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* '''Inverted''': Bob forgets about everything less important than saving Carl, to an absurd degree.
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* '''Inverted''': Bob forgets about everything less (as in, ''even minutely'' less) important than saving Carl, to an absurd degree.
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** Bob gets the thousand dollars, [[DoWithHimAsYouWill hands Carl back to his kidnappers]] and walks away.
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** Bob gets the thousand dollars, [[DoWithHimAsYouWill [[YouCanKeepHer hands Carl back to his kidnappers]] and walks away.
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** Bob gets the thousand dollars, [[DoWithHimAsYouWill hands Carl (revealed to deserve the kidnapping) back to his kidnappers (revealed to deserve a pound of flesh from Carl)]] and walks away.
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** [[WorseWithContext There is a reason]] over that triviality being so damned important that [[YouDidNotAsked Bob is too stupid to supply immediately]] and nobody bothers to ask about.
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** [[WorseWithContext There is a reason]] over that triviality being so damned important that [[YouDidNotAsked [[YouDidntAsk Bob is too stupid to supply immediately]] and nobody bothers to ask about.
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** [[WorseWithContext There is a reason]] over that triviality being so damned important that [[YouDidntAsked Bob is too stupid to supply immediately]] and nobody bothers to ask about.
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** [[WorseWithContext There is a reason]] over that triviality being so damned important that [[YouDidntAsked [[YouDidNotAsked Bob is too stupid to supply immediately]] and nobody bothers to ask about.
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** [[WorseWithContext There is a reason]] over that triviality being so damned important that [[YouDidntAsked Bob is too stupid to supply immediately]] and nobody bothers to ask about.
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* '''Played for Horror''': Bob has actually been replaced with an evil double, and [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness this is one of the signs]].
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** Bob has actually been replaced with an evil double, and [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness this is one of thesigns]].signs]].
** As absurd as it sounds at first when the Hermione look-alike says it, being expelled from the WizardingSchool ''[[CerebusCallBack is]]'' worse than being killed -- [[WorseWithContext because]] the way magic works in this setting, dying before graduation is always a strong enough case for UnfinishedBusiness that ghosts stick around to keep taking lessons and being expelled in this state ends with you being DraggedOffToHell or [[GhostlyGoals becoming a vengeance-over-being-expelled-obsessed killer ghost]].
** Bob has actually been replaced with an evil double, and [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness this is one of the
** As absurd as it sounds at first when the Hermione look-alike says it, being expelled from the WizardingSchool ''[[CerebusCallBack is]]'' worse than being killed -- [[WorseWithContext because]] the way magic works in this setting, dying before graduation is always a strong enough case for UnfinishedBusiness that ghosts stick around to keep taking lessons and being expelled in this state ends with you being DraggedOffToHell or [[GhostlyGoals becoming a vengeance-over-being-expelled-obsessed killer ghost]].
