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** The show is GrowingWithTheAudience, going from a SitCom to a more dramatic storyline as the audience is approaching their 20s now.
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* '''Played for Horror''': DisguisedHorrorStory
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** ''Alice!'' was always meant to be a more dramatic show, but the channel it airs on focuses on the casual, younger demographic. Thus, the show was initially pitched and started out as a light-hearted TrojanHorse before the tension rose later.
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* '''Justified''': Alice and the other characters didn't see this coming.
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* '''Justified''': '''Justified''':
** Alice and the other characters didn't see thiscoming.coming.
** ''Alice!'' is a DisguisedHorrorStory.
** Alice and the other characters didn't see this
** ''Alice!'' is a DisguisedHorrorStory.
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* '''Downplayed''': Though the story arcs get slightly more serious, the show never loses the humor and it alternates between more serious arcs and more comedic ones. No effort is made to push the edginess and the more comedic characters are still able to have their hi-jinks.
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* '''Downplayed''': Though the story arcs get slightly more serious, the show never loses the humor and it alternates between more serious arcs and more comedic ones. No effort is made to push the edginess and the more comedic characters are can still able to have their hi-jinks.hijinks.
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* '''Inverted''': [[ReverseCerebusSyndrome ''Alice!'' was originally a dramatic show focused on the detoriating marriage of Alice and Bob, and many miscarriages and abortions happen. As the plot progresses, though, both Alice and Bob hilariously slap fight each other a lot becoming]] BlackComedy.
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* '''Inverted''': [[ReverseCerebusSyndrome ''Alice!'' was originally a dramatic show focused on the detoriating deteriorating marriage of Alice and Bob, AliceAndBob, and many miscarriages and abortions happen. As the plot progresses, though, [[ReverseCerebusSyndrome both Alice and Bob hilariously slap fight each other a lot becoming]] lot]], making the show more a BlackComedy.
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* '''Double Subverted''': ...but then, it gets so much worse, and the crazy and awesome methods lose their efficency.
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* '''Double Subverted''': ...but then, it gets so much worse, and the crazy and awesome methods lose their efficency.
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** Evulz, who is a KnightOfCerebus comes in at the start of the second half and makes things darker.
* '''Exploited''': A villain is aware of the fourth wall and notices that the enemies the heroes have defeated so far were silly and easily beaten, so he waits until later to carry out his evil plans, when the tone is more serious and the heroes have a greater chance of tragically failing.
* '''Exploited''': A villain is aware of the fourth wall and notices that the enemies the heroes have defeated so far were silly and easily beaten, so he waits until later to carry out his evil plans, when the tone is more serious and the heroes have a greater chance of tragically failing.
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** Evulz, who is a KnightOfCerebus KnightOfCerebus, comes in at the start of the second half and makes things darker.
* '''Exploited''': A villain is [[MediumAwareness aware of the fourthwall wall]] and notices that the enemies the heroes have defeated so far were silly and easily beaten, so he waits until later to carry out his evil plans, when the tone is more serious and the heroes have a greater chance of tragically failing.
* '''Exploited''': A villain is [[MediumAwareness aware of the fourth
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* '''Discussed''':"Remember when our lives were ''fun''? When we had nothing but frivolity to worry about?" "Yeah. I miss those days, I really do."
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* '''Discussed''':"Remember '''Discussed''': "Remember when our lives were ''fun''? When we had nothing but frivolity to worry about?" "Yeah. I miss those days, I really do."
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** [[BoisterousBruiser Some]] [[CrazySurvivalist of the characters]], however, waited for this moment their entire lives - and jump straight into the action.
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** [[BoisterousBruiser Some]] [[CrazySurvivalist of the characters]], however, waited for this moment their entire lives - and jump straight into the action.action.
** The old audience leaves, but ''Alice!'' attracts different viewers to replace them.
** The old audience leaves, but ''Alice!'' attracts different viewers to replace them.
* '''Played for Laughs''': The characters themselves indulge in SelfDeprecation about [[WhoWritesThisCrap the direction the show has taken]].
* '''Played for Drama''': Alice can't deal with the changes in her life, much to her disappointment.
* '''Played for Drama''': Alice can't deal with the changes in her life, much to her disappointment.
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* '''Exploited''': ???
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* '''Exploited''': ???A villain is aware of the fourth wall and notices that the enemies the heroes have defeated so far were silly and easily beaten, so he waits until later to carry out his evil plans, when the tone is more serious and the heroes have a greater chance of tragically failing.
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* '''Downplayed''':
** Though the story arcs get slightly more serious, the show never loses the humor and it alternates between more serious arcs and more comedic ones. No effort is made to push the edginess and the more comedic characters are still able to have their hi-jinks.
** Though the story arcs get slightly more serious, the show never loses the humor and it alternates between more serious arcs and more comedic ones. No effort is made to push the edginess and the more comedic characters are still able to have their hi-jinks.
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* '''Downplayed''':
**'''Downplayed''': Though the story arcs get slightly more serious, the show never loses the humor and it alternates between more serious arcs and more comedic ones. No effort is made to push the edginess and the more comedic characters are still able to have their hi-jinks.
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** The work had a story arc from the beginning but it originally started off as comedic before elements added to the work became more darker and dramatic.
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* '''Downplayed''': Though the story arcs get slightly more serious, the show never loses the humor and it alternates between more serious arcs and more comedic ones. No effort is made to push the edginess and the more comedic characters are still able to have their hi-jinks.
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* '''Downplayed''': '''Downplayed''':
** Though the story arcs get slightly more serious, the show never loses the humor and it alternates between more serious arcs and more comedic ones. No effort is made to push the edginess and the more comedic characters are still able to have theirhi-jinks.hi-jinks.
** The work had a story arc from the beginning but it originally started off as comedic before elements added to the work became more darker and dramatic.
** Though the story arcs get slightly more serious, the show never loses the humor and it alternates between more serious arcs and more comedic ones. No effort is made to push the edginess and the more comedic characters are still able to have their
** The work had a story arc from the beginning but it originally started off as comedic before elements added to the work became more darker and dramatic.
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* '''Inverted''': [[ReverseCerebusSyndrome ''Alice!'' was originally a dramatic show focused on the detoriating marriage of Alice and Bob, and many miscarriages and abortions happen. As the plot progresses, though, it becomes a]] BlackComedy [[ReverseCerebusSyndrome show where Alice and Bob hilariously slap fight each other a lot.]]
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* '''Inverted''': [[ReverseCerebusSyndrome ''Alice!'' was originally a dramatic show focused on the detoriating marriage of Alice and Bob, and many miscarriages and abortions happen. As the plot progresses, though, it becomes a]] BlackComedy [[ReverseCerebusSyndrome show where both Alice and Bob hilariously slap fight each other a lot.]]lot becoming]] BlackComedy.
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** “Aaarrggghh! [[TooBleakStoppedCaring I HATED the show ever since Emperor Evulz came!]] Seriously, why the fuck did it need to take such a drastic turn!?”
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*** Alternatively: Alice isn’t [[MediumAwareness medium-aware]] at all. So having her bright and happy place be taken away when she doesn’t expect it at all causes her to become [[BreakTheCutie depressed]] and [[StrawNihilist cynical]]. All of the angsty changes just [[DespairEventHorizon worsen it]] as a result.
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* '''Exaggerated''':
** ''Alice!'', which was originally a lighthearted, comedic, and LighterAndSofter show, becomes a depressing and creepy drama where AnyoneCanDie and several important characters, including Alice, do.
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** ''Alice!'', which was originally a lighthearted, comedic, and LighterAndSofter show, becomes a depressing and creepy drama where AnyoneCanDie and several important characters, including Alice, do.
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* '''Exaggerated''':
**'''Exaggerated''': ''Alice!'', which was originally a lighthearted, comedic, and LighterAndSofter show, [[SubvertedKidsShow show for kids]], becomes a depressing and creepy drama where AnyoneCanDie and several important characters, including Alice, do.
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* '''Exaggerated''': ''Alice!'', which was originally a lighthearted, comedic, and LighterAndSofter show, becomes a depressing and creepy drama where AnyoneCanDie and several important characters, including Alice, do.
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* '''Exaggerated''': '''Exaggerated''':
** ''Alice!'', which was originally a lighthearted, comedic, and LighterAndSofter show, becomes a depressing and creepy drama where AnyoneCanDie and several important characters, including Alice,do. do.
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** ''Alice!'', which was originally a lighthearted, comedic, and LighterAndSofter show, becomes a depressing and creepy drama where AnyoneCanDie and several important characters, including Alice,
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** Being a serial work starting out as made for children, the series doesn't want to lose its fans due to being made for kids.
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** Armed conflict erupts - but instead of drama, the tone switches to BlackComedy.
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*** Alternatively: Alice isn’t [[MediumAwareness medium-aware]] at all. So having her bright and happy place be taken away causes her to become a StrawNihilist or a [[BreakTheCutie broken cutie]] at best.
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*** Alternatively: Alice isn’t [[MediumAwareness medium-aware]] at all. So having her bright and happy place be taken away when she doesn’t expect it at all causes her to become a StrawNihilist or a [[BreakTheCutie broken cutie]] at best.depressed]] and [[StrawNihilist cynical]]. All of the angsty changes just [[DespairEventHorizon worsen it]] as a result.
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*** Alternatively: Alice isn’t [[MediumAwareness medium-aware]] at all. So having her bright and happy place be taken away causes her to become a StrawNihilist or a [[BreakTheCutie broken cutie]] at best.
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Back to CerebusSyndrome to save the entire world from [[BigBad Emperor]] [[VileVillainSaccharineShow Ev]][[KnightOfCerebus ulz!]] [[LampshadeHanging Y’know things used to be a lot more comedic. What happened to that?]]
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Back to CerebusSyndrome to save the entire world from [[BigBad Emperor]] [[VileVillainSaccharineShow Ev]][[KnightOfCerebus ulz!]] [[LampshadeHanging [[KnightOfCerebus Emperor Evulz!]] Y’know things used to be a lot more comedic. [[LampshadeHanging What happened to that?]]
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** [[AnGrish “Aaarrggghh!]] It's RuinedForever! [[TooBleakStoppedCaring I HATED the show ever since Emperor Evulz came!]] Seriously, why the [[PrecisionFStrike fuck]] did it need to take such a drastic turn!?”
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** [[AnGrish “Aaarrggghh!]] It's RuinedForever! “Aaarrggghh! [[TooBleakStoppedCaring I HATED the show ever since Emperor Evulz came!]] Seriously, why the [[PrecisionFStrike fuck]] fuck did it need to take such a drastic turn!?”
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** [[AnGrish “Aaarrggghh!]] [[TooBleakStoppedCaring I HATE the show ever since Emperor Evulz came!]] Seriously, what the [[PrecisionFStrike fuck]] happened to this show?”
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** [[AnGrish “Aaarrggghh!]] It's RuinedForever! [[TooBleakStoppedCaring I HATE HATED the show ever since Emperor Evulz came!]] Seriously, what why the [[PrecisionFStrike fuck]] happened did it need to this show?”take such a drastic turn!?”
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** [[TooBleakStoppedCaring The audience eventually becomes alienated from the overly bleak monstrosity the work has become.]]
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Back to CerebusSyndrome to save the entire world from [[BigBad Emperor]] [[VileVillainSaccharineShow Ev]][[KnightOfCerebus ulz!]] Y’know [[LampshadeHanging things used to be a lot more comedic. What happened to that?]]
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Back to CerebusSyndrome to save the entire world from [[BigBad Emperor]] [[VileVillainSaccharineShow Ev]][[KnightOfCerebus ulz!]] Y’know [[LampshadeHanging Y’know things used to be a lot more comedic. What happened to that?]]
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Back to CerebusSyndrome to save the entire world from [[BigBad Emperor]] [[VileVillainSaccharineShow Ev]][[KnightOfCerebus ulz!]] Y’know [[LampshadeHanging things used to be a lot more comedic. Like what happened to that?]]
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Back to CerebusSyndrome to save the entire world from [[BigBad Emperor]] [[VileVillainSaccharineShow Ev]][[KnightOfCerebus ulz!]] Y’know [[LampshadeHanging things used to be a lot more comedic. Like what What happened to that?]]
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** [[AnGrish “Aaarrggghh!]] [[TooBleakStoppedCaring I HATE the show ever since Emperor Evulz came!]] Seriously, what the [[PrecisionFStrike fuck]] happened to this show?
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** [[AnGrish “Aaarrggghh!]] [[TooBleakStoppedCaring I HATE the show ever since Emperor Evulz came!]] Seriously, what the [[PrecisionFStrike fuck]] happened to this show?show?”
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** [[AnGrish “Aaarrggghh!]] [[TooBleakStoppedCaring I HATE the show ever since Emperor Evulz came!]] Seriously, what the [[PrecisionFStrike fuck]] happened to this show?
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* '''Exaggerated''': ''Alice!'', which was originally a lighthearted, comedic, and has LighterAndSofter show, becomes a depressing and creepy drama where AnyoneCanDie and several important characters, including Alice, do.
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* '''Exaggerated''': ''Alice!'', which was originally a lighthearted, comedic, and has LighterAndSofter show, becomes a depressing and creepy drama where AnyoneCanDie and several important characters, including Alice, do.
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* '''Inverted''': [[ReverseCerebusSyndrome ''Alice!'' was originally a dramatic show focused on the detoriating marriage of Alice and Bob, and many miscarriages and abortions happen. As the plot progresses, though, it becomes a BlackComedy show where Alice and Bob hilariously slap fight each other a lot.]]
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* '''Inverted''': [[ReverseCerebusSyndrome ''Alice!'' was originally a dramatic show focused on the detoriating marriage of Alice and Bob, and many miscarriages and abortions happen. As the plot progresses, though, it becomes a a]] BlackComedy [[ReverseCerebusSyndrome show where Alice and Bob hilariously slap fight each other a lot.]]
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** Alice, who is[[MediumAwareness medium-aware]], doesn't like the dark, angsty changes to her world and her friends, so she fights to return her world to the bright and happy place it was.
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** Alice, who is[[MediumAwareness is [[MediumAwareness medium-aware]], doesn't like the dark, angsty changes to her world and her friends, so she fights to return her world to the bright and happy place it was.