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* '''Exaggerated''': Claire's a flat out AlphaBitch... but yet she spends most of her free time at places like charities and nursing homes.
* '''Downplayed''': Claire is really nice most of the times, but is not without her follies which she will eventually be brought down to earth.
* '''Downplayed''': Claire is really nice most of the times, but is not without her follies which she will eventually be brought down to earth.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Claire's a flat out AlphaBitch... but and yet she spends most of her free time at places like charities and nursing homes.
* '''Downplayed''': Claire is really nice most of thetimes, time, but is not without her follies for which she will eventually be brought down to earth.
* '''Downplayed''': Claire is really nice most of the
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** Claire does have a nasty personality, but she really does care about others and tries her best to be supportive.
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** Claire does have a bit of a nasty personality, but she really does care about others and tries her best to be supportive.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Claire isn't '''so''' bad once you get to know her... but that was all an act... but she becomes nice for real... though she has a tendency to sink back into her old habits... until Alice points this out, at which she shapes up.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Claire isn't '''so''' ''so'' bad once you get to know her... but that was all an act... but she becomes nice for real... though she has a tendency to sink back into her old habits... until Alice points this out, at which she shapes up.
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** Claire is an outright SpoiledSweet.
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** Claire is an outright SpoiledSweet.
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** "Wow, who knew that she can be so sweet when she wants to?"
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** "Wow, who knew that she can be so sweet when she wants to?"to be?"
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* '''Exploited''': ???
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* '''Exploited''': ???Claire is trying to be a kind person despite her wealth and popularity, but Alice, who is bitterly jealous of her, exploits people's assumptions about her to make the whole school think she's a straight-up AlphaBitch.
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** Just because Claire is nice to AliceAndBob doesn't stop her from being mean to those she deems as losers since she has a reputation to maintain. Alice and Bob are less than pleased of this.
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** Just because Claire is nice to AliceAndBob doesn't stop her from being mean to those she deems as losers since she has a reputation to maintain. Alice and Bob are less than pleased of with this.
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** The disconnect between Claire's AlphaBitch reputation and the supposed good heart she has underneath can't go on forever -- she has to either drop the Loveable part and become a bitch to everyone or the Alpha Bitch part and be nicer to everyone.
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** The disconnect between Claire's AlphaBitch reputation and the supposed good heart she has underneath can't go on forever -- - she has to either drop the Loveable part and become a bitch to everyone or the Alpha Bitch part and be nicer to everyone.
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** Through some convincing, Claire's victims will see that they aren't so bad. However, this is going to go back to deconstruction 2 as they'll still see her as an AlphaBitch.
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** Through some convincing, Claire's victims will see that they aren't she isn't so bad. However, this is going to go back to deconstruction 2 as they'll still see her as an AlphaBitch.
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** The disconnect between Claire's AlphaBitch reputation and the supposed good heart she has underneath can't go on forever -- she has to either drop the Loveable part and become a bitch to everyone or the Alpha Bitch part and be nicer to everyone.
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** Claire finds a way to thread the needle through CharacterDevelopment -- her default attitude becomes nicer while still being popular, but her Bitchy side is held in reserve when it comes to other AlphaBitch seekers who truly deserve being taken down a peg. This may require Alice and Bob to stay around to correct her if she's going off-course.
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* '''Reconstructed''': Alice and Bob, seeing Claire EatingLunchAlone, are reminded of how bad it made ''them'' feel and decide to join her. Once they get to know her, they realize that she really has changed.
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* '''Reconstructed''': '''Reconstructed''':
** Alice and Bob, seeing Claire EatingLunchAlone, are reminded of how bad it made ''them'' feel and decide to join her. Once they get to know her, they realize that she really haschanged.changed.
** Unfortunately, no way to reconstruct 2. If Claire changes, [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome nobody will believe her]], leading to deconstruction 1, and eventually to reconstruction 1, but that doesn't have a true resolution as they will still believe that Claire hasn't changed. Eventually, this loops right back to deconstruction 2 as Claire becomes nasty again.
** Through some convincing, Claire's victims will see that they aren't so bad. However, this is going to go back to deconstruction 2 as they'll still see her as an AlphaBitch.
** Alice and Bob, seeing Claire EatingLunchAlone, are reminded of how bad it made ''them'' feel and decide to join her. Once they get to know her, they realize that she really has
** Unfortunately, no way to reconstruct 2. If Claire changes, [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome nobody will believe her]], leading to deconstruction 1, and eventually to reconstruction 1, but that doesn't have a true resolution as they will still believe that Claire hasn't changed. Eventually, this loops right back to deconstruction 2 as Claire becomes nasty again.
** Through some convincing, Claire's victims will see that they aren't so bad. However, this is going to go back to deconstruction 2 as they'll still see her as an AlphaBitch.
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** Claire is nice, never a mean girl.
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** Claire is nice, never a mean girl.an outright SpoiledSweet.
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** Claire's an AlphaBitch who, after [[JerkassRealization finally realizing]] that she [[{{Understatement}} isn't exactly the nicest person ever]], decides to become kinder and friendlier to others. However, [[RealityEnsues because of her previous behavior, nobody's willing to believe that Claire has truly changed]]. As a result, she finds it extremely difficult to make new friends.
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** Claire's an AlphaBitch who, after [[JerkassRealization finally realizing]] that she [[{{Understatement}} isn't exactly the nicest person ever]], decides to become kinder and friendlier to others. However, [[RealityEnsues [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome because of her previous behavior, nobody's willing to believe that Claire has truly changed]]. As a result, she finds it extremely difficult to make new friends.
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* '''Double Subverted''': ''However'', while she's campaigning, Claire realizes that people genuinely like her more when she's nice to them, so [[BecomingTheMask she decides to become nice to people for real]].
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* '''Double Subverted''': ''However'', while she's campaigning, Claire realizes that [[SheepInSheepsClothing people genuinely like her more when she's nice to them, them]], so [[BecomingTheMask she decides to become nice to people for real]].
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** Claire is an AlphaBitch, and not even a little bit nice.
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** Claire is an AlphaBitch, [[BitchAlert and not even a little bit nice.nice]].
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* '''Inverted''': Claire is dirt-poor, and everyone assumes that she's nice. [[LowerClassLout She's not]].
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* '''Inverted''': '''Inverted''':
** Claire is dirt-poor, and everyone assumes that she's nice. [[LowerClassLout She'snot]].not]].
** BitchInSheepsClothing.
** Claire is dirt-poor, and everyone assumes that she's nice. [[LowerClassLout She's
** BitchInSheepsClothing.
