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** Bob and Alice figure out that this is a stupid law that has come to do more harm than good and, even if they do not love each other, make an acceptable needs-based BattleCouple as they best the everliving crap out of the society's lawmakers [[AsskickingLeadsToAuthority and having proven that they are stronger demand the law to be changed]].
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** Bob and Alice figure out that this is a stupid law that has come to do more harm than good and, even if they do not love each other, make an acceptable needs-based BattleCouple as they best the everliving crap out of the society's lawmakers [[AsskickingLeadsToAuthority [[AsskickingLeadsToLeadership and having proven that they are stronger demand the law to be changed]].
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** [[AbhorrentAdmirer Billy]] becomes the WorldsStrongestMan knowing that this is the one way to ask Alice to marry him that Alice cannot decline.
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** Bob and Alice figure out that this is a stupid law that has come to do more harm than good and, even if they do not love each other, make an acceptable needs-based BattleCouple as they best the everliving crap out of the society's lawmakers [[AsskickingLeadsToAuthority and having proven that they are stronger demand the law to be changed]].
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* '''Deconstructed''': Alice is in love with Bob. Bob is in love with Alice. They can't get married because the law says she can only marry a man who defeats her: he's a wimpy {{Muggle}} and she has FullContactMagic.
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* '''Deconstructed''': '''Deconstructed''':
** Alice is in love with Bob. Bob is in love with Alice. They can't get married because the law says she can only marry a man who defeats her: he's a wimpy {{Muggle}} and she has FullContactMagic.
** Alice is in love with Bob. Bob is in love with Alice. They can't get married because the law says she can only marry a man who defeats her: he's a wimpy {{Muggle}} and she has FullContactMagic.
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* '''Reconstructed''': The law doesn't say ''what'' he has to defeat her in. [[LoopholeAbuse They agree on]] TabletopGame/TicTacToe.
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* '''Reconstructed''': '''Reconstructed''':
** The law doesn't say ''what'' he has to defeat her in. [[LoopholeAbuse They agree on]]TabletopGame/TicTacToe.TabletopGame/TicTacToe.
** Alice is in love with Jim, who is wimpier than Bob, and Bob knows it. One secret meeting later, Bob, Jim and Alice arrange a faked battle in which Jim "defeats" Bob in a convincing enough fashion that Alice's society does not questions when he "demands" Alice to marry him.
** The law doesn't say ''what'' he has to defeat her in. [[LoopholeAbuse They agree on]]
** Alice is in love with Jim, who is wimpier than Bob, and Bob knows it. One secret meeting later, Bob, Jim and Alice arrange a faked battle in which Jim "defeats" Bob in a convincing enough fashion that Alice's society does not questions when he "demands" Alice to marry him.
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** Bob defeats Alice, but had no idea about the whole "she marries whoever defeats her in combat" and isn't willing to go along when he learns about it.
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** Alice's clan insists on this rule for all it's members, in hopes that their scions [[LamarckWasRight become ever stronger.]]
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** Alice's clan insists on this rule for all it's its members, in hopes that their scions [[LamarckWasRight become ever stronger.]]
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** Alice is from [[ProudWarriorRaceGuy a culture that values martial prowess]] and physcial ability. A strong and mighty father is surely going to give her strong and mighty children.
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** Alice is from [[ProudWarriorRaceGuy a culture that values martial prowess]] and physcial physical ability. A strong and mighty father is surely going to give her strong and mighty children.
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* '''Reconstructed''': The law doesn't say ''what'' he has to defeat her in. [[LoopholeAbuse They agree on Tic Tac Toe.]]
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* '''Reconstructed''': The law doesn't say ''what'' he has to defeat her in. [[LoopholeAbuse They agree on Tic Tac Toe.]]on]] TabletopGame/TicTacToe.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Alice, a SuperpowerLottery winner, meets Bob, who is a PhysicalGod, and who not only defeats her in combat but rapes her. Her [[MagicallyBindingContract magic vow]] [[GettingSmiliesPaintedOnYourSoul makes her]] fall in love with him.
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** Alice, a SuperpowerLottery winner, meets Bob, who is a PhysicalGod, and who not only defeats her in combat but rapes her. Her [[MagicallyBindingContract magic vow]] [[GettingSmiliesPaintedOnYourSoul makes her]] fall in love withhim.him.
** [[InterplayOfSexAndViolence Alice and Bob fight for their lives and have rough sex at the same time]].
** Alice, a SuperpowerLottery winner, meets Bob, who is a PhysicalGod, and who not only defeats her in combat but rapes her. Her [[MagicallyBindingContract magic vow]] [[GettingSmiliesPaintedOnYourSoul makes her]] fall in love with
** [[InterplayOfSexAndViolence Alice and Bob fight for their lives and have rough sex at the same time]].
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** Bob deliberately challenges Alice or sets up a conflict with her because he knows it's the only way of winning her.
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** Bob [[AmazonChaser Bob]] deliberately challenges Alice or sets up a conflict with her because he knows it's the only way of winning her.her.
** Bob [[CombatPragmatist wins through trickery and subterfuge]], not because he wants to take advantage of her, but because he would probably die in straight combat.
** Bob [[CombatPragmatist wins through trickery and subterfuge]], not because he wants to take advantage of her, but because he would probably die in straight combat.
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** Alice is from [[ProudWarriorRaceGuy a culture that values martial prowess]] and physcial ability. A strong and mighty father is surely going to give her strong and mighty children.
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** Lovers usually share a lot of common interest, and for Alice, bodybuilding and martial artist are two of her greatest passions, so she will only marry a man who is related to those things. Being that so, if a man wants to have anything with her, he must be up to the challenge and prove himself worthy, and besides, the part after the defeat open up the posibility for many kinds of kinky followup roleplays
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** Lovers usually share a lot of common interest, and for Alice, bodybuilding and martial artist are two of her greatest passions, so she will only marry a man who is related to those things. Being that so, if a man wants to have anything with her, he must be up to the challenge and prove himself worthy, and besides, the part after the defeat open up the posibility possibility for many kinds of kinky followup roleplaysroleplays.
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** Alice [[ILoveYouBecauseICantControlYou likes guys that she can't control.]]
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** Alice's [[BloodKnight thirst for combat]] is almost as infamous as [[WorldsBestWarrior her skills with a sword]]: as a result, no one dared to accept her challenges. Bored out of her skull and looking for someone, ANYONE to fight, Alice offers this, and [[AllMenArePerverts started getting challengers again]]...all of whom fail.
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** Alice's [[BloodKnight thirst for combat]] is almost as infamous as [[WorldsBestWarrior her skills with a sword]]: as a result, no one dared to accept her challenges. Bored out of her skull and looking for someone, ANYONE to fight, Alice offers this, and [[AllMenArePerverts started getting challengers again]]... all of whom fail.
