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** Alice can [[ShockAndAwe emit electricity]]. [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome Do]] [[XRaySparks the]] [[HighVoltageDeath math]].
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** Alice can [[ShockAndAwe emit electricity]]. [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome Do]] [[XRaySparks Do the]] [[HighVoltageDeath math]].
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* '''Downplayed''': Evulz grabs Alice's arm with both hands, and clearly shows effort in not letting her go.
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* '''Downplayed''': '''Downplayed''':
** Evulz grabs Alice's arm with both hands, and clearly shows effort in not letting hergo.go.
** Evulz’s two minions each grab one of Alice’s arms.
** Evulz grabs Alice's arm with both hands, and clearly shows effort in not letting her
** Evulz’s two minions each grab one of Alice’s arms.
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** Alice’s arm is broken and being gripped on it hurts.
** Alice is a naked ShamelessFanserviceGirl and Evulz is uncomfortable with female nudity, so he avoids touch her back and goes for her arm.
** Alice is a naked ShamelessFanserviceGirl and Evulz is uncomfortable with female nudity, so he avoids touch her back and goes for her arm.
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** Evulz grabs Alice’s breast or butt, to her disgust.
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** Alice had already taken a pummeling from Evulz and is barely conscious as he brings her before Bob to gloat. The sheer lack of care Evulz shows in 'restraining' her is only to underline her condition as she's bruised and battered and can barely seem to keep her head up.
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** Alice is MadeOfIron but her upper arm is her AchillesHeel, and Evulz is able to [[AnArmAndALeg rip the whole arm off]] from this specific spot.
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** Alice can't struggle because her other hand is holding an extremely volatile McGuffin and she's focused on preventing it from falling to the ground and detonating, or she's trying to override Evulz's evil, nuclear-powered "TakingYouWithMe Protocol".
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** Alternatively, the gauntlet has a taser build into it. Grabbing Alice's arm results in it releasing the charge, knocking her out.
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** Evulz goes for Alice's arm, but simply breaks it instead - while Alice is reacting to the pain, Evulz grabs her other arm and she's rendered completely helpless.
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* '''Double Subverted''': After Alice judo flips Evulz, he grabs the other arm and flips her over, pulling himself up at the same time. "Yes."
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* '''Double Subverted''': Subverted''':
** After Alice judo flips Evulz, he grabs the other arm and flips her over, pulling himself up at the same time. "Yes.""
** Evulz [[CrazyPrepared comes prepared]] with electricity-proof glove/armor or substances that negates electricity.
** After Alice judo flips Evulz, he grabs the other arm and flips her over, pulling himself up at the same time. "Yes.
** Evulz [[CrazyPrepared comes prepared]] with electricity-proof glove/armor or substances that negates electricity.
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* '''Lampshaded''': "Oh my God... He grabbed my upper arm... [[SaracasmMode How will I ever live now?]]"
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* '''Lampshaded''': "Oh my God... He grabbed my upper arm... [[SaracasmMode [[SarcasmMode How will I ever live now?]]"
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** Alice lets herself be grabbed by a misogynist and WrongGenreSavvy villain in order to get inside his lair and destroy it from the inside.
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** Alice [[PlayAlongPrisoner lets herself be grabbed grabbed]] by a misogynist and WrongGenreSavvy villain in order to get inside his lair and destroy it from the inside.
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The lampshade part felt a bit sarcastic, which would be funny.
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* '''Lampshaded''': "Oh my God... He grabbed my upper arm... How will I ever live now?"
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* '''Lampshaded''': "Oh my God... He grabbed my upper arm... [[SaracasmMode How will I ever live now?"now?]]"
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* '''Exploited''': Alice lets herself be grabbed by a misogynist and WrongGenreSavvy villain in order to get inside his lair and destroy it from the inside.
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* '''Exploited''': '''Exploited''':
** Alice lets herself be grabbed by a misogynist and WrongGenreSavvy villain in order to get inside his lair and destroy it from theinside.inside.
** Alice [[GroinAttack grabs Emperor Evulz' nutsack with the arm he grabbed to make him let go]].
** Alice lets herself be grabbed by a misogynist and WrongGenreSavvy villain in order to get inside his lair and destroy it from the
** Alice [[GroinAttack grabs Emperor Evulz' nutsack with the arm he grabbed to make him let go]].
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%%* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': ???
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%%* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': ???Emperor Evulz threatens to grab Alice's arm, but never makes good on this.
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** Alice can [[ShockAndAwe emit electricity]]. [[RealityEnsues Do]] [[XRaySparks the]] [[HighVoltageDeath math]].
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** Alice can [[ShockAndAwe emit electricity]]. [[RealityEnsues [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome Do]] [[XRaySparks the]] [[HighVoltageDeath math]].
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* '''Conversed''': "Odd. Most villains would grab her by the arm instead of kicking her in the groin."
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* '''Conversed''': "Odd. Most villains would grab her by the arm instead of [[GroinAttack kicking her in the groin.groin]]."
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** Alice can [[ShockAndAwe emit electricity]]. [[RealiityEnsues Do]] [[XRaySparks the]] [[HighVoltageDeath math]].
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** Alice can [[ShockAndAwe emit electricity]]. [[RealiityEnsues [[RealityEnsues Do]] [[XRaySparks the]] [[HighVoltageDeath math]].
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** Alice can [[ShockAndAwe emit electricity]]. [[RealiityEnsues Do]] [[XRaySparks the]] [[HighVoltageDeath math]]
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** Alice can [[ShockAndAwe emit electricity]]. [[RealiityEnsues Do]] [[XRaySparks the]] [[HighVoltageDeath math]]math]].
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** Alice is a RobotGirl and her swith is situated on the inner upper arm.
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** Alice is a RobotGirl and her swith switch is situated on the inner upper arm.
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Trimming the "justified" bullet, keeping only what applies to the tropes' definition.
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** Evulz just pinches Alice's forearm and she goes down.
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** Evulz just pinches Alice's forearm arm and she goes down.
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** Alice had a horrible case of carpal tunnel syndrome as a child and never fully recovered from it, so squeezing her arm is a kind of KryptoniteFactor.
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** Alice had a horrible case of carpal tunnel syndrome as a child is one-armed or has her other arm broken and never fully recovered from it, so squeezing her arm is a kind of KryptoniteFactor.thus cannot struggle efficiently.
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** Evulz just has a really really strong grip.
** Evulz is an energy stealer, and drains Alice's energy by gripping her arm, thus subduing her.
** This is Alice's first outing. When Emperor Evulz grabs her, she panics.
** Picking a fight with the opponent isn't the best option in this case, and the grab makes Alice realize that she almost lost her temper when she shouldn't have.
** Emperor Evulz is a terrifying bad guy who just oozes menace, so just about anyone would be paralyzed by fear if he crept up behind them and grabbed them.
** Alice is a boxer and her other arm is broken.
** Alice is small and/or Emperor Evulz is really big. He lifts her up by the arm at arm's length, and Alice has no way of getting down.
** Alice is moving very fast and the stationary Emperor Evulz grabs her arm in mid-motion. The sudden deceleration destroys or dislocates her arm.
** Evulz has sharp talons aimed at Alice's important blood vessels.
** Evulz is an energy stealer, and drains Alice's energy by gripping her arm, thus subduing her.
** This is Alice's first outing. When Emperor Evulz grabs her, she panics.
** Picking a fight with the opponent isn't the best option in this case, and the grab makes Alice realize that she almost lost her temper when she shouldn't have.
** Emperor Evulz is a terrifying bad guy who just oozes menace, so just about anyone would be paralyzed by fear if he crept up behind them and grabbed them.
** Alice is a boxer and her other arm is broken.
** Alice is small and/or Emperor Evulz is really big. He lifts her up by the arm at arm's length, and Alice has no way of getting down.
** Alice is moving very fast and the stationary Emperor Evulz grabs her arm in mid-motion. The sudden deceleration destroys or dislocates her arm.
** Evulz has sharp talons aimed at Alice's important blood vessels.
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** Evulz just has a really really strong grip.
SuperStrength and Alice doesn't. She couldn't free herself even if she tried.
** Evulz is an energy stealer, and drainsAlice's people's energy by gripping her arm, them, thus subduing her.
** This is Alice's first outing. When Emperor Evulz grabs her, she panics.
** Picking a fight with the opponent isn't the best option in this case, and the grab makesAlice realize that she almost lost by grabbing her temper when she shouldn't have.
** Emperor Evulz is a terrifying bad guy who just oozes menace, so just about anyone would be paralyzed by fear if he crept up behind them and grabbed them.
exposed flesh.
** Alice is aboxer RobotGirl and her other arm swith is broken.
** Alice is small and/or Emperor Evulz is really big. He lifts her up bysituated on the arm at arm's length, and Alice has no way of getting down.
** Alice is moving very fast and the stationary Emperor Evulz grabs her arm in mid-motion. The sudden deceleration destroys or dislocates her arm.
** Evulz has sharp talons aimed at Alice's important blood vessels.inner upper arm.
** Evulz is an energy stealer, and drains
** This is Alice's first outing. When Emperor Evulz grabs her, she panics.
** Picking a fight with the opponent isn't the best option in this case, and the grab makes
** Emperor Evulz is a terrifying bad guy who just oozes menace, so just about anyone would be paralyzed by fear if he crept up behind them and grabbed them.
** Alice is a
** Alice is small and/or Emperor Evulz is really big. He lifts her up by
** Alice is moving very fast and the stationary Emperor Evulz grabs her arm in mid-motion. The sudden deceleration destroys or dislocates her arm.
** Evulz has sharp talons aimed at Alice's important blood vessels.
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** A Mook grabs Alice's wrist roughly, breaking the PowerLimiter bracelet she was wearing. OhCrap.
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** A Mook grabs Alice's wrist upper arm roughly, breaking the PowerLimiter bracelet armlet she was wearing. OhCrap.
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** Alice is an energy stealer, and can never be with Bob without killing him because she drains anyone who touches her. Evulz [[TheWorfEffect is used to demonstrate this.]]
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** Evulz grabs Alice's wrist as the first step of a judo move.
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** Evulz grabs Alice's wrist upper arm as the first step of a judo move.
** Alice faints when her upper arm is grabbed by ''anyone'', no matter the situation.
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** Alice has no arms.
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* '''Lampshaded''': Alice is grabbed and complains of how she can never fight when that happens.
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* '''Lampshaded''': Alice is "Oh my God... He grabbed and complains of how she can never fight when that happens.my upper arm... How will I ever live now?"
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* '''Reconstructed''': In the world the protagonists live in, 90% of the ostensibly female population are {{Robot Girl}}s who have a disabling switch on their arms.
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* '''Reconstructed''': In the world the protagonists live in, 90% of the ostensibly female population are {{Robot Alice learns some moves to avert this situation or wears specific arm armour, which is customary for {{Action Girl}}s who have a disabling switch on their arms.in the setting.
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** Alice is a RealityWarper and TheOmniscient. Emperor Evulz has shapeshifted into a mosquito. He lands on Alice’s arm and she is instantly KilledOffForReal.
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* '''Parodied''': All women have this weakness, and so they wear armor on their upper arms.
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* '''Parodied''': '''Parodied''':
** All women have this weakness, and so they wear armor on their upperarms.arms.
** Evulz has no qualms with pinning down Bob, but when he needs to subdue Alice, he politely asks her if it would be okay for him to grab her arm. (Turns out she can just say no.)
** All women have this weakness, and so they wear armor on their upper
** Evulz has no qualms with pinning down Bob, but when he needs to subdue Alice, he politely asks her if it would be okay for him to grab her arm. (Turns out she can just say no.)
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* '''Reconstructed''': In the world the protagonists live in, 90% of the ostensibly female population are {{RobotGirl}}s who have a disabling switch on their arms.
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* '''Reconstructed''': In the world the protagonists live in, 90% of the ostensibly female population are {{RobotGirl}}s {{Robot Girl}}s who have a disabling switch on their arms.
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** [[GenderInvertedTrope Evulz grabs Bob's arm, and causes him to go down in agony]].
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** He doesn't just grab her arm he puts her in a painful hammerlock.
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** He doesn't just grab her arm arm, he puts her in a painful hammerlock.
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* '''Subverted''': As Evulz grabs Alice's arm, she judo flips him over. When he's on the ground, she stomps his groin and says, "You really thought that would work?"
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* '''Subverted''': '''Subverted''':
** As Evulz grabs Alice's arm, she judo flips him over. When he's on the ground, she stomps his groin and says, "You really thought that wouldwork?"work?"
** Evulz grabs Alice's wrist as the first step of a judo move.
** As Evulz grabs Alice's arm, she judo flips him over. When he's on the ground, she stomps his groin and says, "You really thought that would
** Evulz grabs Alice's wrist as the first step of a judo move.
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** He doesn't just ''grab'' her arm -- he puts her in a painful hammerlock.
** Or deliberately went for a pressure point.
** The mook just has a really really strong grip.
** The mook is an energy stealer, and drains Alice's energy by gripping her arm, thus subduing her.
** Or deliberately went for a pressure point.
** The mook just has a really really strong grip.
** The mook is an energy stealer, and drains Alice's energy by gripping her arm, thus subduing her.
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** He doesn't just ''grab'' grab her arm -- he puts her in a painful hammerlock.
**Or deliberately He went for a pressure point.
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**The mook Evulz is an energy stealer, and drains Alice's energy by gripping her arm, thus subduing her.
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** Emperor Evulz is a terrifying bad guy who just oozes menace, so just about ANYONE would be paralyzed by fear if he crept up behind them and grabbed them.
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** Emperor Evulz is a terrifying bad guy who just oozes menace, so just about ANYONE anyone would be paralyzed by fear if he crept up behind them and grabbed them.
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** Evulz has sharp talons aimed at Alice's important blood vessels.
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** Alice is moving very fast and the stationary Emperor Evulz grabs her arm in mid-motion. The sudden deceleration is like being hit with a punch at the same speed as she was going, and her arm is destroyed.
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** Alice is moving very fast and the stationary Emperor Evulz grabs her arm in mid-motion. The sudden deceleration is like being hit with a punch at the same speed as she was going, and destroys or dislocates her arm is destroyed.arm.
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** Evulz attempts to grab Alice by the arm. Alice, being the LadyOfWar that she is, promptly slices Evulz's hand off before it reaches her.
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** Alice is moving very fast and the stationary Emperor Evulz with a lot of anchoring grabs her arm. The sudden deceleration is the same as a yank on her arm going the same speed that she was going, while the rest of her body will continue to move at the same speed. Alice's arm is effectively destroyed.
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** Alice is moving very fast and the stationary Emperor Evulz with a lot of anchoring grabs her arm. arm in mid-motion. The sudden deceleration is the same as like being hit with a yank on her arm going punch at the same speed that as she was going, while the rest of and her body will continue to move at the same speed. Alice's arm is effectively destroyed.
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** Alice is moving very fast and the stationary Emperor Evulz with a lot of anchoring grabs her arm. The sudden deceleration is the same as a yank on her arm going the same speed that she was going, while the rest of her body will continue to move at the same speed. Alice's arm is effectively destroyed.
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** Alternatively, the arm-grabber in question has a nasty bladed gauntlet ([[ChainsawGood chainsaw attachment]] optional) expressly for this purpose, and pretty much pulverizes Alice's arm, leaving her incapacitated.
** Alternately again: He doesn't just ''grab'' her arm -- he puts her in a painful hammerlock.
** Alternately again: He doesn't just ''grab'' her arm -- he puts her in a painful hammerlock.
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** Alternatively, the The arm-grabber in question has a nasty bladed gauntlet ([[ChainsawGood chainsaw attachment]] optional) expressly for this purpose, and pretty much pulverizes Alice's arm, leaving her incapacitated.
**Alternately again: He doesn't just ''grab'' her arm -- he puts her in a painful hammerlock.
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** Alternatively, AGAIN, the mook just has a really really strong grip.
** Alternatively, AGAIN again, the mook is an energy stealer, and drains Alice's energy by gripping her arm, thus subduing her.
** Alternatively yet again, this is Alice's first outing. When Emperor Evulz grabs her, she panics.
** Alternatively, [[RunningGag YET AGAIN,]] picking a fight with the opponent isn't the best option in this case, and the grab makes Alice realize that she almost lost her temper when she shouldn't have.
** Alternatively, [[RunningGag YET YET AGAIN,]] Emperor Evulz is a terrifying bad guy who just oozes menace, so just about ANYONE would be paralyzed by fear if he crept up behind them and grabbed them.
** Alternatively, [[OverlyLongGag YET YET YET AGAIN,]] Alice is a boxer and her other arm is broken.
** Alternatively, ''YET'' YET YET YET AGAIN, Alice is small and/or Emperor Evulz is really big. He lifts her up by the arm at arm's length, and Alice has no way of getting down.
** Alternatively, AGAIN again, the mook is an energy stealer, and drains Alice's energy by gripping her arm, thus subduing her.
** Alternatively yet again, this is Alice's first outing. When Emperor Evulz grabs her, she panics.
** Alternatively, [[RunningGag YET AGAIN,]] picking a fight with the opponent isn't the best option in this case, and the grab makes Alice realize that she almost lost her temper when she shouldn't have.
** Alternatively, [[RunningGag YET YET AGAIN,]] Emperor Evulz is a terrifying bad guy who just oozes menace, so just about ANYONE would be paralyzed by fear if he crept up behind them and grabbed them.
** Alternatively, [[OverlyLongGag YET YET YET AGAIN,]] Alice is a boxer and her other arm is broken.
** Alternatively, ''YET'' YET YET YET AGAIN, Alice is small and/or Emperor Evulz is really big. He lifts her up by the arm at arm's length, and Alice has no way of getting down.
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** Alternatively, AGAIN, the The mook just has a really really strong grip.
**Alternatively, AGAIN again, the The mook is an energy stealer, and drains Alice's energy by gripping her arm, thus subduing her.
**Alternatively yet again, this This is Alice's first outing. When Emperor Evulz grabs her, she panics.
**Alternatively, [[RunningGag YET AGAIN,]] picking Picking a fight with the opponent isn't the best option in this case, and the grab makes Alice realize that she almost lost her temper when she shouldn't have.
**Alternatively, [[RunningGag YET YET AGAIN,]] Emperor Evulz is a terrifying bad guy who just oozes menace, so just about ANYONE would be paralyzed by fear if he crept up behind them and grabbed them.
**Alternatively, [[OverlyLongGag YET YET YET AGAIN,]] Alice is a boxer and her other arm is broken.
**Alternatively, ''YET'' YET YET YET AGAIN, Alice is small and/or Emperor Evulz is really big. He lifts her up by the arm at arm's length, and Alice has no way of getting down.
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** Alternatively, [[RunningGag YET AGAIN,]] picking a fight with the opponent isn't the best option in this case, and the grab makes Alice realize that she almost lost her temper when she shouldn't have
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** Alternatively, [[RunningGag YET AGAIN,]] picking a fight with the opponent isn't the best option in this case, and the grab makes Alice realize that she almost lost her temper when she shouldn't havehave.
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** Alternatively yet again, this is Alice's first outing. When Emperor Evulz grabs her, she panics
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* '''Exaggerated''': Evulz just pinches Alice's forearm and she goes down.
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** Evulz just pinches Alice's forearm and she goes down.
** Evulz grabs Alice's arm andAlice is she ends up completely paralyzed or TakenForGranite.
** Evulz just pinches Alice's forearm and she goes down.
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