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** The predator is chased across an entire continent.
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** The predator is chased chases them across an entire continent.
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** Bloodgulper will eat other things if it gets hungry enough, but it goes out of its way to pursue Alice and Bob because it finds humans particularly tasty.
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** Bloodgulper was created as a weapon.
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** Bloodgulper was created as a weapon.weapon and taught/programmed to seek and destroy Alice and/or Bob at any cost.
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** Bob is a super-persistent ''prey'' who [[{{Determinator}} absolutely refuses to be taken]] even if that means running for so long and doing [[CrazyEnoughToWork so many suicidal stunts]] that Bloodgulper gives up or dies.
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don't need to be so dramatic
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** The duo jumps into an interplanetary xenon-powered spacecraft and ''fly to Mars''. Bloodgulper [[AC:gets into another rocket and follows them!]]
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** The duo jumps into an interplanetary xenon-powered spacecraft and ''fly fly to Mars''. Mars. Bloodgulper [[AC:gets ''gets into another rocket and follows them!]]them!''
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* '''Played For Horror''': "Bloodgulper" is a XenomorphXerox. It's an implacable beast because it was designed to destroy and nothing else and kills truckloads of people in every scene it appears with lots of viciousness but no satisfaction because its primary goal (kill Alice) still has not been fulfilled.
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* '''Played For Horror''': Horror''':
** "Bloodgulper" is a XenomorphXerox. It's an implacable beast because it was designed to destroy and nothing else and kills truckloads of people in every scene it appears with lots of viciousness but no satisfaction because its primary goal (kill Alice) still has not beenfulfilled.fulfilled.
** Alice and Bob try to figure out why the heck Bloodgulper is so obsessed with getting them, even performing life-risking stunts to bypass obstacles and refusing to eat other animals and the food they dumped to get yet another attempt to gnaw at the humans, and then they stumble on the discovery that Bloodgulper is [[ItCanThink extremely intelligent]] and equally sadistic. It is not going after easier prey because they don't scare like humans do, and the "life-risking stunts" is the beast indulging on whatever passes for a concept of the RuleOfCool in its mind. And trying to bore it or scare it off wouldn't work because that would make Bloodgulper switch reasons to hunt them down from "sport" to "[[ItsPersonal revenge]]" and become ''[[FromBadToWorse more]]'' obsessed with killing them.
** "Bloodgulper" is a XenomorphXerox. It's an implacable beast because it was designed to destroy and nothing else and kills truckloads of people in every scene it appears with lots of viciousness but no satisfaction because its primary goal (kill Alice) still has not been
** Alice and Bob try to figure out why the heck Bloodgulper is so obsessed with getting them, even performing life-risking stunts to bypass obstacles and refusing to eat other animals and the food they dumped to get yet another attempt to gnaw at the humans, and then they stumble on the discovery that Bloodgulper is [[ItCanThink extremely intelligent]] and equally sadistic. It is not going after easier prey because they don't scare like humans do, and the "life-risking stunts" is the beast indulging on whatever passes for a concept of the RuleOfCool in its mind. And trying to bore it or scare it off wouldn't work because that would make Bloodgulper switch reasons to hunt them down from "sport" to "[[ItsPersonal revenge]]" and become ''[[FromBadToWorse more]]'' obsessed with killing them.
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** Bloodgulper's BizarreAlienBiology makes extremely efficient use of its food, so it can afford to invest a lot of energy in wearing out his prey.
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** Bloodgulper's BizarreAlienBiology makes extremely efficient use of its food, so it can afford to invest a lot of energy in wearing out his its prey.
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** Bloodgulper isn't hunting them for food, but is catching them on behalf of someone else as a trained animal.
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* '''Reconstructed''': Bloodgulper's species is quickly dying out, and its habitat is almost completely devoid of prey. They need to pursue any morsel of food they can find, no matter what the cost.
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* '''Reconstructed''': '''Reconstructed''':
** Bloodgulper's species is quickly dying out, and its habitat is almost completely devoid of prey. They need to pursue any morsel of food they can find, no matter what thecost.cost.
** Bloodgulper's species are omnivores but are also quite vengeful, like tigers. Bloodgulper isn't pursuing Bob and Alice because it's hungry, it's pursuing them because they wronged it in some way.
** Bloodgulper's species is quickly dying out, and its habitat is almost completely devoid of prey. They need to pursue any morsel of food they can find, no matter what the
** Bloodgulper's species are omnivores but are also quite vengeful, like tigers. Bloodgulper isn't pursuing Bob and Alice because it's hungry, it's pursuing them because they wronged it in some way.
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* '''Played For Drama''': "Bloodgulper" is a drama about a runaway slave and the most vicious, determined dog in a slaver's hound group. As long as the dog appears implacable the poor man doesn't has any hope, [[AnimalNemesis so Bloodgulper turns into his greatest obstacle to clear]].
* '''Played For Horror''': "Bloodgulper" is a XenomorphXerox. It's an impacable beast because it was designed to destroy and nothing else, and kills truckloads of people in every scene it appears with lots of viciousness but no satisfaction because its primary goal (kill Alice) still has not been fulfilled.
* '''Played For Horror''': "Bloodgulper" is a XenomorphXerox. It's an impacable beast because it was designed to destroy and nothing else, and kills truckloads of people in every scene it appears with lots of viciousness but no satisfaction because its primary goal (kill Alice) still has not been fulfilled.
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* '''Played For Drama''': "Bloodgulper" is a drama about a runaway slave and the most vicious, determined dog in a slaver's hound group. As long as the dog appears implacable the poor man doesn't has have any hope, [[AnimalNemesis so Bloodgulper turns into his greatest obstacle to clear]].
* '''Played For Horror''': "Bloodgulper" is a XenomorphXerox. It's animpacable implacable beast because it was designed to destroy and nothing else, else and kills truckloads of people in every scene it appears with lots of viciousness but no satisfaction because its primary goal (kill Alice) still has not been fulfilled.
* '''Played For Horror''': "Bloodgulper" is a XenomorphXerox. It's an
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** Bloodgulper is [[JustAKid young and inexperienced,]] and they're only persistent because [[RealityEnsues they didn't realize they should just go for the jugular right away.]] Older adults soon arrive and drop off some prey they caught in five minutes, [[SubvertedTrope completely ignoring Bob and Alice.]]
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** Bloodgulper is [[JustAKid young and inexperienced,]] and they're only persistent because [[RealityEnsues [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome they didn't realize they should just go for the jugular right away.]] Older adults soon arrive and drop off some prey they caught in five minutes, [[SubvertedTrope completely ignoring Bob and Alice.]]
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* '''Played For Laughs''': Bloodgulper's rampage is a homage to WesternAnimation/{{Droopy}}. It becomes increasingly absurd to find the damned monster in places like underneath a literal grain of sand.
* '''Played For Drama''': "Bloodgulper" is a drama about a runaway slave and the most vicious, determined dog in a slaver's hound group. As long as the dog appears implacable the poor man doesn't has any hope, [[AnimalNemesis so Bloodgulper turns into his greatest obstacle to clear]].
* '''Played For Horror''': "Bloodgulper" is a XenomorphXerox. It's an impacable beast because it was designed to destroy and nothing else, and kills truckloads of people in every scene it appears with lots of viciousness but no satisfaction because its primary goal (kill Alice) still has not been fulfilled.
* '''Played For Drama''': "Bloodgulper" is a drama about a runaway slave and the most vicious, determined dog in a slaver's hound group. As long as the dog appears implacable the poor man doesn't has any hope, [[AnimalNemesis so Bloodgulper turns into his greatest obstacle to clear]].
* '''Played For Horror''': "Bloodgulper" is a XenomorphXerox. It's an impacable beast because it was designed to destroy and nothing else, and kills truckloads of people in every scene it appears with lots of viciousness but no satisfaction because its primary goal (kill Alice) still has not been fulfilled.
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* '''Exaggerated''': The duo jumps into an interplanetary xenon-powered spacecraft and ''fly to Mars''. Bloodgulper [[AC:gets into another rocket and follows them!]]
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** The duo jumps into an interplanetary xenon-powered spacecraft and ''fly to Mars''. Bloodgulper [[AC:gets into another rocket and followsthem!]]them!]]
** The predator is chased across an entire continent.
** The duo jumps into an interplanetary xenon-powered spacecraft and ''fly to Mars''. Bloodgulper [[AC:gets into another rocket and follows
** The predator is chased across an entire continent.
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** Bloodgulper lives in an area with few prey (for example, a desert).
** Bloodgulper likes to chase its prey until it runs out as a hunting method.
** Bloodgulper likes to chase its prey until it runs out as a hunting method.
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* '''Inverted''': AnimalNemesis.
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* '''Inverted''': AnimalNemesis.'''Inverted''':
** Bloodgulper is Bob's AnimalNemesis who he persistently pursues.
** Bloodgulper gives up its chase much more quickly than a realistic predator would.
** Bloodgulper is Bob's AnimalNemesis who he persistently pursues.
** Bloodgulper gives up its chase much more quickly than a realistic predator would.
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** Bloodgulper is [[JustAKid young and inexperienced,]] and they're only persistent because [[RealityEnsues they didn't realize they should just go for the jugular right away.]] Older adults soon arrive and drop off some prey they caught in five minutes.
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** Bloodgulper is [[JustAKid young and inexperienced,]] and they're only persistent because [[RealityEnsues they didn't realize they should just go for the jugular right away.]] Older adults soon arrive and drop off some prey they caught in five minutes.minutes, [[SubvertedTrope completely ignoring Bob and Alice.]]
