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* NegativeContinuity - "I thought I got rid of you."
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--> '''Ryuk:''' [[spoiler: You really need to die at the end of this series.]]
-->'''Light:''' Yay, like that would ever happen.
--> '''Ryuk:''' [[spoiler: You really need to die at the end of this series.]]
-->'''Light:''' Yay, like that would ever happen.
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A new abridged series in the many DeathNote Abridged series. Only 4 episodes have been made so far, but a parody music video has been made as well. More episodes are in the works.
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* CompletelyMissingThePoint - DaChief
-->'''Matsuda:''' Chief, doesn't your son use a computer?
-->'''Chief:''' I don't understand what you're saying.
-->'''Matsuda:''' Chief, your son might be Kira.
-->'''Chief:''' I still don't understand what you're saying.
-->'''Matsuda:''' Chief, doesn't your son use a computer?
-->'''Chief:''' I don't understand what you're saying.
-->'''Matsuda:''' Chief, your son might be Kira.
-->'''Chief:''' I still don't understand what you're saying.
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* TransparentCloset – "Light, I think you are a very confused homicidal maniac." And then there's the [[http://www.youtube.com/user/kpts4tv#p/u/1/6fu2nykadfY Music Video]]. (Warning: severe [[AutoTune AutoTune]] ahoy)
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* TransparentCloset – "Light, Light: "Raye Penber, I think you are a very confused homicidal maniac.couldn't help but notice....''*sniff*'' your hair smells like strawberries." And then there's the [[http://www.youtube.com/user/kpts4tv#p/u/1/6fu2nykadfY Music Video]]. (Warning: severe [[AutoTune AutoTune]] ahoy)
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-->'''Ryuk:''' Good idea! Say... Where's your sister?
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-->'''Ryuk:''' Good That's a good idea! Say... Wait... Where's your sister?sister at?
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* TransparentCloset – Light. "You "Light, I think you are a very confused homicidal maniac." And then there's the [[http://www.youtube.com/user/kpts4tv#p/u/1/6fu2nykadfY Music Video]]. (Warning: severe [[AutoTune AutoTune]] ahoy)
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* OneOfUs – "So far I've only got what I've learned on TvTropes."
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* OneOfUs – "So –
-->'''Raye Penber:''' So farI've only got what I've learned on TvTropes." all I have is from TvTropes.
-->'''Raye Penber:''' So far
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-->'''Light:''' Uh, It's my new name for you. It means Ke$ha in Japanese.
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-->'''Light:''' Uh, It's my new name for you. It means Ke$ha [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Ptitleewf1kqz1?from=Main.Kesha Ke$ha]] in Japanese.
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-->'''Light:''' No one is listening to you, Ryuk.
-->'''Sayu:''' What does Ryuk mean?
-->'''Light:''' Uh, It's my new name for you. It means Ke$ha in Japanese.
-->'''Light:''' No one is listening to you, Ryuk.
-->'''Sayu:''' What does Ryuk mean?
-->'''Light:''' Uh, It's my new name for you. It means Ke$ha in Japanese.
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* GrowingTheBeard - The first episode was made before the production team was all together, and was written by the guy who voices [[YourMom Ryuk]]. You can tell. The second and third episodes gained more writing and started to tone down the randomness. The series as a whole is definitely still only in the short, stubbly, annoying not-quite-a-beard stage, but it's getting there.
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* GrowingTheBeard - The first episode was made before the production team was all together, and was written by the guy who voices [[YourMom Ryuk]]. You can tell.together. The second and third episodes gained more writing and started to tone down the randomness. The series as a whole is definitely still only in the short, stubbly, annoying not-quite-a-beard stage, but it's getting there.
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* GrowingTheBeard - The first episode was made before the production team was all together, and was written by the guy who voices [[YourMom Ryuk]]. You can tell. The second and third episodes gained more writing and started to tone down the randomness. [[ThisTroper This]] [[OneOfUs troper]] joined in the forth episode as yet another member of the writing crew and the voice of Naomi (though that may be temporary thanks to real life issues.)
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* GrowingTheBeard - The first episode was made before the production team was all together, and was written by the guy who voices [[YourMom Ryuk]]. You can tell. The second and third episodes gained more writing and started to tone down the randomness. [[ThisTroper This]] [[OneOfUs troper]] joined The series as a whole is definitely still only in the forth episode as yet another member of the writing crew and the voice of Naomi (though that may be temporary thanks to real life issues.)short, stubbly, annoying not-quite-a-beard stage, but it's getting there.
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* GrowingTheBeard - The first episode was made before the production team was all together, and was written by the guy who voices [[YourMom Ryuk]]. You can tell. The second and third episodes gained more writing and started to tone down the randomness. [[ThisTroper This]] [[OneOfUs troper]] joined in the forth episode as yet another member of the writing crew and the voice of Naomi (though that may be temporary thanks to real life issues.)
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* TransparentCloset – Light. "You are a very confused homicidal maniac."
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* TransparentCloset – Light. "You are a very confused homicidal maniac." " And then there's the [[http://www.youtube.com/user/kpts4tv#p/u/1/6fu2nykadfY Music Video]]. (Warning: severe [[AutoTune AutoTune]] ahoy)
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This series focuses on Light and how he is trying to get rid of any famous celebrities that he doesn't like, primarily teen idols. Like the original anime, he is also trying to become god of a new world. Light and L are pretty much the only smart ones in the series, but the side characters have quite a few memorable moments. Even the creators of the show have a power struggle throughout the series. Oh, and Matsuda is Australian.
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This series focuses on Light and how he is trying to get rid of any famous celebrities that he doesn't like, primarily teen idols. Like the original anime, he is also trying to become god of a new world. Light and L are pretty much the only smart ones in the series, but the side characters have quite a few memorable moments. Even the creators of the show have a power struggle throughout the series. Oh, and Matsuda is Australian.[[LandDownunder Australian]].
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* EverybodyHatesMathematics – [[ArtifactOfDeath No, it's not an Advanced Calculus book... it's far too merciful...]]
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* Crossdressing Voices - Naomi has an overly masculine voice.
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* Crossdressing Voices CrossDressingVoices - Naomi has an overly masculine voice.
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-->'''Ryuk''' (to Light): I just noticed how pretty your eyes
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* Crossdressing Voices - Naomi has an overly masculine voice.
* CrossesTheLineTwice –
-->'''Light:''' I'm rigging my desk so it will explode if anyone tries to steal my diary.
-->'''Ryuk:''' Good idea! Say... Where's your sister?
-->'''Light:''' What sister?
-->'''Sayu:''' ''*screaming*''
* DaChief
* EverybodyHatesMathematics – [[ArtifactOfDeath No, it's not an Advanced Calculus book... it's far too merciful...]]
* HoYay - "I just noticed how pretty your eyes are."
* OneOfUs – "So far I've only got what I've learned on TvTropes."
* PornStash - on DaChief's computer
* RunningGag – "Heh heh. [[FailOSuckyName Glitter.]]"
* ShoutOut - to ''{{Pokemon}}'' , ''ShamanKing'', ''FistOfTheNorthStar'', ''TheLionKing'', ''InspectorGadget'', ''StarTrek'', ''{{Twilight}}'', ''JusticeLeague'', ''YuGiOhAbridged'', and the theme song is [[DoctorWho "I Can't Decide."]]
** "Ooh Mad Libs!"
* TakeThat [[ThisLoserIsYou Audience!]]
* TalkingToThemself
* ToiletHumor
* TransparentCloset – Light.
* YourMom
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* [[ClingyJealousGirl Clingy Jealous Guy]] - Ryuk
* Crossdressing Voices - Naomi has an overly masculine voice.
* CrossesTheLineTwice –
-->'''Light:''' I'm rigging my desk so it will explode if anyone tries to steal my diary.
-->'''Ryuk:''' Good idea! Say... Where's your sister?
-->'''Light:''' What sister?
-->'''Sayu:''' ''*screaming*''
* DaChief
* EverybodyHatesMathematics – [[ArtifactOfDeath No, it's not an Advanced Calculus book... it's far too merciful...]]
* HoYay - "I just noticed how pretty your eyes are."
* OneOfUs – "So far I've only got what I've learned on TvTropes."
* PornStash - on DaChief's computer
* RunningGag – "Heh heh. [[FailOSuckyName Glitter.]]"
* ShoutOut - to ''{{Pokemon}}'' , ''ShamanKing'', ''FistOfTheNorthStar'', ''TheLionKing'', ''InspectorGadget'', ''StarTrek'', ''{{Twilight}}'', ''JusticeLeague'', ''YuGiOhAbridged'', and the theme song is [[DoctorWho "I Can't Decide."]]
** "Ooh Mad Libs!"
* TakeThat [[ThisLoserIsYou Audience!]]
* TalkingToThemself
* ToiletHumor
* TransparentCloset – Light.
* YourMom
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* TheAbridgedSeries - SoYeah
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* TheAbridgedSeries - SoYeah Obviously.
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!![[http://www.youtube.com/user/kpts4tv#p/u/4/Or4neh4eV1o kpts4tv, mac_sly56, and Arkonid's Series]]
-->'''Light:''' I am...
-->'''L:''' I am...
-->'''Light & L:''' ...Team Co-Co!/Team Leno!
-->'''Ryuk:''' Hey guys, I'm Team Edward!
-->'''Light & L:''' Shut up...
A new abridged series in the many DeathNote Abridged series. Only 4 episodes have been made so far, but a parody music video has been made as well. More episodes are in the works.
This series focuses on Light and how he is trying to get rid of any famous celebrities that he doesn't like, primarily teen idols. Like the original anime, he is also trying to become god of a new world. Light and L are pretty much the only smart ones in the series, but the side characters have quite a few memorable moments. Even the creators of the show have a power struggle throughout the series. Oh, and Matsuda is Australian.
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* ShoutOut - [[NoFourthWall That scene was directed by]] MNightShyamalan, "I know a SpongeBob party!" Meanwhile, [[BatMan back at Wayne Manner!]]
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* ShoutOut - [[NoFourthWall That scene was directed by]] MNightShyamalan, "I know a SpongeBob party!" Meanwhile, [[BatMan back at Wayne Manner!]] Manor!]]
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-->'''Light:''' You mean Billy Mayes?
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-->'''Light:''' You mean Billy Mayes? Mays?
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''[[CoolAndUnusualPunishment One month of confinement and Ryuk's endless whining later...]]''
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A popular DeathNote AbridgedSeries was created by Team Dattebayo. It features popular abridgers such as Lanipator and hbi2k in some of their episodes. One of the Voice Actors was even featured in an episode of Hbi2k's [[GantzAbridged Gantz The Abridged Series]].
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A popular DeathNote AbridgedSeries was created by Team Dattebayo. It features popular abridgers such as Lanipator {{Lanipator}} and hbi2k {{hbi2k}} in some of their episodes. One of the Voice Actors was even featured in an episode of Hbi2k's [[GantzAbridged Gantz The Abridged Series]].
