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'''Basic Trope''': Two characters bicker vehemently, to point a where it maybe even comes to physical blows, before affection.
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'''Basic Trope''': Two characters bicker vehemently, vehemently to the point a where it maybe even comes to physical blows, blows before affection.
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** Bob and Alice argue, deescalate the conflict, and then share a kiss afterwards.
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** Bob and Alice argue, deescalate de-escalate the conflict, and then share a kiss afterwards.
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** When neither Alice and Bob back down from their fight, they both come to realize that they are equally stubborn and ill-tempered, and so BirdsOfAFeather ensues.
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** When neither Alice and nor Bob back down from their fight, they both come to realize realise that they are equally stubborn and ill-tempered, ill-tempered and so BirdsOfAFeather ensues.
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** Devin, Bob's neighbor, has to listen to a 24/7 stream of cursing, slapping, moaning, grunting, insults, kissing and the occasional [[TheImmodestOrgasm loud outburst]] of "[[SymbolSwearing #@&%!]] you Bo-bo... Bob!" emerging from Bob's apartment.
* '''Zig Zagged''': Alice and Bob constantly switch between affection and violence each other.
* '''Zig Zagged''': Alice and Bob constantly switch between affection and violence each other.
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** Devin, Bob's neighbor, has to listen to a 24/7 stream of cursing, slapping, moaning, grunting, insults, kissing kissing, and the occasional [[TheImmodestOrgasm loud outburst]] of "[[SymbolSwearing #@&%!]] you Bo-bo... Bob!" emerging from Bob's apartment.
* '''Zig Zagged''': Alice and Bob constantly switch between affection and violence with each other.
* '''Zig Zagged''': Alice and Bob constantly switch between affection and violence with each other.
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** Neither Alice nor Bob desire a relationship built on abuse to any degree, even if the "loving" part of the equation is [[IdealizedSex mind-blowing]].
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** Neither Alice nor Bob desire desires a relationship built on abuse to any degree, even if the "loving" part of the equation is [[IdealizedSex mind-blowing]].
