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** Even worse, when it bites a human, the poor person [[InvoluntaryShapeshifting transforms into one]], and loses their entire humanity in the process! So far, a Park Manager for [[IncrediblyLamePun Stony Park]] and [[{{Adorkable}} Alyssa]] have been bitten (the manager got better, and Alyssa never fully transformed before coming in contact with a Light Stone).

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** Even worse, when it bites a human, the poor person [[InvoluntaryShapeshifting transforms into one]], and loses their entire humanity in the process! So far, a Park Manager for [[IncrediblyLamePun Stony Park]] Park and [[{{Adorkable}} Alyssa]] have been bitten (the manager got better, and Alyssa never fully transformed before coming in contact with a Light Stone).
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** And what if you're a Pokemon? Sure, you don't transform into a Malonix, but you still lose yourself in the process of becoming a vicious, murderous Pokemon, complete with PurpleEyes and strange markings all over your skin/fur. A lot of wild Pokémon in the forest near Pallet Town got bitten, as well as [[spoiler:TY.]] And then it's revealed that it can be transmitted through mating, [[spoiler:infecting the offspring and putting the mate at risk of death by crystals sprouting within them]].

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** And what if you're a Pokemon? Sure, you don't transform into a Malonix, but you still lose yourself in the process of becoming a vicious, murderous Pokemon, complete with PurpleEyes purple eyes and strange markings all over your skin/fur. A lot of wild Pokémon in the forest near Pallet Town got bitten, as well as [[spoiler:TY.]] And then it's revealed that it can be transmitted through mating, [[spoiler:infecting the offspring and putting the mate at risk of death by crystals sprouting within them]].



* Just what ''does'' the Ultimate Revenge do? It sounds awfully brutal, especially since Team Vortex wants to use it against Cindy and co. And the fact that [[spoiler:"direct descendants" of Cindy (since her DNA sample was the only one Team Vortex had) have to unwittingly light the ten torches that activate the Ultimate Revenge by entering Blue Fire Frenzy]] could only mean more misery for the good guys and any innocent bystanders (for example, [[spoiler:Blaze's BFF]]).

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* Just what ''does'' the Ultimate Revenge do? It sounds awfully brutal, especially since Team Vortex wants to use it against Cindy and co. And the fact that [[spoiler:"direct descendants" of Cindy (since her DNA sample was the only one Team Vortex had) have to unwittingly light the ten torches that activate the Ultimate Revenge by entering Blue Fire Frenzy]] could only mean more misery for the good guys and any innocent bystanders (for example, [[spoiler:Blaze's BFF]]). \n

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* One word: Malonix. To clarify:

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* One word: Malonix. ''Malonix.'' To clarify:



** And what if you're a Pokemon? Sure, you don't transform into a Malonix, but you still lose yourself in the process of becoming a vicious, murderous Pokemon, complete with PurpleEyes and strange markings all over your skin/fur. A lot of wild Pokémon in the forest near Pallet Town got bitten, as well as [[spoiler:TY.]]

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** And what if you're a Pokemon? Sure, you don't transform into a Malonix, but you still lose yourself in the process of becoming a vicious, murderous Pokemon, complete with PurpleEyes and strange markings all over your skin/fur. A lot of wild Pokémon in the forest near Pallet Town got bitten, as well as [[spoiler:TY.]] And then it's revealed that it can be transmitted through mating, [[spoiler:infecting the offspring and putting the mate at risk of death by crystals sprouting within them]].


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* Just what ''does'' the Ultimate Revenge do? It sounds awfully brutal, especially since Team Vortex wants to use it against Cindy and co. And the fact that [[spoiler:"direct descendants" of Cindy (since her DNA sample was the only one Team Vortex had) have to unwittingly light the ten torches that activate the Ultimate Revenge by entering Blue Fire Frenzy]] could only mean more misery for the good guys and any innocent bystanders (for example, [[spoiler:Blaze's BFF]]).
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*** And then, [[spoiler:it seems like Malo!Ty is gradually performing a SplitPersonalityTakeover, and has so far controlled Ty in spurts such as scaring Pelee and Dynamite, mating with Cindy to conceive Keegan and Smoky (and nearly killing her with the Malonix Virus that came with the pregnancy), and clawing Celebi in the face]].


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* It was only mentioned, but the very fact that [[spoiler:Dynamite looked at the red moon, activated his Malonix Virus, and killed his trainer]] is very chilling. Even worse is that [[spoiler:once the red moon set and he found his trainer dead, he went Blue Fire Frenzy to hunt for the murderer... [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone up until he realized HE was the murderer]]]]. His state when we see him next definitely proves it was a brutal BreakTheHaughty moment for him.
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* Copper killing a Malonixed Electabuzz. If [[spoiler:Malo!Ty]] was any indication, you can't just snap the neck and expect them to drop dead; they'd [[MajorInjuryUnderreaction pop it back in place]]. No, you'd have to go into '''[[NoKillLikeOverkill OVERKILL]].''' And that's what Copper did; he completely twisted the head around. ''Repeatedly.''
** And then right after? [[spoiler:The Malonix virus seeped out as an evil spirit, and tried to make Copper its new host. Nutmeg [[TakingTheBullet pushes him out of the way]], and becomes the new host. She switches to Malo!Nutmeg immediately after]].

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** In an early chapter [[spoiler:Cindy used it to attack innocent people.]] She even flamethrowered one guy in the face at point blank!
** [[spoiler:BLAZE'S BLUE FIRE FRENZY]]. It's implied that he actually killed several people.



* The Red Moon. That ''freaking'' Red Moon. The fact that it's red should tip you off that something bad's about to happen.[[spoiler:It activates a Malonix Virus inside a Pokémon, as demonstrated with Ty (during a battle, no less!)]].

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* The Red Blood Moon. That ''freaking'' Red Blood Moon. The fact that it's red should tip you off that something bad's about to happen.[[spoiler:It activates a Malonix Virus inside a Pokémon, as demonstrated with Ty (during a battle, no less!)]].



* [[spoiler:Cindy's third pregnancy.]] While it isn't the [[spoiler:pregnancy]] itself, it's what came with it, [[spoiler:a copy of Ty's Malonix virus attached to gametes from regenerated sex organs]] that not only infects [[spoiler:the offspring]], but Cindy herself. She goes into bouts of murderous insanity that threatened to kill Hailey, possibly Sammy, Ty, and Cinnamon, [[spoiler:as well as slaughtered a bunch of wild Pokémon]].

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* [[spoiler:Cindy's third pregnancy.]] While it isn't the [[spoiler:pregnancy]] itself, it's what came with it, [[spoiler:a copy of Ty's Malonix virus attached to gametes from regenerated sex organs]] that not only infects [[spoiler:the offspring]], but Cindy herself. She goes into bouts of murderous insanity that threatened to kill Hailey, possibly Sammy, Ty, and Cinnamon, [[spoiler:as well as slaughtered a bunch of wild Pokémon]]. Pokémon]].
* "Night of the Red Moon." Oh, goodness, where to begin?
** It begins with ''MindRape.'' All we can say is poor [[spoiler:Ty...]].
** [[spoiler:Once Ty looks at the Blood Moon, he hears nothing but his heartbeat and seems to slip into unconsciousness. However, his body gets up, with Malo!Ty as its host, and he proceeds to punch his opponent hard enough to dent its face. Then he throws his trainer into a wall, and lights the stadium on fire just before breaking out]].
** When the others band together to get him, they walk down an empty, desolate street. It's dusty and silent, with the exception of a pay phone ''with a frantic person on the other end.'' And when they finally find him, he had broken into a butcher shop, and he later comes out to kill the cops that are dispatched.
** [[spoiler:Malo!Ty popping his neck back into place after Jamie ''broke it.'']] You could imagine the [[OhCrap character's faces]] when that happened, especially Jamie's.

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** You cannot kill them, unless you want a Malonix Virus to stay dormant in an infected Pokémon, erupting over certain circumstances (like looking into a Malonix's eyes)!

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** You cannot kill them, unless you want a Malonix Virus to stay dormant in an infected Pokémon, erupting over certain circumstances (like looking into a Malonix's eyes)! And if [[spoiler:Ty]] is any indication, the dark side created by a Malonix virus is its own entity, torturing the minds of the poor victims.


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* [[spoiler:Cindy's third pregnancy.]] While it isn't the [[spoiler:pregnancy]] itself, it's what came with it, [[spoiler:a copy of Ty's Malonix virus attached to gametes from regenerated sex organs]] that not only infects [[spoiler:the offspring]], but Cindy herself. She goes into bouts of murderous insanity that threatened to kill Hailey, possibly Sammy, Ty, and Cinnamon, [[spoiler:as well as slaughtered a bunch of wild Pokémon]].

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* Anonimo's abuse of Cindy. Just think of the abuse that Charmander, Chimchar, and Tepig suffered in the anime, multiply it by about three or maybe even five, combine them, add a whip, and add a FateWorseThanDeath, and you've got Cindy's experience as his Pokémon. Even as a Typhlosion under a new trainer, she still suffers from that early-childhood experience. Doubles as a TearJerker.



* Imagine being chased by an unknown enemy. Imagine dropping your child down a cliff. Imagine being kidnapped right after. That's the story of Jenna, folks. [[spoiler:Though Cindy did survive the plummet]].

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* Imagine being chased by an unknown enemy. Imagine dropping your child down a cliff. Imagine being kidnapped right after. That's the story of Jenna, folks. [[spoiler:Though Cindy did survive the plummet]].plummet]].

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** It was especially horrifying in an actual nightmare that Quinn had: [[spoiler:Cindy chases him, transforming from Cyndaquil to Quilava, and then to Typhlosion, while she's in Blue Fire Frenzy. Quinn woke up when Cindy was giving him a killing blow in the dream]].



** There's still the problem that said experiment ''[[spoiler:made him part Malonix.]]'' Which results in an altered appearance, different colored fire, and [[spoiler:a terrifying SuperpoweredEvilSide that represents his sadistic side, which started manifesting when he was repressing the artificial Malonix instincts]].

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** There's still the problem that said experiment ''[[spoiler:made him part Malonix.]]'' Which results in an altered appearance, different colored fire, and [[spoiler:a terrifying SuperpoweredEvilSide that represents his sadistic side, which started manifesting when he was repressing the artificial Malonix instincts]]. instincts]].
* Imagine being chased by an unknown enemy. Imagine dropping your child down a cliff. Imagine being kidnapped right after. That's the story of Jenna, folks. [[spoiler:Though Cindy did survive the plummet]].

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* The time period in between Anonimo abandoning Cindy [[spoiler:inside her Pokeball while it is buried underground]], and when she winds up with Professor Elm is outright stated to be several months. Keep in mind that Cindy had been starved and severely beaten while recovering from nearly drowning/freezing to death. [[spoiler:A theory utilized in the story is that Pokémon are unable to heal from injuries or die inside a Pokeball,]] which means Cindy had been consigned to a FateWorseThanDeath with no hope of ever being rescued! [[spoiler:She was lucky that a passerby unburied her Pokeball and gave it to Elm, who later managed to release her from her suffering]].

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* The time period in between Anonimo abandoning Cindy [[spoiler:inside her Pokeball while it is buried underground]], and when she winds up with Professor Elm is outright stated to be several months. Keep in mind that Cindy had been starved and severely beaten while recovering from nearly drowning/freezing to death. [[spoiler:A theory utilized in the story is that Pokémon are unable to heal from injuries or die inside a Pokeball,]] which means Cindy had been consigned to a FateWorseThanDeath with no hope of ever being rescued! [[spoiler:She was lucky that a passerby unburied her Pokeball and gave it to Elm, who later managed to release her from her suffering]]. suffering]].
* Three Words: '''[[PunctuatedForEmphasis BLUE. FIRE. FRENZY.]]''' It's ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin, and it is horrifying!
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** [[ItGotWorse It gets worse.]] You cannot kill them, unless you want a Malonix Virus to stay dormant in an infected Pokémon, erupting over certain circumstances (like looking into a Malonix's eyes)!

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** Even worse, when it bites a human, the poor person [[InvoluntaryShapeshifting transforms into one]], and loses their entire humanity in the process! So far, a Park Manager for [[IncrediblyLamePun Stony Park]] and [[Adorkable Alyssa]] have been bitten (the manager got better, and Alyssa never fully transformed before coming in contact with a Light Stone).

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** Even worse, when it bites a human, the poor person [[InvoluntaryShapeshifting transforms into one]], and loses their entire humanity in the process! So far, a Park Manager for [[IncrediblyLamePun Stony Park]] and [[Adorkable [[{{Adorkable}} Alyssa]] have been bitten (the manager got better, and Alyssa never fully transformed before coming in contact with a Light Stone).
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* [[spoiler:Sombra.]] The fact that he's a runaway science experiment who was only interested in ''[[OmnicidalManiac killing people]]'' and actually managed to dismantle entire cities [[KarmaHoudini without getting caught]] is disturbing enough! [[spoiler:However, thanks to Amber, he stops being such a selfish jerk relying purely on instinct (both natural and artificial), and realizes that he's missing friends and family to help him]].

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* [[spoiler:Sombra.]] The fact that he's a runaway science experiment who was only interested in ''[[OmnicidalManiac killing people]]'' and actually managed to dismantle entire cities [[KarmaHoudini without getting caught]] is disturbing enough! [[spoiler:However, thanks to Amber, he stops being such a selfish jerk relying purely on instinct (both natural and artificial), and realizes that he's missing friends and family to help him]].him overcome his gaping flaws]].

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** Even worse, when it bites a human, the poor person [[InvoluntaryShapeshifting transforms into one]], and loses their entire humanity in the process!
** And what if you're a Pokemon? Sure, you don't transform into a Malonix, but you still lose yourself in the process of becoming a vicious, murderous Pokemon, complete with PurpleEyes and strange markings all over your skin/fur.

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** Even worse, when it bites a human, the poor person [[InvoluntaryShapeshifting transforms into one]], and loses their entire humanity in the process!
process! So far, a Park Manager for [[IncrediblyLamePun Stony Park]] and [[Adorkable Alyssa]] have been bitten (the manager got better, and Alyssa never fully transformed before coming in contact with a Light Stone).
** And what if you're a Pokemon? Sure, you don't transform into a Malonix, but you still lose yourself in the process of becoming a vicious, murderous Pokemon, complete with PurpleEyes and strange markings all over your skin/fur. A lot of wild Pokémon in the forest near Pallet Town got bitten, as well as [[spoiler:TY.]]


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** [[ItGotWorse It gets worse.]] You cannot kill them, unless you want a Malonix Virus to stay dormant in an infected Pokémon, erupting over certain circumstances (like looking into a Malonix's eyes)!


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* The Red Moon. That ''freaking'' Red Moon. The fact that it's red should tip you off that something bad's about to happen.[[spoiler:It activates a Malonix Virus inside a Pokémon, as demonstrated with Ty (during a battle, no less!)]].
* [[spoiler:Sombra.]] The fact that he's a runaway science experiment who was only interested in ''[[OmnicidalManiac killing people]]'' and actually managed to dismantle entire cities [[KarmaHoudini without getting caught]] is disturbing enough! [[spoiler:However, thanks to Amber, he stops being such a selfish jerk relying purely on instinct (both natural and artificial), and realizes that he's missing friends and family to help him]].
** There's still the problem that said experiment ''[[spoiler:made him part Malonix.]]'' Which results in an altered appearance, different colored fire, and [[spoiler:a terrifying SuperpoweredEvilSide that represents his sadistic side, which started manifesting when he was repressing the artificial Malonix instincts]].
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* One word: Malonix. To clarify:
** The thing is absolutely bloodthirsty. Though small(it's roughly the size of a pillow), it possesses a screech comparable to a banshee's, BlackEyesOfCrazy, and it's ''teeth'' are icy cold when they sink into your flesh!
** Even worse, when it bites a human, the poor person [[InvoluntaryShapeshifting transforms into one]], and loses their entire humanity in the process!
** And what if you're a Pokemon? Sure, you don't transform into a Malonix, but you still lose yourself in the process of becoming a vicious, murderous Pokemon, complete with PurpleEyes and strange markings all over your skin/fur.
** And lastly, there's an ''entire army'' of them in another dimension. Try not to imagine what'll happen when a portal to that dimension opens...
* The time period in between Anonimo abandoning Cindy [[spoiler:inside her Pokeball while it is buried underground]], and when she winds up with Professor Elm is outright stated to be several months. Keep in mind that Cindy had been starved and severely beaten while recovering from nearly drowning/freezing to death. [[spoiler:A theory utilized in the story is that Pokémon are unable to heal from injuries or die inside a Pokeball,]] which means Cindy had been consigned to a FateWorseThanDeath with no hope of ever being rescued! [[spoiler:She was lucky that a passerby unburied her Pokeball and gave it to Elm, who later managed to release her from her suffering]].
* [[spoiler:The Explosive Blood Serum which Anonimo injected into the gang to blackmail Cindy]] is chilling. Imagine having that stuff inside your body, not knowing when you will [[spoiler:''explode'']]. Also, imagine Cindy's end, knowing that if she makes one wrong move, her friends are ''dead.''

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