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Just because this is a fanfic based on [[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse The Loud House]] doesn't mean it can't have scary moments.
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Just because this is nowhere near as dark as ''The Prodigal Lincoln'', ''Requiem for a fanfic based on Loud'', or any other significantly popular [[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse The Loud House]] fanfic, doesn't mean it this story can't have scary moments.
be scary. In fact, it can be outright ''terrifying'' sometimes.
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* Funnily enough, chapter 34 is the one that leaves us with some more. [[spoiler: Cristina, in a bedroom, alone with Lincoln. Oh, and the sisters don't know.]]
* Every time [[spoiler: Cristina]] gets a breakdown. Every time she does, it's incredibly horrifying and shows [[spoiler: Cristina]] at her most psychotic.
* Every time [[spoiler: Cristina]] gets a breakdown. Every time she does, it's incredibly horrifying and shows [[spoiler: Cristina]] at her most psychotic.
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** Then you start to think about it some more: Every atrocity, every manipulation, every damage she ever did to anybody, was all just to [[spoiler: protect Lincoln from harm]]. In her quest do ''that one thing'', she caused more mental damage, mental and physical trauma and defiling that most villains tend to get away with. All just to [[spoiler: protect Lincoln]], which she herself ultimately ''renders worthless''.
** And if that wasn't enough, by the end of the fic, she's basically a [[ImAHumanitarian cannibalistic]] [[[[spoiler: OurGhoulsAreDifferent Ghoul]] who is bent on doing everything she can in order to [[spoiler: protect Lincoln]].
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'''Chapter 49'''
* The fight is full of this.
** [[spoiler: Cristina going full OneWingedAngel]].
** [[spoiler: The sisters are only able to help Lincoln through HardLight Models]].
** [[spoiler: Cristina gets her second wind]].
** [[spoiler: The chapter ends with them falling to their (supposed) deaths]].
* The fight is full of this.
** [[spoiler: Cristina going full OneWingedAngel]].
** [[spoiler: The sisters are only able to help Lincoln through HardLight Models]].
** [[spoiler: Cristina gets her second wind]].
** [[spoiler: The chapter ends with them falling to their (supposed) deaths]].
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'''Chapter 48'''
* Your best friend and lover turning against you and trying to kill you.
* A crazed psychopath staring you down and attacking.
* Up to this point, the entire arc has been filled with this!
* Your best friend and lover turning against you and trying to kill you.
* A crazed psychopath staring you down and attacking.
* Up to this point, the entire arc has been filled with this!
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'''Chapter 40'''
* Lincoln's sisters changing after only losing him for a week. Makes you wonder.
* [[spoiler: The bracelets still work.]]
* Lincoln's sisters changing after only losing him for a week. Makes you wonder.
* [[spoiler: The bracelets still work.]]
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'''Chapter 39'''
* [[spoiler: "The garden" Cristina talks about, implies that she killed/maimed Tetherby. And worse off, she describes him as a "vegetable".]]
* Your kid sister getting beat up by a girl more than twice her age is definitely on the nightmare fuel list.
* [[spoiler: "The garden" Cristina talks about, implies that she killed/maimed Tetherby. And worse off, she describes him as a "vegetable".]]
* Your kid sister getting beat up by a girl more than twice her age is definitely on the nightmare fuel list.
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* Whatever happend to Lola in-between chapter 30 and 31. The poor girl is absolutley traumatized, and when trying to reveal what "The Truth" is, she immendialty sees a dark and demonic version of Cristina in from of her.
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* Whatever happend happened to Lola in-between chapter 30 and 31. The poor girl is absolutley absolutely traumatized, and when trying to reveal what "The Truth" is, she immendialty immediately sees a dark and demonic version of Cristina in from of her.
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* Everytime Every time [[spoiler: Cristina]] gets a breakdown. Everytime Every time she does, it's incredibly horrifying and shows [[spoiler: Cristina]] at her most psychotic.
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* While it's also kinda funny, the fact that Cristina could [[spoiler: swap clothes with Ronnie]] ''without her noticing'' is rather worrysome.
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* While it's also kinda funny, the fact that Cristina could [[spoiler: swap clothes with Ronnie]] ''without her noticing'' is rather worrysome.worrisome.
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* Lucy [[spoiler: suffers relapses]] just as Lincoln and Ronnie get ouf of the tunnel of love.
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** The most disturbing one, however, has to be [[spoiler: a crossed picture of Cristina herself]]. Yes, [[spoiler: Cristina]] is so hellbent on [[spoiler: Lincoln and Ronnie Anne]] together, she'd apperently [[spoiler: get rid of herself]] just to make it a reality.
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** The most disturbing one, however, has to be [[spoiler: a crossed picture of Cristina herself]]. Yes, [[spoiler: Cristina]] is so hellbent on [[spoiler: Lincoln and Ronnie Anne]] together, she'd apperently apparently [[spoiler: get rid of herself]] just to make it a reality.
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* The "daughters" of The Loud Sisters, created by [[spoiler: Cristina]] are absolutley terrifying. And when Lisa accidently awakenings her "daughter" they all start to go completley mad. [[spoiler: Cristina's]] way of calming them down? Painfully electrocute them all of course!
* [[spoiler: Critina's VillainousBreakdown. She goes completley mad when Ronnie Anne decideds to tell Lincoln her plans, and starts to make threats of making "Ronnie Anne her bitch" are pretty horrifying. In the end, she goes so mad she punches right through her laptop... wich causes her to get electrocuted.]]
* Whatever [[spoiler: Cristina]] has planned for "Agape", [[spoiler: who's revelaed to be Thetherby out for revenge on Lincoln]] in "The Garden". Seeing how's it made up by a fully insane [[spoiler: Cristina]], it can't be pretty.
* [[spoiler: Critina's VillainousBreakdown. She goes completley mad when Ronnie Anne decideds to tell Lincoln her plans, and starts to make threats of making "Ronnie Anne her bitch" are pretty horrifying. In the end, she goes so mad she punches right through her laptop... wich causes her to get electrocuted.]]
* Whatever [[spoiler: Cristina]] has planned for "Agape", [[spoiler: who's revelaed to be Thetherby out for revenge on Lincoln]] in "The Garden". Seeing how's it made up by a fully insane [[spoiler: Cristina]], it can't be pretty.
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* The "daughters" of The Loud Sisters, created by [[spoiler: Cristina]] are absolutley absolutely terrifying. And when Lisa accidently awakenings accidentally awakens her "daughter" they all start to go completley completely mad. [[spoiler: Cristina's]] way of calming them down? Painfully electrocute them all of course!
* [[spoiler:Critina's Cristina's VillainousBreakdown. She goes completley completely mad when Ronnie Anne decideds decides to tell Lincoln her plans, and starts to make threats of making "Ronnie Anne her bitch" are pretty horrifying. In the end, she goes so mad she punches right through her laptop... wich which causes her to get electrocuted.]]
* Whatever [[spoiler: Cristina]] has planned for "Agape", [[spoiler: who'srevelaed revealed to be Thetherby out for revenge on Lincoln]] in "The Garden". Seeing how's it made up by a fully insane [[spoiler: Cristina]], it can't be pretty.
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* Whatever [[spoiler: Cristina]] has planned for "Agape", [[spoiler: who's
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* [[spoiler: Cristina's]] outburst towards Lincoln when he's unable to help her. [[spoiler: She]] violently attacks him, kicks him right in his [[spoiler: stab wound]], and starts to strangel him. If it wasn't for the doctors getting [[spoiler: Carol]] on time, it's very likely Lincoln would've been choked there.
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* [[spoiler: Cristina's]] outburst towards Lincoln when he's unable to help her. [[spoiler: She]] violently attacks him, kicks him right in his [[spoiler: stab wound]], and starts to strangel strangle him. If it wasn't for the doctors getting [[spoiler: Carol]] on time, it's very likely Lincoln would've been choked there.
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* [[spoiler: Cristina's]] third breakdown. After Lincoln asks her why [[spoiler: she]] did what [[spoiler: she]] did, [[spoiler: Cristina]] starts to rant about everything [[spoiler: she]] saw and how it showed how that's the Loud sister's true intenetions. After Lincoln tries to convince her that it's just fiction what she saw, [[spoiler: Cristina]] snaps once again, and starts to go on a long and psychotic rant on how everything [[spoiler: she]] saw must be based on a true story, and how she's going to kill the sisters in the most pathetic ways possible. Oh, and [[spoiler: she's]] strangeling Lincoln again while ranting.
* [[spoiler: Cristina has escaped the hospital, and it's very clear she's much worse then before now. She's basically gone all supervillain by now, and has to electrocute herself regurly to keep her organs from shutting down. But just before she's starting a new plan, she first needs to visit an old friend of hers...]]
** For the people who don't get it, [[spoiler: Cristina's going to take revenge on Ronnie Anne for her betrayel. And from the looks of the preview, it's not gonna be pretty...]]
* [[spoiler: Cristina has escaped the hospital, and it's very clear she's much worse then before now. She's basically gone all supervillain by now, and has to electrocute herself regurly to keep her organs from shutting down. But just before she's starting a new plan, she first needs to visit an old friend of hers...]]
** For the people who don't get it, [[spoiler: Cristina's going to take revenge on Ronnie Anne for her betrayel. And from the looks of the preview, it's not gonna be pretty...]]
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* [[spoiler: Cristina's]] third breakdown. After Lincoln asks her why [[spoiler: she]] did what [[spoiler: she]] did, [[spoiler: Cristina]] starts to rant about everything [[spoiler: she]] saw and how it showed how that's the Loud sister's true intenetions.intentions. After Lincoln tries to convince her that it's just fiction what she saw, [[spoiler: Cristina]] snaps once again, and starts to go on a long and psychotic rant on how everything [[spoiler: she]] saw must be based on a true story, and how she's going to kill the sisters in the most pathetic ways possible. Oh, and [[spoiler: she's]] strangeling strangling Lincoln again while ranting.
* [[spoiler: Cristina has escaped the hospital, and it's very clear she's much worse then before now. She's basically gone allsupervillain super-villain by now, and has to electrocute herself regurly regularly to keep her organs from shutting down. But just before she's starting a new plan, she first needs to visit an old friend of hers...]]
** For the people who don't get it, [[spoiler: Cristina's going to take revenge on Ronnie Anne for herbetrayel.betrayal. And from the looks of the preview, it's not gonna be pretty...]]
* [[spoiler: Cristina has escaped the hospital, and it's very clear she's much worse then before now. She's basically gone all
** For the people who don't get it, [[spoiler: Cristina's going to take revenge on Ronnie Anne for her
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* [[spoiler: Cristina's encounter with Ronnie Anne. At first, she talk with her like an old friend, before snapping, and attacking her. After a fight, she defeats Ronnie Anne, and kindnaps kidnaps her, so she can finally punish her...]]
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'''Chapter 19'''
* [[spoiler: Cristina]] has ''[[OhCrap two plans left]]''.
* Lana winds up being so angry at Lola, she essentially forces her to help her fix the staircase after its broken. And she '''succeeded''' in getting her to work.
'''Chapter 20'''
* [[spoiler: Cristina]] gives gifts to the Loud kids. What did she do with the Loud parents? [[spoiler: knock them out and kidnap them]].
* [[spoiler: Cristina and Ronnie sharing a bed]]. Not only does it give Ronnie trouble sleeping, but when she does, [[spoiler: Cristina]] flashed a ''malicious smile''...
'''Chapter 21'''
* While it's also kinda funny, the fact that Cristina could [[spoiler: swap clothes with Ronnie]] ''without her noticing'' is rather worrysome.
* [[spoiler: Cristina]]'s gift to Lana is a jack-in-a-box [[spoiler: with a demonic Lynn replacing the jack]]. Yeah, that was quite the dick move.
* At the school, after [[spoiler: Lincoln kisses Cristina because she didn't give him information]], we see the world change in her eyes: the people turn into masked strangers, and they laugh derisively at her, all while Lincoln continues to kiss her.
** What's even worse is what happens next, since [[spoiler: Cristina]] ''completely loses her mind'' and ''attacks'' Lincoln until she leaves him a scar. If it wasn't for [[spoiler: Mrs. Johnson]]'s arrival, it's quite possible that she would've severely damage Lincoln, or worse, ''kill'' him.
* Mrs. Johnson manages to intimidate [[spoiler: Cristina]]. No, that's not a joke: the main antagonist of the fic is ''intimidated'' by Mrs. Johnson! [[spoiler: Yeah, she's her mother]], but it's still frightening to think about.
* After being left alone, [[spoiler: Cristina]] looks at the window... and sees [[spoiler: herself, with bloodshot eyes, and in a straitjacket, while crying tears of blood with a demented ear-to-ear smile]].
'''Chapter 22'''
* '''Lincoln made [[spoiler: CRISTINA]] angry'''. And going by Ronnie's words, she'll stop at ''nothing'' until she gets her revenge.
* Speaking of her, [[spoiler: Cristina]] is officially the dreaded to ALL of the sisters. Not SOME of them, [[OhCrap ALL of them]].
* Leni basically gives her sisters a bunch of [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech "reason you suck" speeches]] after Lori snaps at Lincoln. Sure, the only point of the speeches is to demonstrate how Lincoln isn't the only one who's made mistakes, but the fact that ''[[BewareTheNiceOnes Leni]]'' pulls off these kind of speeches is still pretty frightening.
'''Chapter 23'''
* After meeting with Lola, Ronnie muses how [[spoiler: Cristina]] takes so much from her. Let that sink in for a moment...
* Lori, stuck in an abandoned warehouse, hears as a voice (maybe [[spoiler: Cristina]]) tells her a story:
** [[spoiler: There once was a stupid, redheaded girl, who made a dumb decision: research. They researched something, but were left traumatized. She then dragged her best friend along, and she regretted that decision. Then they showed it to the girl's best friend's brother... And he did nothing]]. The voice progressively angrier as she adds that [[spoiler: this wound up in the creation of children, who didn't even want to exist, and who now exist in perpetual torment]].
** Then, Lori's promptly knocked out and told by the voice that they will punish her for doing "nothing".
'''Chapter 24'''
* Lori finds herself bounded and gagged in the middle of an underground warehouse. Soon enough, she meets [[spoiler: Bobby, Carol, and Cristina]], who promptly torture her by showing her "[[spoiler: the truth]]".
** Her post-torture state is horrifying as well: Not only does she look battered, but she's also crying blood.
* Lucy [[spoiler: suffers relapses]] just as Lincoln and Ronnie get ouf of the tunnel of love.
'''Chapter 25'''
* Lucy continues regressing back to her Yandere self at the start of the fic, and it's not pretty: She chants Lincoln's name in madness, then promptly asks him to marry her, while inside her eyes, she basically pleads for Lincoln to help her.
* Ronnie Anne confronts [[spoiler: Cristina]] in order to [[spoiler: Bobby]] out of the Four Lovers.
** Specially when taking into account this is ''after'' [[spoiler: Lincoln kissed Cristina]], which is not a time where someone can just mess with the [[spoiler: redhead]] and get out of it unscathed. Ronnie was ''very'' lucky Cristina felt reasonable.
** Furthermore, this is the second time Ronnie's brainwashed by [[spoiler: Cristina]], and though it's only for the tomboy to explain why [[spoiler: her brother]] should be taken out of the Four Lovers, it could've been much worse.
** And now, [[spoiler: Clyde]] replaces [[spoiler: Bobby]] and [[spoiler: attempts to brainwash Cristina]]. It's played for laughs, yes, but it doesn't change the fact Ronnie [[NiceJobBreakingItHero essentially forced]] [[spoiler: Lincoln's best friend]] to become [[spoiler: Cristina]]'s subordinate.
* [[spoiler: Leni finds the friendship bracelets at the end of the chapter]]. That is all.
'''Chapter 26'''
* Leni basically [[spoiler: got her whole family mind-tricked]] again, with her [[spoiler: having the master bracelet]].
** Lincoln's bracelet [[spoiler: makes him the center of affection and attraction of his sisters]]. Let's just say, after everything that came before, this is NOT a good thing.
'''Chapter 27'''
* Mrs. Johnson [[spoiler: discovers Cristina has apparently plans for something called the "Ghoul Serum"]]. What's worst, [[NothingIsScarier we don't get an answer on what it is]].
* While it was obvious [[spoiler: Cristina]] was pissed over Lincoln kissing her, according to Mrs. Johnson, she was being a childish manipulator for a while now...
** Even worse? When [[spoiler: Mrs. Johnson speaks with Bobby]], he explicitly instructs him to make sure [[spoiler: Cristina and Lincoln]] DON'T meet again. That's how bad it is.
* [[spoiler: Mrs. Johnson explained to Cristina what shipping was]]. Now, remember how [[spoiler: Cristina]] reacted after her research...
* [[spoiler: Leni has been acting like she was being mind-controlled all along]]. This brings up the question of whether ''[[ParanoiaFuel she's been acting all along]]''.
* Lynn gets a scare when she's called by a mysterious voice, who asks her if she'd be angry if her brother's [[spoiler: virginity]] and innocence were taken away from him. When she answers she would, the voice promptly asks "[[spoiler: Then why would you rape your own brother?]]" with '''[[spoiler: Cristina]]''''s voice.
'''Chapter 28'''
* [[spoiler: Cristina]] apparently took most of her plans from television shows. ''What the hell has she been looking at?!''
* The same girl also grabs a cinnamon bun... Then tears it in half. A couple seconds later, [[spoiler: Leni]] is called "a cinnamon bun". [[OhCrap You should know where this is going]].
* While [[spoiler: Cristina is research stuff at night]], there's a wall of pictures with crosses on them, mostly with individual characters. The only one that isn't crossed is [[spoiler: a picture of Ronnie Anne and Lincoln together]]. Yep, [[spoiler: Cristina's a shipper]].
** The most disturbing one, however, has to be [[spoiler: a crossed picture of Cristina herself]]. Yes, [[spoiler: Cristina]] is so hellbent on [[spoiler: Lincoln and Ronnie Anne]] together, she'd apperently [[spoiler: get rid of herself]] just to make it a reality.
'''Chapter 29'''
* Leni vs Lisa. All of it.
** Leni takes Lisa while she's asleep and takes her to the basement of their own house. And she somehow does this without anybody but Lori waking up, and yet she still dealt with Lori easily.
** Then, she demoralizes Lisa by telling her how, for all her great intellect, [[WhatTheHellHero she doesn't use it for anything]], not even to help her family, all while beating the crap out of her.
** The amount of damage Lisa gets in this fight is worth mentioning too, because it's not something a freaking 4-year-old should be able to withstand.
* While also sad, [[spoiler: Cristina mind-controlling Ronnie into beating up Lincoln]].
* [[spoiler: Cristina]] has ''[[OhCrap two plans left]]''.
* Lana winds up being so angry at Lola, she essentially forces her to help her fix the staircase after its broken. And she '''succeeded''' in getting her to work.
'''Chapter 20'''
* [[spoiler: Cristina]] gives gifts to the Loud kids. What did she do with the Loud parents? [[spoiler: knock them out and kidnap them]].
* [[spoiler: Cristina and Ronnie sharing a bed]]. Not only does it give Ronnie trouble sleeping, but when she does, [[spoiler: Cristina]] flashed a ''malicious smile''...
'''Chapter 21'''
* While it's also kinda funny, the fact that Cristina could [[spoiler: swap clothes with Ronnie]] ''without her noticing'' is rather worrysome.
* [[spoiler: Cristina]]'s gift to Lana is a jack-in-a-box [[spoiler: with a demonic Lynn replacing the jack]]. Yeah, that was quite the dick move.
* At the school, after [[spoiler: Lincoln kisses Cristina because she didn't give him information]], we see the world change in her eyes: the people turn into masked strangers, and they laugh derisively at her, all while Lincoln continues to kiss her.
** What's even worse is what happens next, since [[spoiler: Cristina]] ''completely loses her mind'' and ''attacks'' Lincoln until she leaves him a scar. If it wasn't for [[spoiler: Mrs. Johnson]]'s arrival, it's quite possible that she would've severely damage Lincoln, or worse, ''kill'' him.
* Mrs. Johnson manages to intimidate [[spoiler: Cristina]]. No, that's not a joke: the main antagonist of the fic is ''intimidated'' by Mrs. Johnson! [[spoiler: Yeah, she's her mother]], but it's still frightening to think about.
* After being left alone, [[spoiler: Cristina]] looks at the window... and sees [[spoiler: herself, with bloodshot eyes, and in a straitjacket, while crying tears of blood with a demented ear-to-ear smile]].
'''Chapter 22'''
* '''Lincoln made [[spoiler: CRISTINA]] angry'''. And going by Ronnie's words, she'll stop at ''nothing'' until she gets her revenge.
* Speaking of her, [[spoiler: Cristina]] is officially the dreaded to ALL of the sisters. Not SOME of them, [[OhCrap ALL of them]].
* Leni basically gives her sisters a bunch of [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech "reason you suck" speeches]] after Lori snaps at Lincoln. Sure, the only point of the speeches is to demonstrate how Lincoln isn't the only one who's made mistakes, but the fact that ''[[BewareTheNiceOnes Leni]]'' pulls off these kind of speeches is still pretty frightening.
'''Chapter 23'''
* After meeting with Lola, Ronnie muses how [[spoiler: Cristina]] takes so much from her. Let that sink in for a moment...
* Lori, stuck in an abandoned warehouse, hears as a voice (maybe [[spoiler: Cristina]]) tells her a story:
** [[spoiler: There once was a stupid, redheaded girl, who made a dumb decision: research. They researched something, but were left traumatized. She then dragged her best friend along, and she regretted that decision. Then they showed it to the girl's best friend's brother... And he did nothing]]. The voice progressively angrier as she adds that [[spoiler: this wound up in the creation of children, who didn't even want to exist, and who now exist in perpetual torment]].
** Then, Lori's promptly knocked out and told by the voice that they will punish her for doing "nothing".
'''Chapter 24'''
* Lori finds herself bounded and gagged in the middle of an underground warehouse. Soon enough, she meets [[spoiler: Bobby, Carol, and Cristina]], who promptly torture her by showing her "[[spoiler: the truth]]".
** Her post-torture state is horrifying as well: Not only does she look battered, but she's also crying blood.
* Lucy [[spoiler: suffers relapses]] just as Lincoln and Ronnie get ouf of the tunnel of love.
'''Chapter 25'''
* Lucy continues regressing back to her Yandere self at the start of the fic, and it's not pretty: She chants Lincoln's name in madness, then promptly asks him to marry her, while inside her eyes, she basically pleads for Lincoln to help her.
* Ronnie Anne confronts [[spoiler: Cristina]] in order to [[spoiler: Bobby]] out of the Four Lovers.
** Specially when taking into account this is ''after'' [[spoiler: Lincoln kissed Cristina]], which is not a time where someone can just mess with the [[spoiler: redhead]] and get out of it unscathed. Ronnie was ''very'' lucky Cristina felt reasonable.
** Furthermore, this is the second time Ronnie's brainwashed by [[spoiler: Cristina]], and though it's only for the tomboy to explain why [[spoiler: her brother]] should be taken out of the Four Lovers, it could've been much worse.
** And now, [[spoiler: Clyde]] replaces [[spoiler: Bobby]] and [[spoiler: attempts to brainwash Cristina]]. It's played for laughs, yes, but it doesn't change the fact Ronnie [[NiceJobBreakingItHero essentially forced]] [[spoiler: Lincoln's best friend]] to become [[spoiler: Cristina]]'s subordinate.
* [[spoiler: Leni finds the friendship bracelets at the end of the chapter]]. That is all.
'''Chapter 26'''
* Leni basically [[spoiler: got her whole family mind-tricked]] again, with her [[spoiler: having the master bracelet]].
** Lincoln's bracelet [[spoiler: makes him the center of affection and attraction of his sisters]]. Let's just say, after everything that came before, this is NOT a good thing.
'''Chapter 27'''
* Mrs. Johnson [[spoiler: discovers Cristina has apparently plans for something called the "Ghoul Serum"]]. What's worst, [[NothingIsScarier we don't get an answer on what it is]].
* While it was obvious [[spoiler: Cristina]] was pissed over Lincoln kissing her, according to Mrs. Johnson, she was being a childish manipulator for a while now...
** Even worse? When [[spoiler: Mrs. Johnson speaks with Bobby]], he explicitly instructs him to make sure [[spoiler: Cristina and Lincoln]] DON'T meet again. That's how bad it is.
* [[spoiler: Mrs. Johnson explained to Cristina what shipping was]]. Now, remember how [[spoiler: Cristina]] reacted after her research...
* [[spoiler: Leni has been acting like she was being mind-controlled all along]]. This brings up the question of whether ''[[ParanoiaFuel she's been acting all along]]''.
* Lynn gets a scare when she's called by a mysterious voice, who asks her if she'd be angry if her brother's [[spoiler: virginity]] and innocence were taken away from him. When she answers she would, the voice promptly asks "[[spoiler: Then why would you rape your own brother?]]" with '''[[spoiler: Cristina]]''''s voice.
'''Chapter 28'''
* [[spoiler: Cristina]] apparently took most of her plans from television shows. ''What the hell has she been looking at?!''
* The same girl also grabs a cinnamon bun... Then tears it in half. A couple seconds later, [[spoiler: Leni]] is called "a cinnamon bun". [[OhCrap You should know where this is going]].
* While [[spoiler: Cristina is research stuff at night]], there's a wall of pictures with crosses on them, mostly with individual characters. The only one that isn't crossed is [[spoiler: a picture of Ronnie Anne and Lincoln together]]. Yep, [[spoiler: Cristina's a shipper]].
** The most disturbing one, however, has to be [[spoiler: a crossed picture of Cristina herself]]. Yes, [[spoiler: Cristina]] is so hellbent on [[spoiler: Lincoln and Ronnie Anne]] together, she'd apperently [[spoiler: get rid of herself]] just to make it a reality.
'''Chapter 29'''
* Leni vs Lisa. All of it.
** Leni takes Lisa while she's asleep and takes her to the basement of their own house. And she somehow does this without anybody but Lori waking up, and yet she still dealt with Lori easily.
** Then, she demoralizes Lisa by telling her how, for all her great intellect, [[WhatTheHellHero she doesn't use it for anything]], not even to help her family, all while beating the crap out of her.
** The amount of damage Lisa gets in this fight is worth mentioning too, because it's not something a freaking 4-year-old should be able to withstand.
* While also sad, [[spoiler: Cristina mind-controlling Ronnie into beating up Lincoln]].
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* Lynn and Lana being stuck at the beach doesn't seem like a creepy sight at first, but then Lynn calls Lana "Lucy", and the creepyness begins:
** First, Lana figures that Lynn has only been using her as a replacement Lucy. Even after Lana clarifies who she is, Lynn continues to call her Lucy, while making some unnerving advancements towards her.
** Then, she makes the mistake of hurting Lynn in this state. This makes the athlete be surrounded by pink electricity as she says she's about to play rough with Lana...
** [[spoiler: Lynn eventually winds up molesting Lana]], and it would've probably gotten worse if [[BigDamnHeroes Lori and Lola]] hadn't arrived when they did.
*** [[spoiler: Lynn]]'s mannerism during the whole thing: She bites [[spoiler: Lana]]'s ear lobes, she asks her if she's enjoying it, then gets an outburst of anger when she says no and tries to say she's not Lucy.
** A revelation in chapter 13 makes this even more terrifying: [[spoiler: Lynn]] knew what she was doing, but she couldn't stop. In other words, she saw herself molest [[spoiler: her own sister]] and [[ForcedToWatch could do nothing but watch]].
* Afterwards, [[spoiler: Lynn is locked up in a room]]. Imagine you suddenly wake up locked in a room, and nobody seems to be willing to free you...
!! Chapter 12
* Storge, [[spoiler: AKA Carol Pingrey]], is a [[VoluntaryShapeshifting shapeshifter]] who works for [[spoiler: Cristina]]. Let that sink in for a moment...
* Lucy watches Lincoln and Lisa play chess. And while she doesn't do anything about it, it's not too far of a stretch to believe that she would do something, given the chance...
* Lincoln has a moment of this when [[spoiler: he sees that somebody opened Lynn's door]].
* The fact that Lana can recall so vividly [[spoiler: how Lynn molested her]] is pretty unnerving.
!! Chapter 13
* Lynn tries to go upstairs, but sees a ''battered Lana'' at the top. Who then gives her a smile ''filled with [[TheToothHurts broken teeth]]''. The revelation that [[spoiler: she's just Carol shapeshifting as her]] doesn't help.
* When Lucy, Lincoln and Lynn try to race to the bottom, Lynn hears them say Lana and '''Lola''' are coming to them, and Lynn immediately hides. While it's understandable seeing both [[AttemptedRape what happened before]] and [[KidsAreCruel how Lola can be]], it's still pretty creepy to see Lynn hiding for her dear life.
* After a short chess game with Lisa, Leni is offended when the little genius refuses to speak with her again, despite promising to do so earlier. However, Leni quickly explodes in anger and swipes the pieces away, only to then grow even angrier when Lisa continues to refuse to listen to her. And worst of all, this is her StartOfDarkness.
!! Chapter 14
* Lynn is so paranoid of Lola, she thinks she has a ''torture room''. Even when Lucy tries to comfort her, she just asks if Lola not having a torture is just something she wants them to think.
* [[spoiler: Luna is distracted by Leni while Storge shapeshifts as her and takes her place]]. Imagine you go on a date with someone you love, [[spoiler: only for someone to take your place and essentially ruin it]].
* [[spoiler: Storge making Lori into the new Storge]] after it becomes clear she won't be able to run away from Luna.
** The ensuing beatdown is pretty freaky too, since [[spoiler: Storge]] shapeshifts into [[spoiler: Luna]] just before she appears and ''beats the crap out of her'', all while Lori is left utterly confused as to what just happened.
!! Chapter 15
* Lincoln's nightmare. [[spoiler: he's in the middle of some sort of barren wasteland, when his sisters pop up and start blaming him for causing the whole mess in the first place]].
** There are two particularly nightmarish instances of {{Foreshadowing}}: [[spoiler: Leni using Lori as her footstool]] and [[spoiler: Lisa stabbing Lincoln]].
* Lori is forced to read [[spoiler: her job as the new Storge by Eros]]. Again, because of the mind control, Lori can only look as she forcefully reads the plan, which winds up disgusting her.
!! Chapter 17
* Lana acting freaked out when Lola tries to help her by playing in the mud. Seeing what she just went through, and how Lola tends to act, it's an appropriate reaction.
!! Chapter 18
* While this chapter is otherwise sad: Two notable instances are creepy:
** While most of the heartbreaks, Leni's consist of [[spoiler: her heart ''rotting away'']].
** After heartbreaking Virtual!Luna, Luan [[spoiler: winds up being struck by another guitar]]. That's bad enough on it's own, but it's the fact that it apparently [[YourMindMakesItReal felt realistic]] to the point that it not only hurt Luan, but left her hospitalized, that makes it creepy.
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!! Chapter 11
* Lynn and Lana being stuck at the beach doesn't seem like a creepy sight at first, but then Lynn calls Lana "Lucy", and the creepyness begins:
** First, Lana figures that Lynn has only been using her as a replacement Lucy. Even after Lana clarifies who she is, Lynn continues to call her Lucy, while making some unnerving advancements towards her.
** Then, she makes the mistake of hurting Lynn in this state. This makes the athlete be surrounded by pink electricity as she says she's about to play rough with Lana...
** [[spoiler: Lynn eventually winds up molesting Lana]], and it would've probably gotten worse if [[BigDamnHeroes Lori and Lola]] hadn't arrived when they did.
*** [[spoiler: Lynn]]'s mannerism during the whole thing: She bites [[spoiler: Lana]]'s ear lobes, she asks her if she's enjoying it, then gets an outburst of anger when she says no and tries to say she's not Lucy.
** A revelation in chapter 13 makes this even more terrifying: [[spoiler: Lynn]] knew what she was doing, but she couldn't stop. In other words, she saw herself molest [[spoiler: her own sister]] and [[ForcedToWatch could do nothing but watch]].
* Afterwards, [[spoiler: Lynn is locked up in a room]]. Imagine you suddenly wake up locked in a room, and nobody seems to be willing to free you...
!! Chapter 12
* Storge, [[spoiler: AKA Carol Pingrey]], is a [[VoluntaryShapeshifting shapeshifter]] who works for [[spoiler: Cristina]]. Let that sink in for a moment...
* Lucy watches Lincoln and Lisa play chess. And while she doesn't do anything about it, it's not too far of a stretch to believe that she would do something, given the chance...
* Lincoln has a moment of this when [[spoiler: he sees that somebody opened Lynn's door]].
* The fact that Lana can recall so vividly [[spoiler: how Lynn molested her]] is pretty unnerving.
!! Chapter 13
* Lynn tries to go upstairs, but sees a ''battered Lana'' at the top. Who then gives her a smile ''filled with [[TheToothHurts broken teeth]]''. The revelation that [[spoiler: she's just Carol shapeshifting as her]] doesn't help.
* When Lucy, Lincoln and Lynn try to race to the bottom, Lynn hears them say Lana and '''Lola''' are coming to them, and Lynn immediately hides. While it's understandable seeing both [[AttemptedRape what happened before]] and [[KidsAreCruel how Lola can be]], it's still pretty creepy to see Lynn hiding for her dear life.
* After a short chess game with Lisa, Leni is offended when the little genius refuses to speak with her again, despite promising to do so earlier. However, Leni quickly explodes in anger and swipes the pieces away, only to then grow even angrier when Lisa continues to refuse to listen to her. And worst of all, this is her StartOfDarkness.
!! Chapter 14
* Lynn is so paranoid of Lola, she thinks she has a ''torture room''. Even when Lucy tries to comfort her, she just asks if Lola not having a torture is just something she wants them to think.
* [[spoiler: Luna is distracted by Leni while Storge shapeshifts as her and takes her place]]. Imagine you go on a date with someone you love, [[spoiler: only for someone to take your place and essentially ruin it]].
* [[spoiler: Storge making Lori into the new Storge]] after it becomes clear she won't be able to run away from Luna.
** The ensuing beatdown is pretty freaky too, since [[spoiler: Storge]] shapeshifts into [[spoiler: Luna]] just before she appears and ''beats the crap out of her'', all while Lori is left utterly confused as to what just happened.
!! Chapter 15
* Lincoln's nightmare. [[spoiler: he's in the middle of some sort of barren wasteland, when his sisters pop up and start blaming him for causing the whole mess in the first place]].
** There are two particularly nightmarish instances of {{Foreshadowing}}: [[spoiler: Leni using Lori as her footstool]] and [[spoiler: Lisa stabbing Lincoln]].
* Lori is forced to read [[spoiler: her job as the new Storge by Eros]]. Again, because of the mind control, Lori can only look as she forcefully reads the plan, which winds up disgusting her.
!! Chapter 17
* Lana acting freaked out when Lola tries to help her by playing in the mud. Seeing what she just went through, and how Lola tends to act, it's an appropriate reaction.
!! Chapter 18
* While this chapter is otherwise sad: Two notable instances are creepy:
** While most of the heartbreaks, Leni's consist of [[spoiler: her heart ''rotting away'']].
** After heartbreaking Virtual!Luna, Luan [[spoiler: winds up being struck by another guitar]]. That's bad enough on it's own, but it's the fact that it apparently [[YourMindMakesItReal felt realistic]] to the point that it not only hurt Luan, but left her hospitalized, that makes it creepy.
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** [[spoiler: The punishment itself, while mostly a TearJerker, is also kind of scary. Ronnie Anne is forced to see Lincoln, the love of her life, not love her, and be taken by someone else, in repeat, for a week. The horrifying part? The program is created by Cristina, meaning that it's very likely that it'll be much worse then it already sounds...]]]]
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** [[spoiler: The punishment itself, while mostly a TearJerker, is also kind of scary. Ronnie Anne is forced to see Lincoln, the love of her life, not love her, and be taken by someone else, in repeat, for a week. The horrifying part? The program is created by Criina, Cristina, meaning that it's very likely that it'll be much worse then it already sounds...]]
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** For the people who don't get it, [[spoiler: Cristina's going to take revenge on Ronnie Anne for her betrayel. And from the looks of the preview, it's not gonna be pretty...]]
'''Chapter 37'''
* [spoiler: Cristina's encounter with Ronnie Anne. At first, she talk with her like an old friend, before snapping, and attacking her. After a fight, she defeats Ronnie Anne, and kindnaps her, so she can finally punish her...]]
** [[spoiler: The punishment itself, while mostly a TearJerker, is also kind of scary. Ronnie Anne is forced to see Lincoln, the love of her life, not love her, and be taken by someone else, in repeat, for a week. The horrifying part? The program is created by Criina, meaning that it's very likely that it'll be much worse then it already sounds...]]
'''Chapter 37'''
* [spoiler: Cristina's encounter with Ronnie Anne. At first, she talk with her like an old friend, before snapping, and attacking her. After a fight, she defeats Ronnie Anne, and kindnaps her, so she can finally punish her...]]
** [[spoiler: The punishment itself, while mostly a TearJerker, is also kind of scary. Ronnie Anne is forced to see Lincoln, the love of her life, not love her, and be taken by someone else, in repeat, for a week. The horrifying part? The program is created by Criina, meaning that it's very likely that it'll be much worse then it already sounds...]]
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* [[spoiler: Cristina's]] third breakdown. After Lincoln asks her why [[spoiler: she]] did what [[spoiler: she]] did, [[spoiler: Cristina starts to rant about everything [[spoiler: she]] saw and how it showed how that's the Loud sister's true intenetions. After Lincoln tries to convince her that it's just fiction what she saw, [[spoiler: Cristina]] snaps once again, and starts to go on a long and psychotic rant on how everything [[spoiler: she]] saw must be based on a true story, and how she's going to kill the sisters in the most pathetic ways possible. Oh, and [[spoiler: she's]] strangeling Lincoln again while ranting.
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* [[spoiler: Cristina's]] third breakdown. After Lincoln asks her why [[spoiler: she]] did what [[spoiler: she]] did, [[spoiler: Cristina Cristina]] starts to rant about everything [[spoiler: she]] saw and how it showed how that's the Loud sister's true intenetions. After Lincoln tries to convince her that it's just fiction what she saw, [[spoiler: Cristina]] snaps once again, and starts to go on a long and psychotic rant on how everything [[spoiler: she]] saw must be based on a true story, and how she's going to kill the sisters in the most pathetic ways possible. Oh, and [[spoiler: she's]] strangeling Lincoln again while ranting.
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* [[spoiler: Cristina's]] outburst towards Lincoln when he's unable to help her. [[spoiler: She]] violently attacks him, kicks him right in his [[spoiler: stab wound]], and starts to strangel him. If it wasn't for the doctors getting [[spoiler: Carol]] on time, it's very likely Lincoln would've been choked there.there.
'''Chapter 37'''
* [[spoiler: Cristina's]] third breakdown. After Lincoln asks her why [[spoiler: she]] did what [[spoiler: she]] did, [[spoiler: Cristina starts to rant about everything [[spoiler: she]] saw and how it showed how that's the Loud sister's true intenetions. After Lincoln tries to convince her that it's just fiction what she saw, [[spoiler: Cristina]] snaps once again, and starts to go on a long and psychotic rant on how everything [[spoiler: she]] saw must be based on a true story, and how she's going to kill the sisters in the most pathetic ways possible. Oh, and [[spoiler: she's]] strangeling Lincoln again while ranting.
* [[spoiler: Cristina has escaped the hospital, and it's very clear she's much worse then before now. She's basically gone all supervillain by now, and has to electrocute herself regurly to keep her organs from shutting down. But just before she's starting a new plan, she first needs to visit an old friend of hers...]]
** For the people who don't get it, [[spoiler: Cristina's going to take revenge on Ronnie Anne for her betrayel. And from the looks of the preview, it's not gonna be pretty...]]
'''Chapter 37'''
* [[spoiler: Cristina's]] third breakdown. After Lincoln asks her why [[spoiler: she]] did what [[spoiler: she]] did, [[spoiler: Cristina starts to rant about everything [[spoiler: she]] saw and how it showed how that's the Loud sister's true intenetions. After Lincoln tries to convince her that it's just fiction what she saw, [[spoiler: Cristina]] snaps once again, and starts to go on a long and psychotic rant on how everything [[spoiler: she]] saw must be based on a true story, and how she's going to kill the sisters in the most pathetic ways possible. Oh, and [[spoiler: she's]] strangeling Lincoln again while ranting.
* [[spoiler: Cristina has escaped the hospital, and it's very clear she's much worse then before now. She's basically gone all supervillain by now, and has to electrocute herself regurly to keep her organs from shutting down. But just before she's starting a new plan, she first needs to visit an old friend of hers...]]
** For the people who don't get it, [[spoiler: Cristina's going to take revenge on Ronnie Anne for her betrayel. And from the looks of the preview, it's not gonna be pretty...]]
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** The above line not only means that [[spoiler: Cristina [[NoOneCouldHaveSurvivedThat managed to survive what she went through last chapter]]]], but that [[spoiler: she has Lincoln all for herself, his sisters are nowhere to defend him, and his wound makes it impossible for him to defend himself]]...
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** The above line not only means that [[spoiler: Cristina [[NoOneCouldHaveSurvivedThat managed to survive what she went through last chapter]]]], but that [[spoiler: she has Lincoln all for herself, his sisters are nowhere to defend him, and his wound makes it impossible for him to defend himself]]...himself]]...
'''Chapter 36'''
* [[spoiler: Cristina's]] outburst towards Lincoln when he's unable to help her. [[spoiler: She]] violently attacks him, kicks him right in his [[spoiler: stab wound]], and starts to strangel him. If it wasn't for the doctors getting [[spoiler: Carol]] on time, it's very likely Lincoln would've been choked there.
'''Chapter 36'''
* [[spoiler: Cristina's]] outburst towards Lincoln when he's unable to help her. [[spoiler: She]] violently attacks him, kicks him right in his [[spoiler: stab wound]], and starts to strangel him. If it wasn't for the doctors getting [[spoiler: Carol]] on time, it's very likely Lincoln would've been choked there.
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** The above line not only means that [[spoiler: Cristina [[NoOneCouldHaveSurvivedThat managed to survive what she went through last chapter]]]], but that [[spoiler: she has Lincoln all for herself, and the Loud his sisters are nowhere to defend him]]...him, and his wound makes it impossible for him to defend himself]]...
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** Hell, [[spoiler: Cristina]] herself once you think about it. [[TheSociopath Sociopathic tendencies]]? Check. [[TautologicalTemplar Believes herself to be in the right]]? Insane? '''Check'''. [[spoiler: Perfectly willing to torture and destroy the Loud sisters, mentally and physically, just to get what she wants]]? '''''Absolutely'''''.
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** For those who don't get it, [[spoiler: Lincoln is currently sharing a room with Cristina]].Cristina]].
** The above line not only means that [[spoiler: Cristina [[NoOneCouldHaveSurvivedThat managed to survive what she went through last chapter]]]], but that [[spoiler: she has Lincoln all for herself, and the Loud sisters are nowhere to defend him]]...
** The above line not only means that [[spoiler: Cristina [[NoOneCouldHaveSurvivedThat managed to survive what she went through last chapter]]]], but that [[spoiler: she has Lincoln all for herself, and the Loud sisters are nowhere to defend him]]...
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* "The Truth", which is nothing more than [[spoiler: Rule34]], and is also the main reason why [[spoiler: Cristina]] turned into the monstrous girl we have today. The simple idea that something like that could create such a sociopath is truly unnerving.
** It becomes even worse once [[spoiler: Cristina shows to Lincoln]] ''what'' exactly she saw. [[spoiler: Cristina didn't just research rule 34, but also gore, among other notably niche fetishes]]. ''[[HarmfulToMinors That is what she saw]]''.
** It becomes even worse once [[spoiler: Cristina shows to Lincoln]] ''what'' exactly she saw. [[spoiler: Cristina didn't just research rule 34, but also gore, among other notably niche fetishes]]. ''[[HarmfulToMinors That is what she saw]]''.
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* Whatever [[spooiler: [[spoiler: Cristina]] has planned for "Agape", [[Spoiler: [[spoiler: who's revelaed to be Thetherby out for revenge on Lincoln]] in "The Garden". Seeing how's it made up by a fully insane [[spoiler: Cristina]], it can't be pretty.
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* Cristina reveals Lincoln exactly what drove her nuts. [[spoiler: She researched some Rule 34 of him and his sisters after discovering some people shipped them together]]. Now, with that in mind, [[MaddenIntoMisanthropy remember]] [[LackOfEmpathy what happened to]] [[TheSociopath Cristina]], and you simply have to wonder what she freaking saw.
* Cristina reveals Lincoln exactly what drove her nuts. [[spoiler: She researched some Rule 34 of him and his sisters after discovering some people shipped them together]]. Now, with that in mind, [[MaddenIntoMisanthropy remember]] [[LackOfEmpathy what happened to]] [[TheSociopath Cristina]], and you simply have to wonder what she freaking saw.
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* Cristina reveals Lincoln exactly what drove her nuts. [[spoiler: She researched some Rule 34 of him and his sisters after discovering some people shipped them together]]. Now, with that in mind, [[MaddenIntoMisanthropy remember]] [[LackOfEmpathy what happened to]] [[TheSociopath Cristina]], and you simply have to wonder what she freaking saw.
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* [[spoiler: Critina's VillianousBreakdown. She goes completley mad when Ronnie Anne decideds to tell Lincoln her plans, and starts to make threats of making "Ronnie Anne her bitch" are pretty horrifying. In the end, she goes so mad she punches right through her laptop... wich causes her to get electrocuted.]]
* Whatever [[spooiler: Cristina]] has planned for "Agape", [[Spoiler: who's revelaed to be Thetherby out fir revenge on Lincoln]] in "The Garden". Seeing how's it made up by a fully insane [[spoiler: Cristina]], it can't be pretty.
* Whatever [[spooiler: Cristina]] has planned for "Agape", [[Spoiler: who's revelaed to be Thetherby out fir revenge on Lincoln]] in "The Garden". Seeing how's it made up by a fully insane [[spoiler: Cristina]], it can't be pretty.
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* [[spoiler: Critina's VillianousBreakdown.VillainousBreakdown. She goes completley mad when Ronnie Anne decideds to tell Lincoln her plans, and starts to make threats of making "Ronnie Anne her bitch" are pretty horrifying. In the end, she goes so mad she punches right through her laptop... wich causes her to get electrocuted.]]
* Whatever [[spooiler: Cristina]] has planned for "Agape", [[Spoiler: who's revelaed to be Thetherby outfir for revenge on Lincoln]] in "The Garden". Seeing how's it made up by a fully insane [[spoiler: Cristina]], it can't be pretty.
* Whatever [[spooiler: Cristina]] has planned for "Agape", [[Spoiler: who's revelaed to be Thetherby out
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* [[spoiler: Critina's VillinousBreakdown.VillianousBreakdown. She goes completley mad when Ronnie Anne decideds to tell Lincoln her plans, and starts to make threats of making "Ronnie Anne her bitch" are pretty horrifying. In the end, she goes so mad she punches right through her laptop... wich causes her to get electrocuted.]]
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* The "daughters" of The Loud Sisters, created by [[spoiler: Cristina]] are absolutley terrifying. And when Lisa accidently awakenings her "daughter" they all start to go completley mad. [[spoiler: Cristina's]] way of calming them down? Painfully electrocute them all of course!
* [[spoiler: Critina's VillinousBreakdown. She goes completley mad when Ronnie Anne decideds to tell Lincoln her plans, and starts to make threats of making "Ronnie Anne her bitch" are pretty horrifying. In the end, she goes so mad she punches right through her laptop... wich causes her to get electrocuted.]]
* Whatever [[spooiler: Cristina]] has planned for "Agape", [[Spoiler: who's revelaed to be Thetherby out fir revenge on Lincoln]] in "The Garden". Seeing how's it made up by a fully insane [[spoiler: Cristina]], it can't be pretty.
* [[spoiler: Critina's VillinousBreakdown. She goes completley mad when Ronnie Anne decideds to tell Lincoln her plans, and starts to make threats of making "Ronnie Anne her bitch" are pretty horrifying. In the end, she goes so mad she punches right through her laptop... wich causes her to get electrocuted.]]
* Whatever [[spooiler: Cristina]] has planned for "Agape", [[Spoiler: who's revelaed to be Thetherby out fir revenge on Lincoln]] in "The Garden". Seeing how's it made up by a fully insane [[spoiler: Cristina]], it can't be pretty.
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* Lincoln was sent to the hospital [[spoiler: after getting stabbed by Lisa]]. But thankfully, he's not alone! [[BlatantLies he He has a nice new companion!]] A little, [[OhCrap red-haired]] companion.
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* Cristina reveals Lincoln exactly what drove her nuts. [[spoiler: She researched some Rule 34 of him and his sisters after discovering some people shipped them together]]. Now, with that in mind, [[MaddenIntoMisantrophy remember]] [[LackOfEmpathy what happened]] [[Sadist to]] [[TheSociopath Cristina]], and you simply have to wonder what she saw that broke her so hard.
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* Cristina reveals Lincoln exactly what drove her nuts. [[spoiler: She researched some Rule 34 of him and his sisters after discovering some people shipped them together]]. Now, with that in mind, [[MaddenIntoMisantrophy [[MaddenIntoMisanthropy remember]] [[LackOfEmpathy what happened]] [[Sadist happened to]] [[TheSociopath Cristina]], and you simply have to wonder what she saw that broke her so hard.freaking saw.
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** When Lori and Leni are told by Carol to look under her dress (In certain place), they're horrified at what they see. Whatever damage was caused to Lola must've really been horrific...
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** When Lori and Leni are told by Carol to look under her dress (In certain place), they're horrified at what they see. Whatever damage was caused to Lola must've really been horrific...horrific...
!! The Story
'''Chapter 33'''
* Cristina [[spoiler: watches as the events of the chapter unfold through a pair of cameras]]. The idea that [[TheSociopath Cristina]] is [[spoiler: watching everything unfold, with the Louds no more the wiser]], is pure ParanoiaFuel.
'''Chapter 34'''
* Lincoln was sent to the hospital [[spoiler: after getting stabbed by Lisa]]. But thankfully, he's not alone! [[BlatantLies he has a nice new companion!]] A little, [[OhCrap red-haired]] companion.
** For those who don't get it, [[spoiler: Lincoln is currently sharing a room with Cristina]].
* Cristina reveals Lincoln exactly what drove her nuts. [[spoiler: She researched some Rule 34 of him and his sisters after discovering some people shipped them together]]. Now, with that in mind, [[MaddenIntoMisantrophy remember]] [[LackOfEmpathy what happened]] [[Sadist to]] [[TheSociopath Cristina]], and you simply have to wonder what she saw that broke her so hard.
!! The Story
'''Chapter 33'''
* Cristina [[spoiler: watches as the events of the chapter unfold through a pair of cameras]]. The idea that [[TheSociopath Cristina]] is [[spoiler: watching everything unfold, with the Louds no more the wiser]], is pure ParanoiaFuel.
'''Chapter 34'''
* Lincoln was sent to the hospital [[spoiler: after getting stabbed by Lisa]]. But thankfully, he's not alone! [[BlatantLies he has a nice new companion!]] A little, [[OhCrap red-haired]] companion.
** For those who don't get it, [[spoiler: Lincoln is currently sharing a room with Cristina]].
* Cristina reveals Lincoln exactly what drove her nuts. [[spoiler: She researched some Rule 34 of him and his sisters after discovering some people shipped them together]]. Now, with that in mind, [[MaddenIntoMisantrophy remember]] [[LackOfEmpathy what happened]] [[Sadist to]] [[TheSociopath Cristina]], and you simply have to wonder what she saw that broke her so hard.
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** And judging by chapter 29, [[spoiler: Leni]] has started to use the phrase too...
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** And judging by chapter 29, [[spoiler: Leni]] has started to use the phrase too...too...
* Whatever happend to Lola in-between chapter 30 and 31. The poor girl is absolutley traumatized, and when trying to reveal what "The Truth" is, she immendialty sees a dark and demonic version of Cristina in from of her.
** When Lori and Leni are told by Carol to look under her dress (In certain place), they're horrified at what they see. Whatever damage was caused to Lola must've really been horrific...
* Whatever happend to Lola in-between chapter 30 and 31. The poor girl is absolutley traumatized, and when trying to reveal what "The Truth" is, she immendialty sees a dark and demonic version of Cristina in from of her.
** When Lori and Leni are told by Carol to look under her dress (In certain place), they're horrified at what they see. Whatever damage was caused to Lola must've really been horrific...
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Just because this is a fanfic based on [[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse The Loud House]] doesn't mean it can't have scary moments.
!! General
* The simple premise can bring you chills once you think about it: A VR sim date game based on the Loud family is bad enough, but to have the Loud sisters-and Lincoln-play it and then [[spoiler: show differences in behavior]]? It's not a nice thought.
* The way [[spoiler: Cristina]] mind-controls people: She says "Would you kindly", then gives the order, and then the affected's eyes glow green and are forced to do it, without any "ifs" or "buts"
** And judging by chapter 29, [[spoiler: Leni]] has started to use the phrase too...
!! General
* The simple premise can bring you chills once you think about it: A VR sim date game based on the Loud family is bad enough, but to have the Loud sisters-and Lincoln-play it and then [[spoiler: show differences in behavior]]? It's not a nice thought.
* The way [[spoiler: Cristina]] mind-controls people: She says "Would you kindly", then gives the order, and then the affected's eyes glow green and are forced to do it, without any "ifs" or "buts"
** And judging by chapter 29, [[spoiler: Leni]] has started to use the phrase too...
