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* BadassTeacher: Deacon Matson. One-eyed, reduced fingers, decorated veteran of some of the first expeditions, including an award for being the sole survivor, who thinks that students being allowed any weapon is for sissies and would test them unarmed if he could. Going unarmed does make the test safer, per ParanoiaFuel below.

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* BadassTeacher: Deacon Matson. One-eyed, reduced fingers, decorated veteran of some of the first expeditions, including an award for being the sole survivor, who thinks that students being allowed any weapon is for sissies and would test them unarmed if he could. Going unarmed does make the test safer, per ParanoiaFuel Paranoia Fuel below.



** Rod averts the trope with his sister's advice: he takes only a knife, a vest pack, and rations. Even Matson questions why he didn't arrive with popular camping equipment and outdoor gadgets like other students.
** Subverted by Matson during the final inspection. Students are expected to be prepared for any reasonable survival circumstances, in particular not bringing [[ExposedToTheElements cold weather gear]] is an automatic failure despite Matson knowing they wouldn't need it. A few students go overboard and bring pressurized [[HazmatSuit space suits]] and Matson fails them as well, both for stupidity: the test is a ''test'', not a DeathTrap, and students wouldn't be thrown into vacuum or toxic environments without being informed.

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** Rod averts the trope with under his sister's advice: he takes only a knife, a vest pack, and rations. Even Matson questions why he didn't arrive with popular camping equipment and outdoor gadgets like other students.
** Subverted by Matson during the final inspection. Students are expected to be prepared for any reasonable ''reasonable'' survival circumstances, circumstances; in particular particular, not bringing [[ExposedToTheElements cold weather gear]] is an automatic failure despite Matson knowing they wouldn't need it. A few students go overboard and bring pressurized [[HazmatSuit space suits]] and Matson fails them as well, both for stupidity: the test is a ''test'', not a DeathTrap, and students wouldn't be thrown into vacuum or toxic environments without being informed.



* DemocracyIsFlawed: Discussed by Grant and Rod; not that democracy in inherently flawed, but that adopting wholesale the form of government used in an agrarian democracy or an industrial republic won't work for their co-operative colony.

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* DemocracyIsFlawed: Discussed by Grant and Rod; not that democracy in inherently flawed, but that adopting wholesale the form of government used in an agrarian democracy or an industrial republic won't work for their co-operative cooperative colony.



* DisasterDemocracy: The stranded students' mistake isn't establishing a democracy but making their government more complicated than primitive survival warrants. Still, as the guys who attempt to turn the thing into a ''Lord Of The Flies''-style "do-as-you-please" TeenageWasteland end up showcasing ([[TakeThat by means of getting killed quickly]]), a degree of society ''is'' needed in a disaster, and thus all of the kids agree on trying to make it work.

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* DisasterDemocracy: The stranded students' mistake isn't establishing a democracy but making their government more complicated than primitive survival warrants. Still, as the guys who attempt to turn the thing into a ''Lord Of The Flies''-style "do-as-you-please" TeenageWasteland end up showcasing ([[TakeThat by means of getting killed quickly]]), a degree of society ''is'' needed in a disaster, and thus all of the kids agree on trying to make it work.



* {{Hammerspace}}: Caroline leaves for the test unarmed, barefoot, and carrying an overnight bag. A mere fifteen minutes later, Rod departs and finds her empty bag in the relay room. She arrives at the colony nearly a month after the test began and nobody is really sure how she managed to hold onto her odd assortment of items, including her diary and a sauce pan, for so long without her bag.

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* {{Hammerspace}}: Caroline leaves for the test unarmed, barefoot, and carrying an overnight bag. A mere fifteen minutes later, Rod departs and finds her empty bag in the relay room. She arrives at the colony nearly a month after the test began began, and nobody is really sure how she managed to hold onto her odd assortment of items, including her diary and a sauce pan, for so long without her bag.



* HuntingTheMostDangerousGame: Deacon Matson tells the students that they will be facing the most dangerous animal known. When a student, quoting a text book, takes that to mean either leopards or "snow apes", Matson clarifies that he's referring to other humans.

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* HuntingTheMostDangerousGame: Deacon Matson tells the students that they will be facing the most dangerous animal known. When a student, quoting a text book, textbook, takes that to mean either leopards or "snow apes", Matson clarifies that he's referring to other humans.



* MustHaveCaffeine: Matson mentions that when leading an expedition on a primitive planet, it's not the power/lights/plumbing that you miss, its the things like coffee and tobacco.

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* MustHaveCaffeine: Matson mentions that when leading an expedition on a primitive planet, it's not the power/lights/plumbing that you miss, its it's the things like coffee and tobacco.



* NonIndicativeTitle: The titular Tunnel (and its failure) only serves to set the plot in motion, and ceases to be relevant after the first couple chapters. From a storytelling perspective, Heinlein could just as easily have made it a spaceship without having to change anything else.

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* NonIndicativeTitle: The titular Tunnel (and its failure) only serves to set the plot in motion, and ceases to be relevant after the first couple chapters. From a storytelling perspective, Heinlein could just as easily have made it a spaceship without having to change anything much else.



** The reason Helen recommends that Rod takes only a knife: a gun's power will give Rod a false sense of courage and safety which would possibly get him killed. A knife is only so much better than being unarmed and his vulnerability will make him paranoid enough to avoid conflicts and survive. Helen knows from experience, she took a gun on her first expedition and losing it saved her life: she ran from a native beast rather than fighting it and learned later that the creatures were virtually ImmuneToBullets. Having no gun immediately makes Rod more cautious when he arrives; he elects to crawl downwind, since that would give him the best chance of seeing anything that was hunting him.
** The final word of advice given to students is to beware of "stobor". They initially assume the stobor to be the giant, lion-like creatures they occasionally encounter, but then finally identify what stobor actually are: [[spoiler:"dopy joes", normally dim-witted and lethargic creatures who have an annual TheSwarm season. However, after the rescue, Rod finds out that there never were any "stobor." It was a vague warning specifically to frighten the kids into being cautious. Nearly every life-bearing planet has some animal that turns out to be a monster of legend under the right circumstances and the best protection is being completely paranoid.]].

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** The reason Helen recommends that Rod takes only a knife: a gun's power will give Rod a false sense of courage and safety safety, which would possibly get him killed. A knife is only so much better than being unarmed and his vulnerability will make him paranoid enough to avoid conflicts and survive. Helen knows from experience, she experience. She took a gun on her first expedition own survival test, and losing it saved her life: life; she ran from a native beast rather than fighting it and learned later that the creatures were virtually ImmuneToBullets. Having no gun immediately makes Rod more cautious when he arrives; he elects to crawl downwind, since that would give him the best chance of seeing anything that was hunting him.
** The final word of advice given to students is to beware of "stobor". They initially assume the stobor to be the giant, lion-like creatures they occasionally encounter, but then finally identify what stobor actually are: [[spoiler:"dopy joes", normally dim-witted and lethargic creatures who have an annual TheSwarm season. However, after the rescue, Rod finds out that there never were any "stobor." "stobor". It was a vague warning specifically to frighten the kids into being cautious. Nearly every life-bearing planet has some animal that turns out to be a monster of legend under the right circumstances and the best protection is being completely paranoid.]].



* SciFiWritersHave/NoSenseOfVelocity: Rod and Jack notice a new star and conclude that they've just witnessed a nova. [[spoiler:At the book's end, it's revealed a nova is what interfered with the recall. It's implied that they saw the nova that prevented them from returning home when realistically it would be many, ''many'' years before one world saw the effects of a nova, least of all ''both''. One possible explanation is that the ''effect'' of the nova reached the space around the planet at nearly[[note]]They don't see the nova until after the recall is overdue[[/note]] the same time the light from it did, and it flat out stated that the portals are delicate at best, with many variables that all have to be just right. If looked at like this, the reason the cut-off happened when they saw the nova is because it altered local space.]]

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* SciFiWritersHave/NoSenseOfVelocity: Rod and Jack notice a new star and conclude that they've just witnessed a nova. [[spoiler:At the book's end, it's revealed a nova is what interfered with the recall. It's implied that they saw the nova that prevented them from returning home when realistically it would be many, ''many'' years before one world saw the effects of a nova, least of all ''both''. One possible explanation is that the ''effect'' of the nova reached the space around the planet at nearly[[note]]They don't see the nova until after the recall is overdue[[/note]] the same time the light from it did, and it flat out it's flat-out stated that the portals are delicate at best, with many variables that all have to be just right. If looked at like this, the reason the cut-off happened when they saw the nova is because it altered local space.]]



** During the mayoral election a number of items are chosen to serve as anonymous ballots: pebbles, twigs, and leaves. Waxie, running on his "scientific breeding" platform, needs an item to serve as his ballot. Jimmy offers a solution: the fragmented shards of a failed clay pot. Which he announces to the colony as "I'll get chunks of it and all the crackpots are votes for Waxie."

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** During the mayoral election a number of items are chosen to serve as anonymous ballots: pebbles, twigs, and leaves. Waxie, running on his "scientific breeding" platform, needs an item to serve as his ballot. Jimmy offers a solution: the fragmented shards of a failed clay pot. Which he announces to the colony as as, "I'll get chunks of it and all the crackpots are votes for Waxie."



* TooAwesomeToUse: Rod shoots down Jack when she suggests that they use her dart gun for hunting. Although theoretically it can be used indefinitely (as it runs off of manually-pumped compressed air and the darts can be retrieved and re-envenomed), Rod points out that no matter how careful they are, the day will come when the last dart will be lost -- and that could be the day they really need it.

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* TooAwesomeToUse: Rod shoots down Jack when she suggests that they use her dart gun for hunting. Although theoretically it can be used indefinitely (as it runs off of manually-pumped compressed air and the darts can be retrieved and re-envenomed), re-envenomed (until the venom runs out, unless they can find a suitable substitute)), Rod points out that no matter how careful they are, the day will come when the last dart will be lost -- and that could be the day they really need it.



* WeHaveBecomeComplacent: Knowing that their current colony is not in a defensible position, Rod and Roy are sent to scout for a site that will be suitable for the long-term. An injury turns their scouting mission from weeks to months; when they return, the colony is much more established and, since no serious issues have arisen, people are willing to risk staying where they are rather than start over in a new location. Rod disagrees; a group of his close friends consider leaving the group to move to the more defensible location, but ultimately decide to remain.

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* WeHaveBecomeComplacent: Knowing that their current colony is not in a defensible position, Rod and Roy are sent to scout for a site that will be suitable for the long-term. An injury turns their scouting mission from weeks to months; when they return, the colony is much more established and, since no serious issues have arisen, people are willing to risk staying where they are rather than start over in a new location. Rod disagrees; a group of his close friends consider leaving the group to move to the more defensible location, but ultimately decide to remain. It comes back to bite the colony when the local wildlife goes insane due to seasonal behavior patterns.



* WeatherControlMachine: "Weather conditioning", as well as plumbing, heating, power, etc. are mentioned as luxuries that are absent in the new colony planets.

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* WeatherControlMachine: "Weather conditioning", as well as plumbing, heating, power, etc. are mentioned as luxuries that are absent in the new colony planets. Rod also mentions, when expounding his hypothesis that they're on Earth, that there must be cloud generators to keep the sky overcast so the students don't figure it out from seeing the stars.



* YearOutsideHourInside: When Rod's father is diagnosed with an incurable disease he and his wife go into a Ramsbotham field where two weeks to them will equate to twenty years in the real world. They will stay in the field until a cure for the disease is found, [[spoiler: which turns out to have been discovered much sooner than the twenty years the doctors estimated it would take. Rod's parents exit the field just as he returns home from his time on the alien planet.]]

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* YearOutsideHourInside: When Rod's father is diagnosed with an incurable disease he and his wife go into a Ramsbotham field where two weeks to them will equate to twenty years in the real world. They will stay in the field until a cure for the disease is found, [[spoiler: which turns out to have been discovered much sooner than the twenty years the doctors estimated it would take. Rod's parents exit the field just as before he returns home from his time on the alien planet.]]
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* TapOnTheHead: Just a few days into his survival training, someone hits Rod from behind and he wakes up with all his gear missing. He concludes that the blow was meant to kill him too.

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* TapOnTheHead: Just a few days into his survival training, someone hits Rod from behind and he wakes up with all his gear missing. He Deconstructed somewhat, as Rod concludes that the blow was his attacker meant to kill him, not knock him too.out.

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* DebateAndSwitch: On the first night of the test, Rod hears a man sobbing nearby and begins internally debating his responsibility to risk his own life in order to help someone else who is clearly in great distress. The issue is resolved when he hears another man start to sob, then another, and realizes that it's actually animals making the noise

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* DebateAndSwitch: On the first night of the test, Rod hears a man sobbing nearby and begins internally debating his responsibility to risk his own life in order to help someone else who is clearly in great distress. The issue is resolved when he hears another man start to sob, then another, and realizes that it's actually animals making the noisenoise.
* DemocracyIsFlawed: Discussed by Grant and Rod; not that democracy in inherently flawed, but that adopting wholesale the form of government used in an agrarian democracy or an industrial republic won't work for their co-operative colony.



* {{Foreshadowing}}: Matson asks Rod who gave him the good survival advice and Rod explains it came from his sister in the Corps of Amazons. Matson grumbles that a woman like her would have kept him from being a cranky old bachelor. [[spoiler: When Rod returns, Matson is now his brother-in-law]].

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* {{Foreshadowing}}: FantasyCounterpartReligion: Rod and his family practice "evangelical Monism" that apparently originated in Persia at the end of the 20th century. A few details are given: Rod's father services as family priest, leading a ritual at mealtime in which a "Peace Lamp" is lit , and there's a religious text called ''Peace of the Flame.''
* FiendishFish: We never learn exactly what type of creature lives in the stream, just that being thrown or falling in is an effective death sentence.
-->He did not know what it was that lived in that stream; he did know that it was hungry.
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Matson asks Rod who gave him the good survival advice and Rod explains it came from his sister in the Corps of Amazons. Matson grumbles that a woman like her would have kept him from being a cranky old bachelor. [[spoiler: When Rod returns, Matson is now his brother-in-law]].brother-in-law]].
** Similarly, Helen states that if she found someone to marry, she "won't even count his arms and legs." [[spoiler: Matson has his arms and legs, but is missing an eye and 3 fingers.]]



* InconvenientItch: Upon being out as a girl, the first thing Jack does is remove her armored vest and scratch an itch, which she claims has been bothering her ever since she teamed with Rod several days earlier and had to wear TwentyFourHourArmor to conceal her gender.

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* InconvenientItch: Upon being out outed as a girl, the first thing Jack does is remove her armored vest and scratch an itch, which she claims has been bothering her ever since she teamed with Rod several days earlier and had to wear TwentyFourHourArmor to conceal her gender.



* ItsPersonal: How Rod feels about whoever jumped him. Ironically, he feels like the loss of his weapon and gear are nothing less than he deserved for failing to be properly aware of his surroundings; his anger stems from the fact that the person also took the watch his father gave him, which just amounts to theft.



* KilledOffscreen: Whoever attacked Rod and killed Johann Braun was presumably killed by animals, as Jack found a body that had gear from both Rod and Johann.



* PortalNetwork: Played with. Gates are very expensive to maintain, but it makes sense to keep them open in high traffic routes; for example, Rod uses them as part of his daily commute. On the other hand, a single colony on a distant planet might have to wait ''years'' to have regular gate access, as it would need to be profitable enough to justify opening a gate.



* TrainingAccident: The test was only supposed to be a week and a half maximum; after the recall fails to appear, they consider the possibility it's meant to be late and the test is secretly longer. Rod takes it further and hypothesizes that the real test is figuring out that rather than being on a distant planet, they were actually on EarthAllAlong and need to make their way to safety. Eventually, it becomes obvious that the recall isn't coming and they're stranded.

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* TrainingAccident: The test was only supposed to be a week and a half maximum; after the recall fails to appear, they consider the possibility it's meant to be late and the test is secretly longer. Rod takes it further and hypothesizes that the [[HiddenPurposeTest real test test]] is figuring to figure out that rather than being on a distant planet, they were actually on EarthAllAlong and need to make their way to safety. Eventually, it becomes obvious that the recall isn't coming and they're stranded.


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* WeWillSpendCreditsInTheFuture: Although Heinlein uses this trope in many of his works, it's averted here; instead, the currency is the "pluton", which seems to be roughly equivalent in value to the dollar (or at least the dollar in 1955 when the book was written). Rod runs up a (fake) debt of ''billions'' of plutons playing cribbage with Jimmy and Jack.

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* AlienSky: Rod's theory that he was on EarthAllAlong is dashed when he finally sees the sky on a clear night and the stars are much different than they would be from earth.
-->Framed by the ledge above him and by tree tops across the stream was a pattern of six stars, a lopsided pentagon with a star in its center. The six stars were as bright and unmistakable as the seven stars of Earth’s Big Dipper... nor did it take a degree in astrography to know that this constellation had never been seen from Terra.



* DebateAndSwitch: On the first night of the test, Rod hears a man sobbing nearby and begins internally debating his responsibility to risk his own life in order to help someone else who is clearly in great distress. The issue is resolved when he hears another man start to sob, then another, and realizes that it's actually animals making the noise



* EarthAllAlong: Subverted. When the recall never comes, Rod conjectures that the students are actually on Earth, and part of the test is figuring out that fact and making their way to safety. This is not actually the case, as proven when Jack shows him a [[AlienSky constellation that doesn't resemble anything seen from Earth]].

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* EarthAllAlong: Subverted. When the recall never comes, Rod conjectures that the students are actually on Earth, and [[HiddenPurposeTest part of the test is figuring out that fact and making their way to safety.safety]]. This is not actually the case, as proven when Jack shows him a [[AlienSky constellation that doesn't resemble anything seen from Earth]].



* HiddenPurposeTest: Subverted. When the deadline passes and the students are never recalled, Rod hypothesizes that the ''real'' test is to figure out that they were on EarthAllAlong and make their way to safety.



* HumanPopsicle: A variant: Rod's terminally ill father will spend two weeks in a Ramsbotham field and return twenty years later in hopes that medical science can save him.

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* HormoneAddledTeenager: Rod, unaware that Jack is a girl, is firmly against adding girls to the team for this reason:
-->"You get some pretty little darling on this team and we’ll have more grief inside than stobor, or such, can give us from outside. Quarrels and petty jealousies and maybe a couple of boys knifing each other. It will be tough enough without that trouble.”
* HumanPopsicle: A variant: Rod's terminally ill father (as well as his mother) will spend two weeks in a Ramsbotham field and return twenty years later in hopes that medical science can save him.him.
* HuntingTheMostDangerousGame: Deacon Matson tells the students that they will be facing the most dangerous animal known. When a student, quoting a text book, takes that to mean either leopards or "snow apes", Matson clarifies that he's referring to other humans.



* NamingYourColonyWorld: Early on, Rod watches colonists depart for new New Canaan. The world they were stranded on was named Tangaroa after a Polynesian goddess, although they don't find this out until contact with Earth is reestablished, and they never got around to naming it themselves.

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Early on, Rod watches colonists depart for new a planet called New Canaan. Canaan, as well as emigrants being forced to a planet called Heavenly Mountains.
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The world they were stranded on was named Tangaroa after a Polynesian goddess, although they don't find this out until contact with Earth is reestablished, and they never got around to naming it themselves.

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* TwentyFourHourArmor: Jack wears a heavy and hot armored vest at all times after meeting Rod, one that disguises her gender. She wasn't sure that he would have teamed with her if he knew she was a girl, and as a whole, she was right.

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* TwentyFourHourArmor: Jack wears a heavy and hot armored vest at all times after meeting Rod, one that disguises her gender. She wasn't sure that he would have teamed with her if he knew she was a girl, and as a whole, she was right. She abandons the armor once her gender is revealed and she no longer needs to hide it.



* NoisyNature: There's a species of animal that the colonists dub the "grand opera" due to the noise they make every night.



* OverpopulationCrisis: China apparently conquered Australia and paved over the entire continent to make room for its growing population before the PortalNetwork was developed, now they force hordes of settlers to new worlds through the gates. And Helen apparently finds it acceptable to retire from the military and raise a large family, despite the existence of this trope meaning that there's a shortage of available husbands (because more women are being born than men).

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* OverpopulationCrisis: China apparently conquered Australia and paved over the entire continent to make room for its growing population before the PortalNetwork was developed, now they force hordes of settlers to new new, substandard worlds through the gates. And Helen apparently finds it acceptable to retire from the military and raise a large family, despite the existence of this trope meaning that there's a shortage of available husbands (because more women are being born than men).



* SassyBlackWoman: Caroline.

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* SassyBlackWoman: Caroline. Although apparent throughout the novel, her snarkiness really comes to the forefront when she [[SwitchingPOV becomes the PointOfView character]] as seen through her journal entries.
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* TrainingAccident: The test was only supposed to be a week and a half. Early after the recall fails to appear, they consider the possibility it's meant to be late and the test is secretly longer, with Rod hypothesizing that part of the test is figuring out that they're on Earth and making their own way to safety. Eventually, it becomes obvious that the recall isn't coming and they're stranded.

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* TrainingAccident: The test was only supposed to be a week and a half. Early half maximum; after the recall fails to appear, they consider the possibility it's meant to be late and the test is secretly longer, with longer. Rod hypothesizing takes it further and hypothesizes that part of the real test is figuring out that they're rather than being on Earth a distant planet, they were actually on EarthAllAlong and making need to make their own way to safety. Eventually, it becomes obvious that the recall isn't coming and they're stranded.

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* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: Averted. After the colony is established for a couple of years, Rod has a confrontation with a problem citizen, Bruce, that ends in a physical altercation. Rod is badly beaten, but is surprised to learn that if anything, the incident has solidified his role as mayor -- the colonists follow him because he's a good leader, not due to any physical prowess.



** The final word of advice given to students is to beware of "stobor". They initially assume the stobor to be the giant, lion-like creatures the occasionally encounter, but then finally identify what stobor actually are: [[spoiler:"dopey joes", normally dim-witted and lethargic creatures who have an annual TheSwarm season. However, after the rescue, Rod finds out that there never were any "stobor." It was a vague warning specifically to frighten the kids into being cautious. Nearly every life-bearing planet has some animal that turns out to be a monster of legend under the right circumstances and the best protection is being completely paranoid.]].

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** The final word of advice given to students is to beware of "stobor". They initially assume the stobor to be the giant, lion-like creatures the they occasionally encounter, but then finally identify what stobor actually are: [[spoiler:"dopey [[spoiler:"dopy joes", normally dim-witted and lethargic creatures who have an annual TheSwarm season. However, after the rescue, Rod finds out that there never were any "stobor." It was a vague warning specifically to frighten the kids into being cautious. Nearly every life-bearing planet has some animal that turns out to be a monster of legend under the right circumstances and the best protection is being completely paranoid.]].

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* BirthDeathJuxtaposition: [[spoiler: Grant]] dies and Bob and Carmen's baby is born on the night of the stampede.



* DepopulationBomb: An offhand comment is made regarding World War III being caused by overpopulation:
-->"The hydrogen, germ, and nerve gas horrors that followed were not truly political. The true meaning was more that of beggars fighting over a crust of bread."



* FamousFamousFictional: "...Cowpertown is safe in history, along with Plymouth Rock, Botany Bay, and Dakin's Colony."

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** "Rod Walker knew about Dr. J. E. Ramsbotham[[note]]The inventor of the gates[[/note]], just as he knew about Einstein, Newton, and Columbus...."
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"...Cowpertown is safe in history, along with Plymouth Rock, Botany Bay, and Dakin's Colony."



* NotAfraidToDie: Rod's sister, when her mother laments that she chose a career path so dangerous, simply shrugs and points out that the death rate for the military is the same as anywhere else -- one person, one death, sooner or later.



** The final word of advice given to students is to beware of "stobor". They're very cautious around the unfamiliar native animals until they finally identify what stobor actually are: [[spoiler:"dopy joes", normally dim-witted and lethargic creatures who have an annual TheSwarm season. However, after the rescue, Rod finds out that there never were any "stobor." It was a vague warning specifically to frighten the kids into being cautious. Nearly every life-bearing planet has some animal that turns out to be a monster of legend under the right circumstances and the best protection is being completely paranoid.]].

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** The final word of advice given to students is to beware of "stobor". They're very cautious around They initially assume the unfamiliar native animals until they stobor to be the giant, lion-like creatures the occasionally encounter, but then finally identify what stobor actually are: [[spoiler:"dopy [[spoiler:"dopey joes", normally dim-witted and lethargic creatures who have an annual TheSwarm season. However, after the rescue, Rod finds out that there never were any "stobor." It was a vague warning specifically to frighten the kids into being cautious. Nearly every life-bearing planet has some animal that turns out to be a monster of legend under the right circumstances and the best protection is being completely paranoid.]].



* WagonTrainToTheStars: Interstellar colonization is accomplished by means of literal wagon trains as technology can't be sustained by a survivalist colony while wooden vehicles and pack animals can.

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* WagonTrainToTheStars: Interstellar colonization is accomplished by means of literal wagon trains trains, as advanced technology can't be sustained by a survivalist colony while wooden vehicles and pack animals can.

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* FutureSocietyPresentValues: Zigzagged. On the one hand, women make up their own (separate) military units and make up half the survival-course students in the story; on the other, sexual mores are such that a bunch of teenagers, isolated from their parents and all forms of authority, take precious time out from the business of survival to stage their own ''marriage ceremonies'' before daring to fool around. When Rod gets home, his parents' attitude is that of people who fully expect him to let them pick his friends for him. When his military sister opts to get married, she leaves the corps, though it's unknown whether she was required to (even in 1958, married women were permitted to serve in the US military, albeit in noncombat roles).

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* WeHaveBecomeComplacent: Knowing that their current colony is not in a defensible position, Rod and Roy are sent to scout for a site that will be suitable for the long-term. An injury turns their scouting mission from weeks to months; when they return, the colony is much more established and, since no serious issues have arisen, people are willing to risk staying where they are rather than start over in a new location. Rod disagrees; a group of his close friends consider leaving the group to move to the more defensible location, but ultimately decide to remain.

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* FutureSocietyPresentValues: Zigzagged. On the one hand, women make up their own (separate) military units and make up half the survival-course students in the story; on the other, sexual mores are such that a bunch of teenagers, isolated from their parents and all forms of authority, take precious time out from the business of survival to stage their own ''marriage ceremonies'' before daring to fool around. When Rod gets home, his parents' attitude is that of people who fully expect him to let them pick his friends for him. When his military sister opts to get married, she leaves the corps, though it's unknown whether she was required to (even in 1958, married women were permitted to serve in the US military, albeit in noncombat roles).
** In a conversation with her brother, Helen makes it clear that she plans for marriage to be the end of her military career. Her goal is a farm and a flock of children. As this is also the goal of many Heinlein heroes, that should not be seen as sexist.
** Rod is not regarded as a legal adult until he turns 21, whereas now it would be 18.



* SocietyMarchesOn: Zigzagged. On the one hand, women make up their own (separate) military units and make up half the survival-course students in the story; on the other, sexual mores are such that a bunch of teenagers, isolated from their parents and all forms of authority, take precious time out from the business of survival to stage their own ''marriage ceremonies'' before daring to fool around. When Rod gets home, his parents' attitude is that of people who fully expect him to let them pick his friends for him. When his military sister opts to get married, she leaves the corps, though it's unknown whether she was required to (even in 1958, married women were permitted to serve in the US military, albeit in noncombat roles).
** In a conversation with her brother, Helen makes it clear that she plans for marriage to be the end of her military career. Her goal is a farm and a flock of children. As this is also the goal of many Heinlein heroes, that should not be seen as sexist.
** Rod is not regarded as a legal adult until he turns 21, whereas now it would be 18.
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* AlwaysAChildToParent: This is Rod's experience when he returns home; despite having led a colony for years, when he finally gets back his parents expect him to move back in with them and are concerned about things like whether he will have to repeat the semester in high school and if the people with whom he spent years stranded are "desirable companionship for a young boy". This is exacerbated by the fact the his parents spent most of the time that he was gone in a YearOutsideHourInside device, and while they've had his situation explained to them it's hard for them to even grasp even the amount of time that has passed, let alone how much he's been matured by his experiences.

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* OverpopulationCrisis: China apparently conquered Australia and paved over the entire continent to make room for its growing population before the PortalNetwork was developed, now they force hordes of settlers to new worlds through the gates. And Helen apparently finds it acceptable to retire from the military and raise a large family, despite the existence of this trope meaning that there's a shortage of available husbands (because more women are being born than men).


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* NonIndicativeTitle: The titular Tunnel (and its failure) only serves to set the plot in motion, and ceases to be relevant after the first couple chapters. From a storytelling perspective, Heinlein could just as easily have made it a spaceship without having to change anything else.
* OverpopulationCrisis: China apparently conquered Australia and paved over the entire continent to make room for its growing population before the PortalNetwork was developed, now they force hordes of settlers to new worlds through the gates. And Helen apparently finds it acceptable to retire from the military and raise a large family, despite the existence of this trope meaning that there's a shortage of available husbands (because more women are being born than men).
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* StrollingOnJupiter: Strongly implied, with a reference to the "steel-limbed Jovians" who "enjoy gravity 2.5 times ours" and "poisonous air at inhuman pressure".

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* CompensatingForSomething: Why Rod's sister advices him not to take a firearm; because he'll think himself tougher than he actually is and get overconfident.

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* CompensatingForSomething: Why Rod's sister advices advises him not to take a firearm; because he'll think himself tougher than he actually is and get overconfident.



* CoversAlwaysLie: The teenager portrayed on the front cover (presumably Rod Walker, due to the lack of equipment) is Caucasian, despite Rod being African-American in the book..



** Subverted by Matson during the final inspection. Students are expected to be prepared for any reasonable survival circumstances, in particular not bringing [[ExposedToTheElements cold weather gear]] is an automatic failure despite Matson knowing they wouldn't need it. A few students go overboard and bring pressurized [[HazmatSuit space suits]] and Matson fails them as well, both for stupidity: the test is a ''test'', not a DeathTrap, and students wouldn't be thrown at vacuum or toxic environments without being informed.

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** Subverted by Matson during the final inspection. Students are expected to be prepared for any reasonable survival circumstances, in particular not bringing [[ExposedToTheElements cold weather gear]] is an automatic failure despite Matson knowing they wouldn't need it. A few students go overboard and bring pressurized [[HazmatSuit space suits]] and Matson fails them as well, both for stupidity: the test is a ''test'', not a DeathTrap, and students wouldn't be thrown at into vacuum or toxic environments without being informed.



* DeadGuyJunior: Jimmy's son [[spoiler:is named after Grant.]]
* DidNotThinkThisThrough: On seeing Jack is using his Bowie knife, Rod accuses her of being the person who attacked him and stole it. Turns out that man is dead and Jack removed equipment from his body. Jack takes some convincing not to end their partnership on the spot, seeing it as a violation of trust and a sign that Rod is too stupid to think things through--she'd hardly show him the knife if she was the one who had stolen it, after all.

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** Caroline is an odd example; she brings a number of unlikely items that prove to be useful. Why she chose them is a headscratcher, but Rod recalls Matson saying that survival is an art, not a science, and Caroline shows up in shockingly good condition for having lived on the land for a month.
* DeadGuyJunior: Jimmy's son [[spoiler:is is named after Grant.[[spoiler:Grant.]]
* DidNotThinkThisThrough: On seeing Jack is using his Bowie knife, Rod accuses her of being the person who attacked him and stole it. Turns out that man is dead and Jack removed equipment from his body. Jack takes some convincing not to end their partnership on the spot, seeing it as a violation of trust and a sign that Rod is too stupid to think things through--she'd hardly show have shown him the knife if she was the one who had stolen it, after all.



** Arthur Nielsen is known as "Waxie".
* JustAKid: [[spoiler:When the rescue finally comes, the adults treat the surviving students like they're still children, ignoring that they survived an alien world and formed a civilized, self-governed, and thriving colony there]]. On getting home, Rod finds his father expects to resume raising him, despite the fact that he's been functioning as an adult for three years and is nearly 21. This is exacerbated in Rod's case by the fact that his parents have been inside a YearOutsideHourInside device, so his three year absence only felt like a couple weeks to them.

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** Arthur Nielsen is known as "Waxie".
"Waxie", which he hates. Later, when he isn't such a tool, he's called by his given name.
* JustAKid: [[spoiler:When the rescue finally comes, the adults treat the surviving students like they're still children, ignoring that they survived an alien world and formed a civilized, self-governed, and thriving colony there]]. On getting home, Rod finds his father expects to resume raising him, despite the fact that he's been functioning as an adult for three years and is nearly 21. This is exacerbated in Rod's case by the fact that his parents have been inside a YearOutsideHourInside device, so his three year three-year absence only felt like a couple weeks to them.



* KillerRabbit: [[spoiler:Dopy joes are rabbit-sized carnivores with an over-sized head that are slow and clumsy. Except during the dry season when swarms of them become the planet's apex predator. An army of dopy joes chases all other animals, including the massive "lions", to the shores of a dead sea were they must feast well, given the millions of bones]].

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* KillerRabbit: [[spoiler:Dopy joes are rabbit-sized carnivores with an over-sized head that are slow and clumsy. Except during the dry season when swarms of them become the planet's apex predator. An army of dopy joes chases all other animals, including the massive "lions", to the shores of a dead sea were where they must feast well, given the millions of bones]].



** The reason Helen recommends that Rod takes only a knife: a gun's power will give Rod a false sense of courage and safety which would possibly get him killed. A knife is only so much better than being unarmed and his vulnerability will make him paranoid enough to avoid conflicts and survive. Helen knows from experience, she took a gun on her first expedition and losing it saved her life: she ran from a native beast rather than fighting it and learned later that the creatures were virtually ImmuneToBullets.

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** The reason Helen recommends that Rod takes only a knife: a gun's power will give Rod a false sense of courage and safety which would possibly get him killed. A knife is only so much better than being unarmed and his vulnerability will make him paranoid enough to avoid conflicts and survive. Helen knows from experience, she took a gun on her first expedition and losing it saved her life: she ran from a native beast rather than fighting it and learned later that the creatures were virtually ImmuneToBullets. Having no gun immediately makes Rod more cautious when he arrives; he elects to crawl downwind, since that would give him the best chance of seeing anything that was hunting him.



* RaceLift: Rod is turned into a white kid on the covers.

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* RaceLift: Rod is turned into a white kid on the covers. The book does not mention his race, but WordOfGod would make him black.



* SchizoTech: Settlers travel through portals to other planets with animal drawn wagons. This is justified by the fact that opening a portal is expensive, so settlers on untamed worlds have to be prepared to be out of contact for long periods of time, making animals more practical than vehicles that require fuel and maintenance.
* SciFiWritersHave/NoSenseOfVelocity: Rod and Jack notice a new star and conclude that they've just witnessed a nova. [[spoiler:At the book's end, it's revealed a nova is what interfered with the recall. It's implied that they saw the nova that prevented them from returning home when realistically it would be many, ''many'' years before one world saw the effects of a nova, least of all ''both''. One possible explanation is that the ''effect'' of the nova reached the space around the planet at the same time the light from it did, and it flat out stated that the portals are delicate at best, with many variables that all have to be just right. If looked at like this, the reason the cut off happened when they saw the nova is because it altered local space.]]

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* SchizoTech: Settlers travel through portals to other planets with animal drawn animal-drawn wagons. This is justified by the fact that opening a portal is expensive, so settlers on untamed worlds have to be prepared to be out of contact for long periods of time, making animals more practical than vehicles that require fuel and maintenance.
* SciFiWritersHave/NoSenseOfVelocity: Rod and Jack notice a new star and conclude that they've just witnessed a nova. [[spoiler:At the book's end, it's revealed a nova is what interfered with the recall. It's implied that they saw the nova that prevented them from returning home when realistically it would be many, ''many'' years before one world saw the effects of a nova, least of all ''both''. One possible explanation is that the ''effect'' of the nova reached the space around the planet at nearly[[note]]They don't see the nova until after the recall is overdue[[/note]] the same time the light from it did, and it flat out stated that the portals are delicate at best, with many variables that all have to be just right. If looked at like this, the reason the cut off cut-off happened when they saw the nova is because it altered local space.]]



** In a conversation with her brother Helen makes it clear that she plans for marriage to be the end of her military career. Her goal is a farm and a flock of children. As this is also the goal of many Heinlein heroes that should not be seen as sexist.

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** In a conversation with her brother brother, Helen makes it clear that she plans for marriage to be the end of her military career. Her goal is a farm and a flock of children. As this is also the goal of many Heinlein heroes heroes, that should not be seen as sexist.



** During the mayoral election a number of items are chosen to serve as anonymous ballots: pebbles, twigs, and leaves. Waxie, running on his "scientific breeding" platform needs an item to serve as his ballot. Jimmy offers a solution: the fragmented shards of a failed clay pot. Which he announces to the colony as "I'll get chunks of it and all the crackpots are votes for Waxie."

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** During the mayoral election a number of items are chosen to serve as anonymous ballots: pebbles, twigs, and leaves. Waxie, running on his "scientific breeding" platform platform, needs an item to serve as his ballot. Jimmy offers a solution: the fragmented shards of a failed clay pot. Which he announces to the colony as "I'll get chunks of it and all the crackpots are votes for Waxie."



* TooAwesomeToUse: Rod shoots down Jack when she suggests that they use her dart gun for hunting. Although theoretically it can be used indefinitely (as it runs off of manually pumped compressed air and the darts can be retrieved and re-envenomed), Rod points out that no matter how careful they are, the day will come when the last dart will be lost -- and that could be the day they really need it.

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* TooAwesomeToUse: Rod shoots down Jack when she suggests that they use her dart gun for hunting. Although theoretically it can be used indefinitely (as it runs off of manually pumped manually-pumped compressed air and the darts can be retrieved and re-envenomed), Rod points out that no matter how careful they are, the day will come when the last dart will be lost -- and that could be the day they really need it.

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* AmazonBrigade: A literal version; Helen Walker is an assault captain in the Corp of Amazons. This trope exists because there are more women being born on an overpopulated Earth than men, so there's a shortage of available husbands, so women are taking on a lot of traditionally male roles. Helen makes it clear that she intends to leave the military and raise a large family should she find a husband.

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* AmazonBrigade: A literal version; Helen Walker is an assault captain in the Corp Corps of Amazons. This trope exists because there are more women being born on an overpopulated Earth than men, so there's a shortage of available husbands, so women are taking on a lot of traditionally male roles. Helen makes it clear that she intends to leave the military and raise a large family should she find a husband.



* {{Foreshadowing}}: Matson asks Rod who gave him the good survival advice and Rod explains it came from his sister in the Corp of Amazons. Matson grumbles that a woman like her would have kept him from being a cranky old bachelor. [[spoiler: When Rod returns, Matson is now his brother-in-law]].

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* FamousFamousFictional: "...Cowpertown is safe in history, along with Plymouth Rock, Botany Bay, and Dakin's Colony."
* {{Foreshadowing}}: Matson asks Rod who gave him the good survival advice and Rod explains it came from his sister in the Corp Corps of Amazons. Matson grumbles that a woman like her would have kept him from being a cranky old bachelor. [[spoiler: When Rod returns, Matson is now his brother-in-law]].
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* AgeGapRomance: Because there's such a shortage of potential husbands, Helen doesn't care how old hers is as long as she can find one. She does, marrying Rod's elderly instructor from college.

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* AgeGapRomance: Because there's such a shortage of potential husbands, Helen doesn't care how old hers is as long as she can find one. She [[spoiler:She does, marrying Rod's elderly instructor from college.]]

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* AgeGapRomance: Because there's such a shortage of potential husbands, Helen doesn't care how old hers is as long as she can find one. She does, marrying Rod's elderly instructor from college.



* AndTheAdventureContinues: Years later, [[spoiler: Rod becomes the leader of a new colony and leads them out to a new world]].

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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: Helen's unit is called "Walker's Werewolves".

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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: AlliterativeName: Helen's unit is called "Walker's Werewolves".



* CoolGate: Ramsbotham Gates.

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* CoolGate: Ramsbotham Gates.Gates saved the world from overpopulation. They allow colonization of space because the departing gate is the only equipment required for a one-way trip. Colonies must be self-sufficient until they're successful enough to warrant the cost of installing a gate.



* TeleportersAndTransporters: Ramsbotham Gates saved the world from overpopulation. They allow colonization of space because the departing gate is the only equipment required for a one-way trip. Colonies must be self-sufficient until they're successful enough to warrant the cost of installing a gate.

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* AccidentalDiscovery: Dr. Ramsbotham, inventor of the gates, was actually trying to build a time machine rather than a teleportation device. On his first successful test, he saw a jungle through the portal and, assuming he'd succeeded in reaching prehistoric times, armed himself and jumped through. He was immediately arrested for waving a firearm in a botanical garden.

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* AccidentalDiscovery: Dr. Ramsbotham, inventor of the gates, was actually trying to build a time machine rather than a teleportation device. On his first successful test, he saw a jungle through the portal and, assuming he'd succeeded in reaching prehistoric times, armed himself and jumped through. He was immediately arrested for waving a firearm in a botanical garden. His research also led to YearOutsideHourInside devices.



* BlatantLies: The Australasian government's claim that the 2 million emigrants Rod sees forced through a gate are all volunteers.



* ComingOfAgeStory: Rod begins the story as a high school student; over the course of the book, he grows into a man both physically and mentally.



* GenderBlenderName: Humanity's savior who conquered the stars was Dr. Jesse Evelyn Ramsbotham, saddled with both an EmbarrassingFirstName ''and'' an EmbarrassingMiddleName.

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* GenderBlenderName: Humanity's savior who conquered the stars was the (male) Dr. Jesse Evelyn Ramsbotham, saddled with both an EmbarrassingFirstName ''and'' an EmbarrassingMiddleName.



* ICallItVera: Rod follows in his sister's footsteps and names his Bowie knife. Helen's is [[Theatre/MacBeth Lady MacBeth]] but Rod shows a lack of creativity and names his Colonel Bowie.
* InSeriesNickname: Caroline brands Grant "Hizzonor".
* JustAKid: [[spoiler:When the rescue finally comes, the adults treat the surviving students like they're still children, ignoring that they survived an alien world and formed a civilized, self-governed, and thriving colony there]]. On getting home, Rod finds his father expects to resume raising him, despite the fact that he's been functioning as an adult for three years and is nearly 21.

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* ICallItVera: Rod follows in his sister's footsteps and names his Bowie knife. Helen's is [[Theatre/MacBeth Lady MacBeth]] but Rod shows a lack of creativity and names his Colonel Bowie.
Bowie. Jack's knife is called Bluebeard.
* InSeriesNickname: IChooseToStay: Subverted. After they've been there a couple of years, the villagers largely agree that they are happy in their new life, and wouldn't go back even if they had the opportunity. When the opportunity actually arises, they're all gone in a couple of hours.
* InconvenientItch: Upon being out as a girl, the first thing Jack does is remove her armored vest and scratch an itch, which she claims has been bothering her ever since she teamed with Rod several days earlier and had to wear TwentyFourHourArmor to conceal her gender.
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Caroline brands Grant "Hizzonor".
** Arthur Nielsen is known as "Waxie".
* JustAKid: [[spoiler:When the rescue finally comes, the adults treat the surviving students like they're still children, ignoring that they survived an alien world and formed a civilized, self-governed, and thriving colony there]]. On getting home, Rod finds his father expects to resume raising him, despite the fact that he's been functioning as an adult for three years and is nearly 21. This is exacerbated in Rod's case by the fact that his parents have been inside a YearOutsideHourInside device, so his three year absence only felt like a couple weeks to them.
* KillThePoor: Essentially what the Australasian government is doing as they send out 2 million emigrants over the space of 48 hours. Although the [[BlatantLies government assures that they are volunteers]], they are basically forced through with only what they can carry on their backs. Even worse, their destination planet can be assumed to be semi-habitable at best, as nobody has yet made an attempt to colonize it and Rod later states that any planet with agricultural potential is immediately colonized.


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* LandDownUnder: Australia has not fared well, having been conquered by China who then built a massive inland sea in an attempt to make the whole continent more habitable; what remains of the former inhabitants have been relocated to New Zealand. Rod dismisses this "Australasia" as a slum with more people in it than ''all of North America''.


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* MustHaveCaffeine: Matson mentions that when leading an expedition on a primitive planet, it's not the power/lights/plumbing that you miss, its the things like coffee and tobacco.


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* {{Terraform}}: It's mentioned that China, upon taking over Australia, built a vast inland sea in an attempt to turn it into arable farmland; however, Rod dismisses reports of the success of the project as mere propaganda.
* TooAwesomeToUse: Rod shoots down Jack when she suggests that they use her dart gun for hunting. Although theoretically it can be used indefinitely (as it runs off of manually pumped compressed air and the darts can be retrieved and re-envenomed), Rod points out that no matter how careful they are, the day will come when the last dart will be lost -- and that could be the day they really need it.


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* WeatherControlMachine: "Weather conditioning", as well as plumbing, heating, power, etc. are mentioned as luxuries that are absent in the new colony planets.
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* ICallHerVera: Rod follows in his sister's footsteps and names his Bowie knife. Helen's is [[Theatre/MacBeth Lady MacBeth]] but Rod shows a lack of creativity and names his Colonel Bowie.

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* OverpopulationCrisis: China apparently conquered Australia and paved over the entire continent to make room for its growing population before the PortalNetwork was developed, now they force hordes of settlers to new worlds through the gates. And Helen apparently finds it acceptable to retire from the military and raise a large family, despite the existence of this trope meaning that there's a shortage of available husbands (because more women are being born than men).

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* AmazonBrigade: A literal version; Helen Walker is an assault captain in the Corp of Amazons.

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* AmazonBrigade: A literal version; Helen Walker is an assault captain in the Corp of Amazons. This trope exists because there are more women being born on an overpopulated Earth than men, so there's a shortage of available husbands, so women are taking on a lot of traditionally male roles. Helen makes it clear that she intends to leave the military and raise a large family should she find a husband.
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** Rod is not regarded as a legal adult until he turns 21, whereas now it would be 18.
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* EarthAllAlong: Subverted. When the recall never comes, Rod conjectures that the students are actually on Earth, and part of the test is figuring out that fact and making their way to safety. This is not actually the case, as proven when Jack shows him a constellation that doesn't resemble anything seen from Earth.

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* EarthAllAlong: Subverted. When the recall never comes, Rod conjectures that the students are actually on Earth, and part of the test is figuring out that fact and making their way to safety. This is not actually the case, as proven when Jack shows him a [[AlienSky constellation that doesn't resemble anything seen from Earth.Earth]].
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* DidNotThinkThisThrough: On seeing Jack is using his Bowie knife, Rod accuses her of being the person who attacked him and stole it. Turns out that man is dead and Jack removed equipment from his body. Jack takes some convincing not to end their partnership on the spot, seeing it as a violation of trust and a sign that Rod is too stupid to think things through--she'd hardly show him the knife if she was the one who had stolen it, after all.
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* CompensatingForSomething: Why Rod's sister advices him not to take a firearm; because he'll think himself tougher than he actually is and get overconfident.


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* TapOnTheHead: Just a few days into his survival training, someone hits Rod from behind and he wakes up with all his gear missing. He concludes that the blow was meant to kill him too.
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* AmazonBrigade: Helen Walker is a captain in the Amazons.

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* SchizoTech: Settlers travel through portals to other planets with animal drawn wagons. This is justified, as they are equipped to settle untamed worlds.

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* SchizoTech: Settlers travel through portals to other planets with animal drawn wagons. This is justified, as they are equipped to settle justified by the fact that opening a portal is expensive, so settlers on untamed worlds.worlds have to be prepared to be out of contact for long periods of time, making animals more practical than vehicles that require fuel and maintenance.

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** Against sensationalist journalists, with the news crew at the end who decide it would be a better story to depict the students as having regressed into savagery, rather than the actual society which they created.



* TrainingAccident: The test was only supposed to be a week and a half. Early after the recall fails to appear, they consider the possibility it's meant to be late and the test is secretly longer. Eventually, it becomes obvious that the recall isn't coming and they're stranded.

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* TrainingAccident: The test was only supposed to be a week and a half. Early after the recall fails to appear, they consider the possibility it's meant to be late and the test is secretly longer.longer, with Rod hypothesizing that part of the test is figuring out that they're on Earth and making their own way to safety. Eventually, it becomes obvious that the recall isn't coming and they're stranded.
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* ThereAreNoAdults: For most of the novel. A rare sci-fi variant in which this is not due to some irreversible apocalyptic tragedy.

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