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*** Adelgund's face after taking the full force of Nyarai's kick reminds everyone of the hippo of Chapter 6. They both had the same expression when Nyarai kicked them in the face, but the hippo had the good fortune of Nyarai holding back on him either out of professional obligation or because he wasn't worth it. In Adelgund's case, since Nyarai is in the ring, is facing a champion, and she lost the faith of the fans, she pretty much has permission to go all out and she does so by breaking Adelgund's jaw and knocking her out.
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** Nyarai being crowned champion means that anybody who wants to get the belt will have to fight her. Considering Adelgund was undefeated and yet she still held back, what does that say about Nyarai, who is stronger but prefers to go all out on others?
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** Nyarai warming up for her finishing blow. At one point steam is coming out of her body, at another she looks like she's contorting her body into something bigger, and when she's preparing to attack, Nyarai's face is distorted by an ArtShift to reflect her bloodlust.
** The last two pages of the chapter. Nyarai jumps on the air with one leg folded and charged with energy ready to deliver the finishing blow to Adelgund, who cannot block or defend. Then, Nyarai has a demonic face as the energy is released and she is propelled foot-first into Adelgund's face, [[HavingABlast finishing her off with an explosive kick that breaks her jaw.]]
** The last two pages of the chapter. Nyarai jumps on the air with one leg folded and charged with energy ready to deliver the finishing blow to Adelgund, who cannot block or defend. Then, Nyarai has a demonic face as the energy is released and she is propelled foot-first into Adelgund's face, [[HavingABlast finishing her off with an explosive kick that breaks her jaw.]]
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** The following kicks after the first one. Knowing that it's impossible to dodge Nyarai's kicks, Adelgund guards with her arms, but that's what Nyarai wants. So she delivers dozens of kicks to Adelgund's arms, burning the sleeves of her arms, then the arms themselves to the point of leaving them paralyzed.
*** How are the kicks described? They are like firecrackers! You can't see Nyarai's legs and feet fly because of how fast her kicks move, but, just like a firecracker, you know it's a bad idea to let yourself get hit by one.
*** How are the kicks described? They are like firecrackers! You can't see Nyarai's legs and feet fly because of how fast her kicks move, but, just like a firecracker, you know it's a bad idea to let yourself get hit by one.
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** First of all, Nyara reveals that she has either a SignatureMove or a FinishingMove that has her surrounded by a fiery BattleAura as she unveils faster and stronger kicks.
** Her first kick. It's so fast, it disappears. And then her foot reappears close to Adelgund's terrified face. Once it connects, there is a brief flash of fire that comes from Nyarai's foot and a small explosion on Adel's face as she is pushed away from the impact of the kick.
*** The way Nyarai is drawn. She is a bit OffModel as if she looks more like a demon than a feline. It reflects her sadism and the hellish nature of her technique.
** Her first kick. It's so fast, it disappears. And then her foot reappears close to Adelgund's terrified face. Once it connects, there is a brief flash of fire that comes from Nyarai's foot and a small explosion on Adel's face as she is pushed away from the impact of the kick.
*** The way Nyarai is drawn. She is a bit OffModel as if she looks more like a demon than a feline. It reflects her sadism and the hellish nature of her technique.
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* Adelgund tanking a kick from Nyarai and then [[GetOverHere grabs her by the earrings to give her a knee to the face,]] elbows her to the mat, and [[FinishingMove performs a Spine Breaker hold, threatening to break the cheetah's spine if she doesn't give up.]]
** Nyarai's facial expressions despite her dilemma, changing from playful, to crying, to bored in a matter of panels as she challenges Adelgund to break her spine.
** Nyarai's facial expressions despite her dilemma, changing from playful, to crying, to bored in a matter of panels as she challenges Adelgund to break her spine.
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** Nyarai [[LickingTheBlade licking her foot as she brags about being indestrutible.]] It looks like FurryReminder at first but then Shun confirms that [[ExtremityExtremist Nyarai's legs are her strongest weapon]] and that the style she used in the previous chapters was [[IAmNotLeftHanded was a weaker one.]]
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** Another bit of psychological horror. But Nyarai points out that Cookie could have prevented the tragedy happening tonight. She points out that she worked at Club Diamond when in reality she worked at Club Nighthawk. Cookie [[CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot could have stopped Muko from being assaulted by Nyarai and the horrors that would take place in the next chapters had she actually done research on her client.]]
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*** A moment happens initially when Nyarai was starting to beat up Muko. Realizing that Muko could not take the initial assault, Cookie had Muko grab the ropes so that Nyarai would be rule-bound to let her go. Unfortunately, as soon as the fight resumes, the cheetah just crosses the distance and punches Muko in the gut when she speaks about Cookie's dream.
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** Something about Nyarai's bragging is that she's gladly doing so while torturing Muko. Such as doing a suplex or putting her on submission holds. At one point she even gives her an ArmorPiercingSlap [[BreastAttack to the breasts]] [[OffhandBackhand without even paying attention to Muko so that she can brag to Cookie.]] It's a scary display of the gap between the two fighters.
** Nyarai choking [[MurderousThighs Muko with her legs as she mentions Freydar]] makes one think that she plans on breaking Muko's neck with them considering how strong Nyarai's legs are.
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*** Knowing that Snuggly is not even one of the strongest Combagals when compared to the likes of Tanka Talon, Peki, Adelgund, and Nyarai, and yet she's still capable of fighting 20 minutes makes one worry for Muko as she's clearly not on that level yet despite Snuggly not being one of the strongest Combagals in the story.
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*** Knowing that Snuggly is not even one of the strongest Combagals when compared to the likes of Tanka Talon, Peki, Adelgund, and Nyarai, and yet she's still capable of fighting 20 minutes makes one worry for Muko as she's clearly not on that level yet despite Snuggly not being one of the strongest Combagals in the story.
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[[AC: Chapter 22: The Grit]]
* Finding out that [[LustfulMelt Muko melted can be a bit troubling]] when one remembers she did so when Kalita was planning on bludgeoning her with a bat, choke her with it, or drown her in a bathtub. If Muko can't control her hormones, how will she survive in a match, much less a real fight where there are no rules?
* Muko acknowledging her FatalFlaw and how it will hamper her dream of being a Combagal, with her looking close to giving up again is very similar to someone realizing that they have an addiction.
** It shows how bad Muko's problem is when Kalita only [[ShowSomeLeg needs to flash her breasts at Muko]] to deal a OneHitKill to her.
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* The character sheets show the character motivations, more specifically those who will appear on Part 3 and play an important role on it. What are the motivations of Nyarai, Shun, and the Cyclone Crushers? Cookie's resignation.
** There's something scary that, despite being one of the most powerful agencies in the setting, these characters are so death set in destroying Cookie despite the fact that she all but destroyed her reputation and despite all of the horrible stuff they did to her in Part 2.
** There's something scary that, despite being one of the most powerful agencies in the setting, these characters are so death set in destroying Cookie despite the fact that she all but destroyed her reputation and despite all of the horrible stuff they did to her in Part 2.
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[[AC: Chapter 21: The Streak]]
* As it turns out Cookie still has one week to pay off her debt. However, Kalita shows Cookie a loan paper with Cookie's forged signature, meaning she has to pay right now.
* Why is Cookie called Misfortune Cookie? Because she resorted to [[TheGamblingAddict gambling to pay off her debts but she's been on a two-year long losing streak.]] Not only that, everybody who works with her is affected by her bad luck so Cookie is treated as TheJinx by everybody.
* Kalita [[BatterUp threatens Cookie with a bat.]]
* Muko facing Kalita again. Despite taking the fight seriously this time, Muko still ends up losing, being sent flying into a bathtub and then melting at the sight of two beautiful ladies.
** Kalita's use of [[BatterUp her bat as she sends Muko flying with one swing, stomps on her in the bathtub, and strangles her with the handle.]]
* Handsome Zebra Guy recalling Saniko and Kalita, each of them sporting a DeathGlare when asking for Cookie's whereabouts.
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[[folder: Part 3: Bully]]
[[AC: Chapter 20: Killer Overture]]
* Snuggly returns and has ADayInTheLimelight but her opponent is Sleepy, [[WeUsedToBeFriends who was her former singing partner in the Doable Dolls]].
** Sleepy becoming a Combagal to fight Snuggly for breaking up The Doable Dolls shows how much of a grudge Sleepy has against her former idol for breaking their partnership to pursue furry fighting.
** Sleepy exploiting Snuggly's love of bones to land the first blow is not just pragmatism, is also a bit treacherous when she knows how Snuggly would react because they were friends.
** Watching Sleepy and Snuggly fight brutally and learning that they fought for 20 minutes can be disheartening as it can remind how friendships can fall apart once people drift in interests.
*** Knowing that Snuggly is not even one of the strongest Combagals when compared to the likes of Tanka Talon, Peki, Adelgund, and Nyarai, and yet she's still capable of fighting 20 minutes makes one worry for Muko as she's clearly not on that level yet despite Snuggly not being one of the strongest Combagals in the story.
[[folder: Part 3: Bully]]
[[AC: Chapter 20: Killer Overture]]
* Snuggly returns and has ADayInTheLimelight but her opponent is Sleepy, [[WeUsedToBeFriends who was her former singing partner in the Doable Dolls]].
** Sleepy becoming a Combagal to fight Snuggly for breaking up The Doable Dolls shows how much of a grudge Sleepy has against her former idol for breaking their partnership to pursue furry fighting.
** Sleepy exploiting Snuggly's love of bones to land the first blow is not just pragmatism, is also a bit treacherous when she knows how Snuggly would react because they were friends.
** Watching Sleepy and Snuggly fight brutally and learning that they fought for 20 minutes can be disheartening as it can remind how friendships can fall apart once people drift in interests.
*** Knowing that Snuggly is not even one of the strongest Combagals when compared to the likes of Tanka Talon, Peki, Adelgund, and Nyarai, and yet she's still capable of fighting 20 minutes makes one worry for Muko as she's clearly not on that level yet despite Snuggly not being one of the strongest Combagals in the story.
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[[AC: Chapter 19: Despite Everything]]
* The chapter begins with a brief TimeSkip as Cookie still is stuck in the DespairEventHorizon weeks after Nyarai's betrayal and Muko quitting. She only snaps out of it when Saniko visits.
* Saniko revealing that Muko is suffering a HeroicBSOD and that she hasn't got out of her room for weeks so she wants Cookie to talk to her as she's her last resort.
** Cookie initially refusing to talk to Muko out of guilt and only doing so when Saniko threatens to call the cops on her for having Muko fight Kalita and then Nyarai despite her lack of experience.
* Cookie sharing her story of her first time hitting the DespairEventHorizon two years before the series began.
** As it turns out, Shun didn't steal the Cyclone Crushers and they didn't left Cookie. She sold them out. Cookie assumed they were going to leave her since they were mad at her for what happened to Freydar so she sold them out.
** Cookie not getting any job despite all the money she had. She resorted to DrowningMySorrows so much that she briefly became TheAlcoholic to the point of ripping out her hair and parts of her eyebrows.
** A drunk Cookie entering Club Nighthawk and making a fool of herself in front of Shun and her former Combagals, who reproach her, now seeing her as a BrokenPedestal for selling them out.
* While Muko deciding to become a Combagal is good news, her making Nyarai [[TheRival her first rival is a scary thought as Nyarai is a champion and above pro-level according to Cookie.]] And that's not taking into account all the enemies that Muko may face once Muko succeeds on her goal.
** Cookie acknowledging that not only will Muko make an enemy of Shun Gonfano, who is a VillainWithGoodPublicity to furry fighting but she will be hated for being associated with Cookie.
* Kalita returning and revealing she's a LoanShark who's collecting the 20,000 Moni Cookie loaned a few chapters ago. While the volume has a BittersweetEnding for Muko and Cookie, it's clear the two of them have lots of bad luck coming their way in the future.
** A scary part about Kalita's return is that she has a [[BatterUp bat this time and she intends to use it.]]
* The chapter begins with a brief TimeSkip as Cookie still is stuck in the DespairEventHorizon weeks after Nyarai's betrayal and Muko quitting. She only snaps out of it when Saniko visits.
* Saniko revealing that Muko is suffering a HeroicBSOD and that she hasn't got out of her room for weeks so she wants Cookie to talk to her as she's her last resort.
** Cookie initially refusing to talk to Muko out of guilt and only doing so when Saniko threatens to call the cops on her for having Muko fight Kalita and then Nyarai despite her lack of experience.
* Cookie sharing her story of her first time hitting the DespairEventHorizon two years before the series began.
** As it turns out, Shun didn't steal the Cyclone Crushers and they didn't left Cookie. She sold them out. Cookie assumed they were going to leave her since they were mad at her for what happened to Freydar so she sold them out.
** Cookie not getting any job despite all the money she had. She resorted to DrowningMySorrows so much that she briefly became TheAlcoholic to the point of ripping out her hair and parts of her eyebrows.
** A drunk Cookie entering Club Nighthawk and making a fool of herself in front of Shun and her former Combagals, who reproach her, now seeing her as a BrokenPedestal for selling them out.
* While Muko deciding to become a Combagal is good news, her making Nyarai [[TheRival her first rival is a scary thought as Nyarai is a champion and above pro-level according to Cookie.]] And that's not taking into account all the enemies that Muko may face once Muko succeeds on her goal.
** Cookie acknowledging that not only will Muko make an enemy of Shun Gonfano, who is a VillainWithGoodPublicity to furry fighting but she will be hated for being associated with Cookie.
* Kalita returning and revealing she's a LoanShark who's collecting the 20,000 Moni Cookie loaned a few chapters ago. While the volume has a BittersweetEnding for Muko and Cookie, it's clear the two of them have lots of bad luck coming their way in the future.
** A scary part about Kalita's return is that she has a [[BatterUp bat this time and she intends to use it.]]
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[[AC: Chapter 18: Falling]]
* The first page is Adelgund's unconscious body being sent flying into the air and then lifelessly falling into the mat while Nyarai gracefully lands on her feet. Then, [[FinishingStomp Nyarai's foot stomps on her face, which further injures Adel's jaw...]] [[CherryTapping so that the cheetah can pose for her victory.]]
* The Exe-Cutie-Ves crying over the defeated body of Adelgund, who's in critical condition with white eyes and a broken jaw.
* It is revealed that there was [[TheMole someone else besides Nyarai who betrayed Cookie by leaking information to Shun Gonfano.]] That someone was Dinedon, who gave the information as soon as Shun gave him a bigger pay than Cookie did.
** Just how much of a BadBoss Dinedon is. Despite everything Adelgund and Peki did, Adelgund especially, he did not hesitate to put them in a match where they will lose just so that he could get the money for himself.
* Muko keeping the collar Adelgund gave her when they became partners as a TragicKeepsake and looking at it, clearly traumatized by her own powerlessness at being unable to save her from Nyarai.
* Cookie talking about Freydar with Muko. While she didn't kill her, Cookie overworked her, leading to a CareerEndingInjury involving painkillers that will make her blind if she fights again.
** As Cookie talks about Freydar, some Cyclone Crushers appear on the background, all of them sporting a DeathGlare as if blaming Cookie for what she did to Freydar.
* Muko's trauma is so great that she gives this WhamLine that shocks Cookie to the core.
--->'''Muko''':"I quit"
** Cookie reaching the DespairEventHorizon that is illustrated as her sinking into the ocean.
* The first page is Adelgund's unconscious body being sent flying into the air and then lifelessly falling into the mat while Nyarai gracefully lands on her feet. Then, [[FinishingStomp Nyarai's foot stomps on her face, which further injures Adel's jaw...]] [[CherryTapping so that the cheetah can pose for her victory.]]
* The Exe-Cutie-Ves crying over the defeated body of Adelgund, who's in critical condition with white eyes and a broken jaw.
* It is revealed that there was [[TheMole someone else besides Nyarai who betrayed Cookie by leaking information to Shun Gonfano.]] That someone was Dinedon, who gave the information as soon as Shun gave him a bigger pay than Cookie did.
** Just how much of a BadBoss Dinedon is. Despite everything Adelgund and Peki did, Adelgund especially, he did not hesitate to put them in a match where they will lose just so that he could get the money for himself.
* Muko keeping the collar Adelgund gave her when they became partners as a TragicKeepsake and looking at it, clearly traumatized by her own powerlessness at being unable to save her from Nyarai.
* Cookie talking about Freydar with Muko. While she didn't kill her, Cookie overworked her, leading to a CareerEndingInjury involving painkillers that will make her blind if she fights again.
** As Cookie talks about Freydar, some Cyclone Crushers appear on the background, all of them sporting a DeathGlare as if blaming Cookie for what she did to Freydar.
* Muko's trauma is so great that she gives this WhamLine that shocks Cookie to the core.
--->'''Muko''':"I quit"
** Cookie reaching the DespairEventHorizon that is illustrated as her sinking into the ocean.
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[[AC: Chapter 17: Unleashing]]
* Peki being taken to the hospital, screaming all the time as she has a broken arm and two broken legs.
* Nyarai snapping her own spine to the horror of everybody present.
** Adelgund has a MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment the second she thinks she crippled or killed Nyarai.
** Jowdie and a few of the Cyclone Crushers cry in horror when they think their friend just got her spine snapped.
* Nyarai reveals that she is fine due to being a {{Contortionist}} with AbnormalLimbRotationRange as she sets her spine straight, twists herself vertically like a pretzel, and then contorts her arms and legs around her head [[NoSell just to prove that submission holds are useless against her.]]
** For anybody who knows about wrestling, submission holds are a big part of a wrestler's arsenal. Nyarai's ability is a GameBreaker since she's immune to holds but she's free to use them.
* Leg-Jet Burst. All of it.
* Peki being taken to the hospital, screaming all the time as she has a broken arm and two broken legs.
* Nyarai snapping her own spine to the horror of everybody present.
** Adelgund has a MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment the second she thinks she crippled or killed Nyarai.
** Jowdie and a few of the Cyclone Crushers cry in horror when they think their friend just got her spine snapped.
* Nyarai reveals that she is fine due to being a {{Contortionist}} with AbnormalLimbRotationRange as she sets her spine straight, twists herself vertically like a pretzel, and then contorts her arms and legs around her head [[NoSell just to prove that submission holds are useless against her.]]
** For anybody who knows about wrestling, submission holds are a big part of a wrestler's arsenal. Nyarai's ability is a GameBreaker since she's immune to holds but she's free to use them.
* Leg-Jet Burst. All of it.
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[[AC: Chapter 16: Breaking]]
* Peki reveals the last straw. She [[YourCheatingHeart caught Adelgund being pleasured by the stripper, which she then made into the latest member of the Exe-Cutie-Ves.]] She then asks her if that is what it takes to become one of her personal assistants.
** Adelgund attempts to defend herself by pointing out that the stripper came onto her, which infuriates Peki as she angrily recalls Adelgund enjoying herself and then gives her a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown fueled by years of betrayal.
* Adelgund crossing the MoralEventHorizon by breaking Peki's arm, becoming a BrokenPedestal to the audience and reaching a ZeroPercentApprovalRating with her actions.
** Adelgund attacking the referee when he attempts to reprimand her for breaking Peki's leg.
* When Nyarai wakes up and asks Peki to tag her in, Adelgund steps on Peki's leg, pointing out that she's not a team player with tears in her eyes. It's clear that, while inexcusable, Adelgund [[WomanScorned is acting more out of broken heart and no longer cares about the match.]]
* Peki crawling all the way from the center of the mat to the corner, finally tagging Nyarai in as she endures the assault of her former partner and lover.
* Peki reveals the last straw. She [[YourCheatingHeart caught Adelgund being pleasured by the stripper, which she then made into the latest member of the Exe-Cutie-Ves.]] She then asks her if that is what it takes to become one of her personal assistants.
** Adelgund attempts to defend herself by pointing out that the stripper came onto her, which infuriates Peki as she angrily recalls Adelgund enjoying herself and then gives her a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown fueled by years of betrayal.
* Adelgund crossing the MoralEventHorizon by breaking Peki's arm, becoming a BrokenPedestal to the audience and reaching a ZeroPercentApprovalRating with her actions.
** Adelgund attacking the referee when he attempts to reprimand her for breaking Peki's leg.
* When Nyarai wakes up and asks Peki to tag her in, Adelgund steps on Peki's leg, pointing out that she's not a team player with tears in her eyes. It's clear that, while inexcusable, Adelgund [[WomanScorned is acting more out of broken heart and no longer cares about the match.]]
* Peki crawling all the way from the center of the mat to the corner, finally tagging Nyarai in as she endures the assault of her former partner and lover.
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[[AC: Chapter 15: Cracking]]
*[[OneHitKill Adelgund takes out Nyarai with a knee to the face.]] Nyarai gets a broken nose and she is forced to stumble out of the ring, tagging Peki in before passing out from blood loss.
* Dinedon shows signs of being a BadBoss by forcing Peki to take a FaceHeelTurn on account of FantasticRacism making people wary of Wilds and he is wary of Peki being a Wild herself would drive customers away. So he wants Adelgund to defeat her as a {{Heel}} to make the audience feel safe despite her protests.
* Adelgund, who is implied to be Peki's lover as well as her Combagal partner shows signs of being an abusive romantic partner.
** She takes the decision of making Peki do the FaceHeelTurn against her protests.
*** An angry Peki is forced to face Adelgund to lose against her while the crowd jeers at her for "proving Wilds are the same" and other stereotypes.
** Adelgund dismissing Peki's injuries from a match, telling her to suck it.
*** It's a clear example of AllTakeAndNoGive as Peki listened to Adelgund's insecurities and gave her advice while Adelgund didn't even help her or bother to listen to her concerns.
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[[AC: Chapter 14: Unfolding]]
* Muko snapping from her lust trance and realizing that Nyarai is her enemy. She tries to call Nyarai her friend, only for Nyarai to pounce on the bunny and slam her head on the ground.
** Nyarai being a HopelessBossFight just like Kalita but UpToEleven as she tortures Muko physically and emotionally while Kalita only focused on knocking Muko out. This time around Muko is clearly suffering as she is so hurt by the betrayal that she cannot be aroused so she is forced to take it as the serious matter that it truly is.
** Muko asks Nyarai why she betrayed them in tears, only for Nyarai to insult her for believing in Cookie, telling her that the squirrel is a "dream killer" and insulting her for believing in Cookie.
** Nyarai slamming Muko's head on the floor hard and so many times until she bleeds, causing Muko to cry and call for her mom.
** Cookie trying to reason with Nyarai, only for Nyarai to point out she was TheMole who spied on her and she even recorded the meeting to incriminate Cookie. The poor squirrel is left in tears by the revelation.
* Why is Nyarai so loyal to Shun? He did a favor to her involving a piece of her past and that got her UndyingLoyalty to him. It shows that Nyarai has a DarkAndTroubledPast if she resorted to Shun Gonfano, which Cookie points out is akin to a DealWithTheDevil just to get out of trouble.
* Why did Nyarai join Cookie just to betray her? Well, she did it out of {{Revenge}} for the "life she took". This causes Cookie to think of Freydar with a haunted look on her face.
** Nyarai's betrayal becomes a scarier thought when you recall that she threatened to leave Cookie's agency unless she found her a worthy partner. However, it's clear that Nyarai was clearly intending to betray Cookie regardless of whether she fulfilled her promise or not.
* Cookie calling out the referee for not stopping Nyarai from brutalizing Muko, only for him to yell at her. Cookie realizes that Shun bribed him. It's a horrible thought knowing your ArchEnemy is willing to go that far to hurt you, especially when Nyarai could probably end the fight when she wanted.
* Besides Harry and Mellow, Shira went to Muko's debut and she cries at the brutality.
* Cookie having a breakdown as with Muko's defeat and Nyarai's betrayal, she's ruined. She's only conforted when Adelgund tags in and decides to fight Nyarai on her own.
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[[AC: Chapter 12: Selling]]
* Muko's sheer terror facing Adelgund. While it's PlayedForLaughs most of the time, she's getting treated around like a rag doll by a large wrestler with a crush on her so Muko spends most of her debut match scared out of her mind.
** Muko's terror when fighting Adelgund is PlayedForLaughs until you realize that she's getting manhandled by someone twice her size and weight who flirts with her and then gives her a TakeThatKiss as well.
* Muko asking Nyarai to tag in so that Muko can get away from Adelgund. [[KickTheDog Nyarai turns her back on her and even snores as Adelgund keeps playing with Muko]]
[[AC: Chapter 13: Judging]]
* Shun Gonfano arrives to the match and shows a recording of Cookie bribing Dinedon. This worsens Cookie's reputation as she gets [[DeathGlare angry and judgmental looks from the entire audience.]]
* Shun bringing the Cyclone Crushers as his bodyguards. This shocks Cookie who calls them her girls. While Chapter 9 had Tasha refer to Skully as one of Cookie's Combagals, the realization that ALL of Cookie's Combagals are part of the Cyclone Crushers is disheartening.
** Cookie acknowledging Shun as an old enemy and him going all the way to humiliate her cements him as her ArchEnemy by this chapter, which means that Cookie will have to face all of her previous Combagals in the future regardless of the outcome.
* Nyarai confirming her loyalty to Shun by betraying Team Deliverance. She then convinces Peki to join her by pointing out how Shun is the only one who gives Wilds a chance.
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[[AC: Chapter 10: Shady Business]]
* Cookie convinces Dinedon to let Team Deliverance win the Masato championship by bribing him. Bribing someone to win at sports is a serious offense that can break your career. Cookie is not only at risk of staining her reputation further but she's also endangering the reputations of Muko and Nyarai with her gamble.
** Cookie revealing that she got the loan money from a LoanShark complete with ImagineSpot of her being eaten by a shark. If she does not succeed with her comeback, her life is as good as forfeit,
* Dinedon mentions that even if Team Deliverance wins the Masato Championship, it won't erase Cookie's mistakes from two years ago. He then goes on to mention [[NoodleIncident Trilamity Day,]] which puts everyone in a somber mood.
** The fact that even Nyarai, who was acting smugly in the background, frowns a bit, shows how badly that day was in the history of furry fighting.
* Cookie reading the article of Muko on Nyarai's phone. It's filled with libel that insults both Muko and Cookie as it details how poorly Muko performed against Kalita.
** The next page has Nyarai giving Cookie an expression that borders on CheshireCatGrin and SlasherSmile as if she were a predator moments away from eating her prey. She looks like she's planning on hurting Cookie the moment she's alone with her.
[[AC: Chapter 11: Ding! Ding! Debut!]]
* The chapter begins with Rinko, a rabbit Combagal defeating her opponent with a moonsault. As she celebrates her victory, her opponent is crying in the background. A reminder that not everyone who enters into a sport will win regardless of how hard they try.
* Tanka Talon giving a CurbStompBattle to Snuggly that leaves her crying in tears. For a scarier note, she's an underling of Scalitor, the biggest {{Heel}} of the series.
* Muko being nervous rather than excited when she comes out the smoke and prepares to enter the ring. It's a strong contrast to her usual self. She only calms down when she notices Mellow and Harry at the audience when she calms down
** During a brief moment, Muko notices some fans with signs that have hateful messages written about Cookie. She doesn't get to read them because she's busy seeing Mellow and Harry. That being said, it shows how much of a ZeroPercentApprovalRating Cookie has by this point of the story.
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[[folder: Part 2: Cheater]]
[[AC: Chapter 7: The Good and The Bad]]
* Cookie WhatTheHellHero speech to Muko, specifically the part of the painkillers, mainly due to TruthInTelevision part about painkiller addiction destroying the body of athletes by turning them into drug addicts.
* The flashback scene between Cookie and Nyarai, mainly because it shows their client and manager relationship. Unlike Muko, who is an amateur who respects Cookie, Nyarai is an arrogant professional who looks down on her.
** Cookie is so poor that she has to ask Nyarai, her client, for money. Nyarai refuses on the ground that it's her money and that Cookie has to find her a suitable partner.
** Nyarai's is openly disrespectful of Cookie, insulting her living and working conditions, and even [[IntimidationDemonstration kicking a dent in a locker door near Cookie's head]] [[DisproportionateRetribution just because the squirrel asked her to respect her as a manager.]]
** Cookie, fed up with Nyarai's disrespect, points out that Nyarai needs her as much as Cookie needs her, pointing out that not many agencies accept Wild Combagals regardless of their talents. Unfortunately, Nyarai believes that [[BerserkButton Cookie pulled a "Wild Card" on her,]] stomping the squirrel to the ground and giving her a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech and a threat to quit her agency and fight any fighter Cookie represents if her demands are not met.
[[AC: Chapter 8: Crossed Wires]]
* Harry revealing that there is an article in the Internet about Muko, more specifically about her fight with Kalita at Cafe Carrots, but it's only filled with mean comments. Mellow's reaction is one of horror upon finding out what happened to his friend/crush and the ramifications of the event.
** Mellow's horror upon finding out that Muko's manager is Cookie. He tries to warn her something about her but Muko hangs up on him. It makes the reader wonder what did Cookie do to be that hated.
* Muko and Saniko's argument at the end of the chapter.
** Saniko enters the room and finds her younger sister with her face covered in bandages. It's her first time seeing Muko since her fight with Kalita so her shock and horror is genuine.
** Saniko believes that furry fighting is just a phase. She recalls a moment where Muko [[BigEater entered competitive eating]] and lost. Muko entered into a mild depression and locked herself into her room, binge eating until she turned into a fat blob. Saniko was forced to take care of Muko until she returned to normal.
*** This makes a comment in chapter 3 HarsherInHindsight involving guerilla neighboring gardening. If what Saniko is saying is true then Muko is DesperatelyLookingForAPurposeInLife rather than following her perverted desires.
** Saniko's outburst as she breaks a base and calls out Muko for going out pursuing random hobbies while she's busy overworking to sustain both of them.
** Muko telling Saniko that she's not their mother with a very uncharacteristic coldness.
[[AC: Chapter 9: Are You Even A Woman?]]
* The fact that Skully, one of the Cyclone Crushers working for Shun Gonfano, was one of Cookie's clients. Since she works for Shun, who has some sort of evil plan involving Cookie, one has to wonder what did Cookie do for Skully to serve a man who's willing to sabotage her former manager.
** A flashback scene shows that two workers at Monyan were about to be raped until Skully saves them. While the rapists didn't do anything due to Skully stopping them on time, the terror in their faces is still evident.
* Muko shows a bit of BodyHorror by undergoing LustfulMelt when she goes to a strip club. A waitress who finds her melted body actually runs away screaming.
[[folder: Part 2: Cheater]]
[[AC: Chapter 7: The Good and The Bad]]
* Cookie WhatTheHellHero speech to Muko, specifically the part of the painkillers, mainly due to TruthInTelevision part about painkiller addiction destroying the body of athletes by turning them into drug addicts.
* The flashback scene between Cookie and Nyarai, mainly because it shows their client and manager relationship. Unlike Muko, who is an amateur who respects Cookie, Nyarai is an arrogant professional who looks down on her.
** Cookie is so poor that she has to ask Nyarai, her client, for money. Nyarai refuses on the ground that it's her money and that Cookie has to find her a suitable partner.
** Nyarai's is openly disrespectful of Cookie, insulting her living and working conditions, and even [[IntimidationDemonstration kicking a dent in a locker door near Cookie's head]] [[DisproportionateRetribution just because the squirrel asked her to respect her as a manager.]]
** Cookie, fed up with Nyarai's disrespect, points out that Nyarai needs her as much as Cookie needs her, pointing out that not many agencies accept Wild Combagals regardless of their talents. Unfortunately, Nyarai believes that [[BerserkButton Cookie pulled a "Wild Card" on her,]] stomping the squirrel to the ground and giving her a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech and a threat to quit her agency and fight any fighter Cookie represents if her demands are not met.
[[AC: Chapter 8: Crossed Wires]]
* Harry revealing that there is an article in the Internet about Muko, more specifically about her fight with Kalita at Cafe Carrots, but it's only filled with mean comments. Mellow's reaction is one of horror upon finding out what happened to his friend/crush and the ramifications of the event.
** Mellow's horror upon finding out that Muko's manager is Cookie. He tries to warn her something about her but Muko hangs up on him. It makes the reader wonder what did Cookie do to be that hated.
* Muko and Saniko's argument at the end of the chapter.
** Saniko enters the room and finds her younger sister with her face covered in bandages. It's her first time seeing Muko since her fight with Kalita so her shock and horror is genuine.
** Saniko believes that furry fighting is just a phase. She recalls a moment where Muko [[BigEater entered competitive eating]] and lost. Muko entered into a mild depression and locked herself into her room, binge eating until she turned into a fat blob. Saniko was forced to take care of Muko until she returned to normal.
*** This makes a comment in chapter 3 HarsherInHindsight involving guerilla neighboring gardening. If what Saniko is saying is true then Muko is DesperatelyLookingForAPurposeInLife rather than following her perverted desires.
** Saniko's outburst as she breaks a base and calls out Muko for going out pursuing random hobbies while she's busy overworking to sustain both of them.
** Muko telling Saniko that she's not their mother with a very uncharacteristic coldness.
[[AC: Chapter 9: Are You Even A Woman?]]
* The fact that Skully, one of the Cyclone Crushers working for Shun Gonfano, was one of Cookie's clients. Since she works for Shun, who has some sort of evil plan involving Cookie, one has to wonder what did Cookie do for Skully to serve a man who's willing to sabotage her former manager.
** A flashback scene shows that two workers at Monyan were about to be raped until Skully saves them. While the rapists didn't do anything due to Skully stopping them on time, the terror in their faces is still evident.
* Muko shows a bit of BodyHorror by undergoing LustfulMelt when she goes to a strip club. A waitress who finds her melted body actually runs away screaming.
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* Nyarai is sexually assaulted by a hippo customer. Fortunately, [[BullyingADragon she is capable of defending herself and she does as soon as her manager gives her permission.]]
** The way Nyarai disposes of the hippo once she's given permission. She flashes a CheshireCatGrin and throws a swift kick, the next page shows the hippo's deformed face as he is literally [[PunchedAcrossTheRoom kicked out of the nightclub and forced to apologize to Nyarai.]]
*** The hippo's face after getting kicked. His eyes are bulging out, his cheek is swelling from where he was kicked, and his facial body fluids (blood, sweat, tears, and saliva) are blown away from the impact.
** The way Nyarai disposes of the hippo once she's given permission. She flashes a CheshireCatGrin and throws a swift kick, the next page shows the hippo's deformed face as he is literally [[PunchedAcrossTheRoom kicked out of the nightclub and forced to apologize to Nyarai.]]
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* Kalita's underlings promote her by boasting about her being a OneWomanArmy and how she's one of the three leaders of the Roda Kira Gang. Now compare that with Muko who decided to become a Combagal on a whim and is fighting Kalita mainly out of attraction for her? It's not a good match for Muko.
** Knowing that there are two other leaders in the Roda Kira Gang committing crimes that are as bad or worse than Kalita.
** Knowing that there are two other leaders in the Roda Kira Gang committing crimes that are as bad or worse than Kalita.
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* Kalita decides to not take the money because she developed a VillainRespect for Muko after she stood up for her despite the odds? Her underlings ask her what will Gantus think? It is implied that he's her boss? Considering what Kalita did to Muko and how she destroyed the cafe, knowing there's someone stronger than her is a bit scary, especially since Kalita is defying them.
* Cookie being forced to pay the money of TheBet since Muko's attempts to protect Cafe Carrots destroyed the place. Furthermore, it's implied that the damages are more than the 2,000 Moni Cookie won and is forced to return so she's in greater debt than before.
* Cookie being forced to pay the money of TheBet since Muko's attempts to protect Cafe Carrots destroyed the place. Furthermore, it's implied that the damages are more than the 2,000 Moni Cookie won and is forced to return so she's in greater debt than before.
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** Muko letting her pervert side get the best of her as she's more focused on opening Kalita's zipper than fighting her, causing Kalita to enter an UnstoppableRage and making the beating worse.
** Muko revealing that she has a WeaksauceWeakness in the sense that she gets limp limbs the longer she gets exposed to hot women. Which happens as she's fighting Kalita.
*** Muko having this weakness is a nightmare for Cookie as most of her future rivals are probably as attractive as Kalita and they will be stronger than her, meaning that Muko will get worse beatings in the ring if she does not control her lust.
** Muko revealing that she has a WeaksauceWeakness in the sense that she gets limp limbs the longer she gets exposed to hot women. Which happens as she's fighting Kalita.
*** Muko having this weakness is a nightmare for Cookie as most of her future rivals are probably as attractive as Kalita and they will be stronger than her, meaning that Muko will get worse beatings in the ring if she does not control her lust.
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* The chapter introduces Kalita and the Roda Kira Gang who run a ProtectionRacket by making it clear that they will take the money from Cafe Carrots or there will be problems.
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** Cookie being on the verge of tears as she pleads not to have the money taken away from her. It makes one wonder how desperate is she to revive her career if she's willing to get hurt like that.
* Muko attempts one of her perverted antics with Kalita, mainly tripping and grabbing her breasts. Predictably, Kalita gives her a MegatonPunch that sends Muko flying and she lands on a table that breaks in half.
* Muko asking the maids for some compensation, mainly panties. While she's interrupted by Kalita and the scene is PlayedForLaughs , the fact that the maids were in tears show that they consider a perverted Muko a greater threat than the Roda Kira Gang.
* Muko deciding to fight Kalita despite the fact that she has no training or experience and Kalita is an expert brawler, mainly doing so out of lust.
** Just how bad of an idea is Muko's plan to fight Kalita? With the exception of Harry, who is a HeroWorshipper for Muko, ''nobody'' thinks that she has a chance of winning.
** Kalita accepting to fight Muko after having enough of the bunny's antics. The chapter ends with [[FearlessFool Muko recklessly charging at Kalita.]]
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* Muko hiring Cookie without reading the bad reviews she had. Likewise, Cookie hiring Muko despite her client having no training, no knowledge of Combagals, and entering the sport for perverted reasons. For Muko, it shows that she's putting her trust in someone unreliable. For Cookie, it shows how desperate she is to have someone hire her.
* Cookie greedily throwing herself at a coin and calling it a lucky sign after musing about not screwing up with Muko makes one wonder what did Cookie do to put her in such poverty and bad reputation in the furry fighting community and it makes one worry for Muko's safety with her involvement with her.
* Cookie greedily throwing herself at a coin and calling it a lucky sign after musing about not screwing up with Muko makes one wonder what did Cookie do to put her in such poverty and bad reputation in the furry fighting community and it makes one worry for Muko's safety with her involvement with her.
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* Saniko, Muko's older sister, shows a bit of AdultFear when she realizes that Muko quit her job at Cafe Carrots in the previous chapter to become a Combagal in a rushed decision. It gets worse because the chapter implies that their mother is dead so Saniko has to take care of Muko, who has been shown to be very immature.
* Muko's maid co-workers have a good reason to hold a grudge against her as Muko's perverted antics made her unpopular with them. Despite the comic's {{Animesque}} theme, the maids treat Muko's perverted antics with the same disgust as a male person doing it to them and take great delight getting revenge on Muko by trying to make her lose TheBet against them.
* Muko's maid co-workers have a good reason to hold a grudge against her as Muko's perverted antics made her unpopular with them. Despite the comic's {{Animesque}} theme, the maids treat Muko's perverted antics with the same disgust as a male person doing it to them and take great delight getting revenge on Muko by trying to make her lose TheBet against them.
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"Furry Fight Chronicles" is a ProWrestling comic with lots of action and comedy, but it also has its darker and scarier moments. Between scenes showing NoHoldsBarredBeatdown and some dark dose of RealityEnsues inside and outside of the ring, this comic shows that sports can be just as scary as life.
'''WARNING:''' All spoilers for the series are unmarked.
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!!Act 1: A Rough Start
[[folder: Part 1: Outsider]]
[[AC: Fight 1: Fenny VS Roora]]
* The BrawlerLock between Fenny and Roora can be scary because both put a GameFace on and Fenny has the scariest one of the two, looking like a snarling feral animal.
* Fenny enduring a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown from Roora. The sheer pain on the artic vixen's face is palpable, especially since Roora uses low blows. This makes her victory all the sweeter.
** Roora giving Fenny a wedgie can count as this as Fenny looks humiliated as she's wounded by the move.
* Fenny's manager [[WhatTheHellHero calling out the referee for not interfering when Roora pulls an illegal move by pulling on Fenny's tail]] and then being powerless from defending her Combagal.
** The scene can hit to those who participate in combat sports as fighters, managers, or trainers can watch the indignity of an opponent committing a foul and get away with it because the referee didn't notice.
[[AC: Chapter 2: Get Ready]]
* The fact that Cookie lives and works in a janitor closet at a soapland can be AdultFear if one worries about their future.
** It hits harder because a worker at the soapland tells Muko that the owner let Cookie stay there two years ago as favor, but Cookie stayed longer than expected. It makes one wonder how badly Cookie is doing if she's that desperate to stay there for so long.
[[AC: Chapter 3: Hard Working Dreamer]]
* The chapter introduces Harry, who will become Muko's first fan. Whey is he on this page? He was fired from his job after working there from years. His family left him. And he can't find another job with the current economy. The situation has him DrivenToSuicide with him going to Cafe Carrots for one last meal. He even has an ImagineSpot of his suicide complete with an ArtShift fish being hanged by a rope! Fortunately, Muko has figured out customer service and she gives him an act of kindness in his hour of need, which causes him to become her first fan when Cookie gives him a poster.
* Kalita and her gang showing up to rob the cafe.
[[AC: Chapter 4: The World Is Your Ring]]
* One of Kalita's men, an anteater, flirts with one of the maids by sticking out his long tongue at her. Even though [[EveryoneHasStandards Kalita puts a stop to it,]] the maid is left in tears.
[[AC: Chapter 5: Roda Kira's Killer Star Kalita]]
* Muko's fight with Kalita is a HopelessBossFight as Kalita gives her a CurbStompBattle that borders on NoHoldsBarredBeatdown that leaves her unconscious.
[[AC: Chapter 6: The Smiling Nighthawk]]
* Nyarai is sexually assaulted by a hippo customer.
* Earlier, the hippo customer asked Nyarai if she was a Wild and then [[FantasticRacism proceeded to make insulting questions and comments about her intelligence.]] Nyarai is forced to control her anger until the hippo goes too far by trying to grope her.
** The fact that racism exists and that it's so bad they make stereotypes out of the victims.
* Shun being revealed as the manager of the Cyclone Crushers, including Nyarai. And that he has a plan to make her a star, but they will need Cookie to do so.
** The fact that Nyarai has a manager despite already being Cookie's client is a sad thing because the first five chapters presented Muko and Cookie and how they form their Combagal manager bond. Knowing that Nyarai plans to succeed by using Cookie as stepping stone can leave someone feeling very worried for her after seeing how much she grew to care about Muko in a single day.
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'''WARNING:''' All spoilers for the series are unmarked.
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!!Act 1: A Rough Start
[[folder: Part 1: Outsider]]
[[AC: Fight 1: Fenny VS Roora]]
* The BrawlerLock between Fenny and Roora can be scary because both put a GameFace on and Fenny has the scariest one of the two, looking like a snarling feral animal.
* Fenny enduring a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown from Roora. The sheer pain on the artic vixen's face is palpable, especially since Roora uses low blows. This makes her victory all the sweeter.
** Roora giving Fenny a wedgie can count as this as Fenny looks humiliated as she's wounded by the move.
* Fenny's manager [[WhatTheHellHero calling out the referee for not interfering when Roora pulls an illegal move by pulling on Fenny's tail]] and then being powerless from defending her Combagal.
** The scene can hit to those who participate in combat sports as fighters, managers, or trainers can watch the indignity of an opponent committing a foul and get away with it because the referee didn't notice.
[[AC: Chapter 2: Get Ready]]
* The fact that Cookie lives and works in a janitor closet at a soapland can be AdultFear if one worries about their future.
** It hits harder because a worker at the soapland tells Muko that the owner let Cookie stay there two years ago as favor, but Cookie stayed longer than expected. It makes one wonder how badly Cookie is doing if she's that desperate to stay there for so long.
[[AC: Chapter 3: Hard Working Dreamer]]
* The chapter introduces Harry, who will become Muko's first fan. Whey is he on this page? He was fired from his job after working there from years. His family left him. And he can't find another job with the current economy. The situation has him DrivenToSuicide with him going to Cafe Carrots for one last meal. He even has an ImagineSpot of his suicide complete with an ArtShift fish being hanged by a rope! Fortunately, Muko has figured out customer service and she gives him an act of kindness in his hour of need, which causes him to become her first fan when Cookie gives him a poster.
* Kalita and her gang showing up to rob the cafe.
[[AC: Chapter 4: The World Is Your Ring]]
* One of Kalita's men, an anteater, flirts with one of the maids by sticking out his long tongue at her. Even though [[EveryoneHasStandards Kalita puts a stop to it,]] the maid is left in tears.
[[AC: Chapter 5: Roda Kira's Killer Star Kalita]]
* Muko's fight with Kalita is a HopelessBossFight as Kalita gives her a CurbStompBattle that borders on NoHoldsBarredBeatdown that leaves her unconscious.
[[AC: Chapter 6: The Smiling Nighthawk]]
* Nyarai is sexually assaulted by a hippo customer.
* Earlier, the hippo customer asked Nyarai if she was a Wild and then [[FantasticRacism proceeded to make insulting questions and comments about her intelligence.]] Nyarai is forced to control her anger until the hippo goes too far by trying to grope her.
** The fact that racism exists and that it's so bad they make stereotypes out of the victims.
* Shun being revealed as the manager of the Cyclone Crushers, including Nyarai. And that he has a plan to make her a star, but they will need Cookie to do so.
** The fact that Nyarai has a manager despite already being Cookie's client is a sad thing because the first five chapters presented Muko and Cookie and how they form their Combagal manager bond. Knowing that Nyarai plans to succeed by using Cookie as stepping stone can leave someone feeling very worried for her after seeing how much she grew to care about Muko in a single day.
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