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* MagneticHero: Captain Kirk and Darth Nemesis. The former is pretty much the only reason why the Federation keeps fighting, whereas the latter is charismatic enough to make the Romulans like him despite him having conquered them and destroyed a continent on Romulus with a superlaser, and later to persuade [[spoiler: a formerly Imperial sector fleet to oppose the Empire itself.]]
* MeaningfulRename: [[spoiler:The ''Emperor's Will'', the flagship of Nemesis's fleet, is renamed the ''Imperator's Will'' to signify independence from TheEmpire and loyalty to the Imperator of the Imperium. More importantly, Nemesis's sector fleet transforming from just a part of the evil [[TheEmpire Galactic Empire]] to the independent (but still evil) "New Empire" and then to the genuinely benevolent "Imperium".]]
* MeaningfulRename: [[spoiler:The ''Emperor's Will'', the flagship of Nemesis's fleet, is renamed the ''Imperator's Will'' to signify independence from TheEmpire and loyalty to the Imperator of the Imperium. More importantly, Nemesis's sector fleet transforming from just a part of the evil [[TheEmpire Galactic Empire]] to the independent (but still evil) "New Empire" and then to the genuinely benevolent "Imperium".]]
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* MagneticHero: Captain Kirk and Darth Nemesis. The former is pretty much the only reason why the Federation keeps fighting, whereas the latter is charismatic enough to make the Romulans like him despite him having conquered them and destroyed a continent on Romulus with a superlaser, and later to persuade [[spoiler: a formerly Imperial sector fleet to oppose the Empire [[TheEmpire Galactic Empire]] itself.]]
* MeaningfulRename:[[spoiler:The The ''Emperor's Will'', the superlaser-bearing flagship of Nemesis's fleet, is renamed the ''Imperator's Will'' to signify independence from TheEmpire and loyalty to the Imperator of the Imperium. More importantly, Nemesis's sector fleet transforming from just a part of the evil [[TheEmpire Galactic Empire]] to the independent (but still evil) "New Empire" and then to the genuinely benevolent "Imperium".]]
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* VillainBall: [[spoiler: Darkstar's enslaving collars clearly aren't very well-designed.]]]
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* VillainBall: [[spoiler: Darkstar's enslaving collars clearly aren't very well-designed.]]]]]
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* VillainTeamUp: What happens at first when [[spoiler:Reinforcements from the Galactic Empire, led by Thrawn and Darth Vader, arrive to back up Darth Nemesis.]] It soon dissolves into EnemyCivilWar.
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* VillainTeamUp: What happens at first when [[spoiler:Reinforcements [[spoiler:reinforcements from [[TheEmpire the Galactic Empire, Empire]], led by Thrawn and Darth Vader, arrive to back up Darth Nemesis.]] It soon dissolves into EnemyCivilWar.
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Shortly after the events of ''TheEmpireStrikesBack'', an Imperial sector fleet under the command of a Sith Lord named Darth Nemesis is transported to the Star Trek galaxy of the late 24th century. It turns out that they arrived in the middle of Borg space, and that they are not only in a different galaxy, but far in the future.
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Shortly after the events of ''TheEmpireStrikesBack'', an Imperial sector fleet under the command of a Sith Lord named Darth Nemesis is transported to the Star Trek ''StarTrek'' galaxy of the late 24th century. It turns out that they arrived in the middle of Borg space, and that they are not only in a different galaxy, but far in the future.
* CruelAndUnusualDeath: Poor Admiral Janeway is trapped in an endless, infinite time-loop where she betrays her crew to their deaths in order to save the universe from utter destruction, and then the BigBad easily negates her efforts and tells her how useless her act is—[[FateWorseThanDeath again, and again, and again]]. All because the author doesn't like ''StarTrekVoyager''.
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** The Battle of Romulus starts with an advantage to the Federation remnant, attacking the fairly weak forces defending Romulus. Then the whole story is completely changed by the arrival of [[spoiler:a fresh, new Imperial sector fleet led by TheChessmaster Grand Admiral Thrawn, ''doubling'' the number of Imperial ships in the Milky Way.]] Then Nemesis's sector fleet arrives. The Federation remnant enters the battle with 600 ships, and leaves it with ''nineteen''.
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** The Battle of Romulus starts with an advantage to the Federation remnant, attacking the fairly weak forces defending Romulus. Then the whole story is completely changed by the arrival of [[spoiler:a fresh, new Imperial sector fleet led by TheChessmaster Grand Admiral Thrawn, ''doubling'' the number of Imperial ships in the Milky Way.''StarTrek'' galaxy.]] Then Nemesis's sector fleet arrives. The Federation remnant enters the battle with 600 ships, and leaves it with ''nineteen''.
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* TheEmpire: [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Obviously]], the Galactic Empire from the Star Wars galaxy. Darth Nemesis at first founds a very similar organisation; later he renames it the New Empire, while being under the impression that he is forever out of touch with the original Galactic Empire. The New Empire, unsurprisingly, is fairly similar to the original Empire. When [[spoiler:reinforcements from the Empire arrive in the StarTrek galaxy]], Nemesis declares the New Empire to be his own Imperium, which is a decisive factor in…
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* TheEmpire: [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Obviously]], the Galactic Empire from the Star Wars ''StarWars'' galaxy. Darth Nemesis at first founds a very similar organisation; later he renames it the New Empire, while being under the impression that he is forever out of touch with the original Galactic Empire. The New Empire, unsurprisingly, is fairly similar to the original Empire. When [[spoiler:reinforcements from the Empire arrive in the StarTrek ''StarTrek'' galaxy]], Nemesis declares the New Empire to be his own Imperium, which is a decisive factor in…
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* EvilCounterpart: There are two beings in the story who can be truly described as godlike: Q, who is largely benevolent, and [[spoiler:Gary Mitchell]], [[OmnicidalManiac who wants to destroy the entirety of existence]].
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* EvilCounterpart: There are two beings in the story who can be truly described as godlike: Q, who is largely benevolent, and [[spoiler:Gary Mitchell]], [[OmnicidalManiac who wants to destroy the entirety of existence]].universe]].
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* ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: TheEmpire, TheEmperor, TheFederation, [[EvilOverlord Dark Lords]]… yeah, there's a lot of this.
* FascistButInefficient: The Shadowfleet, a secret force devoted to protecting TheFederation, is billed as this powerful hidden menace, but their [[MoralEventHorizon brutal destruction of Remus]] only gets the EvilOverlord Darth Nemesis to destroy the [[ProudWarriorRaceGuy Klingon Empire]] (thus weakening the Federation remnant's greatest potential allies) and inspires the Romulans to view Nemesis as their protector and avenger.
* FascistButInefficient: The Shadowfleet, a secret force devoted to protecting TheFederation, is billed as this powerful hidden menace, but their [[MoralEventHorizon brutal destruction of Remus]] only gets the EvilOverlord Darth Nemesis to destroy the [[ProudWarriorRaceGuy Klingon Empire]] (thus weakening the Federation remnant's greatest potential allies) and inspires the Romulans to view Nemesis as their protector and avenger.
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* ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: TheEmpire, TheEmperor, TheFederation, [[EvilOverlord Dark Lords]]… Lords]], TheSyndicate… yeah, there's a lot of this.
* FascistButInefficient: The Shadowfleet, a secret force devoted to protecting TheFederation, is billed as this powerful hidden menace, but their [[MoralEventHorizon brutal destruction of Remus]] only gets the EvilOverlord Darth Nemesis to destroy the [[ProudWarriorRaceGuyKlingon Empire]] Klingons]] (thus weakening the Federation remnant's greatest potential allies) and inspires the Romulans to view Nemesis as their protector and avenger.
* FascistButInefficient: The Shadowfleet, a secret force devoted to protecting TheFederation, is billed as this powerful hidden menace, but their [[MoralEventHorizon brutal destruction of Remus]] only gets the EvilOverlord Darth Nemesis to destroy the [[ProudWarriorRaceGuy
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* ForgottenSuperweapon: The ''Excalibur'', a war machine from one of the ancient Sith Empires that fought TheRepublic in the ''Star Wars'' universe. Its technological level is at least equal to that of the Empire. Without it, the Federation remnant would no longer exist. But it's also a bit of a subversion: despite saving the Federation fleet, the Battle of Romulus demonstrates that it isn't nearly as powerful as Kirk needs it to be.
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* ForgottenSuperweapon: The ''Excalibur'', a war machine from one of the ancient Sith Empires that fought TheRepublic in the ''Star Wars'' universe.''StarWars'' galaxy. Its technological level is at least equal to that of the Empire. Without it, the Federation remnant would no longer exist. But it's also a bit of a subversion: despite saving the Federation fleet, the Battle of Romulus demonstrates that it isn't nearly as powerful as Kirk needs it to be.
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* GreyAndGreyMorality: Between the Federation remnant and the Imperium. There are very sympathetic characters on both sides: the crew of the USS Enterprise (Kirk, Spock, McCoy, Scotty et cetera), Princess Leia and Rogue Squadron on the side of the Federation remnant, and Captain Tarsi, Gideon Kittaine and [[spoiler:Luke Skywalker]] on the side of the Imperium.
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* GreyAndGreyMorality: Between the Federation remnant and the Imperium. There are very sympathetic characters on both sides: the crew of the USS Enterprise (Kirk, Spock, McCoy, Scotty Spock et cetera), Princess Leia and Rogue Squadron on the side of the Federation remnant, and Captain Tarsi, Belladonna, Gideon Kittaine and [[spoiler:Luke Skywalker]] on the side of the Imperium.
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: Naturally. It includes Star Trek: The Next Generation, the crew of the USS Enterprise from Star Trek: The Original Series, and most of the characters from the six ''Star Wars'' films. This is a really, really big fanfic.
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: Naturally. It includes Star Trek: The Next Generation, ''StarTrekTheNextGeneration'', the crew of the USS Enterprise from Star Trek: The Original Series, ''StarTrekTheOriginalSeries'', and most of the characters from the six ''Star Wars'' ''StarWars'' films. This is a really, really big fanfic.
* TakeThat: The villain Darkstar, who gets a humiliating death at the hands of Darth Vader, is named after a member of the ''StarWars'' versus ''StarTrek'' debate whom the author doesn't like.
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* VillainBall: [[spoiler: Darkstar's enslaving collars clearly aren't very well-designed.]]
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* VillainBall: [[spoiler: Darkstar's enslaving collars clearly aren't very well-designed.]]]]]
* VillainDecay: The Borg, in comparison to TheEmpire. To be fair, they're no weaker than they were in ''StarTrekVoyager'', but that's a far cry from ''StarTrekTheNextGeneration'', where they were practically unstoppable.
* VillainDecay: The Borg, in comparison to TheEmpire. To be fair, they're no weaker than they were in ''StarTrekVoyager'', but that's a far cry from ''StarTrekTheNextGeneration'', where they were practically unstoppable.
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* TheWorfEffect: The author ''loves'' this. To establish how powerful Nemesis's Imperial fleet is, it single-handedly destroys hundreds upon hundreds of Borg cubes—remember, the Borg, the nigh-unstoppable cyborg menace—as soon as it enters the Milky Way. Later, it takes over the Romulan Star Empire, almost exterminates the Klingons, annexes the Federation, and crushes the Dominion in the only battle between the two. Furthermore, Nemesis is scared by [[TheEmperor Emperor]] [[EvilOverlord Palpatine]]. And ''then'' Palpatine himself is merely a tool of [[spoiler:Gary Mitchell]].
** The Shadowfleet, in a way. A powerful fleet of cloaked warships ready to use the most underhanded methods... cannot confront the Empire directly [[spoiler: and are wiped out as soon as discovered by them.]]
** Also, remember when the ''Emperor's Will'', the 19km-long Super Star Destroyer with a superlaser capable of melting continents, was the most powerful war machine in the Milky Way galaxy? Yeah, well, then we meet the [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Death Star]], protected from supernatural tampering by TheEmperor himself. It exists in canon, but still, it's pretty clear that, as far as superweapons go, TheEmperor wins hands down.
** The Shadowfleet, in a way. A powerful fleet of cloaked warships ready to use the most underhanded methods... cannot confront the Empire directly [[spoiler: and are wiped out as soon as discovered by them.]]
** Also, remember when the ''Emperor's Will'', the 19km-long Super Star Destroyer with a superlaser capable of melting continents, was the most powerful war machine in the Milky Way galaxy? Yeah, well, then we meet the [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Death Star]], protected from supernatural tampering by TheEmperor himself. It exists in canon, but still, it's pretty clear that, as far as superweapons go, TheEmperor wins hands down.
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* TheWorfEffect: The author ''loves'' this. To establish how powerful Nemesis's Imperial fleet is, it single-handedly destroys hundreds upon hundreds of Borg cubes—remember, the Borg, the nigh-unstoppable cyborg menace—as soon as it enters the Milky Way.''StarTrek'' galaxy. Later, it takes over the Romulan Star Empire, almost exterminates the Klingons, annexes the Federation, and crushes the Dominion in the only battle between the two. Furthermore, Nemesis is scared by [[TheEmperor Emperor]] [[EvilOverlord Palpatine]]. And ''then'' Palpatine himself is merely a tool of [[spoiler:Gary Mitchell]].
** The Shadowfleet, in a way. A powerful fleet of cloaked warships ready to use the most underhandedmethods... methods… cannot confront the Empire directly [[spoiler: and are wiped out as soon as discovered by them.]]
** Also, remember when the ''Emperor's Will'', the 19km-long Super Star Destroyer with a superlaser capable of melting continents, was the most powerful war machine in the Milky Way galaxy? Yeah, well, then we meet the [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Death Star]], protected from supernatural tampering by TheEmperor himself. It exists in canon, but still, it's pretty clear that, as far as superweapons go, TheEmperor wins hands down.]]
** The Shadowfleet, in a way. A powerful fleet of cloaked warships ready to use the most underhanded
** Also, remember when the ''Emperor's Will'', the 19km-long Super Star Destroyer with a superlaser capable of melting continents, was the most powerful war machine in the Milky Way galaxy? Yeah, well, then we meet the [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Death Star]], protected from supernatural tampering by TheEmperor himself. It exists in canon, but still, it's pretty clear that, as far as superweapons go, TheEmperor wins hands down.
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* BloodKnight: Captain Tarsi. When Darth Nemesis says that Kirk is a legend to the Federation and that legends "are notoriously hard to kill":
--> “I’ve never killed a legend before,” he stated with a hungry grin.
--> “I’ve never killed a legend before,” he stated with a hungry grin.
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* CompleteMonster: Several characters could likely be seen as this, including Lord Hieronymus Darkstar, the Borg Queen, Emperor Palpatine and [[spoiler:Gary Mitchell]].
* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Many, but Kirk's rallying of Starfleet [[spoiler:after the Battle of Sector 001]] is perhaps the most magnificent.
** [[spoiler:Luke Skywalker's escape from and destruction of the Orion Syndicate]] also scores pretty high on the list.
* CrowningMomentOfFunny: RobotBuddy R2-D2 (a.k.a. Artoo), to a guard at Darkstar's palace.
--> “And where might you be going?” he asked tersely.
--> Artoo whistled and beeped a long explanation that involved the guard, his mother, a randy Gammorean and duct tape.
* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Many, but Kirk's rallying of Starfleet [[spoiler:after the Battle of Sector 001]] is perhaps the most magnificent.
** [[spoiler:Luke Skywalker's escape from and destruction of the Orion Syndicate]] also scores pretty high on the list.
* CrowningMomentOfFunny: RobotBuddy R2-D2 (a.k.a. Artoo), to a guard at Darkstar's palace.
--> “And where might you be going?” he asked tersely.
--> Artoo whistled and beeped a long explanation that involved the guard, his mother, a randy Gammorean and duct tape.
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* EvilIsSexy: Mara thinks this of Darth Nemesis [[spoiler:and is therefore disappointed when he is redeemed]].
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* MagnificentBastard: Khan Noonien Singh pulls this off to a T. He even fools [[spoiler:Grand Admiral Thrawn]]!
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* MoralEventHorizon: Arguably, the Federation Shadowfleet's destruction of Remus. Darth Nemesis's retaliatory destruction of the Klingon homeworld Qo'noS, though still evil, is more acceptable because Nemesis thought that the Klingons were responsible for what happened to Remus.
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* Forgotten Superweapon: The ''Excalibur'', a war machine from one of the ancient Sith Empires that fought TheRepublic in the ''Star Wars'' universe. Its technological level is at least equal to that of the Empire. Without it, the Federation remnant would no longer exist. But it's also a bit of a subversion: despite saving the Federation fleet, the Battle of Romulus demonstrates that it isn't nearly as powerful as Kirk needs it to be.
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* Forgotten Superweapon: ForgottenSuperweapon: The ''Excalibur'', a war machine from one of the ancient Sith Empires that fought TheRepublic in the ''Star Wars'' universe. Its technological level is at least equal to that of the Empire. Without it, the Federation remnant would no longer exist. But it's also a bit of a subversion: despite saving the Federation fleet, the Battle of Romulus demonstrates that it isn't nearly as powerful as Kirk needs it to be.
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* BeautyEqualsGoodness: For a certain value of "goodness". When the hulking, black-armoured cyborg Darth Vader appears, the Romulan admiral thinks that Vader is just a thug, not a proper Sith Lord like the young, handsome Darth Nemesis.
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* BeautyEqualsGoodness: For a certain value of "goodness". When the hulking, black-armoured cyborg Darth Vader appears, the Romulan admiral T'Vor thinks that Vader is just a thug, not a proper Sith Lord like the young, handsome Darth Nemesis.Nemesis. Given that Sith Lord means EvilOverlord and that Vader fits that trope much better than Nemesis does, T'Vor's assessment is unintentionally funny.
* BlackAndWhiteMorality: Subverted. TheEmpire has launched an unprovoked invasion of TheFederation; I wonder who's the good guys? At first it's obvious, but later, [[MoralityKitchenSink well…]]
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* DefensiveFeintTrap: Luring the enemy right into a ColonyDrop—on a ''Star Destroyer''. [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome ''And it works.'']]
* TheDon: Lord Darkstar of the Orion Syndicate.
* DragonWithAnAgenda: Darth Vader, to Grand Admiral Thrawn.
* TheEmpire: Obviously, the Galactic Empire from the Star Wars galaxy. Darth Nemesis at first founds a very similar organisation; later he renames it the New Empire, while being under the impression that he is forever out of touch with the original Galactic Empire. When [[spoiler:reinforcements from the Empire arrive]], Nemesis declares it to be the Imperium, which is a decisive factor in…
* EnemyCivilWar: The Imperium which Darth Nemesis establishes in the Milky Way galaxy clashes with [[spoiler:the Imperial (i.e. part of the actual Galactic Empire) reinforcements led by Grand Admiral Thrawn]]. It's kicked off in a pretty spectacular fashion, with a huge space-battle between a Star Destroyer of Nemesis's Imperium and [[spoiler:an actual Imperial Star Destroyer]]. On the other hand, there's a serious case of GreyAndGreyMorality between the Imperium and [[LaResistance Kirk's Federation remnant]].
* TheDon: Lord Darkstar of the Orion Syndicate.
* DragonWithAnAgenda: Darth Vader, to Grand Admiral Thrawn.
* TheEmpire: Obviously, the Galactic Empire from the Star Wars galaxy. Darth Nemesis at first founds a very similar organisation; later he renames it the New Empire, while being under the impression that he is forever out of touch with the original Galactic Empire. When [[spoiler:reinforcements from the Empire arrive]], Nemesis declares it to be the Imperium, which is a decisive factor in…
* EnemyCivilWar: The Imperium which Darth Nemesis establishes in the Milky Way galaxy clashes with [[spoiler:the Imperial (i.e. part of the actual Galactic Empire) reinforcements led by Grand Admiral Thrawn]]. It's kicked off in a pretty spectacular fashion, with a huge space-battle between a Star Destroyer of Nemesis's Imperium and [[spoiler:an actual Imperial Star Destroyer]]. On the other hand, there's a serious case of GreyAndGreyMorality between the Imperium and [[LaResistance Kirk's Federation remnant]].
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* DefensiveFeintTrap: Luring the enemy right into a ColonyDrop—on a ''Star Destroyer''. [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome ''And an ''[[CoolStarship Imperial Star Destroyer]]''. ''[[CrowningMomentOfAwesome And it works.'']]
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* TheDon:Lord Darkstar Hieronymus Darkstar, the crime lord of the Orion Syndicate.
* DragonWithAnAgenda: Darth Vader, to Grand AdmiralThrawn.
Thrawn—or vice versa. It's unclear which of them is BigBad and which is TheDragon.
* TheEmpire:Obviously, [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Obviously]], the Galactic Empire from the Star Wars galaxy. Darth Nemesis at first founds a very similar organisation; later he renames it the New Empire, while being under the impression that he is forever out of touch with the original Galactic Empire. The New Empire, unsurprisingly, is fairly similar to the original Empire. When [[spoiler:reinforcements from the Empire arrive]], arrive in the StarTrek galaxy]], Nemesis declares it the New Empire to be the his own Imperium, which is a decisive factor in…
* EnemyCivilWar: The Imperiumwhich Darth Nemesis establishes in the Milky Way galaxy clashes with [[spoiler:the reinforcements from the actual Galactic Empire, led by Grand Admiral Thrawn]]. It's kicked off in a pretty spectacular fashion, with a huge space-battle between a Star Destroyer of Nemesis's Imperium and [[spoiler:an actual Imperial (i.Star Destroyer, i.e. part of the actual Galactic Empire) reinforcements led by Grand Admiral Thrawn]]. It's kicked off in a pretty spectacular fashion, with a huge space-battle between a Star Destroyer of Nemesis's Imperium and [[spoiler:an actual Imperial Star Destroyer]].from TheEmpire]]. On the other hand, there's a serious case of GreyAndGreyMorality between the Imperium and [[LaResistance Kirk's Federation remnant]].
* TheDon:
* DragonWithAnAgenda: Darth Vader, to Grand Admiral
* TheEmpire:
* EnemyCivilWar: The Imperium
* EvilOverlord: ''Loads.'' We've got Lord Darth Nemesis, the Borg Queen, Lord Darth Vader, Lord Hieronymus Darkstar, Grand Admiral Thrawn, Emperor Palpatine and, most of all, [[spoiler:Gary Mitchell]]. By the Battle of Andor, almost all of them are still alive.
* ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: TheEmpire, TheEmperor, TheFederation, [[EvilOverlord Dark Lords]]… yeah, there's a lot of this.
* ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: TheEmpire, TheEmperor, TheFederation, [[EvilOverlord Dark Lords]]… yeah, there's a lot of this.
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* TheFederation: The United Federation of Planets. When it faces off against Darth Nemesis's offensive, it's almost immediately overrun, but its remnants are still putting up a fight.
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* AFatherToHisMen: The Imperial Admiral Gideon Kittaine, at least to his officers. He thinks of them as his family, as they him.
* TheFederation: [[CaptainObvious The United Federation ofPlanets. Planets.]] When it faces off against Darth Nemesis's offensive, it's almost immediately overrun, but its remnants are still putting up a fight.
* TheFederation: [[CaptainObvious The United Federation of
* GloriousLeader: Captain Jellico seems to think that Kirk is this.
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* GoodIsImpotent: [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome Spectacularly]] averted by [[spoiler:the redeemed Luke Skywalker]].
* TheGoodKing: [[spoiler:Imperator Luke Skywalker of [[TheKingdom the Imperium]]]] is shaping up to be one of these.
* TheGoodKing: [[spoiler:Imperator Luke Skywalker of [[TheKingdom the Imperium]]]] is shaping up to be one of these.
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* GoodIsImpotent: [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome Spectacularly]] averted by [[spoiler:the redeemed Luke Skywalker]].
Skywalker]]. On the other hand, the pretty-much pure white [[TheFederation United Federation of Planets]] plays this trope to a T, when its 150 planets are confronted by the technologically superior, million-planet-strong [[TheEmpire Galactic Empire]].
* TheGoodKing: [[spoiler:Imperator LukeSkywalker of [[TheKingdom the Imperium]]]] Skywalker]] is shaping up to be one of these.these. Lord Darth Vader wants to be, but the whole [[EvilOverlord Sith Lord]] thing keeps getting in the way.
* TheGoodKing: [[spoiler:Imperator Luke
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* IdiotBall: Kirk attacks Romulus (effectively Nemesis's capital), engaging in open battle with Nemesis. Given that he only has 600 ships left and that Nemesis's fleet has used its overwhelming technological advantage to crush them easily whenever they engaged it, this seems to be a ''ridiculously stupid'' idea which probably exists purely so that Kirk goes off on his own out of despair, which is needed for the plot.
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* IdiotBall: Kirk attacks Romulus (effectively Nemesis's (Nemesis's capital), engaging in open battle with Nemesis. Given that he only has 600 ships left and that Nemesis's fleet has used its overwhelming technological advantage to crush them easily whenever they engaged it, this seems to be a ''ridiculously stupid'' idea which probably exists happen purely so that Kirk goes off on his own out of despair, which is needed for the plot.
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* InsistentTerminology: The rightfully appointed Grand Admiral Thrawn (well, rightfully appointed by the EvilOverlord, but still) ''will not'' acknowledge Admiral Gideon Kittaine, whom the renegade Darth Nemesis promotes to Grand Admiral, by his new title. When he does, it's a sign to Kittaine that Thrawn will try to kill him. A nice ContinuityNod here, since in canon Thrawn never referred to the New Republic with its proper name, just "the Rebels", indicating (as with Kittaine) that he thought it illegitimate.
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* PragmaticVillainy: Darth Nemesis is this trope [[spoiler:before his full-on FaceHeelTurn]].
* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: Its new Imperator likes to think of the Imperium as this. Whether we agree with him is… [[GreyAndGreyMorality debatable]].
* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: Its new Imperator likes to think of the Imperium as this. Whether we agree with him is… [[GreyAndGreyMorality debatable]].
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* IdiotBall: Kirk attacks Romulus (effectively Nemesis's capital), engaging in open battle with Nemesis. Given that he only has 600 ships left and that Nemesis's fleet has used its overwhelming technological advantage to crush them easily whenever they engaged it, this seems to be a ''ridiculously stupid'' idea which probably exists purely so that Kirk goes off on his own out of despai, which is needed for the plot.
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* IdiotBall: Kirk attacks Romulus (effectively Nemesis's capital), engaging in open battle with Nemesis. Given that he only has 600 ships left and that Nemesis's fleet has used its overwhelming technological advantage to crush them easily whenever they engaged it, this seems to be a ''ridiculously stupid'' idea which probably exists purely so that Kirk goes off on his own out of despai, despair, which is needed for the plot.
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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: Lord Darkstar, when all his plans seem to be going perfectly:
--> ''"If I didn't know any better I would say this was being written by someone as we speak."''
--> ''"If I didn't know any better I would say this was being written by someone as we speak."''
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* MagicCountdown: The beginning of chapter 73.
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** The Battle of Romulus starts with an advantage to the Federation remnant, attacking the fairly weak forces defending Romulus. Then the whole story is completely changed by the arrival of [[spoiler:a fresh, new Imperial sector fleet led by TheChessmaster Grand Admiral Thrawn, ''doubling'' the number of Imperial ships in the Milky Way.]] Then Nemesis's sector fleet arrives. The Federation remnant enters the battle with 600 ships, and leaves it with 19.
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** The Battle of Romulus starts with an advantage to the Federation remnant, attacking the fairly weak forces defending Romulus. Then the whole story is completely changed by the arrival of [[spoiler:a fresh, new Imperial sector fleet led by TheChessmaster Grand Admiral Thrawn, ''doubling'' the number of Imperial ships in the Milky Way.]] Then Nemesis's sector fleet arrives. The Federation remnant enters the battle with 600 ships, and leaves it with 19.''nineteen''.
* HeroicSacrifice: This turns out to be the only way for [[spoiler:Charles Evans]] to kill [[spoiler:the resurrected Darth Maul]].
* MagnificentBastard: Khan Noonien Singh pulls this off to a T. He even fools [[spoiler:Grand Admiral Thrawn]]!
* OneSteveLimit: Averted. Rulek Parr seems to be a common Jem'Hadar name.
* RuleOfCool: Pretty much the only reason for [[spoiler:Darth Maul's resurrection.]]
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* SmugSnake: Lord Hieronymus Darkstar isn't nearly as tough as he thinks he is. Khan has something of this characteristic when he confronts Darth Vader.
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* SmugSnake: Lord Hieronymus Darkstar isn't nearly as tough as he thinks he is. Khan also has something of this characteristic when he confronts Lord Darth Vader.Vader, the TropeNamer for "YouHaveFailedMe", but Khan averts this at other times.
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* CompleteMonster: Several characters could likely be seen as this, including Lord Darkstar, the Borg Queen, Emperor Palpatine and [[spoiler:Gary Mitchell]].
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* CompleteMonster: Several characters could likely be seen as this, including Lord Hieronymus Darkstar, the Borg Queen, Emperor Palpatine and [[spoiler:Gary Mitchell]].
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* HeelFaceTurn: Most importantly, [[spoiler:Luke Skywalker. Also, his Imperial fleet turns from just another group of Palpatine's minions to a new, independent Imperium which is a genuinely positive force, even clashing with [[TheEmpire the Galactic Empire]].]]
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* HeelFaceTurn: Most importantly, [[spoiler:Luke Skywalker. Also, his Imperial fleet turns from just another group of Palpatine's minions to a new, independent Imperium which is a genuinely positive force, even clashing with [[TheEmpire the Galactic Empire]].]]
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* IronicEcho: The Borg when they first encounter Nemesis's fleet, and Nemesis when his fleet [[spoiler:destroys Unimatrix 001, the heart of the Borg Collective.]]
--> “We ARE THE BORG, YOUR TECHONOLOGICAL AND BIOLOGICAL DISTINCTIVENESS WILL BE ADDED TO OUR OWN. LOWER YOUR SHIELDS AND PREPARE TO BE ASSIMILATED. RESISTANCE IS FUTILE.”
--> “We ARE THE BORG, YOUR TECHONOLOGICAL AND BIOLOGICAL DISTINCTIVENESS WILL BE ADDED TO OUR OWN. LOWER YOUR SHIELDS AND PREPARE TO BE ASSIMILATED. RESISTANCE IS FUTILE.”
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* IronicEcho: The voice of the Borg Collective when they it first encounter encounters Nemesis's fleet, and Nemesis Nemesis's response when his fleet [[spoiler:destroys Unimatrix 001, the heart of the Borg Collective.]]
-->“We “WE ARE THE BORG, YOUR TECHONOLOGICAL AND BIOLOGICAL DISTINCTIVENESS WILL BE ADDED TO OUR OWN. LOWER YOUR SHIELDS AND PREPARE TO BE ASSIMILATED. RESISTANCE IS FUTILE.”
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* MagneticHero: Captain Kirk and Darth Nemesis. The former is pretty much the only reason why the Federation keeps fighting, whereas the latter is charismatic enough to [[spoiler:get a formerly Imperial fleet to oppose the Empire itself.]]
* MeaningfulRename: [[spoiler:The ''Emperor's Will'', the flagship of Nemesis's fleet, is renamed the ''Imperator's Will'' to signify independence from TheEmpire and loyalty to the Imperator of the Imperium. More importantly, the Milky Way Imperials' territory being the Empire then the New Empire then the Imperium.]]
* MeaningfulRename: [[spoiler:The ''Emperor's Will'', the flagship of Nemesis's fleet, is renamed the ''Imperator's Will'' to signify independence from TheEmpire and loyalty to the Imperator of the Imperium. More importantly, the Milky Way Imperials' territory being the Empire then the New Empire then the Imperium.]]
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* MagneticHero: Captain Kirk and Darth Nemesis. The former is pretty much the only reason why the Federation keeps fighting, whereas the latter is charismatic enough to [[spoiler:get make the Romulans like him despite him having conquered them and destroyed a continent on Romulus with a superlaser, and later to persuade [[spoiler: a formerly Imperial sector fleet to oppose the Empire itself.]]
* MeaningfulRename: [[spoiler:The ''Emperor's Will'', the flagship of Nemesis's fleet, is renamed the ''Imperator's Will'' to signify independence from TheEmpire and loyalty to the Imperator of the Imperium. More importantly, Nemesis's sector fleet transforming from just a part of theMilky Way Imperials' territory being evil [[TheEmpire Galactic Empire]] to the Empire independent (but still evil) "New Empire" and then to the New Empire then the Imperium.genuinely benevolent "Imperium".]]
* MeaningfulRename: [[spoiler:The ''Emperor's Will'', the flagship of Nemesis's fleet, is renamed the ''Imperator's Will'' to signify independence from TheEmpire and loyalty to the Imperator of the Imperium. More importantly, Nemesis's sector fleet transforming from just a part of the
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Artoo whistled and beeped a long explanation that involved the guard, his mother, a randy Gammorean and duct tape.
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--> “And where might you be going?” he asked tersely.
Artoo whistled and beeped a long explanation that involved the guard, his mother, a randy Gammorean and duct tape.
--> “And where might you be going?” he asked tersely.
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* GambitPileup: [[http://bbs.stardestroyer.net/viewtopic.php?p=2643554#p2643554 Here is a list of the sides]].
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* BeautyEqualsGoodness: For a certain vavlue of "goodness". When the hulking, black-armoured cyborg Darth Vader appears, the Romulan admiral thinks that Vader isn't a proper Sith Lord next to the young, handsome Darth Nemesis.
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* BeautyEqualsGoodness: For a certain vavlue value of "goodness". When the hulking, black-armoured cyborg Darth Vader appears, the Romulan admiral thinks that Vader isn't is just a thug, not a proper Sith Lord next to like the young, handsome Darth Nemesis.
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* EvilIsSexy: Mara thinks this of Darth Nemesis [[spoiler:and is therefore disappointed when he is redeemed]].
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[[spoiler:Darth Nemesis is eventually revealed to be a fallen Luke Skywalker, who instead of jumping as in the canon timeline, joined Darth Vader at Bespin.]] The Imperial fleet sets out to find a way back to their galaxy, securing their position and gathering information by attacking the Romulans and the Federation: or at least, it starts that way; when they discover that they can't get home, they conquer for conquest's sake. Meanwhile, [[TheCaptain Captain]] [[TheKirk James T. Kirk]] (largely TheHero) and [[Nakama his crew]] find themselves in the 24th century as well, and end up rallying the Federation and its allies against [[TheEmpire the Galactic Empire]]. In the background, the nigh-omnipotent Q plays a game of chess with a mysterious silver-eyed adversary, using pieces that represent the various forces involved. All of this takes place against the backdrop of an impending universal apocalypse, brought on by the Federation's abuse of time travel.
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[[spoiler:Darth Nemesis is eventually revealed to be a fallen Luke Skywalker, who instead of jumping as in the canon timeline, joined Darth Vader at Bespin.]] The Imperial fleet sets out to find a way back to their galaxy, securing their position and gathering information by attacking the Romulans and the Federation: or at least, it starts that way; when they discover that they can't get home, they conquer for conquest's sake. Meanwhile, [[TheCaptain Captain]] [[TheKirk James T. Kirk]] (largely TheHero) and [[Nakama his crew]] crew find themselves in the 24th century as well, and end up rallying the Federation and its allies against [[TheEmpire the Galactic Empire]]. In the background, the nigh-omnipotent Q plays a game of chess with a mysterious silver-eyed adversary, using pieces that represent the various forces involved. All of this takes place against the backdrop of an impending universal apocalypse, brought on by the Federation's abuse of time travel.
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Shortly after the events of ''TheEmpireStrikesBack'', an Imperial fleet under the command of a Sith Lord named Darth Nemesis is transported to the Star Trek Galaxy of the late 24th century. It turns out that they arrived in the middle of Borg space, and that they are not only in a different galaxy, but far in the future.
[[spoiler:Darth Nemesis is eventually revealed to be a fallen Luke Skywalker, who instead of jumping as in the canon timeline, joined Darth Vader at Bespin. They set out to find a way back to their galaxy, securing their position and gathering information by attacking the Romulans and the Federation. Meanwhile, Captain James T. Kirk and his crew find themselves in the 24th century as well, and end up rallying the Federation and its allies against the Imperial forces. In the background, the nigh-omnipotent Q plays a game of chess with a mysterious silver-eyed adversary, using pieces that represent the various forces involved. All of this takes place against the backdrop of an impending universal apocalypse, brought on by the Federation's abuse of time travel]].
[[spoiler:Darth Nemesis is eventually revealed to be a fallen Luke Skywalker, who instead of jumping as in the canon timeline, joined Darth Vader at Bespin. They set out to find a way back to their galaxy, securing their position and gathering information by attacking the Romulans and the Federation. Meanwhile, Captain James T. Kirk and his crew find themselves in the 24th century as well, and end up rallying the Federation and its allies against the Imperial forces. In the background, the nigh-omnipotent Q plays a game of chess with a mysterious silver-eyed adversary, using pieces that represent the various forces involved. All of this takes place against the backdrop of an impending universal apocalypse, brought on by the Federation's abuse of time travel]].
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Shortly after the events of ''TheEmpireStrikesBack'', an Imperial sector fleet under the command of a Sith Lord named Darth Nemesis is transported to the Star Trek Galaxy galaxy of the late 24th century. It turns out that they arrived in the middle of Borg space, and that they are not only in a different galaxy, but far in the future.
[[spoiler:Darth Nemesis is eventually revealed to be a fallen Luke Skywalker, who instead of jumping as in the canon timeline, joined Darth Vader at Bespin. They set ]] The Imperial fleet sets out to find a way back to their galaxy, securing their position and gathering information by attacking the Romulans and the Federation. Federation: or at least, it starts that way; when they discover that they can't get home, they conquer for conquest's sake. Meanwhile, Captain [[TheCaptain Captain]] [[TheKirk James T. Kirk Kirk]] (largely TheHero) and [[Nakama his crew crew]] find themselves in the 24th century as well, and end up rallying the Federation and its allies against [[TheEmpire the Imperial forces.Galactic Empire]]. In the background, the nigh-omnipotent Q plays a game of chess with a mysterious silver-eyed adversary, using pieces that represent the various forces involved. All of this takes place against the backdrop of an impending universal apocalypse, brought on by the Federation's abuse of time travel]].travel.
[[spoiler:Darth Nemesis is eventually revealed to be a fallen Luke Skywalker, who instead of jumping as in the canon timeline, joined Darth Vader at Bespin.
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* TheGoodKing: [[spoiler:Imperator Luke Skywalker of the Imperium]] is shaping up to be one of these.
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* TheGoodKing: [[spoiler:Imperator Luke Skywalker of [[TheKingdom the Imperium]] Imperium]]]] is shaping up to be one of these.
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* HeelFaceTurn: Most importantly, [[spoiler:Luke Skywalker. Also, his Imperial fleet turns from just another group of Palpatine's minions to a new, independent Imperium which is a genuinely positive force, even clashing with the Galactic Empire.]]
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* HeelFaceTurn: Most importantly, [[spoiler:Luke Skywalker. Also, his Imperial fleet turns from just another group of Palpatine's minions to a new, independent Imperium which is a genuinely positive force, even clashing with [[TheEmpire the Galactic Empire.Empire]].]]
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Many, but Kirk's rallying of Starfleet [[spoiler:after the Battle of Sector 001]] is perhaps the most magnificent.
** [[spoiler:Luke Skywalker's escape from and destruction of the Orion Syndicate]] also scores pretty high on the list.
** [[spoiler:Luke Skywalker's escape from and destruction of the Orion Syndicate]] also scores pretty high on the list.
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Many, but Kirk's rallying of Starfleet [[spoiler:after the Battle of Sector 001]] is perhaps the most magnificent.
** [[spoiler:Luke Skywalker's escape from and destruction of the Orion Syndicate]] also scores pretty high on the list.
** [[spoiler:Luke Skywalker's escape from and destruction of the Orion Syndicate]] also scores pretty high on the list.
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** [[spoiler:Luke Skywalker's escape from
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* ImprovisedWeapon: a lot of the Starfleet (all that remains) is fitted with additional weapons. Also, see DefensiveFeintTrap, above.
* IronicEcho: The Borg when they first encounter Nemesis's fleet, and Nemesis when his fleet destroys Unimatrix 001, the heart of the Borg Collective.
* IronicEcho: The Borg when they first encounter Nemesis's fleet, and Nemesis when his fleet destroys Unimatrix 001, the heart of the Borg Collective.
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* IdiotBall: Kirk attacks Romulus (effectively Nemesis's capital), engaging in open battle with Nemesis. Given that he only has 600 ships left and that Nemesis's fleet has used its overwhelming technological advantage to crush them easily whenever they engaged it, this seems to be a ''ridiculously stupid'' idea which probably exists purely so that Kirk goes off on his own out of despai, which is needed for the plot.
* ImprovisedWeapon:a A lot of the Starfleet (all that remains) is fitted with additional weapons. Also, see DefensiveFeintTrap, above.
* IronicEcho: The Borg when they first encounter Nemesis's fleet, and Nemesis when his fleetdestroys [[spoiler:destroys Unimatrix 001, the heart of the Borg Collective.]]
* ImprovisedWeapon:
* IronicEcho: The Borg when they first encounter Nemesis's fleet, and Nemesis when his fleet
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* OhCrap: Kirk, when [[spoiler:a new, entire, fresh Imperial sector fleet]] arrives during the Battle of Romulus—and again during the same battle, when Nemesis reinforces them, cutting off their escape.
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* OhCrap: Kirk, when [[spoiler:a new, entire, fresh Imperial sector fleet]] arrives during the Battle of Romulus—and again during the same battle, when Nemesis reinforces them, cutting off their the Federation remnant's escape.
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* CurbStompBattle: The Sith Lord Darth Nemesis versus the greatest hundred Klingon warriors. Also, [[spoiler: Luke versus the cybernetically enhanced Dum and Dee, during the escape from Darkstar's palace.]]
** On a larger scale, Imperial technology—a hyperdrive that can travel across a whole galaxy within days rather than decades like the warp drive, hypermatter reactors powerful enough to keep hyperdrive running, and turbolasers and proton torpedoes which easily overpower their enemies's weapons, to name but a few—means that Nemesis's takeover of the entire Alpha Quadrant proceeds without much difficulty.
** On a larger scale, Imperial technology—a hyperdrive that can travel across a whole galaxy within days rather than decades like the warp drive, hypermatter reactors powerful enough to keep hyperdrive running, and turbolasers and proton torpedoes which easily overpower their enemies's weapons, to name but a few—means that Nemesis's takeover of the entire Alpha Quadrant proceeds without much difficulty.
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* CurbStompBattle: The Galactic Empire versus the Borg, who aren't used to a hyperdrive that can travel across a whole galaxy within days rather than decades, hypermatter reactors powerful enough to keep hyperdrive running, and the sort of weapon strength that you'd expect from such reactors. Assimilation doesn't go as planned.
** On a smaller scale, the Sith Lord Darth Nemesis versus the greatest hundred Klingon warriors. Also, [[spoiler: Luke versus the cybernetically enhanced Dum and Dee, during the escape from Darkstar's palace.]]
** On a larger scale, Imperial technology—a hyperdrive that can travel across a whole galaxy within days rather than decades like the warp drive, hypermatter reactors powerful enough to keep hyperdrive running, and turbolasers and proton torpedoes which easily overpower their enemies's weapons, to name but a few—means that Nemesis's takeover of the entire Alpha Quadrant proceeds without much difficulty.]]
** On a smaller scale, the Sith Lord Darth Nemesis versus the greatest hundred Klingon warriors. Also, [[spoiler: Luke versus the cybernetically enhanced Dum and Dee, during the escape from Darkstar's palace.
** On a larger scale, Imperial technology—a hyperdrive that can travel across a whole galaxy within days rather than decades like the warp drive, hypermatter reactors powerful enough to keep hyperdrive running, and turbolasers and proton torpedoes which easily overpower their enemies's weapons, to name but a few—means that Nemesis's takeover of the entire Alpha Quadrant proceeds without much difficulty.
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* Forgotten Superweapon: The ''Excalibur'', a war machine from one of the ancient Sith Empires that fought TheRepublic in the ''Star Wars'' universe. Without it, the Federation remnant would no longer exist.
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* FemmeFatale: Mara Jade. We're brutally reminded of this when she [[spoiler:tries to murder Leia.]]
* Forgotten Superweapon: The ''Excalibur'', a war machine from one of the ancient Sith Empires that fought TheRepublic in the ''Star Wars'' universe. Its technological level is at least equal to that of the Empire. Without it, the Federation remnant would no longer exist. But it's also a bit of a subversion: despite saving the Federation fleet, the Battle of Romulus demonstrates that it isn't nearly as powerful as Kirk needs it to be.
* Forgotten Superweapon: The ''Excalibur'', a war machine from one of the ancient Sith Empires that fought TheRepublic in the ''Star Wars'' universe. Its technological level is at least equal to that of the Empire. Without it, the Federation remnant would no longer exist. But it's also a bit of a subversion: despite saving the Federation fleet, the Battle of Romulus demonstrates that it isn't nearly as powerful as Kirk needs it to be.
* IronicEcho: The Borg when they first encounter Nemesis's fleet, and Nemesis when his fleet destroys Unimatrix 001, the heart of the Borg Collective.
--> “We ARE THE BORG, YOUR TECHONOLOGICAL AND BIOLOGICAL DISTINCTIVENESS WILL BE ADDED TO OUR OWN. LOWER YOUR SHIELDS AND PREPARE TO BE ASSIMILATED. RESISTANCE IS FUTILE.”
--> “We are the Galactic Empire, lower your shields and prepare to be destroyed, your biological and technological distinctiveness is about to end. Resistance is futile.”
--> “We ARE THE BORG, YOUR TECHONOLOGICAL AND BIOLOGICAL DISTINCTIVENESS WILL BE ADDED TO OUR OWN. LOWER YOUR SHIELDS AND PREPARE TO BE ASSIMILATED. RESISTANCE IS FUTILE.”
--> “We are the Galactic Empire, lower your shields and prepare to be destroyed, your biological and technological distinctiveness is about to end. Resistance is futile.”
* OhCrap: Kirk, when [[spoiler:a new, entire, fresh Imperial sector fleet]] arrives during the Battle of Romulus—and again during the same battle, when Nemesis reinforces them, cutting off their escape.
* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: Nemesis uses prolonged turbolaser bombardment to ''melt the crust'' of Qo'noS, the Klingon homeworld. This is particularly cruel, since the Klingons (unknown to Nemesis) didn't actually do what he was attacking them for: they were framed by [[spoiler:the Federation's Shadowfleet]].
* UtopiaJustifiesTheMeans: Darth Vader and Darth Nemesis. To an extent, the Shadowfleet too, but they're much less effective.
* UtopiaJustifiesTheMeans: Darth Vader and Darth Nemesis. To an extent, the Shadowfleet too, but they're much less effective.
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* TheWorfEffect: To establish how powerful Nemesis's Imperial fleet is, it single-handedly destroys hundreds upon hundreds of Borg cubes—remember, the Borg, the nigh-unstoppable cyborg menace—as soon as it enters the Milky Way. Later, it takes over the Romulan Star Empire, almost exterminates the Klingons, annexes the Federation, and crushes the Dominion in the only battle between the two. Then [[TheChessmaster Grand Admiral Thrawn]] arrives, and Nemesis is terrified.
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* TheWorfEffect: The author ''loves'' this. To establish how powerful Nemesis's Imperial fleet is, it single-handedly destroys hundreds upon hundreds of Borg cubes—remember, the Borg, the nigh-unstoppable cyborg menace—as soon as it enters the Milky Way. Later, it takes over the Romulan Star Empire, almost exterminates the Klingons, annexes the Federation, and crushes the Dominion in the only battle between the two. Then [[TheChessmaster Grand Admiral Thrawn]] arrives, and Furthermore, Nemesis is terrified.scared by [[TheEmperor Emperor]] [[EvilOverlord Palpatine]]. And ''then'' Palpatine himself is merely a tool of [[spoiler:Gary Mitchell]].
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** Also, remember when the ''Emperor's Will'', the 19km-long Super Star Destroyer with a superlaser capable of melting continents, was the most powerful war machine in the galaxy? Yeah, well, then we meet the [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Death Star]].
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** Also, remember when the ''Emperor's Will'', the 19km-long Super Star Destroyer with a superlaser capable of melting continents, was the most powerful war machine in the Milky Way galaxy? Yeah, well, then we meet the [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Death Star]].Star]], protected from supernatural tampering by TheEmperor himself. It exists in canon, but still, it's pretty clear that, as far as superweapons go, TheEmperor wins hands down.
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* BiggerBad: Despite being the most powerful villains in the story, Palpatine and [[spoiler:Gary Mitchell]] have virtually no direct impact on the plot. A more plausible candidate for BigBad is Grand Admiral Thrawn.
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* BiggerBad: Despite being the most powerful villains in the story, Palpatine and [[spoiler:Gary Mitchell]] have virtually no direct impact on the plot.plot (yet!). A more plausible candidate for BigBad is Grand Admiral Thrawn.
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** The Shadowfleet, in a way. A powerful fleet of cloaked warships ready to use the most underhanded methods... cannot confront the Empire directly [[spoiler: and are wiped out as soon as discovered by them.]]
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* RousingSpeech: Many, many, many—especially by James Kirk, Darth Nemesis and [[spoiler:the redeemed Luke Skywalker]].
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* RousingSpeech: Many, many, many—especially by James Kirk, Darth Nemesis and [[spoiler:the redeemed Luke Skywalker]].
* TheChessmaster: [[spoiler:Gary Mitchell]], Khan Noonien Singh and Grand Admiral Thrawn.
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* CurbStompBattle: Darth Nemesis versus the greatest hundred Klingon warriors. Also, [[spoiler: Luke versus the cybernetically enhanced Dum and Dee, during the escape from Darkstar's palace.]]
** On a larger scale, Imperial technology means that Nemesis's takeover of the entire Alpha Quadrant proceeds without much difficulty.
** On a larger scale, Imperial technology means that Nemesis's takeover of the entire Alpha Quadrant proceeds without much difficulty.
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* CurbStompBattle: The Sith Lord Darth Nemesis versus the greatest hundred Klingon warriors. Also, [[spoiler: Luke versus the cybernetically enhanced Dum and Dee, during the escape from Darkstar's palace.]]
** On a larger scale, Imperialtechnology means technology—a hyperdrive that can travel across a whole galaxy within days rather than decades like the warp drive, hypermatter reactors powerful enough to keep hyperdrive running, and turbolasers and proton torpedoes which easily overpower their enemies's weapons, to name but a few—means that Nemesis's takeover of the entire Alpha Quadrant proceeds without much difficulty.
** On a larger scale, Imperial
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* DefensiveFeintTrap: Luring the enemy right into a ColonyDrop.ColonyDrop—on a ''Star Destroyer''. [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome ''And it works.'']]
* TheFederation: The United Federation of Planets. When it faces off against Darth Nemesis's offensive, it's almost immediately overrun, but its remnants are still putting up a fight.
* Forgotten Superweapon: The ''Excalibur'', a war machine from one of the ancient Sith Empires that fought TheRepublic in the ''Star Wars'' universe. Without it, the Federation remnant would no longer exist.
* Forgotten Superweapon: The ''Excalibur'', a war machine from one of the ancient Sith Empires that fought TheRepublic in the ''Star Wars'' universe. Without it, the Federation remnant would no longer exist.
* TheGoodKing: [[spoiler:Imperator Luke Skywalker of the Imperium]] is shaping up to be one of these.
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: Naturally. It includes Star Trek: The Next Generation, the crew of the USS Enterprise from Star Trek: The Original Series, and most of the characters from the six Star Wars films. This is a really, really big fanfic.
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: Naturally. It includes Star Trek: The Next Generation, the crew of the USS Enterprise from Star Trek: The Original Series, and most of the characters from the six Star Wars ''Star Wars'' films. This is a really, really big fanfic.
* MeaningfulRename: [[spoiler:The ''Emperor's Will'', the flagship of Nemesis's fleet, is renamed the ''Imperator's Will'' to signify independence from TheEmpire and loyalty to the Imperator of the Imperium. More importantly, the Milky Way Imperials' territory being the Empire then the New Empire then the Imperium.]]
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* TheChessmaster: [[spoiler:Gary Mitchell]], Khan Noonien Singh and Grand Admiral Thrawn.
* TheStarscream: Khan Noonien Singh, to Grand Admiral Thrawn.
* VestigialEmpire: Andor, the last Federation planet to suffer an Imperial attack. The outcome is still in doubt.
* VestigialEmpire: Andor, the last Federation planet to suffer an Imperial attack. The outcome is still in doubt.
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* TheWorfEffect: To establish how powerful Nemesis's Imperial fleet is, it single-handedly destroys hundreds upon hundreds of Borg cubes—remember, the Borg, the nigh-unstoppable cyborg menace—as soon as it enters the Milky Way. Later, it takes over the Romulan Star Empire, almost exterminates the Klingons, annexes the Federation, and crushes the Dominion in the only battle between the two.
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* TheWorfEffect: To establish how powerful Nemesis's Imperial fleet is, it single-handedly destroys hundreds upon hundreds of Borg cubes—remember, the Borg, the nigh-unstoppable cyborg menace—as soon as it enters the Milky Way. Later, it takes over the Romulan Star Empire, almost exterminates the Klingons, annexes the Federation, and crushes the Dominion in the only battle between the two. Then [[TheChessmaster Grand Admiral Thrawn]] arrives, and Nemesis is terrified.
** Also, remember when the ''Emperor's Will'', the 19km-long Super Star Destroyer with a superlaser capable of melting continents, was the most powerful war machine in the galaxy? Yeah, well, then we meet the [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Death Star]].
** Also, remember when the ''Emperor's Will'', the 19km-long Super Star Destroyer with a superlaser capable of melting continents, was the most powerful war machine in the galaxy? Yeah, well, then we meet the [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Death Star]].
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* MoralityKitchenSink: [[TheEmpire The Galactic Empire]], the Borg Queen and the Orion Syndicate are unambiguously evil, although even they are surpassed by [[spoiler:Gary Mitchell]]. Then there's the Imperium, which is a steadily lightening shade of grey. There's also the very morally ambiguous Shadowfleet, a secret army which uses very questionable means to defend TheFederation. On the white end of the scale, there's the Klingons and the Federation remnant, but [[GoodIsImpotent their only real success is staying alive]].
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* MoralityKitchenSink: [[TheEmpire The Galactic Empire]], the Borg Queen and the Orion Syndicate are unambiguously evil, although even they are surpassed by [[spoiler:Gary Mitchell]]. Then there's the Imperium, which is a steadily lightening shade of grey. There's also the very morally ambiguous Shadowfleet, a secret army which uses very questionable means to defend TheFederation. On There's also the Imperium, which is a steadily lightening shade of grey; at the beginning it's only distinct from the Empire in that its dictator is more charismatic and slightly less psychotic, but by the most recent chapters it is almost as light as the white end of the scale, there's the exiled Klingons and the Federation remnant, but [[GoodIsImpotent their only real success is staying alive]].remnant.
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* TheEmpire: Obviously, the Galactic Empire. Darth Nemesis at first founds a very similar organisation; later, as part of his gradual HeelFaceTurn, he renames it the New Empire, while being under the impression that he is forever out of touch with the original Galactic Empire. When [[spoiler:reinforcements from the Empire arrive]], Nemesis declares it to be the Imperium, which is a decisive factor in…
* EnemyCivilWar: The Imperium that Darth Nemesis (a.k.a. [[spoiler:Luke Skywalker]]) establishes in the Milky Way galaxy doesn't get on well with [[spoiler:the Imperial (i.e. part of the actual Galactic Empire) reinforcements led by Grand Admiral Thrawn]]. It's kicked off in a pretty spectacular fashion, with a huge space-battle between a Star Destroyer of Nemesis's Imperium and [[spoiler:an actual Imperial Star Destroyer]]. On the other hand, there's a serious case of GreyAndGreyMorality between the Imperium and [[LaResistance Kirk's Federation remnant]].
* EnemyCivilWar: The Imperium that Darth Nemesis (a.k.a. [[spoiler:Luke Skywalker]]) establishes in the Milky Way galaxy doesn't get on well with [[spoiler:the Imperial (i.e. part of the actual Galactic Empire) reinforcements led by Grand Admiral Thrawn]]. It's kicked off in a pretty spectacular fashion, with a huge space-battle between a Star Destroyer of Nemesis's Imperium and [[spoiler:an actual Imperial Star Destroyer]]. On the other hand, there's a serious case of GreyAndGreyMorality between the Imperium and [[LaResistance Kirk's Federation remnant]].
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* TheEmpire: Obviously, the Galactic Empire. Empire from the Star Wars galaxy. Darth Nemesis at first founds a very similar organisation; later, as part of his gradual HeelFaceTurn, later he renames it the New Empire, while being under the impression that he is forever out of touch with the original Galactic Empire. When [[spoiler:reinforcements from the Empire arrive]], Nemesis declares it to be the Imperium, which is a decisive factor in…
* EnemyCivilWar: The Imperiumthat which Darth Nemesis (a.k.a. [[spoiler:Luke Skywalker]]) establishes in the Milky Way galaxy doesn't get on well clashes with [[spoiler:the Imperial (i.e. part of the actual Galactic Empire) reinforcements led by Grand Admiral Thrawn]]. It's kicked off in a pretty spectacular fashion, with a huge space-battle between a Star Destroyer of Nemesis's Imperium and [[spoiler:an actual Imperial Star Destroyer]]. On the other hand, there's a serious case of GreyAndGreyMorality between the Imperium and [[LaResistance Kirk's Federation remnant]].
* EnemyCivilWar: The Imperium
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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:After the death of the Borg Queen, the Borg pull off one of these.]]
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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:After Most importantly, [[spoiler:Luke Skywalker. Also, his Imperial fleet turns from just another group of Palpatine's minions to a new, independent Imperium which is a genuinely positive force, even clashing with the Galactic Empire.]]
** Also, [[spoiler:after the death of the Borg Queen, the Borg pull off one of these.]]
** Also, [[spoiler:after the death of the Borg Queen, the Borg pull off one of these.]]
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* MagneticHero: Captain Kirk and Darth Nemesis. The former is pretty much the only reason why the Federation keeps fighting, whereas the latter is charismatic enough to [[spoiler:get a formerly Imperial fleet to oppose the Empire itself.]]
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* DangerousForbiddenTechnique: [[spoiler:Descending into the Abyss.]]
* DragonWithAnAgenda: Darth Vader, to Grand Admiral Thrawn.
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* GreyAndGreyMorality: Between the Federation remnant and the Imperium of [[spoiler:the redeemed Luke Skywalker]].
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* GoodIsImpotent: [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome Spectacularly]] averted by [[spoiler:the redeemed Luke Skywalker]].
* GreyAndGreyMorality: Between the Federation remnant and theImperium Imperium. There are very sympathetic characters on both sides: the crew of [[spoiler:the redeemed Luke Skywalker]].the USS Enterprise (Kirk, Spock, McCoy, Scotty et cetera), Princess Leia and Rogue Squadron on the side of the Federation remnant, and Captain Tarsi, Gideon Kittaine and [[spoiler:Luke Skywalker]] on the side of the Imperium.
* GreyAndGreyMorality: Between the Federation remnant and the
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* LaserBlade: Lightsabers, obviously.
* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: Naturally. It includes Star Trek: The Next Generation, the crew of the USS Enterprise from Star Trek: The Original Series, and most of the characters from the six Star Wars films. This is a really, really big fanfic.
* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: Naturally. It includes Star Trek: The Next Generation, the crew of the USS Enterprise from Star Trek: The Original Series, and most of the characters from the six Star Wars films. This is a really, really big fanfic.
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* MagicKnight: All Jedi Knights and Sith Lords, just as in canon.
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* TheWorfEffect: To establish how powerful Nemesis's Imperial fleet is, it single-handedly destroys hundreds upon hundreds of Borg cubes—remember, the Borg, the nigh-unstoppable cyborg menace—as soon as it enters the Milky Way. Later, it takes over the Romulan Star Empire, almost exterminates the Klingons, annexes the Federation, and crushes the Dominion in the only battle between the two.
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* BiggerBad: Despite being the most powerful villains in the story, Emperor Palpatine and [[spoiler:Gary Mitchell]] have virtually no direct impact on the plot. A more plausible candidate for BigBad is Grand Admiral Thrawn.
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* BiggerBad: Despite being the most powerful villains in the story, Emperor Palpatine and [[spoiler:Gary Mitchell]] have virtually no direct impact on the plot. A more plausible candidate for BigBad is Grand Admiral Thrawn.
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* CurbStompBattle: Darth Nemesis versus the greatest hundred Klingon warriors. Also, [[spoiler: Luke versus the cybernetically enhanced Dum and Dee, during the escape from Darkstar's palace.]] On a larger scale, Imperial technology means that Nemesis's takeover of the entire Alpha Quadrant proceeds without much difficulty.
* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Many, but Kirk's rallying of Star Fleet [[spoiler:after the Battle of Sector 001]] is perhaps the most magnificent.
* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Many, but Kirk's rallying of Star Fleet [[spoiler:after the Battle of Sector 001]] is perhaps the most magnificent.
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* CurbStompBattle: Darth Nemesis versus the greatest hundred Klingon warriors. Also, [[spoiler: Luke versus the cybernetically enhanced Dum and Dee, during the escape from Darkstar's palace.]] ]]
** On a larger scale, Imperial technology means that Nemesis's takeover of the entire Alpha Quadrant proceeds without much difficulty.
* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Many, but Kirk's rallying ofStar Fleet Starfleet [[spoiler:after the Battle of Sector 001]] is perhaps the most magnificent.
** On a larger scale, Imperial technology means that Nemesis's takeover of the entire Alpha Quadrant proceeds without much difficulty.
* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Many, but Kirk's rallying of
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* EnemyCivilWar: The Imperium that Darth Nemesis (a.k.a. [[spoiler:Luke Skywalker]]) establishes in the Milky Way galaxy doesn't get on well with [[spoiler:the Imperial (i.e. part of the actual Galactic Empire) reinforcements led by Grand Admiral Thrawn]]. It's kicked off in a pretty spectacular fashion, with a huge space-battle between a Star Destroyer of Nemesis's Imperium and [[spoiler:an actual Imperial Star Destroyer]]. On the other hand, there's a serious case of GreyAndGreyMorality between the Imperium, which is pretty much TheKingdom, and [[LaResistance Kirk's Federation remnant]].
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* TheEmpire: Obviously, the Galactic Empire. Darth Nemesis at first founds a very similar organisation; later, as part of his gradual HeelFaceTurn, he renames it the New Empire, while being under the impression that he is forever out of touch with the original Galactic Empire. When [[spoiler:reinforcements from the Empire arrive]], Nemesis declares it to be the Imperium, which is a decisive factor in…
* EnemyCivilWar: The Imperium that Darth Nemesis (a.k.a. [[spoiler:Luke Skywalker]]) establishes in the Milky Way galaxy doesn't get on well with [[spoiler:the Imperial (i.e. part of the actual Galactic Empire) reinforcements led by Grand Admiral Thrawn]]. It's kicked off in a pretty spectacular fashion, with a huge space-battle between a Star Destroyer of Nemesis's Imperium and [[spoiler:an actual Imperial Star Destroyer]]. On the other hand, there's a serious case of GreyAndGreyMorality between theImperium, which is pretty much TheKingdom, Imperium and [[LaResistance Kirk's Federation remnant]].
* EnemyCivilWar: The Imperium that Darth Nemesis (a.k.a. [[spoiler:Luke Skywalker]]) establishes in the Milky Way galaxy doesn't get on well with [[spoiler:the Imperial (i.e. part of the actual Galactic Empire) reinforcements led by Grand Admiral Thrawn]]. It's kicked off in a pretty spectacular fashion, with a huge space-battle between a Star Destroyer of Nemesis's Imperium and [[spoiler:an actual Imperial Star Destroyer]]. On the other hand, there's a serious case of GreyAndGreyMorality between the
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* FascistButInefficient: The Shadowfleet, a secret force devoted to protecting TheFederation, is billed as this powerful hidden menace, but their [[MoralEventHorizon brutal destruction of Remus]] only gets the EvilOverlord Darth Nemesis to destroy the [[ProudWarriorRaceGuy Klingon Empire]] (thus depriving the Federation remnant of allies) and inspires the Romulans to view Nemesis as their protector and avenger.
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** Similarly, [[spoiler:Luke and Anakin Skywalker both became Sith Lords: the former was redeemed, the latter, so far, not.]]
* FascistButInefficient: The Shadowfleet, a secret force devoted to protecting TheFederation, is billed as this powerful hidden menace, but their [[MoralEventHorizon brutal destruction of Remus]] only gets the EvilOverlord Darth Nemesis to destroy the [[ProudWarriorRaceGuy Klingon Empire]] (thusdepriving weakening the Federation remnant of remnant's greatest potential allies) and inspires the Romulans to view Nemesis as their protector and avenger.
* FascistButInefficient: The Shadowfleet, a secret force devoted to protecting TheFederation, is billed as this powerful hidden menace, but their [[MoralEventHorizon brutal destruction of Remus]] only gets the EvilOverlord Darth Nemesis to destroy the [[ProudWarriorRaceGuy Klingon Empire]] (thus
** Also, the Shadowfleet's destruction of Remus. This could also be classified as EpicFail.
* GreyAndGreyMorality: Between the Federation remnant and the Imperium of [[spoiler:the redeemed Luke Skywalker]].
* GreyAndGreyMorality: Between the Federation remnant and the Imperium of [[spoiler:the redeemed Luke Skywalker]].
* TheKingdom: The Imperium, once [[spoiler:Darth Nemesis becomes Luke Skywalker again]].
* LoveRedeems: [[spoiler:Darth Nemesis]]'s love for [[spoiler:Mara Jade]] is a great part of his HeelFaceTurn [[spoiler:back into Luke Skywalker]].
* LoveRedeems: [[spoiler:Darth Nemesis]]'s love for [[spoiler:Mara Jade]] is a great part of his HeelFaceTurn [[spoiler:back into Luke Skywalker]].
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* MoralityKitchenSink: The Galactic Empire, the Borg Queen and the Orion Syndicate are unambiguously evil, although even they are surpassed by [[spoiler:Gary Mitchell]]. Then there's the Imperium, which is a steadily lightening shade of grey. There's also the very morally ambiguous Shadowfleet, a secret army which uses very questionable means to defend TheFederation. On the white end of the scale, there's the Klingons and the Federation remnant, but [[GoodIsImpotent their only real success is staying alive]].
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* MoralityKitchenSink: [[TheEmpire The Galactic Empire, Empire]], the Borg Queen and the Orion Syndicate are unambiguously evil, although even they are surpassed by [[spoiler:Gary Mitchell]]. Then there's the Imperium, which is a steadily lightening shade of grey. There's also the very morally ambiguous Shadowfleet, a secret army which uses very questionable means to defend TheFederation. On the white end of the scale, there's the Klingons and the Federation remnant, but [[GoodIsImpotent their only real success is staying alive]].
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* SmugSnake: Lord Hieronymus Darkstar isn't nearly as tough as he thinks he is.
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* SmugSnake: Lord Hieronymus Darkstar isn't nearly as tough as he thinks he is. Khan has something of this characteristic when he confronts Darth Vader.
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* TheStarsAreGoingOut: By the galaxy cluster.
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* TheStarsAreGoingOut: By the galaxy cluster. This is because the Federation misused time-travel, creating too many time paradoxes for the universe to deal with. This is a bit of a problem, given that Kirk, who has time-travelled into this era, is the Federation's only hope against TheEmpire.
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** Grand Admiral Thrawn and Khan Noonien Singh are currently engaged in this. Khan is already plotting a takeover.
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* CompleteMonster: Several characters could likely be seen as this, including Lord Darkstar, the Borg Queen, Palpatine and [[spoiler:Garry Mitchel]].
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* BeautyEqualsGoodness: For a certain vavlue of "goodness". When the hulking, black-armoured cyborg Darth Vader appears, the Romulan admiral thinks that Vader isn't a proper Sith Lord next to the young, handsome Darth Nemesis.
* BigBadDuumvirate: Emperor Palpatine and [[spoiler:Gary Mitchell]]. Incredibly, given Palpatine's status as EvilOverlord of an entire galaxy and Dark Lord (leader) of the Sith, the latter is the more powerful of the two.
* BiggerBad: Despite being the most powerful villains in the story, Emperor Palpatine and [[spoiler:Gary Mitchell]] have virtually no direct impact on the plot. A more plausible candidate for BigBad is Grand Admiral Thrawn.
* CompleteMonster: Several characters could likely be seen as this, including Lord Darkstar, the Borg Queen, Emperor Palpatine and[[spoiler:Garry Mitchel]].[[spoiler:Gary Mitchell]].
* CurbStompBattle: Darth Nemesis versus the greatest hundred Klingon warriors. Also, [[spoiler: Luke versus the cybernetically enhanced Dum and Dee, during the escape from Darkstar's palace.]] On a larger scale, Imperial technology means that Nemesis's takeover of the entire Alpha Quadrant proceeds without much difficulty.
* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Many, but Kirk's rallying of Star Fleet [[spoiler:after the Battle of Sector 001]] is perhaps the most magnificent.
** [[spoiler:Luke Skywalker's escape from and destruction of the Orion Syndicate]] also scores pretty high on the list.
* BigBadDuumvirate: Emperor Palpatine and [[spoiler:Gary Mitchell]]. Incredibly, given Palpatine's status as EvilOverlord of an entire galaxy and Dark Lord (leader) of the Sith, the latter is the more powerful of the two.
* BiggerBad: Despite being the most powerful villains in the story, Emperor Palpatine and [[spoiler:Gary Mitchell]] have virtually no direct impact on the plot. A more plausible candidate for BigBad is Grand Admiral Thrawn.
* CompleteMonster: Several characters could likely be seen as this, including Lord Darkstar, the Borg Queen, Emperor Palpatine and
* CurbStompBattle: Darth Nemesis versus the greatest hundred Klingon warriors. Also, [[spoiler: Luke versus the cybernetically enhanced Dum and Dee, during the escape from Darkstar's palace.]] On a larger scale, Imperial technology means that Nemesis's takeover of the entire Alpha Quadrant proceeds without much difficulty.
* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Many, but Kirk's rallying of Star Fleet [[spoiler:after the Battle of Sector 001]] is perhaps the most magnificent.
** [[spoiler:Luke Skywalker's escape from and destruction of the Orion Syndicate]] also scores pretty high on the list.
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Many, but Kirk's rallying of Star Fleet [[spoiler: after the Battle of Sector 001]] is perhaps the most magnificent.
* AGodAmI: Q believes this. So does [[spoiler:Garry Mitchel]].
* AGodAmI: Q believes this. So does [[spoiler:Garry Mitchel]].
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Many, but TheDon: Lord Darkstar of the Orion Syndicate.
* EnemyCivilWar: The Imperium that Darth Nemesis (a.k.a. [[spoiler:Luke Skywalker]]) establishes in the Milky Way galaxy doesn't get on well with [[spoiler:the Imperial (i.e. part of the actual Galactic Empire) reinforcements led by Grand Admiral Thrawn]]. It's kicked off in a pretty spectacular fashion, with a huge space-battle between a Star Destroyer of Nemesis's Imperium and [[spoiler:an actual Imperial Star Destroyer]]. On the other hand, there's a serious case of GreyAndGreyMorality between the Imperium, which is pretty much TheKingdom, and [[LaResistance Kirk'srallying of Star Fleet [[spoiler: after Federation remnant]].
* EvilCannotComprehendGood: Played with. It's still unclear whether Thrawn or Khan will be right about Kirk: if Thrawn is, this trope will be subverted.
* EvilCounterpart: There are two beings in theBattle of Sector 001]] story who can be truly described as godlike: Q, who is perhaps largely benevolent, and [[spoiler:Gary Mitchell]], [[OmnicidalManiac who wants to destroy the most magnificent.
entirety of existence]].
* FascistButInefficient: The Shadowfleet, a secret force devoted to protecting TheFederation, is billed as this powerful hidden menace, but their [[MoralEventHorizon brutal destruction of Remus]] only gets the EvilOverlord Darth Nemesis to destroy the [[ProudWarriorRaceGuy Klingon Empire]] (thus depriving the Federation remnant of allies) and inspires the Romulans to view Nemesis as their protector and avenger.
* ForWantOfANail: It turns out that [[spoiler:Darth Nemesis is a Luke Skywalker who gave in to Vader during the "LukeIAmYourFather" moment on Bespin.]]
* AGodAmI: Q believes this. So does[[spoiler:Garry Mitchel]].[[spoiler:Gary Mitchell]].
* GoneHorriblyWrong: [[spoiler:The Borg would have been a force for good if not for the Borg Queen. When she is killed, they undergo a HeelFaceTurn.]]
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:After the death of the Borg Queen, the Borg pull off one of these.]]
* EnemyCivilWar: The Imperium that Darth Nemesis (a.k.a. [[spoiler:Luke Skywalker]]) establishes in the Milky Way galaxy doesn't get on well with [[spoiler:the Imperial (i.e. part of the actual Galactic Empire) reinforcements led by Grand Admiral Thrawn]]. It's kicked off in a pretty spectacular fashion, with a huge space-battle between a Star Destroyer of Nemesis's Imperium and [[spoiler:an actual Imperial Star Destroyer]]. On the other hand, there's a serious case of GreyAndGreyMorality between the Imperium, which is pretty much TheKingdom, and [[LaResistance Kirk's
* EvilCannotComprehendGood: Played with. It's still unclear whether Thrawn or Khan will be right about Kirk: if Thrawn is, this trope will be subverted.
* EvilCounterpart: There are two beings in the
* FascistButInefficient: The Shadowfleet, a secret force devoted to protecting TheFederation, is billed as this powerful hidden menace, but their [[MoralEventHorizon brutal destruction of Remus]] only gets the EvilOverlord Darth Nemesis to destroy the [[ProudWarriorRaceGuy Klingon Empire]] (thus depriving the Federation remnant of allies) and inspires the Romulans to view Nemesis as their protector and avenger.
* ForWantOfANail: It turns out that [[spoiler:Darth Nemesis is a Luke Skywalker who gave in to Vader during the "LukeIAmYourFather" moment on Bespin.]]
* AGodAmI: Q believes this. So does
* GoneHorriblyWrong: [[spoiler:The Borg would have been a force for good if not for the Borg Queen. When she is killed, they undergo a HeelFaceTurn.]]
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:After the death of the Borg Queen, the Borg pull off one of these.]]
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* SceneryGorn: A number of the battle scenes qualify, as does the Empire's [[spoiler:Base Delta Zero on Quo'nos]].
* TheChessmaster: [[spoiler:Gary Mitchel]] and Grand Admiral Thrawn.
* TheChessmaster: [[spoiler:Gary Mitchel]] and Grand Admiral Thrawn.
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* MoralEventHorizon: Arguably, the Federation Shadowfleet's destruction of Remus. Darth Nemesis's retaliatory destruction of the Klingon homeworld Qo'noS, though still evil, is more acceptable because Nemesis thought that the Klingons were responsible for what happened to Remus.
* MoralityKitchenSink: The Galactic Empire, the Borg Queen and the Orion Syndicate are unambiguously evil, although even they are surpassed by [[spoiler:Gary Mitchell]]. Then there's the Imperium, which is a steadily lightening shade of grey. There's also the very morally ambiguous Shadowfleet, a secret army which uses very questionable means to defend TheFederation. On the white end of the scale, there's the Klingons and the Federation remnant, but [[GoodIsImpotent their only real success is staying alive]].
* OmnicidalManiac: [[spoiler:Gary Mitchell]], the chief villain.
* PhysicalGod: [[spoiler:Gary Mitchell]], the chief villain.
* SceneryGorn: A number of the battle scenes qualify, as does the Empire's [[spoiler:Base DeltaZero on Quo'nos]].
Zero—basically melting the surface of the planet—on Qo'noS]].
* SmugSnake: Lord Hieronymus Darkstar isn't nearly as tough as he thinks he is.
* TheChessmaster: [[spoiler:GaryMitchel]] Mitchell]], Khan Noonien Singh and Grand Admiral Thrawn.
* MoralityKitchenSink: The Galactic Empire, the Borg Queen and the Orion Syndicate are unambiguously evil, although even they are surpassed by [[spoiler:Gary Mitchell]]. Then there's the Imperium, which is a steadily lightening shade of grey. There's also the very morally ambiguous Shadowfleet, a secret army which uses very questionable means to defend TheFederation. On the white end of the scale, there's the Klingons and the Federation remnant, but [[GoodIsImpotent their only real success is staying alive]].
* OmnicidalManiac: [[spoiler:Gary Mitchell]], the chief villain.
* PhysicalGod: [[spoiler:Gary Mitchell]], the chief villain.
* SceneryGorn: A number of the battle scenes qualify, as does the Empire's [[spoiler:Base Delta
* SmugSnake: Lord Hieronymus Darkstar isn't nearly as tough as he thinks he is.
* TheChessmaster: [[spoiler:Gary
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* VillainProtagonist: The audience would almost certainly hate Darth Nemesis if he wasn't so awesome. Lord Darkstar tries to achieve the same effect, but fails.
* VillainTeamUp: What happens at first when [[spoiler:Reinforcements from the Galactic Empire, led by Thrawn and Darth Vader, arrive to back up Darth Nemesis.]] It soon dissolves into EnemyCivilWar.
* VillainProtagonist: The audience would almost certainly hate Darth Nemesis if he wasn't so awesome. Lord Darkstar tries to achieve the same effect, but fails.
* VillainTeamUp: What happens at first when [[spoiler:Reinforcements from the Galactic Empire, led by Thrawn and Darth Vader, arrive to back up Darth Nemesis.]] It soon dissolves into EnemyCivilWar.
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* TheStarsAreGoingOut: By the galaxy cluster.
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* DefensiveFeintTrap: Luring the enemy right into a ColonyDrop.