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** After seeing how annoying a super hero's popularity is, she wears a JerkassFacade to avoid the unwanted attention.
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** After seeing how annoying a super hero's popularity is, she wears [[HiddenHeartOfGold pretends to be a JerkassFacade jerk]] to avoid the unwanted attention.
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** Amazing Girl used to be a villain. Just because she's now a hero [[ReformedButNotTamed doesn't mean she hasn't changed her behavior]].
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** Amazing Girl used to be a villain. Just because she's now a hero [[ReformedButNotTamed doesn't mean she hasn't has changed her behavior]].
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** Amazing Girl is a LawfulGood heroine who values justice and order, but sees compassion and mercy as hindrances to her pursuit of justice.
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** While Amazing Girl is nice, she tends to grab the JerkassBall on occasions. Sometimes the JerkassFacade to get ahead in life.
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** While Amazing Girl is nice, she tends to grab the JerkassBall on occasions. Sometimes the JerkassFacade she acts like a jerk to get ahead in life.
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** Alternatively, she is [[{{Jerkass}} an amoral bitch]] through and through.
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** Alternatively, she Amazing girl is [[{{Jerkass}} an amoral bitch]] through and through.a bitch without any morals who coincidentally sides with a group of heroes.
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** Actually, Amazing Girl is willing to do nasty deeds [[DisproportionateRetribution which is likely to injure numerous of innocent individuals unnecessarily and viciously by the excuse of ‘morally righteous’ regularly.]] Thus, it makes her [[KnightTemplar an amoral bitch with hypocrisy.]]
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** Actually, Amazing Girl is willing to do nasty deeds [[DisproportionateRetribution which is likely to injure numerous of innocent individuals unnecessarily and viciously by the excuse of ‘morally righteous’ regularly.]] Thus, it makes her she comes across as [[KnightTemplar an amoral bitch with hypocrisy.]]
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** "Would it kill you to not be such a bitch? ....know what? Screw it. It ''[[ImpliedDeathThreat is]]'' gonna kill you."
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** Amazing girl end up [[TheExtremistWasRight does something right which keep the civilian from more dangerous disasters.]] After all, she’s still [[GoodAllAlong more or less a genuinely good person.]]
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** Amazing girl end up [[TheExtremistWasRight does something right which keep the civilian from more dangerous disasters.]] After all, she’s still [[GoodAllAlong more or less fundamentally a genuinely good person.]]
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** Well at least Amazing Girl is not a total villain... So what? [[WhatYouAreInTheDark She is still not a good person!]]
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** Well at least Amazing Girl is not a total villain... So what? [[WhatYouAreInTheDark She is still ]] [[{{Jerkass}} not ]] [[KnightTemplar a good person!]]
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** Amazing Girl lives in a CrapsaccharineWorld where being nice, polite, friendly, and merciful is [[FelonyMisdemeanor heinous]], and being rude, angry, condescending, and violent is honorable.
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** Amazing Girl lives in In a CrapsaccharineWorld where full of heroes, villains, and people who are neutral, being nice, polite, gentle, friendly, and merciful is [[FelonyMisdemeanor heinous]], and while being rude, harsh, unforgiving, angry, condescending, and violent is honorable.
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** Actually, Amazing Girl is willing to do nasty deeds [[DisproportionateRetribution which is likely to injure numerous of innocent individuals unnecessary and viciously by the excuse of ‘morally righteous’ regularly.]] Thus, it makes her [[KnightTemplar an amoral bitch with hypocrisy.]]
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** Actually, Amazing Girl is willing to do nasty deeds [[DisproportionateRetribution which is likely to injure numerous of innocent individuals unnecessary unnecessarily and viciously by the excuse of ‘morally righteous’ regularly.]] Thus, it makes her [[KnightTemplar an amoral bitch with hypocrisy.]]
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** Amazing girl end up [[TheExtremistWasRight does something right which keep the civilian from more dangerous disasters.]] After all, she’s still capable of doing genuine good deeds.
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** Amazing girl end up [[TheExtremistWasRight does something right which keep the civilian from more dangerous disasters.]] After all, she’s still capable of doing genuine [[GoodAllAlong more or less a genuinely good deeds.person.]]
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** Actually, Amazing Girl is willing to do nasty deeds [[DisproportionateRetribution which is likely to injure numerous of innocent individuals unnecessary and viciously by the excuse of ‘morally righteous’ regularly.]] Thus, [[KnightTemplar she is nothing but an amoral bitch.]]
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** Actually, Amazing Girl is willing to do nasty deeds [[DisproportionateRetribution which is likely to injure numerous of innocent individuals unnecessary and viciously by the excuse of ‘morally righteous’ regularly.]] Thus, it makes her [[KnightTemplar she is nothing but an amoral bitch.bitch with hypocrisy.]]
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** Amazing girl end up [[TheExtremistWasRight does something right which keep the civilian from more dangerous disasters.]]
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** Amazing girl end up [[TheExtremistWasRight does something right which keep the civilian from more dangerous disasters.]]]] After all, she’s still capable of doing genuine good deeds.
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** Amazing Girl is a {{Designated Hero}}ine and a JerkSue who is constantly abusive to people and highly abrasive but has done a TON of good deeds and doesn't consider herself a bad person.
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** Amazing Girl is a {{Designated Hero}}ine and a JerkSue who is constantly abusive to people and highly abrasive abrasive, but has done a TON of good deeds and doesn't consider herself a bad person.
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** Amazing Girl's mentor gives her a test to see whether or not she is qualified in being good by placing her in a dilemma; Will she save a life by being cruel and harsh to them or will [[NiceIsNotGood she be nice to them which will lead them into danger.]]
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** Amazing Girl's mentor gives her a test to see whether or not she is qualified in being good by placing her in a GentleTouchVsFirmHand dilemma; Will she save a life by being [[CruelToBeKind cruel and harsh to them them]] or will [[NiceIsNotGood [[AffablyEvil she be nice to them which will lead them into danger.]]danger?]]
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** She couldn't care less and continues to save people whether they like it or not.
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** She couldn't care less what others think about her attitude and behavior and continues to save people the day whether they like it or not.
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* '''Played For Drama''': Claire, a WideEyedIdealist kind of girl, has been a big fan of Amazing Girl ever since she was younger, but when she [[WartsAndAll realizes how rude and abusive she behaves towards her]], she [[CreateYourOwnVillain becomes Amazing Girl's]] ArchEnemy because of [[StartOfDarkness the inflicted heartbreak and disappointment]].
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* '''Played For Drama''': Claire, a WideEyedIdealist kind of girl, has been a big fan of Amazing Girl ever since she was younger, but when she [[WartsAndAll realizes how rude and abusive hostile she behaves towards is to her]], she [[CreateYourOwnVillain becomes Amazing Girl's]] ArchEnemy because of [[StartOfDarkness the inflicted heartbreak and disappointment]].
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** Amazing Girl's mentor gives her a test to see whether or not she is qualified in being good by placing her in a dilemma; Will she save a life by being cruel and harsh to them or will she be nice to them which will lead them into danger.
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** Amazing Girl's mentor gives her a test to see whether or not she is qualified in being good by placing her in a dilemma; Will she save a life by being cruel and harsh to them or will [[NiceIsNotGood she be nice to them which will lead them into danger.]]
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* '''Double Subverted''': That was a one-time thing. Most of the time, she's as antisocial as they come.
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** That was a one-time thing. Most of the time, she's as antisocial as theycome.come.
** Amazing girl end up [[TheExtremistWasRight does something right which keep the civilian from more dangerous disasters.]]
** That was a one-time thing. Most of the time, she's as antisocial as they
** Amazing girl end up [[TheExtremistWasRight does something right which keep the civilian from more dangerous disasters.]]
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* '''Averted''': Good is nice.
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* '''Averted''': '''Averted''':
** Good isnice.nice.
** Alternatively, she is [[{{Jerkass}} an amoral bitch]] through and through.
** Good is
** Alternatively, she is [[{{Jerkass}} an amoral bitch]] through and through.
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** Turns out Amazing Girl’s willing to do nasty deeds [[DisproportionateRetribution which viciously and unnecessarily injure numerous of innocent individuals by the excuse of ‘morally righteous’ regularly.]] Actually, [[KnightTemplar she is nothing but an amoral bitch.]]
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** Turns out Actually, Amazing Girl’s Girl is willing to do nasty deeds [[DisproportionateRetribution which viciously and unnecessarily is likely to injure numerous of innocent individuals unnecessary and viciously by the excuse of ‘morally righteous’ regularly.]] Actually, Thus, [[KnightTemplar she is nothing but an amoral bitch.]]
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** [[KnightTemplar Turns out Amazing Girl’s willing to do nasty deeds in the name of morally righteous regularly. Actually, she is nothing but an amoral bitch.]]
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** Amazing Girl principles and ideals are solid as steel and unambiguously good, but [[KnightTemplar the way she enforces them]] is so [[UnscrupulousHero vicious and brutal]] that even the most {{blood|Knight}}-thirsty of her allies is scared of her.
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** Amazing Girl principles and ideals are solid as steel and unambiguously good, but [[KnightTemplar [[CrueltoBeKind the way she enforces them]] is so [[UnscrupulousHero vicious and brutal]] that even the most {{blood|Knight}}-thirsty of her allies is scared of her.
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** Turns out Amazing Girl’s willing to do nasty deeds in the name of morally righteous regularly. Actually, she is neither righteous or sweet
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** [[KnightTemplar Turns out Amazing Girl’s willing to do nasty deeds in the name of morally righteous regularly. Actually, she is neither righteous or sweetnothing but an amoral bitch.]]
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** Turns out Amazing Girl’s willing to do nasty deeds in the name of morally righteous regularly.Actually, she is neither righteous or sweet
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** Turns out Amazing Girl’s willing to do nasty deeds in the name of morally righteous regularly. Actually, she is neither righteous or sweet
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** Turns out Amazing Girl’s actually an amoral KnightTemplar who is willing to do nasty deeds in the name of morally righteous.
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** Turns out Amazing Girl’s actually an amoral KnightTemplar who is willing to do nasty deeds in the name of morally righteous.righteous regularly.Actually, she is neither righteous or sweet
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** Amazing Girl is actually a KnightTemplar who is willing to do nasty deeds in the name of morally righteous. At heart, she is nothing but amoral (and not sweet as well).
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** Turns out Amazing Girl is Girl’s actually a an amoral KnightTemplar who is willing to do nasty deeds in the name of morally righteous. At heart, she is nothing but amoral (and not sweet as well).righteous.
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** Amazing Girl is actually a KnightTemplar who is willing to do nasty deeds in the name of morally righteous. At heart, she is nothing but amoral.
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** Amazing Girl is actually a KnightTemplar who is willing to do nasty deeds in the name of morally righteous. At heart, she is nothing but amoral.amoral (and not sweet as well).
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** Amazing Girl is actually a KnightTemplar or HolierThanThou who is willing to do nasty deeds in the name of morally righteous. At heart, she is nothing but amoral.
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** Amazing Girl is actually a KnightTemplar or HolierThanThou who is willing to do nasty deeds in the name of morally righteous. At heart, she is nothing but amoral.
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** Amazing Girl is a KnightTemplar or HolierThanThou who is willing to do nasty deeds in the name of morally righteous. At heart, she is nothing but amoral.
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** Amazing Girl is actually a KnightTemplar or HolierThanThou who is willing to do nasty deeds in the name of morally righteous. At heart, she is nothing but amoral.
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** Amazing Girl is a KnightTemplar or HolierThanThou who believes herself is morally righteous despite willing to do numerous nasty deeds regularly. At heart, she is neither righteous nor sweet.
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** Amazing Girl is a KnightTemplar or HolierThanThou who believes herself is morally righteous despite willing to do numerous nasty deeds regularly. in the name of morally righteous. At heart, she is neither righteous nor sweet.nothing but amoral.
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** Amazing Girl is a KnightTemplar or HolierThanThou who thinks they are morally righteous despite willing to do numerous nasty deeds. At heart, she is neither righteous nor sweet.
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** Amazing Girl is a KnightTemplar or HolierThanThou who thinks they are believes herself is morally righteous despite willing to do numerous nasty deeds.deeds regularly. At heart, she is neither righteous nor sweet.
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** Amazing Girl is a KnightTemplar who believes her self as righteous and doing much horrible deeds. Actually, she is not a hero in any way.
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** Amazing Girl is a KnightTemplar or HolierThanThou who believes her self as thinks they are morally righteous and doing much horrible despite willing to do numerous nasty deeds. Actually, At heart, she is not a hero in any way.neither righteous nor sweet.
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'''Basic Trope''': An unquestionable good character is unpleasant.
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'''Basic Trope''': An unquestionable A genuinely good character is unpleasant.
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** Amazing Girl is a KnightTemplar who believes her self as righteous and doing much horrible deeds. Actually, she is not a hero in any way.
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'''Basic Trope''': A character is heroic but obnoxious.
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'''Basic Trope''': A An unquestionable good character is heroic but obnoxious.unpleasant.
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** Amazing Girl's mentor gives her a test to see whether or not she is qualified in being good by placing a ToBeLawfulOrGood dilemma; Will she spare an innocent who has caused destruction to society or will she send them to prison in order to save the world.
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** Amazing Girl's mentor gives her a test to see whether or not she is qualified in being good by placing her in a ToBeLawfulOrGood dilemma; Will she spare an innocent who has caused destruction save a life by being cruel and harsh to society them or will she send be nice to them to prison in order to save the world.which will lead them into danger.
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