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** Alice is hideously raped by Bob, and in turn she finds Bob before subjecting him to [[ColdBloodedTorture the most gruesome and excruciating torture]] imaginable before [[CruelAndUnusualDeath killing him in the most extremely prolonged and convoluted way]] she can muster.
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** Alice thought she would gain catharsis from Bob's death, but instead she's still traumatized. This causes her to question whether killing him was the right thing to do.
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** Charles beats Bob up.
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** Charles beats Bob up.up for AttemptedRape.
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* '''GenderInvertedTrope''': Bob is raped by Alice, tracks her down, and deals with her (or hires someone to do it for him, or a member of his family does such). Messily.
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* '''GenderInvertedTrope''': '''Gender Inverted''': [[DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale Bob is raped by Alice, Alice]], tracks her down, and deals with her (or hires someone to do it for him, or a member of his family does such). Messily.
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** Alice murders Charles in cold blood, and Bob retaliates [[KarmicRapeby raping her]].
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** Alice murders Charles in cold blood, and Bob retaliates [[KarmicRapeby [[KarmicRape by raping her]].
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** Alice murders Charles in cold blood, and Bob retaliates by raping her.
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** Alice murders Charles in cold blood, and Bob retaliates by [[KarmicRapeby raping her.her]].
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** Years later, Charles gets sent to prison for {{jaywalking|WillRuinYourLife}}, meets Bob there, and {{Prison Rape}}s him "[[KarmicRape so he'll know Alice's pain]]."
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** Years later, Charles gets sent to prison for {{jaywalking|WillRuinYourLife}}, meets Bob there, and {{Prison Rape}}s him "[[KarmicRape so "so he'll know Alice's pain]].pain."
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* '''Implied''': Some days after Charles learns who raped his sister, Bob is found killed.
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* '''Implied''': '''Implied''':
** Some days after Charles learns who raped his sister, Bob is foundkilled.killed.
** Alice only has RapeAsBackstory [[ImpliedTrope implied]], and Charles kills Bob for other kinds of Domestic Abuse.
** Some days after Charles learns who raped his sister, Bob is found
** Alice only has RapeAsBackstory [[ImpliedTrope implied]], and Charles kills Bob for other kinds of Domestic Abuse.
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* '''Played For Horror''': A regular tale would just have Alice blow Bob's head off with a shotgun and call its quits. What is done to Bob in this story, however, is the stuff a SlasherFilm is made of: he's captured and tortured for weeks on end, with no end in sight. If Bob dies, it's either because Alice and her family got bored or because he got lucky and one of the tortures finally went too far.
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** Charles pretends to be Bob's friend, but spends a year {Gaslighting} him so that Bob to confesses his crime at a public gathering, in the presence of police officers.
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** Charles pretends to be Bob's friend, but spends a year {Gaslighting} {{Gaslighting}} him so that Bob to confesses his crime at a public gathering, in the presence of police officers.
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** Charles [[Gaslighting covertly drives]] Bob to confess his crime at a public gathering, in the presence of police officers.
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** Charles [[Gaslighting covertly drives]] pretends to be Bob's friend, but spends a year {Gaslighting} him so that Bob to confess confesses his crime at a public gathering, in the presence of police officers.
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* '''Downplayed''': Charles beats Bob up.
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* '''Downplayed''': '''Downplayed''':
** Charles beats Bobup.up.
** Charles [[Gaslighting covertly drives]] Bob to confess his crime at a public gathering, in the presence of police officers.
** Charles beats Bob
** Charles [[Gaslighting covertly drives]] Bob to confess his crime at a public gathering, in the presence of police officers.
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** Alice hunts down and kills Bob, only to find out too late that he was innocent.
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** Alice kills Bob and everybody connected to him (and the ones who actually ''had'' something to do with what happened to her get it worse than the rest).
