his friends friends]] [[ForcedToWatch in front of him him]] instead.
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* '''Conversed''': "Damn! He jeezed his pants during torture... That's one kinky number we have here."
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* '''Conversed''': "Damn! He jeezed jizzed his pants during torture... That's one kinky number we have here."
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* '''Defied''': Evulz knows that Bob gets off on torture, so he tortures his friends in front of him instead.
** It's made immensely apparent that actual torture is very different from and a lot less pleasurable than SafeSaneandConsensual bondage.
** It's made immensely apparent that actual torture is very different from and a lot less pleasurable than SafeSaneandConsensual bondage.
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* '''Defied''': '''Defied''':
** Evulz knows that Bob gets off on torture, so he tortures his friends in front of him instead.
** It's made immensely apparent that actual torture is very different from and a lot less pleasurable thanSafeSaneandConsensual SafeSaneAndConsensual bondage.
** Evulz knows that Bob gets off on torture, so he tortures his friends in front of him instead.
** It's made immensely apparent that actual torture is very different from and a lot less pleasurable than
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%%* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': ???
%%* '''Played For Drama''': ???
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%%* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': ???
%%* '''Played For Drama''': ???
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%%* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': ???
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* '''Subverted''': Bob fakes orgasm for a few seconds before remarking "Okay, this actually hurts."
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* '''Subverted''': '''Subverted''':
** Bob fakes orgasm for a few seconds before remarking "Okay, this actually hurts."
** Bob fakes orgasm for a few seconds before remarking "Okay, this actually hurts."
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* '''Double Subverted''': It turns out it was a joke, and he tells Evulz to keep going.
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* '''Double Subverted''': Subverted''':
** It turns out it was a joke, and he tells Evulz to keep going.
** It turns out it was a joke, and he tells Evulz to keep going.
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* '''Played For Drama''': Bob writhes with pleasure during torture, but he's still bleeding badly, and before Evulz knows it, his TortureTechnician has killed Bob.
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* '''Played For Drama''': Drama''':
** Bob writhes with pleasure during torture, but he's still bleeding badly, and before Evulz knows it, his TortureTechnician has killed Bob.
** Bob writhes with pleasure during torture, but he's still bleeding badly, and before Evulz knows it, his TortureTechnician has killed Bob.
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Made a more neutral description of basic trope, as the trope is not about sexual pleasure alone, despite the name. Also, examples.
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'''Basic Trope''': A character who derives sexual arousal from being tortured.
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'''Basic Trope''': A character who derives sexual arousal pleasure from being tortured.tortured, sexual or otherwise.
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** Evulz knows Bob gets off on this sort of thing, and sends him into solitary confinement instead.
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** Bob soon learns the pleasures of neglect play, and begs Evulz to leave him in there again by the time he's done.
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**Bob is deeply ashamed of his masochistic joy at the prospect of being tortured, and doesn't want his friends to know about it. Evulz knows this, and uses his shame to torment him far more effective than the actual torture itself does.
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* '''Played For Drama''': Bob writhes with pleasure during torture, but he's still bleeding badly, and before Evulz knows it, his TortureTechnician has killed Bob.
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* '''PlayedForLaughs''': Bob has been sent to a torture chamber with a mook. When Evulz checks on them a stressed out mook tells Evulz that he isn't being payed enough for this, and Evulz tells him he's not being paid at all and tells him to get back to work. The mook nervously looks at Bob who winks at him, and the mook shudders.
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* '''PlayedForLaughs''': '''Played For Laughs''': Bob has been sent to a torture chamber with a mook. When Evulz checks on them a stressed out mook tells Evulz that he isn't being payed enough for this, and Evulz tells him he's not being paid at all and tells him to get back to work. The mook nervously looks at Bob who winks at him, and the mook shudders.
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* '''PlayedForLaughs''': Bob has been sent to a torture chamber with a mook. When Evulz checks on them a stressed out mook tells Evulz that he isn't being payed enough for this, and Evulz tells him he's not being paid at all and tells him to get back to work. The mook nervously looks at Bob who winks at him, and the mook shudders.
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* '''Reconstructed''': But even then, it turns out that torture that is too mild actually turns him on.
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* '''Reconstructed''': '''Reconstructed''':
** But even then, it turns out that torture that is too mild actually turns himon.on.
** Bob's kink is a subconscious attempt to cope with the pain.
** But even then, it turns out that torture that is too mild actually turns him
** Bob's kink is a subconscious attempt to cope with the pain.