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* GreatOffscreenWar: The whole continent was under the rule of one empire, which fell leaving some treaties intact.
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* GreatOffscreenWar: The whole continent was under the rule of one empire, which fell leaving 2000 years ago and still left some treaties intact.
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** The Serpent Gods. Eight in total: Lorric, the God of Lust; Meka, the God of Miracles; Dek is another. Not much is known beyond them being related to each other and Lorric being the most powerful amongst them.
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** The Serpent Gods. Eight in total: total, though only a few are named so far. They are: Lorric, the God of Lust; Meka, the God of Miracles; Dek is another. Not much is known beyond them being related to each other and Lorric being the most powerful amongst them.
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* FunctionalMagicFunctionalMagic: Healers for the most part have HealingHands. And VoluntaryShapeshifting.
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* HealingHands: Jayien is clearly this, what with being a healer.
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* HealingHands: Jayien is clearly this, what What with being a healer.healers, Jayien and [[spoiler:Hianin]] have this power.
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* FantasyPantheon: Whilst the All Mother and the Devil are the highest, there's two major factions:
** The Serpent Gods. Eight in total: Lorric, the God of Lust; Meka, the God of Miracles; Dek is another. Not much is known beyond Lorric being the most powerful.
** The Serpent Gods. Eight in total: Lorric, the God of Lust; Meka, the God of Miracles; Dek is another. Not much is known beyond Lorric being the most powerful.
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* FantasyPantheon: There are nineteen deities in this world. Whilst the All Mother and the Devil are the highest, there's the majority are divided into two major factions:
hierarchies:
** The Serpent Gods. Eight in total: Lorric, the God of Lust; Meka, the God of Miracles; Dek is another. Not much is known beyond them being related to each other and Lorric being the mostpowerful.powerful amongst them.
** The Serpent Gods. Eight in total: Lorric, the God of Lust; Meka, the God of Miracles; Dek is another. Not much is known beyond them being related to each other and Lorric being the most
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* AnthropomorphicPersonification: Lorric is the God of Lust, Meka is the God of Miracles, Evalka is the Goddess of Night, Latesha is their Devil, and the All Mother is the TopGod.
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* AnthropomorphicPersonification: Several kicking about. Lorric is the God of Lust, Meka is the God of Miracles, Evalka is the Goddess Star(Goddess) of Night, Latesha is their Devil, and the All Mother is the TopGod.
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* FantasyPantheonFantasyPantheon: Whilst the All Mother and the Devil are the highest, there's two major factions:
** The Serpent Gods. Eight in total: Lorric, the God of Lust; Meka, the God of Miracles; Dek is another. Not much is known beyond Lorric being the most powerful.
** The Stars. These are the daughters of destiny and granddaughters to the All Mother. There are six in total, but only Evalka is named.
** The Serpent Gods. Eight in total: Lorric, the God of Lust; Meka, the God of Miracles; Dek is another. Not much is known beyond Lorric being the most powerful.
** The Stars. These are the daughters of destiny and granddaughters to the All Mother. There are six in total, but only Evalka is named.
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* HumanoidAliensHumanoidAliens: Everyone who isn't an actual human appears to have a human resemblance.
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* AnthropomorphicPersonification
AnthropomorphicPersonification: Lorric is the God of Lust, Meka is the God of Miracles, Evalka is the Goddess of Night, Latesha is their Devil, and the All Mother is the TopGod.
*AsskickingEqualsAuthorityAsskickingEqualsAuthority: How Koral gains his status as the Rogue King.
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* DemonicPossessionDemonicPossession: How Lorric turns Koral into a Rogue.
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* FantasyContraceptionFantasyContraception: It's not revealed what's in them, but there are potions.
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* HugeGuyTinyGirlHugeGuyTinyGirl: Koral and [[spoiler:Lasil]].
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* InterspeciesRomance
InterspeciesRomance: Cesei and Koral, given that she's a raptereon and he's, at the very least, a hybrid.
** Also seems to be rife in the desert communities.
*JerkassGodJerkassGod: Lorric.
** Also seems to be rife in the desert communities.
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* PhysicalGod
PhysicalGod: Evalka, Lorric, Latesha, All Mother.
*SheIsAllGrownUpSheIsAllGrownUp: Koral's reaction to [[spoiler:Lasil]].
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* BigBad: Lorric, hands down.down... seeing that he [[spoiler:possesses]] Koral and forces him to [[spoiler:rape and kill]].
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* ChaoticNeutral: Dude it the king of a bad bunch, yet he's not above [[spoiler:rescuing people from them]].
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* MayDecemberRomance: Koral is thrice [[spoiler:Lasil's] age and, presumably, has only ten more years to live.
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* MayDecemberRomance: Koral is thrice [[spoiler:Lasil's] [[spoiler:Lasil's]] age and, presumably, has only ten more years to live.
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* YourSoulIsMine
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* YourSoulIsMineYourSoulIsMine: Don't want to be possessed by the crazy BigBad? Just [[spoiler:have a less crazy god take your soul]].
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* MayDecemberRomanceMayDecemberRomance: Koral is thrice [[spoiler:Lasil's] age and, presumably, has only ten more years to live.
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* HighPriestHighPriest: Shirain. As the High Priestess of the God of Lust, she's pretty much responsible for the Koral's current state.
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* AndIMustScream: As if being possessed and sealed away in your own mind isn't enough. Being forced to unspeakable acts just might.
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* AndIMustScream: As if being possessed and sealed away in your own mind by an insane god isn't enough. Being forced to into unspeakable acts when you're a child just might.
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* DealWithTheDevil: Pretty mild in that he trades his shadow for wings. Of course, this will cause ramifications later as his shadow can [harbour a demon].
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* DealWithTheDevil: Pretty mild in that he trades his shadow for wings. Of course, this will promises to cause ramifications later as his shadow can [harbour basically [[spoiler:harbour a demon].demon]].
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* DealWithTheDevil: Pretty mild in that he trades his shadow for wings.
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* DealWithTheDevil: Pretty mild in that he trades his shadow for wings.
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''The Rogue King" is the first of a ScienceFantasy series by Aldrea Alien. It concerns the struggle of Koral's attempts to survive and keep his old ideals in the dangerous desert land where men are routinely sacrificed to the lustful Serpent God, Lorric.
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''The Rogue King" King'' is the first of a ScienceFantasy series by Aldrea Alien. It concerns the struggle of Koral's attempts to survive and keep his old ideals in the dangerous desert land where men are routinely sacrificed to the lustful Serpent God, Lorric.
Lorric, and are turned into Rogues.
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!! [The ''The Rogue King] King'' contains examples of:
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* DealWithTheDevilDealWithTheDevil: Pretty mild in that he trades
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''The Rogue King" is the first of a ScienceFantasy series by Aldrea Alien. It concerns the struggle of Koral's attempts to survive and keep his old ideals in the dangerous desert land where men are routinely sacrificed to the lustful Serpent God, Lorric.
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!!'''Provided examples:'''
* AntiHero
* BigBad: Lorric, hands down.
* CatFolk: The katess.
* DealWithTheDevil
* DemonicPossession
* DraconicHumanoid: The raptereons. Some fly, others can even breathe fire.
* FantasyPantheon
* HighPriest
* HellishHorse: Vampire horse, anyone?
* HugeGuyTinyGirl
* HumanoidAliens
* InterspeciesRomance
* JerkassGod
* LizardFolk: Also the raptereons. The non-flying, non-fire breathing ones.
* MayDecemberRomance
* OhMyGods
* PhysicalGod
* SheIsAllGrownUp
* SnakePeople: The Sssstamne. Who also...
* SssssnakeTalk: Any hissing sound is denoted by three S's.
* TopGod: What else could someone known as the All Mother possibly be?
* VoluntaryShapeshifting: Practically every creature can turn into a more animalistic form. The exception being hybrids.
* YourSoulIsMine
''The Rogue King" is the first of a ScienceFantasy series by Aldrea Alien. It concerns the struggle of Koral's attempts to survive and keep his old ideals in the dangerous desert land where men are routinely sacrificed to the lustful Serpent God, Lorric.
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!!'''Provided examples:'''
* AntiHero
* BigBad: Lorric, hands down.
* CatFolk: The katess.
* DealWithTheDevil
* DemonicPossession
* DraconicHumanoid: The raptereons. Some fly, others can even breathe fire.
* FantasyPantheon
* HighPriest
* HellishHorse: Vampire horse, anyone?
* HugeGuyTinyGirl
* HumanoidAliens
* InterspeciesRomance
* JerkassGod
* LizardFolk: Also the raptereons. The non-flying, non-fire breathing ones.
* MayDecemberRomance
* OhMyGods
* PhysicalGod
* SheIsAllGrownUp
* SnakePeople: The Sssstamne. Who also...
* SssssnakeTalk: Any hissing sound is denoted by three S's.
* TopGod: What else could someone known as the All Mother possibly be?
* VoluntaryShapeshifting: Practically every creature can turn into a more animalistic form. The exception being hybrids.
* YourSoulIsMine
