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* Remember the joke about the bros burying Ron Andy in chapter 14? [[FunnyAneurysmMoment They almost go through with it.]]
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* Remember the joke about the bros burying Ron Andy in chapter 14? [[FunnyAneurysmMoment They almost go through with it.]]
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* Neli tells Loni and Leni that if they fail their task in making the perfect dress, they will become fabric and made part of a dress [[{{Fanfic/Cupcakes}} Cupcakes]] style.
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* Neli tells Loni and Leni that if they fail their task in making the perfect dress, they will become fabric and made part of a dress [[{{Fanfic/Cupcakes}} Cupcakes]] Fanfic/{{Cupcakes|SergeantSprinkles}} style.
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* We learn that 6 years prior to the story, Loki befriended a drug dealer and went with him on one of his trades, but Loki accidentally caused the guys they dealt with to find out where he lived and they broke into their house [[AdultFear while Mr. and Mrs. Loud were away]]. Fortunately, the parents returned home just in time to prevent anything serious from happening. It was this incident that lead to Loki being sent to military school.
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* We learn that 6 years prior to the story, Loki befriended a drug dealer and went with him on one of his trades, but Loki accidentally caused the guys they dealt with to find out where he lived and they broke into their house [[AdultFear while Mr. and Mrs. Loud were away]].away. Fortunately, the parents returned home just in time to prevent anything serious from happening. It was this incident that lead to Loki being sent to military school.
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* Trevor and Nyla's worlds are horrible, dystopian nightmare nightmares straight out of [[Film/DaysOfFuturePast X-Men Days of Future Past]] and [[Videogame/HalfLife2 Half-Life 2]].
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* Trevor and Nyla's worlds are horrible, dystopian nightmare nightmares straight out of [[Film/DaysOfFuturePast X-Men Days of Future Past]] ''Film/XMenDaysOfFuturePast'' and [[Videogame/HalfLife2 Half-Life 2]].
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* The ending. Why? [[spoiler: Loki just released three familliar hunters for answers]]
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* The ending. Why? [[spoiler: Loki just released three familliar familiar hunters for answers]]
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* Just how absolutley ruthless [[spoiler: the actual Linka]] is. [[spoiler: Using the fragment she's stolen from Lincoln, wich controls time, Linka uses it to try and AGE LINCOLN OUT OF EXISTENCE! When Lincoln proves to be a difficult target, she goes after Lincoln's and HER OWN family, just to force him to give her the fragments he has. AND SHE ALMOST SUCCEEDS! She actually ends up hitting them and start aging! If Lincoln didn't give her the fragments in time, both of their families would've been aged out of existence.]]
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* Just how absolutley absolutely ruthless [[spoiler: the actual Linka]] is. [[spoiler: Using the fragment she's stolen from Lincoln, wich which controls time, Linka uses it to try and AGE LINCOLN OUT OF EXISTENCE! When Lincoln proves to be a difficult target, she goes after Lincoln's and HER OWN family, just to force him to give her the fragments he has. AND SHE ALMOST SUCCEEDS! She actually ends up hitting them and start aging! If Lincoln didn't give her the fragments in time, both of their families would've been aged out of existence.]]
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* Neli tells Loni and Leni that if they fail their task in making the perfect dress, they will become fabric and made part of a dress [[{{Fanfic/Cupcakes}} Cupcakes]] style.
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* Neli tells Loni and Leni that if they fail their task in making the perfect dress, they will become fabric and made part of a dress [[{{Fanfic/Cupcakes}} Cupcakes]] style.style.
'''Chapter 37'''
* 11B Lincoln's reaction to the girls fussing over him like they would their original brother is to blatantly wonder if ''this is what it feels like to be loved''. That's right; his [[BigBrotherBully brothers' bullying]] made him feel completely unloved. Our Lincoln wasn't kidding when he said the guy needed his sisters more than he himself did. Doubles as TearJerker.
'''Chapter 37'''
* 11B Lincoln's reaction to the girls fussing over him like they would their original brother is to blatantly wonder if ''this is what it feels like to be loved''. That's right; his [[BigBrotherBully brothers' bullying]] made him feel completely unloved. Our Lincoln wasn't kidding when he said the guy needed his sisters more than he himself did. Doubles as TearJerker.
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'''Chapter 30'''
* Neli tells Loni and Leni that if they fail their task in making the perfect dress, they will become fabric and made part of a dress 'Cupcakes' style.
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* Neli tells Loni and Leni that if they fail their task in making the perfect dress, they will become fabric and made part of a dress
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* Just how absolutley ruthless [[spoiler: the actual Linka]] is. [[spoiler: Using the fragment she's stolen from Lincoln, wich controls time, Linka uses it to try and AGE LINCOLN OUT OF EXISTENCE! When Lincoln proves to be a difficult target, she goes after Lincoln's and HER OWN family, just to force him to give her the fragments he has. AND SHE ALMOST SUCCEEDS! She actually ends up hitting them and start aging! If Lincoln didn't give her the fragments in time, both of their families would've been aged out of existence.]]
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* Just how absolutley ruthless [[spoiler: the actual Linka]] is. [[spoiler: Using the fragment she's stolen from Lincoln, wich controls time, Linka uses it to try and AGE LINCOLN OUT OF EXISTENCE! When Lincoln proves to be a difficult target, she goes after Lincoln's and HER OWN family, just to force him to give her the fragments he has. AND SHE ALMOST SUCCEEDS! She actually ends up hitting them and start aging! If Lincoln didn't give her the fragments in time, both of their families would've been aged out of existence.]]]]
'''Chapter 30'''
* Neli tells Loni and Leni that if they fail their task in making the perfect dress, they will become fabric and made part of a dress 'Cupcakes' style.
'''Chapter 30'''
* Neli tells Loni and Leni that if they fail their task in making the perfect dress, they will become fabric and made part of a dress 'Cupcakes' style.
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* Just how absolutley ruthless [[spoiler: the actual Linka]] is. [[spoiler: Using the fragment she's stolen from Lincoln, wich controls time, Linka uses it to try and AGE LINCOLN OUT OF EXISTENCE! When Lincoln proves to be a difficult target, she goes after Lincoln's and HER OWN family, just to force him to give her the fragments he has. AND SHE ALMOST SUCCEEDS! If Lincoln didn't give her the fragment, both of their families plus would've been aged out of existence by Linka.]]
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* Just how absolutley ruthless [[spoiler: the actual Linka]] is. [[spoiler: Using the fragment she's stolen from Lincoln, wich controls time, Linka uses it to try and AGE LINCOLN OUT OF EXISTENCE! When Lincoln proves to be a difficult target, she goes after Lincoln's and HER OWN family, just to force him to give her the fragments he has. AND SHE ALMOST SUCCEEDS! She actually ends up hitting them and start aging! If Lincoln didn't give her the fragment, fragments in time, both of their families plus would've been aged out of existence by Linka.existence.]]
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* Just how absolutley ruthless [spoiler: the actual Linka]] is. [[spoiler: Using the fragment she's stolen from Lincoln, wich controls time, Linka uses it to try and AGE LINCOLN OUT OF EXISTENCE! When Lincoln proves to be a difficult target, she goes after Lincoln's and HER OWN family, just to force him to give her the fragments he has. AND SHE ALMOST SUCCEEDS! If Lincoln didn't give her the fragment, both of their families plus would've been aged out of existence by Linka.]]
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* Just how absolutley ruthless [spoiler: [[spoiler: the actual Linka]] is. [[spoiler: Using the fragment she's stolen from Lincoln, wich controls time, Linka uses it to try and AGE LINCOLN OUT OF EXISTENCE! When Lincoln proves to be a difficult target, she goes after Lincoln's and HER OWN family, just to force him to give her the fragments he has. AND SHE ALMOST SUCCEEDS! If Lincoln didn't give her the fragment, both of their families plus would've been aged out of existence by Linka.]]
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* Lyle tries to materialize a field to fight Lincoln, but it winds up glitching because there's apparently too many anomalies around. This means that either A) there are more anomalies in the citadel than previously thought, which is bad enough, or B) that only a minimum of ''2'' anomalies (Lincoln and [[spoiler: Linka]]) are enough to ''completely mess up'' the field generators. What would happen if even more anomalies showed up?!
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* Lyle tries to materialize a field to fight Lincoln, but it winds up glitching because there's apparently too many anomalies around. This means that either A) there are more anomalies in the citadel than previously thought, which is bad enough, or B) that only a minimum of ''2'' anomalies (Lincoln and [[spoiler: Linka]]) are enough to ''completely mess up'' the field generators. What would happen if even more anomalies showed up?!up?!
'''Chapter 30'''
* Just how absolutley ruthless [spoiler: the actual Linka]] is. [[spoiler: Using the fragment she's stolen from Lincoln, wich controls time, Linka uses it to try and AGE LINCOLN OUT OF EXISTENCE! When Lincoln proves to be a difficult target, she goes after Lincoln's and HER OWN family, just to force him to give her the fragments he has. AND SHE ALMOST SUCCEEDS! If Lincoln didn't give her the fragment, both of their families plus would've been aged out of existence by Linka.]]
'''Chapter 30'''
* Just how absolutley ruthless [spoiler: the actual Linka]] is. [[spoiler: Using the fragment she's stolen from Lincoln, wich controls time, Linka uses it to try and AGE LINCOLN OUT OF EXISTENCE! When Lincoln proves to be a difficult target, she goes after Lincoln's and HER OWN family, just to force him to give her the fragments he has. AND SHE ALMOST SUCCEEDS! If Lincoln didn't give her the fragment, both of their families plus would've been aged out of existence by Linka.]]
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* Try to think of this from the parents' perspective: They're currently stuck in some mysterious city, with their children and their counterparts, and not soon afterwards does Lincoln reveal who he really is to them, and the subsequent revelations. It's a miracle they didn't go MadFromTheRevelation.
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* Try to think of this from the parents' perspective: They're currently stuck in some mysterious city, with their children and their counterparts, and not soon afterwards does Lincoln reveal who he really is to them, and the subsequent revelations. It's a miracle they didn't go MadFromTheRevelation.GoMadFromTheRevelation.
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* It's made worse by how he finds Linka later.
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* It's made worse by how he finds Linka later.later.
'''Chapter 29'''
* Try to think of this from the parents' perspective: They're currently stuck in some mysterious city, with their children and their counterparts, and not soon afterwards does Lincoln reveal who he really is to them, and the subsequent revelations. It's a miracle they didn't go MadFromTheRevelation.
* Lyle tries to materialize a field to fight Lincoln, but it winds up glitching because there's apparently too many anomalies around. This means that either A) there are more anomalies in the citadel than previously thought, which is bad enough, or B) that only a minimum of ''2'' anomalies (Lincoln and [[spoiler: Linka]]) are enough to ''completely mess up'' the field generators. What would happen if even more anomalies showed up?!
'''Chapter 29'''
* Try to think of this from the parents' perspective: They're currently stuck in some mysterious city, with their children and their counterparts, and not soon afterwards does Lincoln reveal who he really is to them, and the subsequent revelations. It's a miracle they didn't go MadFromTheRevelation.
* Lyle tries to materialize a field to fight Lincoln, but it winds up glitching because there's apparently too many anomalies around. This means that either A) there are more anomalies in the citadel than previously thought, which is bad enough, or B) that only a minimum of ''2'' anomalies (Lincoln and [[spoiler: Linka]]) are enough to ''completely mess up'' the field generators. What would happen if even more anomalies showed up?!
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* When confronted by the Loud Sisters and her brothers, we get to see just how insane Linka truly is. She actually threatens to kill herself or severely paralyze Lincoln's body if they don't stand down and allow her to stay in Dimension C-137.
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* When confronted by the Loud Sisters and her brothers, we get to see just how insane Linka truly is. She actually threatens to kill herself or severely paralyze Lincoln's body if they don't stand down and allow her to stay in Dimension C-137.C-137.
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* We see the "incident" from Lane's perspective. And to make it short, it's hard to see an 8-year-old cowering in fear.
* It's made worse by how he finds Linka later.
'''Chapter 27'''
* We see the "incident" from Lane's perspective. And to make it short, it's hard to see an 8-year-old cowering in fear.
* It's made worse by how he finds Linka later.
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* When confronted by the Loud Sisters and her brothers, we get to see just how insane Linka truly is. She actually threatens to kill herself or severely paralyze Lincolns Lincoln's body if they don't stand down and allow her to stay in Dimension C-137.
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* Before Loki's intervention, it was clear that the boys were losing badly.
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* Before Loki's intervention, it was clear that the boys were losing badly.badly.
'''Chapter 25'''
* When confronted by the Loud Sisters and her brothers, we get to see just how insane Linka truly is. She actually threatens to kill herself or severely paralyze Lincolns body if they don't stand down and allow her to stay in Dimension C-137.
'''Chapter 25'''
* When confronted by the Loud Sisters and her brothers, we get to see just how insane Linka truly is. She actually threatens to kill herself or severely paralyze Lincolns body if they don't stand down and allow her to stay in Dimension C-137.
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* The possibility that a fragment could be lost to the hunters doesn't bode well.
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* The possibility that a fragment could be lost to the hunters doesn't bode well.well.
'''Chapter 24'''
* Before Loki's intervention, it was clear that the boys were losing badly.
'''Chapter 24'''
* Before Loki's intervention, it was clear that the boys were losing badly.
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* Lyle Loud uses the entity arch type monsters. Which are based on Lovecraftian horrors.
