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** The town is generally a safe place, and the city government never expected that a criminal as vile as [[VileVillainSaccahrineShow Black Jack]] would ever grace their small town.
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** The town is generally a safe place, and the city government never expected that a criminal as vile as [[VileVillainSaccahrineShow [[VileVillainSaccharineShow Black Jack]] would ever grace their small town.
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** The town is generally a safe place, and the city government never expected that a criminal as vile as [[VileVillainSaccahrineShow Black Jack]] would ever grace their small town.
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** "No we will not just throw these criminals away in Prison again I mean do you have any idea how often these criminals stay in Jail?" "[[DeathIsCheap Yes but do you have any idea how often these criminals stay dead?]]" "[[BeingGoodSucks Good point...]]"
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** "No "No, we will not just throw these criminals away in Prison again again, I mean do you have any idea how often these criminals stay in Jail?" "[[DeathIsCheap Yes Yes, but do you have any idea how often these criminals stay dead?]]" "[[BeingGoodSucks Good point...]]"
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** Black Jack can [[EscapedFromHell break out of hell]] with absurd ease.
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** Black Jack can [[EscapedFromHell break out of hell]] Hell]] with absurd ease.
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** Black Jack is such an excellent escape artists he can [[EscapedFromHell break out of hell]].
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** Black Jack is such an excellent escape artists he can [[EscapedFromHell break out of hell]].hell]] with absurd ease.
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** Black Jack is such an excellent escape artists he can [[EscapedFromHell Break out of hell.]]
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** Black Jack is such an excellent escape artists he can [[EscapedFromHell Break break out of hell.]]hell]].
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* '''Exaggerated''': Black Jack has escaped from prison nine times in the last day.
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* '''Exaggerated''': '''Exaggerated''':
** Black Jack has escaped from prison nine times in the last day.
** Black Jack has escaped from prison nine times in the last day.
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* '''Downplayed''': Black Jack broke out of prison once, got rearrested, and took four years to get out again.
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* '''Downplayed''': '''Downplayed''':
** Black Jack broke out of prison once, got rearrested, and took four years to get out again.
** Black Jack broke out of prison once, got rearrested, and took four years to get out again.
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** Black Jack reveals that he went to Yale and gets put in a special jail for Yale graduates with many a LuxuryPrisonCell and no locked fence.
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** Black Jack reveals that he went to Yale and gets put in a special jail for Yale graduates with many a LuxuryPrisonCell LuxuryPrisonSuite and no locked fence.
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** Black Jack reveals that he went to Yale and gets put in a special jail for Yale graduates with many a LuxuryPrisonCell and no locked fence.
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** The justice system reforms and the Cardboard Prisons are designated minimum-security and prisoners sent there are expected to accept this detail as part of the honor system. If they try to escape, they will automatically be classified as recidivists and sent to [[TheAlcatraz a harsher jail]].
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** Due to the recent crime-wave they had to recommission this outdated prison. [[note]]but there are plans to get it up to snuff[[/note]]
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** Black Jack hops over a wall...and finds out that that the prison was ''inside'' a prison.
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** Black Jack threatens to use his powers for evil purposes so the [[BatmanGambit government deliberately lets him escape]].
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** Black Jack threatens to use his powers on people so the [[BatmanGambit government deliberately lets him escape]].
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** Black Jack threatens to use his powers on people for evil purposes so the [[BatmanGambit government deliberately lets him escape]].
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** Black Jack threatens to use his powers on people so the government deliberately let him escape.
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** Black Jack threatens to use his powers on people so the [[BatmanGambit government deliberately let lets him escape.escape]].
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** Black Jack threatens to use his powers on people so the government deliberately let him escape.
