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* FiveManBand:
** In the real world:
*** TheLeader: Justin
*** TheBigGuy: Willie
*** TheSmartGuy: Paul
*** TheChick: Katie
*** PluckyGirl: Teresa
** In Xhandarre:
*** GuileHero: Paul
*** {{Berserker}}: Justin
*** AntiHero: Willie
*** TheChick: Teresa
*** IceQueen: Kate
** In the real world:
*** TheLeader: Justin
*** TheBigGuy: Willie
*** TheSmartGuy: Paul
*** TheChick: Katie
*** PluckyGirl: Teresa
** In Xhandarre:
*** GuileHero: Paul
*** {{Berserker}}: Justin
*** AntiHero: Willie
*** TheChick: Teresa
*** IceQueen: Kate
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Kate finds evidence to suggest that Justin is sneaking around on her, only to eventually learn that the girl in the incriminating photo is his sister, this is usually the part of the story where everything is immediately resolved and the couple can go back to being happy. However, here, Kate has had some time to agonize over what she thought was Justin's infidelity, she has come to realize that their relationship is unhealthy, and her anger at Justin for keeping such an important secret from her is the last straw that ends their relationship.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Kate finds evidence to suggest that Justin is sneaking around on her, only to eventually learn that the girl in the incriminating photo is his sister, this sister. This is usually the part of the story where everything is immediately resolved and the couple can go back to being happy. However, here, Kate has had some time to agonize over what she thought was Justin's infidelity, she has come to realize that their relationship is unhealthy, and her anger at Justin for keeping such an important secret from her is the last straw that ends their relationship.
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* TrueCompanions: [[spoiler: ultimately subverted, as the adventure the five teens undergo ultimately costs them their friendship.]]
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* TrueCompanions: [[spoiler: ultimately Ultimately subverted, as the adventure the five teens undergo ultimately costs them their friendship.]]
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* [[spoiler: IDidWhatIHadToDo: Meldorion, court wizard to the deposed king, goes undercover in the village of Pholvenx, luring innocent travelers to the monastery where they are fed to the werewolves.]]
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* [[spoiler: IDidWhatIHadToDo: [[spoiler: Meldorion, court wizard to the deposed king, goes undercover in the village of Pholvenx, luring innocent travelers to the monastery where they are fed to the werewolves.]]
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* [[spoiler: FaceHeelTurn: Orial, Jarmassad's betrothed, has defected to Avron Kromar in exchange for everlasting youth and powers.]]
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* [[spoiler: FaceHeelTurn: [[spoiler: Orial, Jarmassad's betrothed, has defected to Avron Kromar in exchange for everlasting youth and powers.]]
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* [[spoiler: BrainFood: The werewolves at the monastery especially enjoy sucking out their victims' brains.]]
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* BrainFood: [[spoiler: BrainFood: The werewolves at the monastery especially enjoy sucking out their victims' brains.]]
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Kate finds evidence to suggest that Justin is sneaking around on her, only to eventually learn that the girl in the incriminating photo is his sister, this is usually the part of the story where everything is immediately resolved and the couple can go back to being happy. However, here, Kate has had some time to agonize over what she thought was Justin's infidelity, she has come to realize that their relationship is unhealthy, and her anger at Justin for keeping such an important secret from her is the last straw that ends their relationship.
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* JackassGenie: As noted in BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor, above, the figurines that give the teens the traits they desire most tend to confer the worst possible interpretations of the traits. Justified as the figurines were made by Avron Kromar.
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* TrappedInAnotherWorld: The whole plot of the book, being that the five teens are trapped in the fantasy land of Xhandarre and need to defeat Avron Kromar to find a way home.
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* MistakenForCheating: Kate finds a picture that has fallen out of Justin's pocket. It is of a pretty girl, and the note on the back says, "To Justin. Lots of love and kisses". Turns out it's Justin's long-lost sister.
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* MistakenForCheating: MistakenForCheating / RelativeError: Kate finds a picture that has fallen out of Justin's pocket. It is of a pretty girl, and the note on the back says, "To Justin. Lots of love and kisses". Turns out it's Justin's long-lost sister.
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* BadSamaritan: The monks and nuns of the monastery will gladly prepare a lavish feast for all travelers passing through. [[spoiler: Too bad the food is drugged with sleeping potion, and, once the travelers are asleep, the nuns and monks will eagerly suck out their brains and feast on their flesh.]]
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Literature/TheTwilightRealm is a young adult fantasy novel by Christopher Evans. In this story, five teenagers, Paul, Justin, Willie, Teresa, and Kate, recently graduated from school, have met at Paul's house for their weekly role-playing game. This time, Paul's uncle starts acting oddly, gives the teens wooden figurines that represent characters they admire, and sends them through an old mirror that has become a portal to another world, Xhandarre. In the new world, the five teens, having become the characters depicted in the wooden figurines, fight to save Xhandarre from the evil tyrant Avron Kromar.
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The five are aided by the old wizard Therion as they face such dangers as being arrested and sold into slavery, a village of hostile locals, and werewolves before they reach the capital, Madrimar, and take on Avron Kromar.
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* OurWerewolvesAreDifferent: In this story, there is no connection with the full moon and they have a preference for eating brains.
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* TrueCompanions: [[spoiler: ultimately subverted, as the adventure the five teens undergo ultimately costs them their friendship.]]
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* JerkAss: Justin in the real world.
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* JerkAss: Justin in the real world.world; Willie in Xhandarre.
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* TookALevelInJerkass: How Willie is transformed from the real world to Xhandarre.
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MadeFromRealGirlScouts: As the teens flee Pholvenx, the townspeople call out what Paul thinks is just a colorful curse, "May the night fiends suck your skulls dry." [[spoiler: Turns out that the night fiends are the werewolves at the monastery, who especially enjoy dining on human brains.]]
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* MadeFromRealGirlScouts: As the teens flee Pholvenx, the townspeople call out what Paul thinks is just a colorful curse, "May the night fiends suck your skulls dry." [[spoiler: Turns out that the night fiends are the werewolves at the monastery, who especially enjoy dining on human brains.]]
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* BlackAndGrayMorality: AvronKromar is, of course, evil, but the five teens and their allies do some morally questionable things during their quest. Somewhat justified on the part of the teens in that the figurines that shape their identities in Xhandarre were given to them by Avron Kromar.
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* BlackAndGrayMorality: AvronKromar Avron Kromar is, of course, evil, but the five teens and their allies do some morally questionable things during their quest. Somewhat justified on the part of the teens in that the figurines that shape their identities in Xhandarre were given to them by Avron Kromar.
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TheTwilightRealm is a fantasy novel by Christopher Evans. In this story, five teenagers, Paul, Justin, Willie, Teresa, and Kate, recently graduated from school, have met at Paul's house for their weekly role-playing game. This time, Paul's uncle starts acting oddly, gives the teens wooden figurines that represent characters they admire, and sends them through an old mirror that has become a portal to another world, Xhandarre. In the new world, the five teens, having become the characters depicted in the wooden figurines, fight to save Xhandarre from the evil tyrant Avron Kromar.
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* [[spoiler: BrainFood: The werewolves at the monastery especially enjoy sucking out their victims' brains.]]
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MadeFromRealGirlScouts: As the teens flee Pholvenx, the townspeople call out what Paul thinks is just a colorful curse, "May the night fiends suck your skulls dry." [[spoiler: Turns out that the night fiends are the werewolves at the monastery, who especially enjoy dining on human brains.]]
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: The figurines give their respective owners traits they desire most. Justin wants to be a big, strong warrior, and is turned into a {{Berserker}} whose tendencies get him and the others into trouble. Kate wants to be more cool, collected, and secure, and becomes an IceQueen, who, in her cold-bloodedness, [[spoiler: is willing to sacrifice Paul and the real world to Avron Kromar]]. Teresa desires to be beautiful and is [[{{Chickification}} chickified]]. Willie wants to be more agile and limber, and is turned into a thief, with a moral limberness and agility that leads him to act in less than admirable ways, such as his attempts to take advantage of Teresa.
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* AerithAndBob: Paul, Kate, Justin, Teresa, Willie, Ivor, Avron Kromar, Meldorion, Jarmassad, Aremktesh, Uzosiot, Kevaldol. Mostly justified in that a majority of the characters with unusual names come from Xhandarre.
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* AerithAndBob: Paul, Kate, Justin, Teresa, Willie, Ivor, Avron Kromar, Meldorion, Jarmassad, Aremktesh, Uzosiot, Kevaldol.Kevaldol, Orial. Mostly justified in that a majority of the characters with unusual names come from Xhandarre.
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* [[spoiler: FaceHeelTurn: Orial, Jarmassad's betrothed, has defected to Avron Kromar in exchange for everlasting youth and powers.
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* [[spoiler: FaceHeelTurn: Orial, Jarmassad's betrothed, has defected to Avron Kromar in exchange for everlasting youth and powers.]]
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* OnlyOneName: Justin, Kate, Willie, Meldorion, Jarmassad, Aremktesh, Uzosiot, Kevaldol.
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* OnlyOneName: Justin, Kate, Willie, Meldorion, Jarmassad, Aremktesh, Uzosiot, Kevaldol.Kevaldol, Orial.
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* BittersweetEnding: The teens are able to defeat Avron Kromar, save Xhandarre, and return to their world. [[spoiler: Unfortunately, once they get back, they realize that their basest secrets and desires, their "dirty laundry" has been exposed, and their friendship is ruined.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: The teens are able to defeat Avron Kromar, save Xhandarre, and return to their world. [[spoiler: Unfortunately, once they get back, they realize that their basest secrets and desires, their "dirty laundry" linens" has been exposed, and their friendship is ruined.]]
* MagicIsEvil: Ivor's possession by Avron Kromar results from performing séances to contact his dead wife.
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* NotHimself: Paul's Uncle Ivor in the prologue,
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* NotHimself: Paul's Uncle Ivor in the prologue, who is actually possessed by Avron Kromar.
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* WarriorPrince: Jarmassad.
* WeCanRuleTogether: After his familiars are defeated, Avron Kromar makes the teens an offer: Sacrifice Paul, whose body Avron Kromar will occupy in his conquest of Earth, and they can remain behind in Xhandarre as heroes.
* WhamLine: [[spoiler: Sitting on a tall, twisted black throne was Therion.]]
* WhatYouAreInTheDark: The quest has revealed some of the teens' basest desires and traits.
* WeCanRuleTogether: After his familiars are defeated, Avron Kromar makes the teens an offer: Sacrifice Paul, whose body Avron Kromar will occupy in his conquest of Earth, and they can remain behind in Xhandarre as heroes.
* WhamLine: [[spoiler: Sitting on a tall, twisted black throne was Therion.]]
* WhatYouAreInTheDark: The quest has revealed some of the teens' basest desires and traits.
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* BlackAndGrayMorality: AvronKromar is, of course, evil, but the five teens and their allies do some morally questionable things during their quest. Somewhat justified on the part of the teens in that the figurines that shape their identities in Xhandarre were given to them by Avron Kromar.
* NotHimself: Paul's Uncle Ivor in the prologue,
* SomethingTheyWouldNeverSay: Paul's clue that his uncle is NotHimself is that, for an uneducated man, he is suddenly using an elevated vocabulary, including words like "incorporeal" and "limber".
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* TakenForGranite: [[spoiler: subverted]] with Meldorion.
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* TakenForGranite: [[spoiler: subverted]] Subverted]] with Meldorion.
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* Deconstruction: Ever fantasize about going on an adventure in a fantasy world? This story shows that advent7ure is not all it's cracked up to be.
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* Deconstruction: {{Deconstruction}}: Ever fantasize about going on an adventure in a fantasy world? This story shows that advent7ure adventure is not all it's cracked up to be.
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* BittersweetEnding: The teens are able to defeat Avron Kro7mar, save Xhandarre, and return to their world. [[spoiler: Unfortunately, once they get back, they realize that their basest secrets and desires, their "dirty laundry" has been exposed, and their friendship is ruined.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: The teens are able to defeat Avron Kro7mar, Kromar, save Xhandarre, and return to their world. [[spoiler: Unfortunately, once they get back, they realize that their basest secrets and desires, their "dirty laundry" has been exposed, and their friendship is ruined.]]
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* AerithAndBob: Paul, Kate, Justin, Teresa, Willie, Ivor, Avron Kromar, Meldorion, Jarmassad. Mostly justified in that a majority of the characters with unusual names come from Xhandarre.
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* AndIMustScream: Jarmassad, true heir to the throne of Xhandarre, was put on public display, imprisoned in a crystal cone. The heroes release him.
* AerithAndBob: Paul, Kate, Justin, Teresa, Willie, Ivor, Avron Kromar, Meldorion,Jarmassad.Jarmassad, Aremktesh, Uzosiot, Kevaldol. Mostly justified in that a majority of the characters with unusual names come from Xhandarre.
* AerithAndBob: Paul, Kate, Justin, Teresa, Willie, Ivor, Avron Kromar, Meldorion,
* CharacterDevelopment: [[spoiler: In the end, Paul realizes that, even if a moment of cowardice did cost his cousin's life, he must not let it define him. Kate is able to gain self-confidence and break away from an unhealthy relationship with the manipulative Justin.]]
* DrivenToSuicide: Aremktesh after his son is killed.
* [[spoiler: FaceHeelTurn: Orial, Jarmassad's betrothed, has defected to Avron Kromar in exchange for everlasting youth and powers.
* [[spoiler: FaceHeelTurn: Orial, Jarmassad's betrothed, has defected to Avron Kromar in exchange for everlasting youth and powers.
* IdiotBall: Paul's plan has apparently succeeded and they are in the process of sneaking out of Sharalidor with Aremktesh and his son. At that moment, Justin decides he really wants a fight, and attacks the guards, leading to the deaths of Aremktesh and his son.
* ItsAllMyFault: Paul seems bent on taking the blame for many things. For instance, he blames the deaths of Aremktesh and his son on his own arrogance when, to the reader, it is apparent that Justin was to blame.
** Aremktesh blames himself for his son's death.
* ItsAllMyFault: Paul seems bent on taking the blame for many things. For instance, he blames the deaths of Aremktesh and his son on his own arrogance when, to the reader, it is apparent that Justin was to blame.
** Aremktesh blames himself for his son's death.
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* OnlyOneName: Justin, Kate, Willie, Meldorion, Jarmassad.
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* OnlyOneName: Justin, Kate, Willie, Meldorion, Jarmassad.Jarmassad, Aremktesh, Uzosiot, Kevaldol.
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* SealedGoodInACan: Prince Jarmassad, imprisoned in a crystal cone in the capital Madrimar.
* TakeOverTheWorld: Avron Kromar has done this in Xhandarre and plans to do the same to Earth.
* TakenForGranite: [[spoiler: subverted]] with Meldorion.
* TakeOverTheWorld: Avron Kromar has done this in Xhandarre and plans to do the same to Earth.
* TakenForGranite: [[spoiler: subverted]] with Meldorion.
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*** IceQueen: Kate
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*** IceQueen: KateKate
* FourIsDeath: Avron Kromar has four demon familiars.
* GentleGiant: Willie in the real world.
* [[spoiler: IDidWhatIHadToDo: Meldorion, court wizard to the deposed king, goes undercover in the village of Pholvenx, luring innocent travelers to the monastery where they are fed to the werewolves.]]
* IceQueen: Kate turns into this in Xhandarre.
* JerkAss: Justin in the real world.
* LoveTriangle: At the start, Justin and Kate are dating, but Paul is secretly interested in her. [[spoiler: In the end, Justin and Kate have broken up, and it is implied that she will end up with Paul.]]
* MistakenForCheating: Kate finds a picture that has fallen out of Justin's pocket. It is of a pretty girl, and the note on the back says, "To Justin. Lots of love and kisses". Turns out it's Justin's long-lost sister.
* [[TownWithADarkSecret Monastery with a Dark Secret]]: The monks and nuns of the monastery will gladly entertain all travelers passing through, having an extravagant feast. [[spoiler: Too bad the food is drugged with sleeping potion, and, once the travelers are asleep, the nuns and monks will eagerly suck out their brains and feast on their flesh.]]
* OnlyOneName: Justin, Kate, Willie, Meldorion, Jarmassad.
* TheReveal: [[spoiler: Therion is Avron Kromar. His four cats are the demon familiars]].
* SdrawkcabName: When Teresa, Kate, Justin, and Willie are sold into slavery, they are bought by a man named Yelsrennik. Turns out that the name is Kinnersley (Paul's last name) spelt backward.
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* FourIsDeath: Avron Kromar has four demon familiars.
* GentleGiant: Willie in the real world.
* [[spoiler: IDidWhatIHadToDo: Meldorion, court wizard to the deposed king, goes undercover in the village of Pholvenx, luring innocent travelers to the monastery where they are fed to the werewolves.]]
* IceQueen: Kate turns into this in Xhandarre.
* JerkAss: Justin in the real world.
* LoveTriangle: At the start, Justin and Kate are dating, but Paul is secretly interested in her. [[spoiler: In the end, Justin and Kate have broken up, and it is implied that she will end up with Paul.]]
* MistakenForCheating: Kate finds a picture that has fallen out of Justin's pocket. It is of a pretty girl, and the note on the back says, "To Justin. Lots of love and kisses". Turns out it's Justin's long-lost sister.
* [[TownWithADarkSecret Monastery with a Dark Secret]]: The monks and nuns of the monastery will gladly entertain all travelers passing through, having an extravagant feast. [[spoiler: Too bad the food is drugged with sleeping potion, and, once the travelers are asleep, the nuns and monks will eagerly suck out their brains and feast on their flesh.]]
* OnlyOneName: Justin, Kate, Willie, Meldorion, Jarmassad.
* TheReveal: [[spoiler: Therion is Avron Kromar. His four cats are the demon familiars]].
* SdrawkcabName: When Teresa, Kate, Justin, and Willie are sold into slavery, they are bought by a man named Yelsrennik. Turns out that the name is Kinnersley (Paul's last name) spelt backward.
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* AerithAerithAndBob: Paul, Kate, Justin, Teresa, Willie, Ivor, Avron Kromar, Meldorion, Jarmassad. Mostly justified in that a majority of the characters with unusual names come from Xhandarre.
* TheChick: Kate in the real world; Teresa in Xhandarre.
* {{Chickification}}: The effect going to Xhandarre has on Teresa.
* {{Chickification}}: The effect going to Xhandarre has on Teresa.
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* FourIsDeath: Avron Kromar has four demon familiars.
* GentleGiant: Willie in the real world.
* [[spoiler: IDidWhatIHadToDo: Meldorion, court wizard to the deposed king, goes undercover in the village of Pholvenx, luring innocent travelers to the monastery where they are fed to the werewolves.]]
* IceQueen: Kate turns into this in Xhandarre.
* JerkAss: Justin in the real world.
* LoveTriangle: At the start, Justin and Kate are dating, but Paul is secretly interested in her. [[spoiler: In the end, Justin and Kate have broken up, and it is implied that she will end up with Paul.]]
* MistakenForCheating: Kate finds a picture that has fallen out of Justin's pocket. It is of a pretty girl, and the note on the back says, "To Justin. Lots of love and kisses". Turns out it's Justin's long-lost sister.
* [[TownWithADarkSecret Monastery with a Dark Secret]]: The monks and nuns of the monastery will gladly entertain all travelers passing through, having an extravagant feast. [[spoiler: Too bad the food is drugged with sleeping potion, and, once the travelers are asleep, the nuns and monks will eagerly suck out their brains and feast on their flesh.]]
* OnlyOneName: Justin, Kate, Willie, Meldorion, Jarmassad.
* TheReveal: [[spoiler: Therion is Avron Kromar. His four cats are the demon familiars]].
* SdrawkcabName: When Teresa, Kate, Justin, and Willie are sold into slavery, they are bought by a man named Yelsrennik. Turns out that the name is Kinnersley (Paul's last name) spelt backward.
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* GentleGiant: Willie in the real world.
* [[spoiler: IDidWhatIHadToDo: Meldorion, court wizard to the deposed king, goes undercover in the village of Pholvenx, luring innocent travelers to the monastery where they are fed to the werewolves.]]
* IceQueen: Kate turns into this in Xhandarre.
* JerkAss: Justin in the real world.
* LoveTriangle: At the start, Justin and Kate are dating, but Paul is secretly interested in her. [[spoiler: In the end, Justin and Kate have broken up, and it is implied that she will end up with Paul.]]
* MistakenForCheating: Kate finds a picture that has fallen out of Justin's pocket. It is of a pretty girl, and the note on the back says, "To Justin. Lots of love and kisses". Turns out it's Justin's long-lost sister.
* [[TownWithADarkSecret Monastery with a Dark Secret]]: The monks and nuns of the monastery will gladly entertain all travelers passing through, having an extravagant feast. [[spoiler: Too bad the food is drugged with sleeping potion, and, once the travelers are asleep, the nuns and monks will eagerly suck out their brains and feast on their flesh.]]
* OnlyOneName: Justin, Kate, Willie, Meldorion, Jarmassad.
* TheReveal: [[spoiler: Therion is Avron Kromar. His four cats are the demon familiars]].
* SdrawkcabName: When Teresa, Kate, Justin, and Willie are sold into slavery, they are bought by a man named Yelsrennik. Turns out that the name is Kinnersley (Paul's last name) spelt backward.
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* FourIsDeath: Avron Kromar has four demon familiars.
* GentleGiant: Willie inFiveManBand:
** In the realworld.
* [[spoiler: IDidWhatIHadToDo: Meldorion, court wizard to the deposed king, goes undercover in the village of Pholvenx, luring innocent travelers to the monastery where they are fed to the werewolves.]]
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*** TheLeader: Justin
*** TheBigGuy: Willie
*** TheSmartGuy: Paul
*** TheChick: Katie
*** PluckyGirl: Teresa
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*** GuileHero: Paul
*** {{Berserker}}: Justin
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*** TheChick: Teresa
*** IceQueen:Kate turns into this in Xhandarre.
* JerkAss: Justin in the real world.
* LoveTriangle: At the start, Justin and Kate are dating, but Paul is secretly interested in her. [[spoiler: In the end, Justin and Kate have broken up, and it is implied that she will end up with Paul.]]
* MistakenForCheating: Kate finds a picture that has fallen out of Justin's pocket. It is of a pretty girl, and the note on the back says, "To Justin. Lots of love and kisses". Turns out it's Justin's long-lost sister.
* [[TownWithADarkSecret Monastery with a Dark Secret]]: The monks and nuns of the monastery will gladly entertain all travelers passing through, having an extravagant feast. [[spoiler: Too bad the food is drugged with sleeping potion, and, once the travelers are asleep, the nuns and monks will eagerly suck out their brains and feast on their flesh.]]
* OnlyOneName: Justin, Kate, Willie, Meldorion, Jarmassad.
* TheReveal: [[spoiler: Therion is Avron Kromar. His four cats are the demon familiars]].
* SdrawkcabName: When Teresa, Kate, Justin, and Willie are sold into slavery, they are bought by a man named Yelsrennik. Turns out that the name is Kinnersley (Paul's last name) spelt backward.
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* GentleGiant: Willie in
** In the real
* [[spoiler: IDidWhatIHadToDo: Meldorion, court wizard to the deposed king, goes undercover in the village of Pholvenx, luring innocent travelers to the monastery where they are fed to the werewolves.]]
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*** TheLeader: Justin
*** TheBigGuy: Willie
*** TheSmartGuy: Paul
*** TheChick: Katie
*** PluckyGirl: Teresa
** In Xhandarre:
*** GuileHero: Paul
*** {{Berserker}}: Justin
""" AntiHero: Willie
*** TheChick: Teresa
*** IceQueen:
* JerkAss: Justin in the real world.
* LoveTriangle: At the start, Justin and Kate are dating, but Paul is secretly interested in her. [[spoiler: In the end, Justin and Kate have broken up, and it is implied that she will end up with Paul.]]
* MistakenForCheating: Kate finds a picture that has fallen out of Justin's pocket. It is of a pretty girl, and the note on the back says, "To Justin. Lots of love and kisses". Turns out it's Justin's long-lost sister.
* [[TownWithADarkSecret Monastery with a Dark Secret]]: The monks and nuns of the monastery will gladly entertain all travelers passing through, having an extravagant feast. [[spoiler: Too bad the food is drugged with sleeping potion, and, once the travelers are asleep, the nuns and monks will eagerly suck out their brains and feast on their flesh.]]
* OnlyOneName: Justin, Kate, Willie, Meldorion, Jarmassad.
* TheReveal: [[spoiler: Therion is Avron Kromar. His four cats are the demon familiars]].
* SdrawkcabName: When Teresa, Kate, Justin, and Willie are sold into slavery, they are bought by a man named Yelsrennik. Turns out that the name is Kinnersley (Paul's last name) spelt backward.
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* BigBad: Avron Kromar, of course
* Deconstruction: Ever fantasize about going on an adventure in a fantasy world? This story shows that adventure is not all it's cracked up to be.
* CrapsackRealm: Xhandarre under Avron Kromar
* DirtyCoward: Paul sees himself this way.
* Deconstruction: Ever fantasize about going on an adventure in a fantasy world? This story shows that adventure is not all it's cracked up to be.
* CrapsackRealm: Xhandarre under Avron Kromar
* DirtyCoward: Paul sees himself this way.
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* Aerith
* BigBad: Avron Kromar, ofcourse
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* TheBigGuy: Willie in the real world, Justin in Xhandarre.
* BittersweetEnding: The teens are able to defeat Avron Kro7mar, save Xhandarre, and return to their world. [[spoiler: Unfortunately, once they get back, they realize that their basest secrets and desires, their "dirty laundry" has been exposed, and their friendship is ruined.]]
* ClingyJealousGirl: In the beginning, real-world Kate is this way.
* CrapsackWorld: Xhandarre under Avron Kromar
* Deconstruction: Ever fantasize about going on an adventure in a fantasy world? This story shows thatadventure advent7ure is not all it's cracked up to be.
* CrapsackRealm: Xhandarre under Avron Kromar
* DirtyCoward: Paul sees himself this way. As a child, he saw his cousin drown, and he blames the cousin's death on a moment of hesitation.
* BigBad: Avron Kromar, of
* TheBigGuy: Willie in the real world, Justin in Xhandarre.
* BittersweetEnding: The teens are able to defeat Avron Kro7mar, save Xhandarre, and return to their world. [[spoiler: Unfortunately, once they get back, they realize that their basest secrets and desires, their "dirty laundry" has been exposed, and their friendship is ruined.]]
* ClingyJealousGirl: In the beginning, real-world Kate is this way.
* CrapsackWorld: Xhandarre under Avron Kromar
* Deconstruction: Ever fantasize about going on an adventure in a fantasy world? This story shows that
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* TheReveal: [[spoiler: Therion is Avron Kromar]].
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* GentleGiant: Willie in the real world.
* [[spoiler: IDidWhatIHadToDo: Meldorion, court wizard to the deposed king, goes undercover in the village of Pholvenx, luring innocent travelers to the monastery where they are fed to the werewolves.]]
* IceQueen: Kate turns into this in Xhandarre.
* JerkAss: Justin in the real world.
* LoveTriangle: At the start, Justin and Kate are dating, but Paul is secretly interested in her. [[spoiler: In the end, Justin and Kate have broken up, and it is implied that she will end up with Paul.]]
* MistakenForCheating: Kate finds a picture that has fallen out of Justin's pocket. It is of a pretty girl, and the note on the back says, "To Justin. Lots of love and kisses". Turns out it's Justin's long-lost sister.
* [[TownWithADarkSecret Monastery with a Dark Secret]]: The monks and nuns of the monastery will gladly entertain all travelers passing through, having an extravagant feast. [[spoiler: Too bad the food is drugged with sleeping potion, and, once the travelers are asleep, the nuns and monks will eagerly suck out their brains and feast on their flesh.]]
* OnlyOneName: Justin, Kate, Willie, Meldorion, Jarmassad.
* TheReveal: [[spoiler: Therion is AvronKromar]].Kromar. His four cats are the demon familiars]].
* SdrawkcabName: When Teresa, Kate, Justin, and Willie are sold into slavery, they are bought by a man named Yelsrennik. Turns out that the name is Kinnersley (Paul's last name) spelt backward.
* [[spoiler: IDidWhatIHadToDo: Meldorion, court wizard to the deposed king, goes undercover in the village of Pholvenx, luring innocent travelers to the monastery where they are fed to the werewolves.]]
* IceQueen: Kate turns into this in Xhandarre.
* JerkAss: Justin in the real world.
* LoveTriangle: At the start, Justin and Kate are dating, but Paul is secretly interested in her. [[spoiler: In the end, Justin and Kate have broken up, and it is implied that she will end up with Paul.]]
* MistakenForCheating: Kate finds a picture that has fallen out of Justin's pocket. It is of a pretty girl, and the note on the back says, "To Justin. Lots of love and kisses". Turns out it's Justin's long-lost sister.
* [[TownWithADarkSecret Monastery with a Dark Secret]]: The monks and nuns of the monastery will gladly entertain all travelers passing through, having an extravagant feast. [[spoiler: Too bad the food is drugged with sleeping potion, and, once the travelers are asleep, the nuns and monks will eagerly suck out their brains and feast on their flesh.]]
* OnlyOneName: Justin, Kate, Willie, Meldorion, Jarmassad.
* TheReveal: [[spoiler: Therion is Avron
* SdrawkcabName: When Teresa, Kate, Justin, and Willie are sold into slavery, they are bought by a man named Yelsrennik. Turns out that the name is Kinnersley (Paul's last name) spelt backward.
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TheTwilightRealm is a fantasy novel by Christopher Evans. In this story, five teenagers, Paul, Justin, Willie, Teresa, and Kate, recently graduated from school, have met at Paul's house for their weekly role-playing game. This time, Paul's uncle starts acting oddly, gives the teens wooden figurines that represent characters they admire, and sends them through an old mirror that has become a portal to another world, Xhandarre. In the new world, the five teens, having become the characters depicted in the wooden figurines, fight to save Xhandarre from the evil tyrant Avron Kromar.
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!! Provides Examples of:
* BigBad: Avron Kromar, of course
* Deconstruction: Ever fantasize about going on an adventure in a fantasy world? This story shows that adventure is not all it's cracked up to be.
* CrapsackRealm: Xhandarre under Avron Kromar
* DirtyCoward: Paul sees himself this way.
* FourIsDeath: Avron Kromar has four demon familiars.
* TheReveal: [[spoiler: Therion is Avron Kromar]].
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!! Provides Examples of:
* BigBad: Avron Kromar, of course
* Deconstruction: Ever fantasize about going on an adventure in a fantasy world? This story shows that adventure is not all it's cracked up to be.
* CrapsackRealm: Xhandarre under Avron Kromar
* DirtyCoward: Paul sees himself this way.
* FourIsDeath: Avron Kromar has four demon familiars.
* TheReveal: [[spoiler: Therion is Avron Kromar]].
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