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* GodIsNotGood: The God of Light or Heavenly Father is at best morally gray. He [[spoiler: constantly stole things from the Mother or God of Darkness, including her soul, which he uses to create Insiders / Humans. Notably, in his efforts to gain an Outsider's body in order to have a physical vessel, he summoned the Outside that would become Shiva into the castle town, causing a mass curse event and forcing the King to have it quarantined and burned. This became the "hole in the map" and cost thousands of lives.]] For her part, [[spoiler: "Mother" or the god of Darkness was just as much a party to the constant divine theft, stealing the Heavenly Father's body, and more directly having the Black Children try to steal back the soul inside humans or Insiders that was once hers. The fact the Outsiders spread the curse, and none really seem to know how to steal a soul, means it creates a vicious cycle where Insiders are constantly living in terror and on the decline.]]
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* ItsAllMyFault: Shiva blames herself for her aunt and neighbours turning into Outsiders, which in turn made soldiers eradicate the village to stem the curse, because she lied about being touched by an Outsider.
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** Shiva blames herself for her aunt and neighbours turning into Outsiders, which in turn made soldiers eradicate the village to stem the curse, because she lied about being touched by an Outsider.
** Shiva blames herself for her aunt and neighbours turning into Outsiders, which in turn made soldiers eradicate the village to stem the curse, because she lied about being touched by an Outsider.
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* JerkassGods: The God of Light or Heavenly Father is at best morally gray. He [[spoiler:constantly stole things from the Mother or God of Darkness, including her soul, which he uses to create Insiders/Humans. Notably, in his efforts to gain an Outsider's body in order to have a physical vessel, he summoned the Outside that would become Shiva into the castle town, causing a mass curse event and forcing the King to have it quarantined and burned. This became the "hole in the map" and cost thousands of lives]]. For her part, [[spoiler:"Mother" or the god of Darkness was just as much a party to the constant divine theft, stealing the Heavenly Father's body, and more directly having the Black Children try to steal back the soul inside humans or Insiders that was once hers. The fact the Outsiders spread the curse, and none really seem to know how to steal a soul, means it creates a vicious cycle where Insiders are constantly living in terror and on the decline]].
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* BittersweetEnding: The story displays this hard. [[spoiler:Teacher comes to realize that Shiva was created as a result of losing everything he had during his life as a human, and the both of them wish that they never met each other, realizing how each had negatively impacted the other. Despite this, the both comes to terms with the current predicement and still live in harmony, realizing what the true curse may be.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: The story displays this hard. [[spoiler:Teacher comes to realize that Shiva was created as a result of losing everything he had during his life as a human, and the both of them wish that they never met each other, realizing how that each had have negatively impacted the other. Despite this, the both comes they come to terms with the current predicement predicament and still live in harmony, realizing what the true curse may be.harmony.]]
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* CosyCatastrophe: Shiva and Teacher live a comfortable life in a woodland cottage on the "Outside" of safe lands, gathering wood, water, and food from the forest, and occasionally looting items from a nearby recently abandoned village. The world itself is one where there is only one kingdom left, and what safe land remains for the Insiders is slowly shrinking as Outsider contact depopulates outlying villages. However, what places remain on the "Inside" have life go on more or less as normal, albeit carrying both the trauma of lost friends and relatives and paranoia of a spreading plague. [[spoiler: At the end of the manga, despite the king being dead with no presumed heir, the Outsiders note that the Insiders are no longer as agitated, but are now building a new set of walls to keep them out.]]
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* CosyCatastrophe: Shiva and Teacher live a comfortable life in a woodland cottage on the "Outside" of safe lands, gathering wood, water, and food from the forest, and occasionally looting items from a nearby recently abandoned village. The world itself is one where there is only one kingdom left, and what safe land remains for the Insiders is slowly shrinking as Outsider contact depopulates outlying villages. However, what places remain on the "Inside" have life go on more or less as normal, albeit carrying both the trauma of lost friends and relatives loved ones and paranoia of a spreading plague. [[spoiler: At the end of the manga, despite the king being dead with no presumed heir, the Outsiders note that the Insiders are no longer as agitated, but are now building a new set of walls to keep them out.]]
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** Zigzagged with the other Outsiders, in that they don't necessarily mean Shiva or the Insiders harm but have a cryptic agenda that comes across as sketchy.
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** Zigzagged with the other Outsiders, in that Outsiders; they don't necessarily mean Shiva or the Insiders harm but have a cryptic agenda that comes across as sketchy.
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* FateWorseThanDeath: How the Insiders view the curse of the Outside. Outsiders can't be killed and don't die conventionally. This denies people the final dignity to death and bars their soul from heaven. So while the infected retain human shape, [[BetterToDieThanBeKilled they must be killed.]]
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* FateWorseThanDeath: How the Insiders view the curse of the Outside. Outsiders can't be killed and don't die conventionally. This denies people the final dignity to of death and bars their soul from heaven. So while the infected retain human shape, [[BetterToDieThanBeKilled they must be killed.]]
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* UngratefulBastard: Auntie, with a touch of {{Hypocrite}}. [[spoiler: After she turns into an Outsider through touching Shiva, she follows behind dejectedly after Teacher comes to rescue Shiva. After making sure Shiva is fine, he explains the situation to her and allows her to stay with them. Auntie for he part blames him for the hardships in Shiva's life, and says she'd be better off if he left. Later on she tries to convince Shiva to run away from Teacher with her. This is especially heart wrenching and enraging since she both abandoned Shiva alone in the wild, and the only reason Shiva is alive after said abandoning is Teacher's protection.]] She does get better though after Shiva talks sense into her.
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* UngratefulBastard: Auntie, with a touch of {{Hypocrite}}. [[spoiler: After she turns into an Outsider through touching Shiva, she follows behind dejectedly after Teacher comes to rescue Shiva. After making sure Shiva is fine, he explains the situation to her and allows her to stay with them. Auntie for he her part blames him for the hardships in Shiva's life, and says she'd be better off if he left. Later on she tries to convince Shiva to run away from Teacher with her. This is especially heart wrenching heartwrenching and enraging since she both abandoned Shiva alone in the wild, and the only reason Shiva is alive after said abandoning is Teacher's protection.]] She does get gets better though after Shiva talks sense into her.
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* YinYangClash: What starts all of the conflicts in this story. The Deities of Light and Darkness get in a fight, and take pieces of each other in order to create Insiders and Outsiders. [[spoiler: At the end, both Teacher and Shiva come to realize that the only way to cure the curse is to let both worlds coexist, despite the pain the both brought to one another.]]
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* YinYangClash: What starts all of the conflicts in this story. The Deities of Light and Darkness get in a fight, and take pieces of each other in order to create Insiders and Outsiders. [[spoiler: At the end, both Teacher and Shiva come to realize that the only way to cure the curse is to let both worlds coexist, despite the pain the they both brought to one each another.]]
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''The Girl From The Other Side: Siúil, a Rún'' (''Totsukuni no Shoujo'', "Foreign Girl") is a DarkFantasy manga by Creator/{{Nagabe}}. It follows Shiva, a little girl who lives in the forest with her Teacher. The forest itself is dark and looming, inhabited only by the demon-esque creatures known as Outsiders. Every human alive -- except Shiva -- lives on the other side of a vast wall intended to protect against the Outsiders' "disease", which corrupts any human they touch into Outsiders. Teacher himself is one of these Outsiders, but fortunately, Teacher is careful to never touch Shiva or allow other Outsiders to.
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''The Girl From The Other Side: Siúil, a Rún'' (''Totsukuni (known in Japan as ''Totsukuni no Shoujo'', Shoujo'' or "Foreign Girl") is a DarkFantasy manga by Creator/{{Nagabe}}. It follows Shiva, a little girl who lives in the forest with her Teacher. The forest itself is dark and looming, inhabited only by the demon-esque creatures known as Outsiders. Every human alive -- except Shiva -- lives on the other side of a vast wall intended to protect against the Outsiders' "disease", which corrupts any human they touch into Outsiders. Teacher himself is one of these Outsiders, but fortunately, Teacher is careful to never touch Shiva or allow other Outsiders to.
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See also ''Manga/TheAncientMagusBride'' which also about a girl and an animal-skull headed mystical being.
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See also ''Manga/TheAncientMagusBride'' which is also about a girl and an animal-skull headed mystical being.
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''The Girl From The Other Side: Siúil, a Rún'' (''Totsukuni no Shoujo'', "Foreign Girl") is a DarkFantasy manga by Creator/{{Nagabe}}. It follows Shiva, a little girl who lives in the forest with her Teacher. The forest itself is dark and looming, inhabited only by the demon-esque creatures known as Outsiders. Every human alive -- except Shiva -- lives on the other side of a vast wall intended to protect against the Outsiders' "disease", which corrupts any human they touch into Outsiders. Fortunately, Teacher is careful to never touch Shiva, or allow other Outsiders to.
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''The Girl From The Other Side: Siúil, a Rún'' (''Totsukuni no Shoujo'', "Foreign Girl") is a DarkFantasy manga by Creator/{{Nagabe}}. It follows Shiva, a little girl who lives in the forest with her Teacher. The forest itself is dark and looming, inhabited only by the demon-esque creatures known as Outsiders. Every human alive -- except Shiva -- lives on the other side of a vast wall intended to protect against the Outsiders' "disease", which corrupts any human they touch into Outsiders. Fortunately, Teacher himself is one of these Outsiders, but fortunately, Teacher is careful to never touch Shiva, Shiva or allow other Outsiders to.
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* AnAxToGrind: Whenever trouble comes, Teacher tends to reach for the [[ImprovisedWeaponUser nearest wood ax.]] His reliance on it trips him up later on when not only is it not nearly enough to deal with men in full armor, but one soldier uses the end of it to chop off his foot.
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* GodIsNotGood: The God of Light or Heavenly Father is at best morally gray. He [[spoiler: constantly stole things from the Mother or God of Darkness, including her soul, which he uses to create Insiders / Humans. Notably, in his efforts to gain an Outsider's body in order to have a physical vessel, he summoned the Outside that would become Shiva into the castle town, causing a mass curse event and forcing the King to have it quarantined and burned. This became the "hole in the map" and cost thousands of lives.]]
** For her part, [[spoiler: "Mother" or the god of Darkness was just as much a party to the constant divine theft, stealing the Heavenly Father's body, and more directly having the Black Children try to steal back the soul inside humans or Insiders that was once hers. The fact the Outsiders spread the curse, and none really seem to know how to steal a soul, means it creates a vicious cycle where Insiders are constantly living in terror and on the decline.]]
** For her part, [[spoiler: "Mother" or the god of Darkness was just as much a party to the constant divine theft, stealing the Heavenly Father's body, and more directly having the Black Children try to steal back the soul inside humans or Insiders that was once hers. The fact the Outsiders spread the curse, and none really seem to know how to steal a soul, means it creates a vicious cycle where Insiders are constantly living in terror and on the decline.]]
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* GodIsNotGood: The God of Light or Heavenly Father is at best morally gray. He [[spoiler: constantly stole things from the Mother or God of Darkness, including her soul, which he uses to create Insiders / Humans. Notably, in his efforts to gain an Outsider's body in order to have a physical vessel, he summoned the Outside that would become Shiva into the castle town, causing a mass curse event and forcing the King to have it quarantined and burned. This became the "hole in the map" and cost thousands of lives.]]
**]] For her part, [[spoiler: "Mother" or the god of Darkness was just as much a party to the constant divine theft, stealing the Heavenly Father's body, and more directly having the Black Children try to steal back the soul inside humans or Insiders that was once hers. The fact the Outsiders spread the curse, and none really seem to know how to steal a soul, means it creates a vicious cycle where Insiders are constantly living in terror and on the decline.]]
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-->"We're merely soldiers. Our job is to protect people. That's all we can do."
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-->"We're merely soldiers. Our job is to protect people. That's all we can do."
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* ImprovisedWeaponUser: Whenever trouble comes, Teacher tends to reach for the nearest wood ax.
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* AnthropomorphicPersonification: [[spoiler:The Outsider that took Teacher's soul reveals that Shiva is merely an embodiment of his soul and heart, taking the form of his dead baby girl, and in the meantime the Outsider has served as the soul's "vessel".]]
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* AnthropomorphicPersonification: [[spoiler:The Outsider that took Teacher's soul reveals that Shiva is merely an embodiment of his soul and heart, taking the form of his dead baby girl, daughter, and in the meantime the Outsider has served as the soul's "vessel".]]
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* AnthropomorphicPersonification: [[spoiler:The Outsider that took Teacher's soul reveals that Shiva is merely an embodiment of his soul and heart, and in the meantime the Outsider has served as her "vessel".]]
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* AnthropomorphicPersonification: [[spoiler:The Outsider that took Teacher's soul reveals that Shiva is merely an embodiment of his soul and heart, taking the form of his dead baby girl, and in the meantime the Outsider has served as her the soul's "vessel".]]
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* CosyCatastrophe: The world is one where there is only one kingdom left, and what safe land remains for the Insiders is slowly shrinking as Outsider contact depopulates outlying villages. However, what places remain on the "Inside" have life go on more or less as normal, albeit carrying both the trauma of lost friends and relatives and paranoia of a spreading plague. [[spoiler: At the end of the manga, despite the king being dead with no presumed heir, the Outsiders note that the Insiders are no longer as agitated, but are now building a new set of walls to keep them out.]]
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* CosyCatastrophe: Shiva and Teacher live a comfortable life in a woodland cottage on the "Outside" of safe lands, gathering wood, water, and food from the forest, and occasionally looting items from a nearby recently abandoned village. The world itself is one where there is only one kingdom left, and what safe land remains for the Insiders is slowly shrinking as Outsider contact depopulates outlying villages. However, what places remain on the "Inside" have life go on more or less as normal, albeit carrying both the trauma of lost friends and relatives and paranoia of a spreading plague. [[spoiler: At the end of the manga, despite the king being dead with no presumed heir, the Outsiders note that the Insiders are no longer as agitated, but are now building a new set of walls to keep them out.]]
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* CosyCatastrophe: The world is one where there is only one kingdom safe, and what safe land remains for the Insiders is slowly shrinking as Outsider contact depopulates outlying villages. However, what places remain on the "Inside" have life go on more or less as normal, albeit carrying both the trauma of lost friends and relatives and paranoia of a spreading plague. [[spoiler: At the end of the manga, despite the king being dead with no presumed heir, the Outsiders note that the Insiders are no longer as agitated, but are now building a new set of walls to keep them out.]]
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* CosyCatastrophe: The world is one where there is only one kingdom safe, left, and what safe land remains for the Insiders is slowly shrinking as Outsider contact depopulates outlying villages. However, what places remain on the "Inside" have life go on more or less as normal, albeit carrying both the trauma of lost friends and relatives and paranoia of a spreading plague. [[spoiler: At the end of the manga, despite the king being dead with no presumed heir, the Outsiders note that the Insiders are no longer as agitated, but are now building a new set of walls to keep them out.]]
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* CosyCatastrophe: The world is one where there is only one kingdom safe, and what safe land remains for the Insiders is slowly shrinking as Outsider contact depopulates outlying villages. However, what places remain on the "Inside" have life go on more or less as normal, albeit carrying both the trauma of lost friends and relatives and paranoia of a spreading plague. [[spoiler: At the end of the manga, despite the king being dead with no presumed heir, the Outsiders note that the Insiders are no longer as agitated, but are now building a new set of walls to keep them out.]]
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* TyphoidMary: After being touched by an Outsider, Shiva becomes this, while remaining unaffected herself. Or so everyone thought.
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* TyphoidMary: After being touched by an Outsider, Shiva becomes this, while remaining unaffected herself. [[spoiler: Or so everyone thought.thought. In reality, she was ''always'' a carrier due to being a human soul in an outsider body, and since said body was incomplete slowly succumbed to the curse herself.]]
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* MysteriousWaif: Since Shiva was adopted by Auntie, no one really knows where she came from or what happened for her to be left Outside. Whether she's truly human or not is also debatable. Whatever she is, both the Insiders and Outsiders want her for their own ends.
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* MysteriousWaif: In Universe. Since Shiva was adopted by Auntie, no one really knows where she came from or what happened for her to be left Outside. Whether she's truly human or not is also debatable. Whatever she is, both the Insiders and Outsiders want her for their own ends.
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* YinYangClash: What starts all of the conflicts in this story. The Deities of Light and Darkness get in a fight, and take pieces of each other in order to create Insiders and Outsiders. [[spoiler: Both Teacher and Shiva come to realize that the only way to cure the curse is to let each other coexist, despite the pain the both brought to one another.]]
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* YinYangClash: What starts all of the conflicts in this story. The Deities of Light and Darkness get in a fight, and take pieces of each other in order to create Insiders and Outsiders. [[spoiler: Both At the end, both Teacher and Shiva come to realize that the only way to cure the curse is to let each other both worlds coexist, despite the pain the both brought to one another.]]
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* YinYangClash: What starts all of the conflicts in this story. The Deities of Light and Darkness get in a fight, and take pieces of each other in order to create Insiders and Outsiders.
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* YinYangClash: What starts all of the conflicts in this story. The Deities of Light and Darkness get in a fight, and take pieces of each other in order to create Insiders and Outsiders. [[spoiler: Both Teacher and Shiva come to realize that the only way to cure the curse is to let each other coexist, despite the pain the both brought to one another.]]
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* YinYangClash: What starts all of the conflicts in this story. The Gods of Light and Darkness get in a fight, and take pieces of each other in order to create Insiders and Outsiders.
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* YinYangClash: What starts all of the conflicts in this story. The Gods Deities of Light and Darkness get in a fight, and take pieces of each other in order to create Insiders and Outsiders.
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* BittersweetEnding: The story displays this hard. [[spoiler:Teacher comes to realize that Shiva was created as a result of losing everything he had during his life as a human, and wishes that he never met her as a result. Despite this, Teacher comes to terms with the current predicement, realizing what the true curse may be.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: The story displays this hard. [[spoiler:Teacher comes to realize that Shiva was created as a result of losing everything he had during his life as a human, and wishes the both of them wish that he they never met her as a result. each other, realizing how each had negatively impacted the other. Despite this, Teacher the both comes to terms with the current predicement, predicement and still live in harmony, realizing what the true curse may be.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: The story displays this hard. [[spoiler:Teacher comes to realize that Shiva was created as a result of losing everything he had, and wishes that he never met her as a result. Despite this, Teacher comes to terms with the current predicement, realizing what the true curse may be.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: The story displays this hard. [[spoiler:Teacher comes to realize that Shiva was created as a result of losing everything he had, had during his life as a human, and wishes that he never met her as a result. Despite this, Teacher comes to terms with the current predicement, realizing what the true curse may be.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: The story displays this hard. [[spoiler:Teacher comes to realize that Shiva was created as a result of losing everything he had, and wishes that he never met her as a result. Despite this, Teacher comes to terms with the current predicement, realizing what the true curse may be.]]