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* TheIdiotFromOsaka: The appendix in the full version mentions that Jun was from Osaka, Japan, and mentions her being bullied for her "unusual personality" as her reason for joining Frida's Friends Club, implying this trope (although she's more of TheDitz).

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* TheIdiotFromOsaka: The appendix in the full version mentions that Jun was from Osaka, Japan, and mentions her being bullied for her "unusual personality" as her reason for joining Frida's Friends Club, implying this trope (although she's more of TheDitz).TheDitz than a typical example, similar to Osaka from ''Manga/AzumangaDaioh'').
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* ThatNostalgiaShow: The story's "present day" is December 1999 (when George Coryell was around Mika's age), as evidenced by the presence of a VCR and dial-up Internet in the Laine household, Lumi and Sami discussing ''VideoGame/PokemonRedAndBlue'', and, most noticeably, Sami mentioning "the new millennium" coming up the next month. A practical reason for the present day being 1999 is that two things existing now would have broken the plot, namely, streaming services[[note]]which would have given Lumi and Sami less of an excuse to not play with Mika that afternoon as they could have watched their shows later; Lumi points out they could have used the VCR to tape their shows all along after they inadvertently upset Mika to the point of tears, though Sami points out that all their favorite shows are on different channels[[/note]] and Wiki/{{Wikipedia}}[[note]]which probably would have given them a lot more information on the Unimaa legend than a university article on the subconscious[[/note]].

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* ThatNostalgiaShow: The story's "present day" is December 1999 (when George Coryell was around Mika's age), as evidenced by the presence of a VCR and dial-up Internet in the Laine household, Lumi and Sami discussing ''VideoGame/PokemonRedAndBlue'', and, most noticeably, Sami mentioning "the new millennium" coming up the next month. A practical reason for the present day being 1999 is that two things existing now would have broken the plot, namely, streaming services[[note]]which would have given Lumi and Sami less of an excuse to not play with Mika that afternoon as they could have watched their shows later; Lumi points out they could have used the VCR to tape their shows all along after they inadvertently upset Mika to the point of tears, though Sami points out that all their favorite shows are on different channels[[/note]] and Wiki/{{Wikipedia}}[[note]]which Website/{{Wikipedia}}[[note]]which probably would have given them a lot more information on the Unimaa legend than a university article on the subconscious[[/note]].
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* BoardingSchoolOfHorrors: The appendix says this is why Winston joined Frida's Friends Club.


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* StageMom: The appendix implies this is the reason why Anya joined Frida's Friends Club, as it mentioned she was forced into a life of ballet.
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* TheIdiotFromOsaka: The appendix in the full version mentions that Jun was from Osaka, Japan, and mentions her being bullied for her "unusual personality" as her reason for joining Frida's Friends Club, implying this trope (although she's more of TheDitz).


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* MultinationalTeam: Frida's Friends Club, according to the appendix in the full version: Winston was from the Home Counties of England, Anya was from Saint Petersburg, Russia, Bianca was from Naples, Italy, Rufus was from Jacksonville, Florida, Gustav was from the north of Freyholt (which is implied to be their universe's equivalent of UsefulNotes/{{Sweden}})[[note]]the country was also mentioned in Coryell's previous book ''Literature/{{Kasia}}'' as the homeland of one of Connor's extended family members[[/note]], Martina was from Stuttgart, Germany, Jun was from Osaka, Japan, Stephanie was from the banlieues of Paris, and Brady was from Boston.
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'''''Unimaa''''' (pronounced "OO-nee-mah") is a 2022 Amazon-published novelette[[note]]originally released as a WebSerialNovel in late 2021[[/note]] by George Coryell (aka Tropers/IcyCrow), author of ''Literature/{{Kasia}}''.

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'''''Unimaa''''' (pronounced "OO-nee-mah") is a 2022 Amazon-published novelette[[note]]originally novelette (originally released as a WebSerialNovel in late 2021[[/note]] 2021) by George Coryell (aka Tropers/IcyCrow), author of ''Literature/{{Kasia}}''.
''Literature/{{Kasia}}'', with illustrations in the full version done by Bridget Lovejoy.
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A sample of the first two chapters (out of eight total) can be read on Coryell's website [[https://georgecoryell.com/writings/unimaa/free-sample/ here]] a VanillaEdition print copy can be purchased [[https://www.amazon.com/dp/B09R39GVSM here]], and a standard edition copy can be purchased [[https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0B4GR17F9 here]].

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A sample of the first two chapters (out of eight total) can be read on Coryell's website [[https://georgecoryell.com/writings/unimaa/free-sample/ here]] here]], a VanillaEdition print copy can be purchased [[https://www.amazon.com/dp/B09R39GVSM here]], and a standard edition copy can be purchased [[https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0B4GR17F9 here]].
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A sample of the first two chapters (out of eight total) can be read on Coryell's website [[https://georgecoryell.com/writings/unimaa/free-sample/ here]] or a VanillaEdition print copy can be purchased [[https://www.amazon.com/dp/B09R39GVSM here]]; a "deluxe" edition with illustrations and some supplemental material will be available for purchase at a later date.

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A sample of the first two chapters (out of eight total) can be read on Coryell's website [[https://georgecoryell.com/writings/unimaa/free-sample/ here]] or a VanillaEdition print copy can be purchased [[https://www.amazon.com/dp/B09R39GVSM here]]; here]], and a "deluxe" standard edition with illustrations and some supplemental material will copy can be available for purchase at a later date.
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* AdultFear: Mika not waking up qualifies as this.
* AdventuresInComaland: Pretty much the whole point of the story.

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A sample of the first two chapters can be read on Coryell's website [[https://georgecoryell.com/writings/unimaa/free-sample/ here]] or a VanillaEdition print copy can be purchased [[https://www.amazon.com/dp/B09R39GVSM here]]; a "deluxe" edition with illustrations and some supplemental material will be available for purchase at a later date.

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A sample of the first two chapters (out of eight total) can be read on Coryell's website [[https://georgecoryell.com/writings/unimaa/free-sample/ here]] or a VanillaEdition print copy can be purchased [[https://www.amazon.com/dp/B09R39GVSM here]]; a "deluxe" edition with illustrations and some supplemental material will be available for purchase at a later date.



* DistressedDude: Mika.


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* DecoyProtagonist: Eino is set up to be the main character of the story based on the blurb on the back of the book and the first chapter focusing on him. [[spoiler:By the end of Chapter 1, he's dead, and when we see his consciousness again in Unimaa two chapters later, it's clear that he's become evil - by that point, it's obvious that the three Laine siblings are the real protagonists.]]
* DistressedDude: Mika.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: [[spoiler:In addition to light blue skin, Helmi has pink hair.]]

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The entire story can be read on Royal Road [[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/47578/unimaa here]], a sample of the first two chapters can be read on Coryell's website [[https://georgecoryell.com/writings/unimaa/free-sample/ here]], or a VanillaEdition print copy can be purchased [[https://www.amazon.com/dp/B09R39GVSM here]]; a "deluxe" edition with illustrations and some supplemental material will be available for purchase at a later date.

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The entire story can be read on Royal Road [[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/47578/unimaa here]], a A sample of the first two chapters can be read on Coryell's website [[https://georgecoryell.com/writings/unimaa/free-sample/ here]], here]] or a VanillaEdition print copy can be purchased [[https://www.amazon.com/dp/B09R39GVSM here]]; a "deluxe" edition with illustrations and some supplemental material will be available for purchase at a later date.



* PajamaCladHero: Lumi, Sami, and Mika are (at the very least heavily implied to be) in their pajamas whenever they're within Unimaa, as are the members of Frida's Friends Club. Justified, since Unimaa exists within the subconscious.

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* PajamaCladHero: Lumi, Sami, and Mika are (at the very least heavily implied to be) in their pajamas whenever they're within Unimaa, as are the members of Frida's Friends Club. Justified, since Unimaa exists within the subconscious. [[spoiler:In fact, this trope is how Bianca had figured out that Frida's Friends Club was a sham, since literally every member including herself had come to Unimaa in their pajamas while they were asleep.]]
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'''''Unimaa''''' (pronounced "OO-nee-mah") is a 2021 WebSerialNovel (actually a novelette based on word count, with a VanillaEdition print version released on Amazon in early 2022) by George Coryell (aka Tropers/IcyCrow), author of ''Literature/{{Kasia}}''.

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'''''Unimaa''''' (pronounced "OO-nee-mah") is a 2021 2022 Amazon-published novelette[[note]]originally released as a WebSerialNovel (actually a novelette based on word count, with a VanillaEdition print version released on Amazon in early 2022) late 2021[[/note]] by George Coryell (aka Tropers/IcyCrow), author of ''Literature/{{Kasia}}''.



The entire story can be read on Royal Road [[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/47578/unimaa here]] or a VanillaEdition print copy can be purchased [[https://www.amazon.com/dp/B09R39GVSM here]]; a "deluxe" edition with illustrations and some supplemental material will be available for purchase at a later date.

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The entire story can be read on Royal Road [[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/47578/unimaa here]] here]], a sample of the first two chapters can be read on Coryell's website [[https://georgecoryell.com/writings/unimaa/free-sample/ here]], or a VanillaEdition print copy can be purchased [[https://www.amazon.com/dp/B09R39GVSM here]]; a "deluxe" edition with illustrations and some supplemental material will be available for purchase at a later date.
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** Lumi makes an allusion to Face, the Creator/NickJr mascot back in TheNineties (more specifically, how traumatizing it was to some viewers back in the day).

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** Lumi Lumi, after comparing Unimaa to "one of those sappy shows that Mika watches", makes an allusion to Face, the Creator/NickJr mascot back in TheNineties (more specifically, how traumatizing it was to some viewers back in the day).
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The entire story can be read on Royal Road [[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/47578/unimaa here]] or a VanillaEdition print copy can be purchased [[https://www.amazon.com/dp/B09R39GVSM here]]; a "deluxe" editon with illustrations and some supplemental material will be available for purchase at a later date.

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The entire story can be read on Royal Road [[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/47578/unimaa here]] or a VanillaEdition print copy can be purchased [[https://www.amazon.com/dp/B09R39GVSM here]]; a "deluxe" editon edition with illustrations and some supplemental material will be available for purchase at a later date.
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'''''Unimaa''''' (pronounced "OO-nee-mah") is a 2021 WebSerialNovel (actually a novelette based on word count) by George Coryell (aka Tropers/IcyCrow), author of ''Literature/{{Kasia}}''.

The first chapter of the story revolves around one Eino Jokinen, a 12-year-old FarmBoy from the fictional country of Vasa (a stand-in for UsefulNotes/{{Finland}}) at the end of TheGayNineties, who finds his consciousness in the titular realm of Unimaa after being knocked out by a falling apple in his farm's orchard while doing chores his older brothers should have been doing. After he arrives there, he meets Princess Frida, a benevolent-looking spirit who recruits him to rule alongside her and help her find more "friends", then uses a black orb to take away his ability to wake up, which kills him a few days later in the real world. The rest of the story is set largely during one weekend around the very end of TheNineties a hundred years after Eino's death and revolves largely around three siblings from Vasa: Lumi Laine, an eight-year-old girl, her seven-year-old brother Sami, and their four-year-old brother Mika, who feels unappreciated by his two older siblings and his parents. When Mika is asleep that Friday night after a misunderstanding over his siblings not wanting to play with him that afternoon, he finds himself in Unimaa and makes a [[DealWithTheDevil deal with]] Frida to join her and Eino's society known as "Frida's Friends Club" at the cost of not being able to return home. When Lumi and Sami figure out what's going on, they become determined to find a way to bring back their brother from the subconscious and make up with him before it's too late.

The entire story can be read on Royal Road [[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/47578/unimaa here]] or downloaded in digital formats from Coryell’s website until the end of 2021 [[https://seriousxm.wordpress.com/writings/unimaa/ here]]; a "deluxe" print version with illustrations and some supplemental material will be available for purchase at a later date.

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'''''Unimaa''''' (pronounced "OO-nee-mah") is a 2021 WebSerialNovel (actually a novelette based on word count) count, with a VanillaEdition print version released on Amazon in early 2022) by George Coryell (aka Tropers/IcyCrow), author of ''Literature/{{Kasia}}''.

The first chapter of the story revolves around one Eino Jokinen, a 12-year-old FarmBoy from the fictional country of Vasa (a stand-in for UsefulNotes/{{Finland}}) at the end of TheGayNineties, who finds his consciousness in the titular realm of Unimaa after being knocked out by a falling apple in his farm's orchard while doing chores his older brothers should have been doing. After he arrives there, he meets Princess Frida, a benevolent-looking spirit who recruits him to rule alongside her and help her find more "friends", then uses a black orb to take away his ability to wake up, which kills him a few days later in the real world. The rest of the story is set largely during one weekend around the very end of TheNineties a hundred years after Eino's death and revolves largely around three siblings from Vasa: Lumi Laine, an eight-year-old girl, her seven-year-old brother Sami, and their four-year-old brother Mika, a friendless preschooler who feels unappreciated by his two older siblings and his parents. When Mika is asleep that Friday night after a misunderstanding over his siblings not wanting to play with him that afternoon, he finds himself in Unimaa and makes a [[DealWithTheDevil deal with]] Frida to join her and Eino's society known as "Frida's Friends Club" at the cost of not being able to return home. When Lumi and Sami figure out what's going on, they become determined to find a way to bring back their brother from the subconscious and make up with him before it's too late.

The entire story can be read on Royal Road [[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/47578/unimaa here]] or downloaded in digital formats from Coryell’s website until the end of 2021 [[https://seriousxm.wordpress.com/writings/unimaa/ a VanillaEdition print copy can be purchased [[https://www.amazon.com/dp/B09R39GVSM here]]; a "deluxe" print version editon with illustrations and some supplemental material will be available for purchase at a later date.



* ThatNostalgiaShow: The story's "present day" is December 1999 (when George Coryell was around Mika's age), as evidenced by the presence of a VCR and dial-up Internet in the Laine household, Lumi and Sami discussing ''VideoGame/PokemonRedAndBlue'', and, most noticeably, Sami mentioning "the new millennium" coming up the next month.

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* ThatNostalgiaShow: The story's "present day" is December 1999 (when George Coryell was around Mika's age), as evidenced by the presence of a VCR and dial-up Internet in the Laine household, Lumi and Sami discussing ''VideoGame/PokemonRedAndBlue'', and, most noticeably, Sami mentioning "the new millennium" coming up the next month. A practical reason for the present day being 1999 is that two things existing now would have broken the plot, namely, streaming services[[note]]which would have given Lumi and Sami less of an excuse to not play with Mika that afternoon as they could have watched their shows later; Lumi points out they could have used the VCR to tape their shows all along after they inadvertently upset Mika to the point of tears, though Sami points out that all their favorite shows are on different channels[[/note]] and Wiki/{{Wikipedia}}[[note]]which probably would have given them a lot more information on the Unimaa legend than a university article on the subconscious[[/note]].
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: When Sami is chased by the older members of Frida's Friends Club after he first finds his way into Unimaa, the reader may have noticed that Bianca was not mentioned as being among them on their scavenger hunt even though she received a list from Eino earlier. [[spoiler:This serves as a hint that she had grown tired of life in Unimaa.]]

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** Chapter 2 is titled "[[WesternAnimation/TheFlintstones Laines, Meet the Laines]]".



** Brady, in the scene where [[spoiler:the members of Frida's Friends Club start to truly realize that Frida tricked them]], mentions that [[Franchise/CareBears the Care Bears]] were the closest things he had to friends before he joined Frida's Friends Club. Lumi points out that [[WesternAnimation/CareBears1980s the show]] hadn't been on the air in years, since it was already 1999 where she and Sami were from.

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** Brady, in the scene where [[spoiler:the members of Frida's Friends Club start to truly realize that Frida tricked them]], mentions that [[Franchise/CareBears the Care Bears]] were the closest things he had to friends before he joined Frida's Friends Club. Lumi [[spoiler:Lumi points out that [[WesternAnimation/CareBears1980s the show]] hadn't been on the air in years, since it was already 1999 where she and Sami were from.]]
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* OnlySaneWoman: [[spoiler:Bianca is the only member of Frida's Friends Club who had figured out the whole thing was a sham, but had done nothing about it because she would have been placed in the quiet room permanently if she did. When she realizes that Lumi and Sami know it's a sham as well because they had come to Unimaa to rescue Mika, she asks the younger members of the club if they had grown tired of it like she had, and it's because of her getting the club members to listen to Lumi and Sami that the club members realize Frida's deceptions.]]

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* OnlySaneWoman: [[spoiler:Bianca is the only member of Frida's Friends Club who had figured out the whole thing was a sham, but had done nothing about it because she would have been placed in the quiet room permanently if she did. When she realizes that Lumi and Sami know it's a sham as well because they had come to Unimaa to rescue Mika, she asks the younger members of the club if they had grown tired of it like she had (they had, in Martina's words, "been tired of being younger than [the older kids]"), and it's because of her getting the club members to listen to Lumi and Sami that the club members realize Frida's deceptions.]]
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* OnlySaneWoman: [[spoiler:Bianca is the only member of Frida's Friends Club who had figured out the whole thing was a sham, but had done nothing about it because she would have been placed in the quiet room permanently if she did. When she realizes that Lumi and Sami know it's a sham as well because they had come to Unimaa to rescue Mika, she asks the younger members of the club if they had grown tired of it like she had, and it's because of her convincing the club members to listen to Lumi and Sami that the club members realize Frida's deceptions.]]

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* OnlySaneWoman: [[spoiler:Bianca is the only member of Frida's Friends Club who had figured out the whole thing was a sham, but had done nothing about it because she would have been placed in the quiet room permanently if she did. When she realizes that Lumi and Sami know it's a sham as well because they had come to Unimaa to rescue Mika, she asks the younger members of the club if they had grown tired of it like she had, and it's because of her convincing getting the club members to listen to Lumi and Sami that the club members realize Frida's deceptions.]]
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* OnlySaneWoman: [[spoiler:Bianca is the only member of Frida's Friends Club who had figured out the whole thing was a sham, but had done nothing about it because she would have been placed in the quiet room permanently if she did. When she realizes that Lumi and Sami know it's a sham as well because they had come to Unimaa to rescue Mika, she asks the younger members of the club if they had grown tired of it like she had, and it's because of her convincing the club members to listen to Lumi and Sami that the club members realize Frida's deceptions.]]
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: [[spoiler:When Eino is asked to consider why literally every child in Unimaa is wearing pajamas, this is what makes him truly realize Frida tricked him into giving her his soul.]]

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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: [[spoiler:When Eino is asked to consider why literally every child in Unimaa is wearing pajamas, this is what makes him remember the apple that fell on his head and knocked him out, which makes him truly realize he had been unconscious the whole time and Frida tricked him into giving her his soul.soul - compounded by the fact that Lumi had more-or-less told him that he had been dead for 100 years.]]
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The entire story can be read on Royal Road [[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/47578/unimaa here]]; a "deluxe" print version with illustrations and some supplemental material will be available for purchase at a later date.

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The entire story can be read on Royal Road [[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/47578/unimaa here]] or downloaded in digital formats from Coryell’s website until the end of 2021 [[https://seriousxm.wordpress.com/writings/unimaa/ here]]; a "deluxe" print version with illustrations and some supplemental material will be available for purchase at a later date.

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'''''Unimaa''''' (pronounced "OO-nee-mah") is a 2021 WebSerialNovel[[note]]actually a novelette[[/note]] by George Coryell (aka Tropers/IcyCrow), author of ''Literature/{{Kasia}}''.

The first chapter of the story revolves around one Eino Jokinen, a 12-year-old FarmBoy at the end of TheGayNineties from the fictional country of Vasa (a stand-in for UsefulNotes/{{Finland}}) who finds himself in the titular realm of Unimaa after being knocked out by a falling apple in his farm's orchard and meets Frida, a benevolent-looking spirit who recruits him to help her find more "friends" and uses a black orb to take away his ability to wake up, which kills him a few days later in the real world. The rest of the story is set largely during one weekend around the very end of TheNineties and revolves largely around three siblings from Vasa: Lumi Laine, an eight-year-old girl, her seven-year-old brother Sami, and their four-year-old brother Mika, who feels unappreciated by his two older siblings and his parents. When Mika is asleep that Friday night after a misunderstanding over his siblings not wanting to play with him that afternoon, he finds himself in Unimaa and makes a [[DealWithTheDevil deal with]] Frida to join their society at the cost of not being able to return home. When Lumi and Sami figure out what's going on, they become determined to find a way to bring back their brother from the subconscious and make up with him before it's too late.

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'''''Unimaa''''' (pronounced "OO-nee-mah") is a 2021 WebSerialNovel[[note]]actually WebSerialNovel (actually a novelette[[/note]] novelette based on word count) by George Coryell (aka Tropers/IcyCrow), author of ''Literature/{{Kasia}}''.

The first chapter of the story revolves around one Eino Jokinen, a 12-year-old FarmBoy at the end of TheGayNineties from the fictional country of Vasa (a stand-in for UsefulNotes/{{Finland}}) at the end of TheGayNineties, who finds himself his consciousness in the titular realm of Unimaa after being knocked out by a falling apple in his farm's orchard and while doing chores his older brothers should have been doing. After he arrives there, he meets Princess Frida, a benevolent-looking spirit who recruits him to rule alongside her and help her find more "friends" and "friends", then uses a black orb to take away his ability to wake up, which kills him a few days later in the real world. The rest of the story is set largely during one weekend around the very end of TheNineties a hundred years after Eino's death and revolves largely around three siblings from Vasa: Lumi Laine, an eight-year-old girl, her seven-year-old brother Sami, and their four-year-old brother Mika, who feels unappreciated by his two older siblings and his parents. When Mika is asleep that Friday night after a misunderstanding over his siblings not wanting to play with him that afternoon, he finds himself in Unimaa and makes a [[DealWithTheDevil deal with]] Frida to join their her and Eino's society known as "Frida's Friends Club" at the cost of not being able to return home. When Lumi and Sami figure out what's going on, they become determined to find a way to bring back their brother from the subconscious and make up with him before it's too late.



* AmazingTechnicolorPopulation: [[spoiler:Queen Helmi has light blue skin, in addition to pink hair.]]



* BeautifulVoid: [[spoiler:Pretty much all of Unimaa outside of the area around Frida's castle remains uninhabited, even 100 years later. There's a reason for that.]]



* FaceOfAnAngelMindOfADemon: [[spoiler:Frida may have a sweet, benevolent appearance per her description, but her true nature is anything but.]]
* FarmBoy: Eino was like this in his old life.



* GirlishPigtails: Frida is described as having pigtails, probably to give off a sense of childlike innocence.

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* GirlishPigtails: Frida is described as having pigtails, probably to give off a sense of childlike innocence.innocence à la ComicBook/HarleyQuinn.



* ManInTheIronMask: [[spoiler:Queen Helmi.]]



** It's likely unintentional, but Frida being described as wearing a rainbow-colored gown may be a reference to ''Theatre/JosephAndTheAmazingTechnicolorDreamcoat''.



** In one scene, Frida mentions that [[spoiler:Mika trying to remove her from power]] is "a Frida no-no", a reference to [[https://www.snopes.com/fact-check/cram-it-clown/ a very famous urban legend involving]] [[Series/TheBozoShow Bozo the Clown]].

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** In one scene, Frida mentions says that [[spoiler:Mika trying to remove her from power]] is "a Frida no-no", a reference to [[https://www.snopes.com/fact-check/cram-it-clown/ a very famous urban legend involving]] [[Series/TheBozoShow Bozo the Clown]].
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The story is set largely during one weekend around the very end of TheNineties and revolves largely around three siblings from the fictional country of Vasa (a stand-in for UsefulNotes/{{Finland}}): Lumi Laine, an eight-year-old girl, her seven-year-old brother Sami, and their four-year-old brother Mika, who feels unappreciated by his two older siblings and his parents. When Mika is asleep that Friday night after a misunderstanding over his siblings not wanting to play with him that afternoon, he finds himself in a mysterious world inhabited by lost children named Unimaa and makes a [[DealWithTheDevil deal with]] Frida, their leader, to join their society at the cost of not being able to return home. When Lumi and Sami figure out what's going on, they become determined to find a way to bring back their brother from the subconscious and make up with him.

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The first chapter of the story revolves around one Eino Jokinen, a 12-year-old FarmBoy at the end of TheGayNineties from the fictional country of Vasa (a stand-in for UsefulNotes/{{Finland}}) who finds himself in the titular realm of Unimaa after being knocked out by a falling apple in his farm's orchard and meets Frida, a benevolent-looking spirit who recruits him to help her find more "friends" and uses a black orb to take away his ability to wake up, which kills him a few days later in the real world. The rest of the story is set largely during one weekend around the very end of TheNineties and revolves largely around three siblings from the fictional country of Vasa (a stand-in for UsefulNotes/{{Finland}}): Vasa: Lumi Laine, an eight-year-old girl, her seven-year-old brother Sami, and their four-year-old brother Mika, who feels unappreciated by his two older siblings and his parents. When Mika is asleep that Friday night after a misunderstanding over his siblings not wanting to play with him that afternoon, he finds himself in a mysterious world inhabited by lost children named Unimaa and makes a [[DealWithTheDevil deal with]] Frida, their leader, Frida to join their society at the cost of not being able to return home. When Lumi and Sami figure out what's going on, they become determined to find a way to bring back their brother from the subconscious and make up with him.
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* PajamaCladHero: Lumi, Sami, and Mika are (heavily implied to be) in their pajamas whenever they're within Unimaa, as are the members of Frida's Friends Club. Justified, since Unimaa exists within the subconscious.

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* PajamaCladHero: Lumi, Sami, and Mika are (heavily (at the very least heavily implied to be) in their pajamas whenever they're within Unimaa, as are the members of Frida's Friends Club. Justified, since Unimaa exists within the subconscious.



** In one scene, Frida mentions that something is "a Frida no-no", a reference to [[https://www.snopes.com/fact-check/cram-it-clown/ a very famous urban legend involving]] [[Series/TheBozoShow Bozo the Clown]].

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** In one scene, Frida mentions that something [[spoiler:Mika trying to remove her from power]] is "a Frida no-no", a reference to [[https://www.snopes.com/fact-check/cram-it-clown/ a very famous urban legend involving]] [[Series/TheBozoShow Bozo the Clown]].


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* WouldHurtAChild: [[spoiler:If stealing their souls counts as hurting them, Frida definitely qualifies.]]

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'''''Unimaa''''' (pronounced "OO-nee-mah") is a 2021 WebSerialNovel[[note]]actually a novelette[[/note]] (with a print version forthcoming) by George Coryell (aka Tropers/IcyCrow), author of ''Literature/{{Kasia}}''.

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'''''Unimaa''''' (pronounced "OO-nee-mah") is a 2021 WebSerialNovel[[note]]actually a novelette[[/note]] (with a print version forthcoming) by George Coryell (aka Tropers/IcyCrow), author of ''Literature/{{Kasia}}''.



The entire story can be read on Royal Road [[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/47578/unimaa here]] or downloaded for free in digital formats (PDF, EPUB, MOBI) as a VanillaEdition from Coryell's website [[https://seriousxm.wordpress.com/writings/unimaa/ here]]; a "deluxe" print version with illustrations and some supplemental material will be available for purchase at a later date.

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The entire story can be read on Royal Road [[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/47578/unimaa here]] or downloaded for free in digital formats (PDF, EPUB, MOBI) as a VanillaEdition from Coryell's website [[https://seriousxm.wordpress.com/writings/unimaa/ here]]; a "deluxe" print version with illustrations and some supplemental material will be available for purchase at a later date.



* DangerouslyGarishEnvironment: Unimaa is very much this. [[spoiler:Though it wasn't always dangerous.]]


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* RoyalWe: Eino's older brother Matti references it in the opening scene of the book.


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** Lumi mentions "that pinball game [Mika's] always wanted to play", which is likely a reference to [[VideoGame/FullTiltPinball the Space Cadet pinball game that came with Windows]].


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** In one scene, Lumi says that she and Sami are "outnumbered, two to two", which is a possible reference to the ''WesternAnimation/LooneyTunes'' short "Bunker Hill Bunny".


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'''''Unimaa''''' (pronounced "OO-nee-mah") is a 2021 WebSerialNovel[[note]]actually a novelette[[/note]] (with a print version forthcoming) by George Coryell (aka Tropers/IcyCrow), author of ''Literature/{{Kasia}}''.

The story is set largely during one weekend around the very end of TheNineties and revolves largely around three siblings from the fictional country of Vasa (a stand-in for UsefulNotes/{{Finland}}): Lumi Laine, an eight-year-old girl, her seven-year-old brother Sami, and their four-year-old brother Mika, who feels unappreciated by his two older siblings and his parents. When Mika is asleep that Friday night after a misunderstanding over his siblings not wanting to play with him that afternoon, he finds himself in a mysterious world inhabited by lost children named Unimaa and makes a [[DealWithTheDevil deal with]] Frida, their leader, to join their society at the cost of not being able to return home. When Lumi and Sami figure out what's going on, they become determined to find a way to bring back their brother from the subconscious and make up with him.

The entire story can be read on Royal Road [[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/47578/unimaa here]] or downloaded for free in digital formats (PDF, EPUB, MOBI) as a VanillaEdition from Coryell's website [[https://seriousxm.wordpress.com/writings/unimaa/ here]]; a "deluxe" print version with illustrations and some supplemental material will be available for purchase at a later date.

!! This story contains examples of the following tropes:

* AdultFear: Mika not waking up qualifies as this.
* AdventuresInComaland: Pretty much the whole point of the story.
* AllJustADream: The reader knows it's all just a dream right away.
* AloofBigBrother: Lumi and Sami are perceived as this by Mika at first. This is one of the factors that influences Mika's decision to stay in Unimaa.
* AndIMustScream: It's revealed that [[spoiler:Queen Helmi, the true ruler of Unimaa, has been trapped in a dungeon cell for about five hundred years while being immortal.]]
** Also, [[spoiler:the members of Frida's Friends Club have been trapped there for many years (with Brady, presumably the newest member before Mika joined, having been there for at least 12 years since 1987), unable to escape by any means except if the Black Orb were destroyed.]]
* AndTheAdventureContinues: [[spoiler:Lumi, Sami, and Mika go to sleep the following night, eager to have more adventures in the subconscious - Mika in Unimaa now that Frida's reign is over, and Lumi and Sami discovering new worlds.]]
* ArmorPiercingQuestion: [[spoiler:When Eino is asked to consider why literally every child in Unimaa is wearing pajamas, this is what makes him truly realize Frida tricked him into giving her his soul.]]
* ArtifactOfDoom: The Black Orb, Frida's source of power [[spoiler:and source of life]].
* AsleepForDays: [[spoiler:Mika was asleep for two nights, and the members of Frida's Friends Club had been asleep (and dead) for over 10 years.]]
* BilingualBonus: "Unimaa" roughly means "dream land" in Finnish.
** Also, Frida's magic words to use the Black Orb are "semper felix", which is Latin for "always happy".
* BreakfastClub: Frida's Friends Club is essentially this, in that everyone in it was friendless before they joined.
* BrotherSisterTeam: Lumi and Sami, though not in that order.
* ChekhovsGun: A mild example: [[spoiler:Mika drops his teddy bear Kimmo while he's in Unimaa, and Sami retrieving it and showing it to Mika while the former is briefly there makes the latter realize he's in danger when he tries (and fails) to wake up.]]
* ClosedDoorRapport: The morning after Mika decides to stay in Unimaa via the Black Orb, Lumi and Sami decide to make amends with him, but get no response from the other side of his bedroom door. When they discover he's in a deep sleep (and mutters Eino and Frida's names), this prompts them to find their way into Unimaa that night to rescue him.
* CoconutMeetsCranium: The apple variant is PlayedForDrama, as it knocks Eino out.
* CompanionCube: Kimmo, Mika's blue teddy bear.
* CountingToPotato: Mika does this in a way when he's playing hide-and-seek in Unimaa:
-->'''Mika:''' Twenty-twenty-twenty-twenty-eighteen...\\
'''Eino:''' Ninety-eight.\\
'''Mika:''' Twenty-twenty-twenty-twenty-nineteen...\\
'''Eino:''' Ninety-nine. And the next number is...\\
'''Mika:''' One hundred!
* CrapsaccharineWorld: Unimaa is essentially this - it may seem like a SugarBowl at first glance, but it's certainly not all it's cracked up to be with Frida in power. [[spoiler:Subverted in that once Frida is removed from power, however, it's on track to returning to what it used to be: a place for children to unwind while they sleep.]]
* DamselInDistress: [[spoiler:Queen Helmi.]]
* DangerouslyGarishEnvironment: Unimaa is very much this. [[spoiler:Though it wasn't always dangerous.]]
* DeadToBeginWith: Eino, [[spoiler:and every member of Frida's Friends Club besides Mika]].
* {{Determinator}}: [[spoiler:After learning the truth about Unimaa from Helmi (and truly realizing that Frida had deceived him), Mika becomes absolutely determined to find Lumi and Sami to help rescue him.]]
* DistressedDude: Mika.
* DealWithTheDevil: Anyone who wants to enjoy Unimaa must make a deal with Frida, [[spoiler:which is basically them giving her their soul]].
* DistantPrologue: The story opens in the late 19th century, where we first meet Eino and see how he ended up in Unimaa.
* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: Frida is essentially [[spoiler:a kid-friendly succubus]].
* DreamLand: Unimaa itself. Heck, it's Finnish for "dream land"!
* DramaticNecklaceRemoval: [[spoiler:Eino does this to Frida to destroy the Black Orb.]]
* EmbarrassingDampSheets: It's mentioned that Lumi wears bedwetting underwear.
* ExactWords: Frida tells prospective members of her fan club that "all [their] troubles will be over" with the Black Orb.
* ExtremelyShortTimespan: Excluding the DistantPrologue in 1899, the story is set over a period of three days and two nights.
* ForeignLanguageTitle: "Unimaa" is a Finnish word which roughly means "dream land", which makes sense for the story.
* FriendlessBackground: All the members of Frida's Friends Club were like this in their old lives.
* FromBadToWorse: The third chapter of the book (where Mika makes his deal with Frida after thinking Lumi and Sami hate him) ''is actually titled this''. It's worth noting that George Coryell [[Tropers/IcyCrow is]] JustForFun/OneOfUs.
* GoodPrincessEvilQueen: [[spoiler:Exploited by Frida, and thus Inverted.]]
* GoMadFromTheRevelation: [[spoiler:Eino, upon truly realizing that he's been dead for a hundred years and that Frida tricked him into giving her his soul, starts muttering "No way out..."]]
* GoToSleepEnding: [[spoiler:Lumi, Sami, and Mika go to sleep at the end, eager to have more adventures in the subconscious.]]
* HappinessIsMandatory: [[spoiler:It's revealed that anyone in Frida's Friends Club who's not particularly happy gets punished.]]
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Eino, while knowing full well that his consciousness won't live on if he does so, destroys the Black Orb in order to kill Frida and allow Unimaa to return to its former self.]]
* HideAndNoSeek: It's heavily implied that Lumi (probably Sami as well) has done this to Mika every time they've played hide-and-seek. [[spoiler:Mika also does this to the members of Frida's Friends Club later on to distract them when he's trying to find Lumi and Sami to help rescue him.]]
* IntroOnlyPointOfView: In the very beginning of the story, we see Eino and how he started Frida's society with her.
* LockedInTheDungeon: [[spoiler:Queen Helmi has been locked in her own castle's dungeon for about 500 years, while being immortal.]]
* LotusEaterMachine: Unimaa is essentially this under Frida's rule.
* NorseByNorsewest: The story is set in Vasa, a country which is implied to be UsefulNotes/{{Finland}} in all but name.
* PajamaCladHero: Lumi, Sami, and Mika are (heavily implied to be) in their pajamas whenever they're within Unimaa, as are the members of Frida's Friends Club. Justified, since Unimaa exists within the subconscious.
* PeaceAndLoveIncorporated: Frida's Friends Club qualifies.
* PinkGirlBlueBoy: The text mentions that Lumi and Sami's pajamas are pink and blue, respectively.
* ThePlace
* PrincessClassic: Frida wants you to think she's one of these.
* PrincessesRule: Frida is the ruler of Unimaa and has the title of "princess". [[spoiler:This serves as an early hint that she's not the legitimate ruler of the realm.]]
* ProtagonistJourneyToVillain: Eino's story arc.
* RightfulKingReturns: [[spoiler:Queen Helmi, at the end of the story.]]
* RipVanTinkle: [[spoiler:When Mika finally wakes up, the first thing he does is rush to the bathroom.]]
* RuleNumberOne: Eino goes over the list of rules for Frida's Friends Club with Mika:
-->1. [[Film/FightClub You do not talk about]] Frida's Friends Club.\\
2. Do not go into that forest over there.\\
3. You may be punished with time in the quiet room if you are unruly.\\
4. This list of rules is not all-inclusive.\\
5. [[ThereIsNoRuleSix There is no rule number 5.]]\\
6. No talking about Frida's Friends Club.
* SharedDream: Unimaa is like this to everyone within it.
* ShoutOut: Several:
** Antti (the Laine siblings' father) paraphrases the schoolmaster from ''Music/TheWall'' at the dinner table.
** Lumi and Sami, while changing into their pajamas, discuss each other's progress in ''VideoGame/PokemonRedAndBlue'' - Lumi's training for the Elite Four, while Sami can't get past the ghost in Pokémon Tower.
** Eino paraphrases Music/{{Prince}}'s opening monologue from "Let's Go Crazy" when explaining to Mika why he should join their society.
** [[Film/TimeBandits "Return what you have stolen from me!"]]
** Eino, when going over the rules of Frida's Friends Club with Mika, references both ''Film/FightClub'' ("The first rule of Frida's Friends Club is you do not talk about Frida's Friends Club") and ''Series/MontyPythonsFlyingCircus'' ("Rule number five, there is no rule number five").
** Lumi makes an allusion to Face, the Creator/NickJr mascot back in TheNineties (more specifically, how traumatizing it was to some viewers back in the day).
** [[Film/TheShining "Come play with us. We can play forever, and ever, and..."]]
** Brady, in the scene where [[spoiler:the members of Frida's Friends Club start to truly realize that Frida tricked them]], mentions that [[Franchise/CareBears the Care Bears]] were the closest things he had to friends before he joined Frida's Friends Club. Lumi points out that [[WesternAnimation/CareBears1980s the show]] hadn't been on the air in years, since it was already 1999 where she and Sami were from.
** "You don't say, [[Literature/SherlockHolmes my dear Watson]]."
* ThatNostalgiaShow: The story's "present day" is December 1999 (when George Coryell was around Mika's age), as evidenced by the presence of a VCR and dial-up Internet in the Laine household, Lumi and Sami discussing ''VideoGame/PokemonRedAndBlue'', and, most noticeably, Sami mentioning "the new millennium" coming up the next month.
* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: Eino, through befriending Frida, opened the floodgates for more children after him to fall for her deceptions [[spoiler:(and possibly more for generations to come were it not for Lumi and Sami)]].
* WhatYearIsThis: [[spoiler:Gustav asks this question to everyone upon connecting the dots between the Black Orb, everyone around him wearing pajamas, and all the sweets around him - and everyone gives a vastly different answer (Stephanie says 1975, Martina says 1953, and Brady says 1987), which makes them realize that because none of them have aged a day since those years, they all died in their sleep in those years thanks to the Black Orb.]]
* WhereTheHellIsSpringfield: The unnamed town in Vasa where the Laine siblings live, though based on the description that it's "near the Arctic Circle", it's most likely based on Rovaniemi, Finland.
* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: [[spoiler:In addition to light blue skin, Helmi has pink hair.]]

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