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Legitimate Businessmens Social Club TRS cleanup, disambiguating when appropriate.
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--> ''I guess you could say I'm a [[DeadlyEuphemism troubleshooter]]. I'm a [[LegitimateBusinessmensSocialClub business]] consultant.... I'm a magician, really. I make [[DisposingOfABody other people's problems disappear]].''
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--> ''I guess you could say I'm a [[DeadlyEuphemism troubleshooter]]. I'm a [[LegitimateBusinessmensSocialClub business]] business consultant.... I'm a magician, really. I make [[DisposingOfABody other people's problems disappear]].''
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* ExtremelyBriefTimespan: There is a DistantPrologue and several sections where characters remember past events, but the main story takes place over less than three days: Cassie gets a call to do a job that very night, Karch is summoned to find her the next morning, then the next night Cassie goes back to Vegas to face Karch for the climax.
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* ExtremelyBriefTimespan: ExtremelyShortTimespan: There is a DistantPrologue and several sections where characters remember past events, but the main story takes place over less than three days: Cassie gets a call to do a job that very night, Karch is summoned to find her the next morning, then the next night Cassie goes back to Vegas to face Karch for the climax.
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* InjuredSelfDrag: After Karch has shot out both his kneecaps, Leo drags himself over to the shattered remains of his sliding glass door, and proceeds to kill himself by driving his throat down onto the chunks of glass. This robs Karch of the chance to torture the location of the money out of Leo.
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* ChekhovsGun: When showing some Hollywood douchebag a new car, Cassie specifically mentions how the passenger-side airbag can be disarmed. Later, she does this to escape from Karch after he traps her in the car.
* DistantPrologue: The opening scene, before the main story, is set six years earlier, with Cassie and Max right before he goes upstairs for the fateful robbery.
* ExtremelyBriefTimespan: There is a DistantPrologue and several sections where characters remember past events, but the main story takes place over less than three days: Cassie gets a call to do a job that very night, Karch is summoned to find her the next morning, then the next night Cassie goes back to Vegas to face Karch for the climax.
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* WhatHaveWeEar: Karch, on multiple occasions.
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* WhatHaveWeEar: Karch, on multiple occasions. At one point he does this to win Jodie's trust and lure her into the car.
