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** Bob frowns at Alice as he dies.
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** Bob frowns at Alice as he dies.comes BackFromTheDead.
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'''Basic Trope''': A dying character smiles at another as they die, indicating that they die happy or at peace.
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'''Basic Trope''': A dying character smiles at another as they die, indicating that they die happy or is at peace.
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** Bob's last words are [[ClusterFBomb a string of profanities.]]
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** Bob's last words are [[ClusterFBomb a string of profanities.]]Bob frowns at Alice as he dies.
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** ...Or not. Bob dies smiling at TheMedic.
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** ...Or or not. Bob dies smiling at TheMedic.
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** But Bob still finds solace in the fact that Alice believed him before giving a small true smile before dying.
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** But However, Bob still finds solace in the fact that Alice believed him before giving a small true smile before dying.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Bob starts convulsing, causing his expression to switch from a smile, to a frown, to a rictus of pain, to his "O" face, and finally, to a look that's partially a smile, partially sorrow, and mostly a reaction to the realization that he just shat himself.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': '''Zig-Zagged''': Bob starts convulsing, causing his expression to switch from a smile, to a frown, to a rictus of pain, to his "O" face, and finally, to a look that's partially a smile, partially sorrow, and mostly a reaction to the realization that he just shat himself.
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* '''Implied''': Bob is dying but his face isn't visible, but Alice says tearfully, "I can't smile at you back, it's too hard for me." Viewers think he smiled at her.
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* '''Implied''': '''Implied''':
** Bob is dying but his face isn't visible, but Alice says tearfully, "I can't smile at you back, it's too hard for me." Viewers think he smiled ather.her.
** Bob is alive and healthy, but he is about to do something that may or may not lead to his death. He gives Alice a reassuring smile before running off into UncertainDoom.
** Bob is dying but his face isn't visible, but Alice says tearfully, "I can't smile at you back, it's too hard for me." Viewers think he smiled at
** Bob is alive and healthy, but he is about to do something that may or may not lead to his death. He gives Alice a reassuring smile before running off into UncertainDoom.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Bob's corpse is still smiling, even after he decayed that his skeleton can now be seen, a smile can still be seen.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Bob's corpse is still smiling, even after he decayed decomposed so much that his skeleton can now be seen, a smile can still be seen.
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** Bob is a SepfordSmiler to the very end.
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** Bob is a SepfordSmiler StepfordSmiler to the very end.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Bob's corpse is smiling as well.
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%% * '''Exaggerated''': Bob's corpse is smiling as well.'''Exaggerated'''
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** Bob breaks down crying as he dies.
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