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Chained sinkholes.
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** Joe discovers that the Agency overestimated its power. {{B|rokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu}}ig [[EverybodysDeadDave time.]]
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** Joe discovers that the Agency overestimated its power. {{B|rokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu}}ig [[EverybodysDeadDave [[BrokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu} Big time.]]
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* '''Subverted''': Joe discovers that the Agency overestimated its power. {{B|rokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu}}ig [[EverybodysDeadDave time.]]
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* '''Subverted''': '''Subverted''':
** Joe discovers that the Agency overestimated its power. {{B|rokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu}}ig [[EverybodysDeadDave time.]]]]
** The battle is hard-fought, the Agency getting the upper hand by the skin of its teeth... then the alien god decides that it's grown bored playing with insects and [[IAmNotLeftHanded stops holding back]].
** Joe discovers that the Agency overestimated its power. {{B|rokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu}}ig [[EverybodysDeadDave time.
** The battle is hard-fought, the Agency getting the upper hand by the skin of its teeth... then the alien god decides that it's grown bored playing with insects and [[IAmNotLeftHanded stops holding back]].
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** Extra-dimensional EldritchAbominations never appear in the story.
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** Extra-dimensional EldritchAbominations {{Eldritch Abomination}}s never appear in the story.
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* '''Subverted''': Joe discovers that the Agency overestimated its power. {{B|rokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu}}ig ti[[EverybodysDeadDave me]].
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* '''Subverted''': Joe discovers that the Agency overestimated its power. {{B|rokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu}}ig ti[[EverybodysDeadDave me]].[[EverybodysDeadDave time.]]
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** Extra-dimensional {{Eldritch Abomination}}s never appear in the story.
** A story about extra-dimensional {{Eldritch Abomination}}s [[CosmicHorrorStory plays out how it usually would]].
** A story about extra-dimensional {{Eldritch Abomination}}s [[CosmicHorrorStory plays out how it usually would]].
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** Extra-dimensional {{Eldritch Abomination}}s EldritchAbominations never appear in the story.
** Astory about extra-dimensional {{Eldritch Abomination}}s [[CosmicHorrorStory CosmicHorrorStory plays out how it usually would]].would.
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* '''Invoked''': "You say this ancient, unspeakable monstrosity devours worlds? Call your political connections; we're gonna need funding. [[MoreDakka And guns.]] [[DeusExNukina And some nukes.]]"
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* '''Invoked''': "You say this ancient, unspeakable monstrosity devours worlds? Call your political connections; we're gonna need funding. [[MoreDakka And guns.]] guns]]. [[DeusExNukina And some nukes.]]"nukes]]."
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** Said HiveMind turns out to be normally peaceful, and allows it's individual selves, well, individuality. It's only if humans at large [[ThePowerOfFriendship unite as one]] [[CombinedEnergyAttack that it's power manifests]].
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** Said HiveMind turns out to be normally peaceful, and allows it's individual selves, well, individuality. It's only if humans at large [[ThePowerOfFriendship unite as one]] that [[CombinedEnergyAttack that it's power manifests]].
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* '''Subverted''': Joe discovers that the Agency overestimated its power. {{B|rokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu}}ig [[EverybodysDeadDave time.]]
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* '''Subverted''': Joe discovers that the Agency overestimated its power. {{B|rokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu}}ig [[EverybodysDeadDave time.]]ti[[EverybodysDeadDave me]].
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** An [[StarfishAliens indescribable]] alien god comes to Earth [[BenevolentAlienInvasion in order to prevent]] WorldWarIII, teach humans their peaceful ways, [[DidWeJustHaveTeaWithCthulhu and have some tea]]. All the {{Sleazy Politician}}s who ''wanted'' WorldWarIII to happen and worked towards that regard these events as the worst thing to ever happen.
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** An [[StarfishAliens indescribable]] alien god comes to Earth [[BenevolentAlienInvasion in order to prevent]] to]] prevent WorldWarIII, teach humans their peaceful ways, [[DidWeJustHaveTeaWithCthulhu and have some tea]]. All the {{Sleazy Politician}}s who ''wanted'' WorldWarIII to happen and worked towards that regard these events as the worst thing to ever happen.
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** A seemingly typical CosmicHorrorStory plays out... in a situation where all the Lovecraftian deities are ''[[DidWeJustHaveTeaWithCthulhu friendly]]'', and IntriguedByHumanity to the point that they overrun Earth in a manner not dissimilar to stereotypes of [[HawaiianShirtedTourist annoying]] [[JapaneseTourist tourists]].
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** A seemingly typical CosmicHorrorStory plays out... in a situation where all the Lovecraftian deities are ''[[DidWeJustHaveTeaWithCthulhu friendly]]'', and IntriguedByHumanity to the point that they overrun Earth in a manner not dissimilar to stereotypes of [[HawaiianShirtedTourist annoying]] tourists]] that are [[JapaneseTourist tourists]].annoying]].
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** HumansAreWarriors. One race of sentient's response to an EldritchAbomination may be to curl up into a ball of crazy; humanity's is to [[ColonyDrop run it over with a space station]] [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill or two]].
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** HumansAreWarriors. One race of sentient's response to an EldritchAbomination may be to curl up into a ball of crazy; humanity's is to [[ColonyDrop run it over with a space station]] or [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill or two]].
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** Alternatively the only thing special about the alien monstrosities is causing insanity in anyone without [[{{Determinator}} enough willpower]] and the ability to grasp the alien spatial warping. If the Agency can get past that, they could kill even the strongest ones with two shots from an [[MugglesDoItBetter elephant rifle.]]
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** Alternatively the only thing special about the alien monstrosities is causing insanity in anyone without [[{{Determinator}} enough willpower]] and the ability to grasp the alien spatial warping. If the Agency can get past that, they could kill even the strongest ones with two shots from an [[MugglesDoItBetter elephant rifle.]]rifle]].
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Not So Different has been renamed, and it needs to be dewicked/moved
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** The humans win, but only because there was another supernatural force on their side. It's hinted that this being is NotSoDifferent, and help humans out of EnemyMine situation.
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** The humans win, but only because there was another supernatural force on their side. It's hinted that this being is NotSoDifferent, similar, and help humans out of EnemyMine situation.