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** When the siblings grow up, Max wants nothing to do with his older brother. All of Mark's attempts to reconnect are rebuffed, and to his horror, Mark realizes that he destroyed his relationship with the person who was closest to him.
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** When the siblings grow up, [[DisownedSibling Max wants nothing to do with his older brother.brother]]. All of Mark's attempts to reconnect are rebuffed, and to his horror, Mark realizes that he destroyed his relationship with the person who was closest to him.
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** The constant bulling and abuse causes Max to develop anxiety, depression, and low self-esteem. In adulthood, he distrusts everyone, has trouble forming emotional connections, and is addicted to drugs.
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** The constant bulling bullying and abuse causes Max to develop anxiety, depression, and low self-esteem. In adulthood, he distrusts everyone, has trouble forming emotional connections, and is addicted to drugs.
