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* ''Manga/SuperwomenInLove'' has villains that, for the most part, are utterly harmless. One is a [[GirlsLove yuri]] fetishist willing to interrupt her own allies when she sees it, one is an {{otaku}}, and one is functionally [[CloudcuckoolandersMinder the otaku's caretaker]]. Only two villains are legitimately threatening: the co-protagonist who [[DefectingForLove defected for love]] in the first chapter, and X, [[BigBad the leader of the organization]]. Unlike the others, X is cunning and ruthless, constantly having the upper hand, willing to get her hands dirty, and very willing to play the long game. Even when she loses, she appears to take it completely in stride and is more amused by it than upset. Even when she just shows up to [[NoMrBondIExpectYouToDine take the main character on a dinner date]] to learn more about her and has no ulterior motives, she's significantly more threatening than the other three villains while fighting.
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* ''Manga/SuperwomenInLove'' has villains that, for the most part, are utterly harmless. One is a [[GirlsLove yuri]] fetishist [[YuriFan yuri fetishist]] willing to interrupt her own allies when she sees it, one is an {{otaku}}, and one is functionally [[CloudcuckoolandersMinder the otaku's caretaker]]. Only two villains are legitimately threatening: the co-protagonist who [[DefectingForLove defected for love]] in the first chapter, and X, [[BigBad the leader of the organization]]. Unlike the others, X is cunning and ruthless, constantly having the upper hand, willing to get her hands dirty, and very willing to play the long game. Even when she loses, she appears to take it completely in stride and is more amused by it than upset. Even when she just shows up to [[NoMrBondIExpectYouToDine take the main character on a dinner date]] to learn more about her and has no ulterior motives, she's significantly more threatening than the other three villains while fighting.
