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** Al strips Alice the AlphaBitch naked, puts her over his knee and spanks her in front of her school and their phones.
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* '''Exploited''': Bob appears to love being whipped by Al and rebels as much as he can to receive them.
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* '''Exploited''': Bob appears to love being whipped by Al and [[MischiefForPunishment rebels as much as he can to receive them.them]].
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** Bob eventually comes to terms that as harsh as the punishments were, it was necessary that it got through him. However, this isn't to say that he would use CorporalPunishment on his children when he becomes a parent. As for his relationship with his father, his coldness towards him assuaged.
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** Bob eventually comes to terms that as harsh as the punishments were, it was necessary that it got through him. However, this isn't to say that he would use CorporalPunishment on his children when he becomes a parent. As for his relationship with his father, his coldness resentment towards him assuaged.tones down.
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** Al [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone realizes what came of him]] and learns to channel his anger.
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-->'''Lisa''': "I know Bob was misbehaving, but there's no need for Al to whip him."\\
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-->'''Lisa''': "I know Bob was misbehaving, but there's no need for Al you to whip him."\\
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* '''Reconstructed''': Bob eventually comes to terms that as harsh as the punishments were, it was necessary that it got through him. (This isn't to say that he would use CorporalPunishment on his children when he becomes a parent.)
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* '''Reconstructed''': '''Reconstructed''':
** Bob eventually comes to terms that as harsh as the punishments were, it was necessary that it got through him.(This However, this isn't to say that he would use CorporalPunishment on his children when he becomes a parent.) parent. As for his relationship with his father, his coldness towards him assuaged.
** Bob eventually comes to terms that as harsh as the punishments were, it was necessary that it got through him.
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* '''Reconstructed''': Bob eventually comes to terms that as harsh as the punishments were, it was necessary that it got through him. (This isn't to say that he would use CorporalPunishment on his children when he becomes a parent.)
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* '''Played For Drama''': Al whips Bob so hard that Lisa, Bob's mother, [[WhatTheHellHero calls out Al for being too hard on him]]. Either Al justifies this or
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* '''Played For Drama''': Al whips Bob so hard that Lisa, Bob's mother, [[WhatTheHellHero calls out Al for being too hard on him]]. Either Al justifies this treatment or [[WasTooHardOnHim realizes that Lisa was right.]]
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** Bob doesn't respond to discipline ''unless'' it's physical. Al has no choice but to beat him into shap, that's all Bob understands, despit Al's best efforts to teach him otherwise.
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** Bob doesn't respond to discipline ''unless'' it's physical. Al has no choice but to beat him into shap, shape, that's all Bob understands, despit despite Al's best efforts to teach him otherwise.
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-> "I know Bob was being naughty, but there's no need for Al to whip him."
-> "Some kids function like this, you will have to deal with this. Words are sometimes not enough and a scale of punishments is a necessary part of education."
-> "Some kids function like this, you will have to deal with this. Words are sometimes not enough and a scale of punishments is a necessary part of education."
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'''Al''': "Maybe, but it is necessary. Some kids function like this, you will have to deal with this. Words are sometimes not enough and a scale of punishments is a necessary part of education."
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** The whippings Bob receives has made him resentful towards Al for the remainder of his life and when he becomes an adult, he cuts ties with him.
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** The whippings Bob receives has made him [[HatesTheirParent resentful towards Al Al]] for the remainder of his life and when he becomes an adult, he cuts ties with him.
** Bob [[TheRunaway runs away from home]].
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* '''Played For Drama''': Al whips Bob so hard that Lisa, Bob's mother, [[WhatTheHellHero calls out Al for being too hard on him]].
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* '''Played For Drama''': Al whips Bob so hard that Lisa, Bob's mother, [[WhatTheHellHero calls out Al for being too hard on him]]. Either Al justifies this or
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** Bob has definitely [[CrossingTheLineTwice crossed the line twice]]. And after several warnings and privations, Al goes for the corporal solution to make Bob understand that he has indeed crossed the line.
** Bob doesn't respond to discipline ''unless'' it's physical. Al has no choice but to beat him into shap, that's all Bob understands, despit Al's best efforts to teach him otherwise.
** Bob doesn't respond to discipline ''unless'' it's physical. Al has no choice but to beat him into shap, that's all Bob understands, despit Al's best efforts to teach him otherwise.
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** Al's belt is actually a whip.
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** Al's belt is actually a whip.made of soft silk.
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* '''Lampshaded''': "[[BlatantLies This is hurting me more than it's hurting you!]]"
* '''Invoked''': Bob appears to love being whipped by Al and rebels as much as he can to receive them.
* '''Exploited''': ???
* '''Invoked''': Bob appears to love being whipped by Al and rebels as much as he can to receive them.
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* '''Lampshaded''': "[[BlatantLies This is hurting me more than it's hurting you!]]"
"Well, back in the days, when we crossed the line we were given the belt you know..."
*'''Invoked''': '''Exploited''': Bob appears to love being whipped by Al and rebels as much as he can to receive them.
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* '''Discussed''': "I know Bob was being naughty, but there's no need for Al to whip him."
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* '''Discussed''': '''Discussed''':
-> "I know Bob was being naughty, but there's no need for Al to whip him."
-> "Some kids function like this, you will have to deal with this. Words are sometimes not enough and a scale of punishments is a necessary part of education."
-> "I know Bob was being naughty, but there's no need for Al to whip him."
-> "Some kids function like this, you will have to deal with this. Words are sometimes not enough and a scale of punishments is a necessary part of education."
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** Al is a very strict parent who does whatever he can to keep Bob on the straight and narrow.
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** Al figures that CorporalPunishment is a very strict parent who does whatever he can the best way to keep Bob on the straight and narrow.
** Al firmly believes that MiseryBuildsCharacter.
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* '''Enforced''': The writer wants to show how Al is a strict or {{abusive parent}}.
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* '''Enforced''': The writer wants to show how Al is a strict or {{abusive parent}}.parent|s}}.
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* '''Deconstructed''': The whippings that Bob receives has made him resentful towards Al for the remainder of his life and later disowns him.
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* '''Deconstructed''': '''Deconstructed''':
** The whippingsthat Bob receives has made him resentful towards Al for the remainder of his life and later disowns him.when he becomes an adult, he cuts ties with him.
** Al becomes gradually abusive after frequently whipping Bob.
** Bob becomes more rebellious the more he is whipped by Al.
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** Al becomes gradually abusive after frequently whipping Bob.
** Bob becomes more rebellious the more he is whipped by Al.
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** Al takes off his belt, and [[ComedicUnderwearExposure his pants fall down]].
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* '''Parodied''': Al's belt is actually a whip.
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* '''Parodied''': '''Parodied''':
** Al's belt is actually awhip.whip.
** Al can make anything obey by threatening to take his belt off. [[PercussiveMaintenance For example: his computer, his car, his refrigerator...]]
** Al's belt is actually a
** Al can make anything obey by threatening to take his belt off. [[PercussiveMaintenance For example: his computer, his car, his refrigerator...]]
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* '''Discussed''': "I know Bob was being naughty, but why did Al have to whip him?"
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* '''Discussed''': "I know Bob was being naughty, but why did there's no need for Al have to whip him?"him."
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* '''Subverted''': It appears that Bob hasn't done anything wrong although he think he did and get nervous when Al shouts "where's my belt!" He is then relieved when Al was looking for it to fasten his pants.
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* '''Subverted''': It appears that Bob hasn't done anything wrong although he think he did and get got nervous when Al shouts "where's my belt!" He is then relieved when Al was looking for it to fasten his pants.
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* '''Parodied''': ???
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* '''Parodied''': ???Al's belt is actually a whip.
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** Al whips Bob for everything he does, including forgetting to turn off the television.
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** Al whips Bob for [[AllCrimesAreEqual everything he does, does]], [[FelonyMisdemeanor including forgetting to turn off the television.]]
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* '''Downplayed''': ???Al whips Bob as a last resort.
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* '''Subverted''': ???
It appears that Bob hasn't done anything wrong although he think he did and get nervous when Al shouts "where's my belt!" He is then relieved when Al was looking for it to fasten his pants.
* '''Double Subverted''':???He then sees Bob and whips him for no apparent reason.
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* '''Enforced''': The writer wants to show how Al is a strict or abusive parent.
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* '''Enforced''': The writer wants to show how Al is a strict or abusive parent.{{abusive parent}}.
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* '''Invoked''': ???Bob appears to love being whipped by Al and rebels as much as he can to receive them.
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* '''Discussed''': ???"I know Bob was being naughty, but why did Al have to whip him?"
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* '''Played For Drama''': Al whips Bob so hard that Lisa, the mother, [[WhatTheHellHero calls out Al for being too hard on him]].
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* '''Played For Drama''': Al whips Bob so hard that Lisa, the Bob's mother, [[WhatTheHellHero calls out Al for being too hard on him]].
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'''Basic Trope''': Spanking a kid with a belt.
*'''Straight''': Al whips Bob with a belt whenever he rebels.
*'''Exaggerated''':
** Al whips Bob for everything he does, including forgetting to turn off the television.
** Al whips Bob even when Bob is an adult.
*'''Downplayed''': ???
*'''Justified''':
** Al is a very strict parent who does whatever he can to keep Bob on the straight and narrow.
** Al's parents had done the same thing to him when he was a child, and believes if he turned out okay after all of that, so can Bob.
*'''Inverted''':
** Bob takes out Al's belt and whips himself.
** Bob whips Al with a belt.
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*'''Double Subverted''': ???
*'''Parodied''': ???
*'''Zig Zagged''': ???
*'''Averted''': Al doesn't whip Bob with a belt.
*'''Enforced''': The writer wants to show how Al is a strict or abusive parent.
*'''Lampshaded''': "[[BlatantLies This is hurting me more than it's hurting you!]]"
*'''Invoked''': ???
*'''Exploited''': ???
*'''Defied''': Al only resorts to less severe punishments for Bob.
*'''Discussed''': ???
*'''Conversed''': "After watching the Al/Bob scene, I'm glad my parents never gave me a whipping."
*'''Deconstructed''': The whippings that Bob receives has made him resentful towards Al for the remainder of his life and later disowns him.
*'''Played For Laughs''': Al whipping Bob with a belt was a main aspect of Bob's HilariouslyAbusiveChildhood.
*'''Played For Drama''': Al whips Bob so hard that Lisa, the mother, [[WhatTheHellHero calls out Al for being too hard on him]].
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*'''Straight''': Al whips Bob with a belt whenever he rebels.
*'''Exaggerated''':
** Al whips Bob for everything he does, including forgetting to turn off the television.
** Al whips Bob even when Bob is an adult.
*'''Downplayed''': ???
*'''Justified''':
** Al is a very strict parent who does whatever he can to keep Bob on the straight and narrow.
** Al's parents had done the same thing to him when he was a child, and believes if he turned out okay after all of that, so can Bob.
*'''Inverted''':
** Bob takes out Al's belt and whips himself.
** Bob whips Al with a belt.
*'''Subverted''': ???
*'''Double Subverted''': ???
*'''Parodied''': ???
*'''Zig Zagged''': ???
*'''Averted''': Al doesn't whip Bob with a belt.
*'''Enforced''': The writer wants to show how Al is a strict or abusive parent.
*'''Lampshaded''': "[[BlatantLies This is hurting me more than it's hurting you!]]"
*'''Invoked''': ???
*'''Exploited''': ???
*'''Defied''': Al only resorts to less severe punishments for Bob.
*'''Discussed''': ???
*'''Conversed''': "After watching the Al/Bob scene, I'm glad my parents never gave me a whipping."
*'''Deconstructed''': The whippings that Bob receives has made him resentful towards Al for the remainder of his life and later disowns him.
*'''Played For Laughs''': Al whipping Bob with a belt was a main aspect of Bob's HilariouslyAbusiveChildhood.
*'''Played For Drama''': Al whips Bob so hard that Lisa, the mother, [[WhatTheHellHero calls out Al for being too hard on him]].
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