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* How do all those toys get made in time for Christmas? Elves that don't work hard enough get forcibly [[MindControl Mind Controlled]] to work to their limits to meet demand.
** It gets worse. Santa's office is directly above the factory, so this is ''literally'' happening right under his nose.
** It gets worse. Santa's office is directly above the factory, so this is ''literally'' happening right under his nose.
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* How do all those toys get made in time for Christmas? Elves that don't work hard enough get forcibly [[MindControl Mind Controlled]] to work to their limits to meet demand.
** It gets worse.demand. Santa's office is directly above the factory, so this is ''literally'' happening right under his nose.
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* How do all those toys get made in time for Christmas? [[spoiler: Elves that don't work hard enough get forcibly [[MindControl Mind Controlled]] to work to their limits to meet demand]].
** It gets worse. [[spoiler: Santa's office is directly above the factory, so this is ''literally'' happening right under his nose.]]
** It gets worse. [[spoiler: Santa's office is directly above the factory, so this is ''literally'' happening right under his nose.]]
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* How do all those toys get made in time for Christmas? [[spoiler: Christmas? Elves that don't work hard enough get forcibly [[MindControl Mind Controlled]] to work to their limits to meet demand]].
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** It gets worse.[[spoiler: Santa's office is directly above the factory, so this is ''literally'' happening right under his nose.]]
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** It gets worse. [[spoiler: Santa's office is directly above the factory, so this is ''literally'' happening right under his nose.]]
* Issue 13 reveals that Lock, Shock, and Barrel [[spoiler: legitimately don't understand right from wrong]]. Knowing this, and thinking of their song and the kind of work they did for Oogie, [[spoiler: how many poor victims were hurt/killed just because they thought it was all in good fun]]?
* Issue 13 reveals that Lock, Shock, and Barrel [[spoiler: legitimately don't understand right from wrong]]. Knowing this, and thinking of their song and the kind of work they did for Oogie, [[spoiler: how many poor victims were hurt/killed just because they thought it was all in good fun]]?
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** It gets worse. [[spoiler: Santa's office is directly above the factory, so this is ''literally'' happening right under his nose.]]
* Issue 13 reveals that Lock, Shock, and Barrel [[spoiler: legitimately don't understand right from wrong]]. Knowing this, and thinking of their song and the kind of work they did for Oogie, [[spoiler: how many poor victims were hurt/killed just because they thought it was all in good fun]]?]]
* Issue 13 reveals that Lock, Shock, and Barrel [[spoiler: legitimately don't understand right from wrong]]. Knowing this, and thinking of their song and the kind of work they did for Oogie, [[spoiler: how many poor victims were hurt/killed just because they thought it was all in good fun]]?
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** It gets worse. [[spoiler: Santa's office is directly above the factory, so this is ''literally'' happening right under his nose.]]
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** It gets worse. [[spoiler: Santa's office is directly above the factory, so this is ''literally'' happening right under his nose.]]]]
* Issue 13 reveals that Lock, Shock, and Barrel [[spoiler: legitimately don't understand right from wrong]]. Knowing this, and thinking of their song and the kind of work they did for Oogie, [[spoiler: how many poor victims were hurt/killed just because they thought it was all in good fun]]?
* Issue 13 reveals that Lock, Shock, and Barrel [[spoiler: legitimately don't understand right from wrong]]. Knowing this, and thinking of their song and the kind of work they did for Oogie, [[spoiler: how many poor victims were hurt/killed just because they thought it was all in good fun]]?
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** It gets worse. [[spoiler: Santa's office is directly above the factory, to so this is ''literally'' happening right under his nose.]]
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* How do all those toys get made in time for Christmas? [[spoiler: Elves that don't work hard enough get forcibly [[MindControl Mind Controlled]] to work to their limits to meet demand]].demand]].
** It gets worse. [[spoiler: Santa's office is directly above the factory, to this is ''literally'' happening right under his nose.]]
** It gets worse. [[spoiler: Santa's office is directly above the factory, to this is ''literally'' happening right under his nose.]]
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How do all those toys get made in time for Christmas? [[spoiler: Elves that don't work hard enough get forcibly [[MindControl Mind Controlled]] to work to their limits]].
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* How do all those toys get made in time for Christmas? [[spoiler: Elves that don't work hard enough get forcibly [[MindControl Mind Controlled]] to work to their limits]].limits to meet demand]].
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How do all those toys get made in time for Christmas? [[Spoiler: [[spoiler: Elves that don't work hard enough get forcibly [[MindControl Mind Controlled]] to work to their limits]].
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How do all those toys get made in time for Christmas? [[Spoiler: Elves that don't work hard enough get forcibly [[MindControl Mind Controlled]] to work to their limits]].
