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* HenpeckedHusband: Roger gets grief not from his wife, but from his ''mother'', who insults him constantly and literally calls him a sissy when he refuses to rise to the bait.
-->'''Cas to Pol''': "Have you ever noticed how Dad gets pushed around until he gets his own way?"
-->'''Cas to Pol''': "Have you ever noticed how Dad gets pushed around until he gets his own way?"
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* MyBelovedSmother: Roger gets constant flack from Hazel who insults him calls him a sissy when he refuses to rise to the bait.
-->'''Cas to Pol''': "Have you ever noticed how Dad gets pushed around until he gets his own way?"
-->'''Cas to Pol''': "Have you ever noticed how Dad gets pushed around until he gets his own way?"
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Shout outs refer to something that the book would be referencing, not the other way around.
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* ShoutOut: The movie ''Literature/FaceOff'' has two evil brothers named Castor and Pollux. the same way this book's twins are named.
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* ShoutOut: The movie ''Literature/FaceOff'' has two evil brothers named Castor and Pollux. the same way this book's twins are named.
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It takes place in the same universe as ''Literature/TheMoonIsAHarshMistress'', which is a direct prequel.
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It takes place in the same universe as ''Literature/TheMoonIsAHarshMistress'', which is a direct prequel.
prequel. Hazel Stone returns in ''Literature/TheCatWhoWalksThroughWalls''.
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* ImADoctorNotAPlaceholder:
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* ImADoctorNotAPlaceholder:ImADoctorNotAPlaceholder: Quite possibly the Ur Example.
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* ThemeTwinNaming: Castor and Pollux are of course named after the twins of GreekMythology.
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* ThemeTwinNaming: Castor and Pollux are of course named after the twins of GreekMythology.Myth/GreekMythology.
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-->'''Cas to Pol''': "Have you ever noticed how Dad gets pushed around until he get's his own way?"
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-->'''Cas to Pol''': "Have you ever noticed how Dad gets pushed around until he get's gets his own way?"
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-->'''Cas to Pol''': "Have you ever noticed how Dad gets pushed around until he get's his own way?"
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* NoodleIncident: After Cas and Pol are arrested on Mars for tax evasion, their father notes that at least it wasn't for experimenting with atomics inside city limits.
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* NoodleIncident: After Cas and Pol are arrested on Mars for tax evasion, their father notes that at least it wasn't for experimenting with atomics inside city limits.limits - ''this'' time.
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* ConvenientlyUnverifiableCoverStory: When her grandsons need an attorney on Mars, Hazel claims to be entitled to practice law -- something her family had never heard before. When had she been admitted to the bar?
--> '''Hazel''': Years and years ago, back in Idaho -- before you were born. I just never got around to mentioning it.\\
'''Roger''': Hazel, it occurs to me that the records in Idaho are conveniently far away.\\
'''Hazel''': None of your sass, boy. Anyway, [[BlatantLies the courthouse burned down.]]\\
'''Roger''': I thought as much.
--> '''Hazel''': Years and years ago, back in Idaho -- before you were born. I just never got around to mentioning it.\\
'''Roger''': Hazel, it occurs to me that the records in Idaho are conveniently far away.\\
'''Hazel''': None of your sass, boy. Anyway, [[BlatantLies the courthouse burned down.]]\\
'''Roger''': I thought as much.
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* ShownTheirWork: In the book ''Literature/ExpandedUniverse'', Mr Heinlein explain how Mrs Heinlein and he spent many hours calculating the precise orbit of the spaceship when it departs Luna and slingshots around Earth toward Mars. They had to do it with paper and pen, because in the early 1950s there was no other way and he wanted it to be correct.
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* ShownTheirWork: In the book ''Literature/ExpandedUniverse'', Mr Mr. Heinlein explain how Mrs Mrs. Heinlein and he spent many hours calculating the precise orbit of the spaceship when it departs Luna and slingshots around Earth toward Mars. They had to do it with paper and pen, because in the early 1950s there was no other way and he wanted it to be correct.
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* TakeThat: You have to wonder if some of Roger Stone's rantings about his much hated science-fiction show contract had anything to do with Heinlein's experiences working on DestinationMoon, or TomCorbetSpaceCadet.
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* TakeThat: You have to wonder if some of Roger Stone's rantings about his much hated science-fiction show contract had anything to do with Heinlein's experiences working on DestinationMoon, ''Film/DestinationMoon'', or TomCorbetSpaceCadet.''TomCorbettSpaceCadet''.
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* CliffhangerCopout: Appears in-universe in a StoryWithinAStory, "Scourge of the Spaceways". John Serling ends one season in an unsurvivable DeathTrap. He starts the next season out of the DeathTrap and, hero that he is, is too modest to tell people how he managed to escape. Then the next adventure starts.
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* CliffhangerCopout: Appears in-universe in a StoryWithinAStory, "Scourge StoryWithinAStory,''The Scourge of the Spaceways". Spaceways''. John Serling Sterling ends one season in an unsurvivable DeathTrap. He starts the next season out of the DeathTrap and, hero that he is, is too modest to tell people how he managed to escape. Then the next adventure starts.
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Shorter Dr.
* ImADoctorNotAPlaceholder:
--> '''Edith Stone''': I’m a doctor, not a fortune-teller.
--> '''Edith Stone''': I’m a doctor, not a fortune-teller.
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--> '''Edith Stone''': [[ImADoctorNotAPlaceholder I’m a doctor, not a fortune-teller.]]
--> '''Edith Stone''': [[ImADoctorNotAPlaceholder I’m a doctor, not a fortune-teller.]]
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--> '''Edith Stone''': [[ImADoctorNotAPlaceholder I’m a doctor, not a fortune-teller.]]
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A doctor, not a fortune-teller.
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--> '''Edith Stone''': [[ImADoctorNotAPlaceholder I’m a doctor, not a fortune-teller.]]
--> '''Edith Stone''': [[ImADoctorNotAPlaceholder I’m a doctor, not a fortune-teller.]]
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* DontMakeMeTakeMyBeltOff: Roger Stone talks the twins after Hazel and Buster are rescued, telling them the history of the belt in his hands, and how his whole was raised on it. He seems to be threatening them with it for their screwup, but then notes that they're too old for it to do any good, and they're going to have to live with the consequences of their actions like adults, instead of just being punished and getting over it.
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* DontMakeMeTakeMyBeltOff: Roger Stone talks to the twins after Hazel and Buster are rescued, telling them the history of the belt in his hands, and how his whole family was raised on it. He seems to be threatening them with it for their screwup, but then notes that they're too old for it to do any good, and they're going to have to live with the consequences of their actions like adults, instead of just being punished and getting over it.
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* YesMan: 50% of Edith Stone's dialog consists of "Yes, dear" in response to Roger Stone's rantings. When she does speak up it's [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness serious business]]
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* SilkHidingSteel: Edith Stone is outwardly the quiet, solid center of family with seemingly no strong opinions and who seems to have given up on her career as a doctor when she married. On the other hand Cas and Pol note that no family argument is decided until she weighs in, and she politely but firmly ignores her husband Roger's objections when she volunteers to transfer to a ship [[spoiler: that is suffering from a viral plague that has already killed their ship's surgeon.]]
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* YamatoNadeshiko: Edith Stone skirts this. Outwardly she's the quiet, solid center of family with seemingly no strong opinions and who seems to have given up on her career as a doctor when she married. On the other hand Cas and Pol note that no family argument is decided until she weighs in, and she politely but firmly ignores her husband Roger's objections when she volunteers to transfer to a ship [[spoiler: that is suffering from a viral plague that has already killed their ship's surgeon.]]
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* TheAdventureContinues: After travelling to Mars, and eventually the Asteroid Belt, the family shrug and keep on Rolling.
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It takes place in the same universe as ''TheMoonIsAHarshMistress'', which is a direct prequel.
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It takes place in the same universe as ''TheMoonIsAHarshMistress'', ''Literature/TheMoonIsAHarshMistress'', which is a direct prequel.
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* DontMakeMeTakeMyBeltOff: Played with when Roger Stone talks the twins after Hazel and Buster are rescued. He seems to be threatening them with it for their screwup, but then notes that they're too old for it to do any good, and they're going to have to live with the consequences of their actions like adults, instead of just being punished and getting over it.
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* CreatorBacklash: In universe for poor heroic John Sterling, star of ''The Scourge of the Spaceways.''
--> '''Roger:''' I've hated that mealy-mouthed Galahad since the moment I created him.
* DontMakeMeTakeMyBeltOff:Played with when Roger Stone talks the twins after Hazel and Buster are rescued.rescued, telling them the history of the belt in his hands, and how his whole was raised on it. He seems to be threatening them with it for their screwup, but then notes that they're too old for it to do any good, and they're going to have to live with the consequences of their actions like adults, instead of just being punished and getting over it.
--> '''Roger:''' I've hated that mealy-mouthed Galahad since the moment I created him.
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* KillEmAll: Hazel's solution for freeing Roger from his scripting contract. It doesn't take...
* MoneyDearBoy: The reason Hazel ends up continuing the serial anyway. It does help pay for the ''Stone's'' modifications, admittedly.
* MoneyDearBoy: The reason Hazel ends up continuing the serial anyway. It does help pay for the ''Stone's'' modifications, admittedly.
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That wasn\'t what happened. The Stone just corrected her orbit.
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[[spoiler: Later in the book, the Rolling Stone essentially does just that in order to reclaim the cargo they had to abandon in order to reach a plague-infested ship.]]
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[[spoiler: Later in the book, the Rolling Stone essentially does just that in order to reclaim the cargo they had to abandon in order to reach a plague-infested ship.]]
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* YouAreGrounded: Roger Stone confines Cas and Pol to quarters after [[spoiler: they almost kill Hazel and Buster by not logging a malfunction in the family rocket scooter.]] In typical fashion they break it to save the day.
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* YouAreGrounded: Roger Stone confines Cas and Pol to quarters after [[spoiler: they almost kill Hazel and Buster by not logging a malfunction in the family rocket scooter.]] In typical fashion they break it to save the day.day.
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A well-loved YA novel written by RobertAHeinlein and published in 1952, ''The Rolling Stones'' follows the adventures of the Stone family, primarily through the viewpoint of fifteen year old red-headed troublemakers Castor and Pollux. Together they finagle their father, beleaguered script writer Roger Stone, into purchasing a space ship for a family outing through the solar system. HilarityEnsues.
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A well-loved YA novel written by RobertAHeinlein Creator/RobertAHeinlein and published in 1952, ''The Rolling Stones'' follows the adventures of the Stone family, primarily through the viewpoint of fifteen year old red-headed troublemakers Castor and Pollux. Together they finagle their father, beleaguered script writer Roger Stone, into purchasing a space ship for a family outing through the solar system. HilarityEnsues.
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* AsteroidThicket: Averted. The book takes care to note that the asteroids are far enough apart that the risk of being hit by one is infinitesimally small. Nevertheless ''The Rolling Stone'' takes precautions anyway when they enter an unusually dense field that's a haven for miners.
* CaptainSpaceDefenderOfEarth: Roger Stone and, later, Grandma Hazel help support the family by writing a deliberately over-the-top three-vee serial in the Captain Space Defender mold.
* CaptainSpaceDefenderOfEarth: Roger Stone and, later, Grandma Hazel help support the family by writing a deliberately over-the-top three-vee serial in the Captain Space Defender mold.
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* AsteroidThicket: Averted. The book takes care to note that the asteroids are far enough apart that the risk of being hit by one is infinitesimally small. Nevertheless ''The Rolling Stone'' takes precautions anyway when they enter an unusually dense field that's a haven for miners.
miners.
* CaptainSpaceDefenderOfEarth: Roger Stone and, later, Grandma Hazel help support the family by writing a deliberately over-the-top three-vee serial in the Captain Space Defender mold.
* CaptainSpaceDefenderOfEarth: Roger Stone and, later, Grandma Hazel help support the family by writing a deliberately over-the-top three-vee serial in the Captain Space Defender mold.
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* ShownTheirWork: In the book ''Literature/ExpandedUniverse'', Mr Heinlein explain how Mrs Heinlein and he spent many hours calculating the precise orbit of the spaceship when it departs Luna and slingshots around Earth toward Mars. They had to do it with paper and pen, because in the early 1950s there was no other way and he wanted it to be correct.
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* ShownTheirWork: In the book ''Literature/ExpandedUniverse'', Mr Heinlein explain how Mrs Heinlein and he spent many hours calculating the precise orbit of the spaceship when it departs Luna and slingshots around Earth toward Mars. They had to do it with paper and pen, because in the early 1950s there was no other way and he wanted it to be correct.
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* SciFiWritersHaveNoSenseOfScale: Averted in the book proper of course. In Hazel's serial she cheerfully make Science whimper loudly and hide its head in the very first episode she writes.
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* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight: Early in their trip to Mars, Buster, the youngest of the Stones, suffers from severe space sickness. Roger makes plans to swing their ship back towards Luna, despite being turned down by traffic control and knowing he'd at minimum be heavily fined, and have his ship master's license revoked.
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* AdultFear: Quite a bit for poor Roger, as the head of a family travelling out to the frontiers of the Solar System.
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* ComedicSociopathy: Played with when Buster is suffering from severe space sickness. The twins note that it would be better if the ''Stone'' (illegally) corrects their orbit to return to Luna, noting that if their brother died "It would spoil the whole trip."
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* DontMakeMeTakeMyBeltOff: Played with when Roger Stone talks the twins after Hazel and Buster are rescued. He seems to be threatening them with it for their screwup, but then notes that they're too old for it to do any good, and they're going to have to live with the consequences of their actions like adults, instead of just being punished and getting over it.
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--> ''Roger'': For starters, spaceships do ''not'' make 180 degree turns!
--> ''Hazel'': Mine do.
--> ''Hazel'': Mine do.
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--> ''Roger'': '''Roger''': For starters, spaceships do ''not'' make 180 degree turns!
-->''Hazel'': '''Hazel''': Mine do.
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* SciFiWritersHaveNoSenseOfScale: Averted in the book proper of course. In Hazel's serial she cheerfully make Science whimper loudly and hide its head in the very first episode she writes.
--> ''Roger'': For starters, spaceships do ''not'' make 180 degree turns!
--> ''Hazel'': Mine do.
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--> ''Hazel'': Mine do.
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* ExpospeakGag: Hazel tries to pull this along with a big helping of Sesquipedalian Loquaciousness to explain to Captain Vandenberg why they got a flat cat for Buster, trying to satisfy his need to see the intelligent Martian natives. The boy sees right through it.
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* ExpospeakGag: Hazel tries to pull this along with a big helping of Sesquipedalian Loquaciousness SesquipedalianLoquaciousness to explain to Captain Vandenberg why they got a flat cat for Buster, trying to satisfy his need to see the intelligent Martian natives. The boy sees right through it.
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* ExpospeakGag: Hazel tries to pull this along with a big helping of Sesquipedalian Loquaciousness to explain to Captain Vandenberg why they got a flat cat for Buster, trying to satisfy his need to see the intelligent Martian natives. The boy sees right through it.
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It takes place in the same universe as ''TheMoonIsAHarshMistress'' and can be seen as a direct sequel.
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It takes place in the same universe as ''TheMoonIsAHarshMistress'' and can be seen as ''TheMoonIsAHarshMistress'', which is a direct sequel.
prequel.
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* AsteroidMiners - The titular family Stone travels to the Asteroid Belt, where the twins of the family hope to sell food and luxury items to the miners extracting radioactive ores.
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* AsteroidMiners - AsteroidMiners: The titular family Stone travels to the Asteroid Belt, where the twins of the family hope to sell food and luxury items to the miners extracting radioactive ores.
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* CaptainSpaceDefenderOfEarth - Roger Stone and, later, Grandma Hazel help support the family by writing a deliberately over-the-top three-vee serial in the Captain Space Defender mold.
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* CliffhangerCopout: Appears in-universe in a StoryWithinAStory, "Scourge of the Spaceways". John Serling ends one season in an unsurvivable DeathTrap. He starts the next season out of the DeathTrap and, hero that he is, is too modest to tell people how he managed to escape. Then the next adventure starts.
* CliffhangerCopout: Appears in-universe in a StoryWithinAStory, "Scourge of the Spaceways". John Serling ends one season in an unsurvivable DeathTrap. He starts the next season out of the DeathTrap and, hero that he is, is too modest to tell people how he managed to escape. Then the next adventure starts.
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* MostWritersAreWriters - As is a common theme in Heinlein's work, Hazel and Roger both have careers as fiction writers.
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* MostWritersAreWriters - MostWritersAreWriters: As is a common theme in Heinlein's work, Hazel and Roger both have careers as fiction writers.