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* DramaticIrony: The Valdemarans and Taleydras can only speculate as to the cause of [[spoiler: Cloudfall's FaceHeelTurn.]] Readers who are familiar with the Mage Winds and Mage Storms series, however, [[spoiler: can figure out that she was actually [[GrandTheftMe possessed by Ma'ar]], since directly before her disappearance she had gone to practice the spell for calling fire.]]

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* DramaticIrony: The Valdemarans and Taleydras can only speculate as to the cause of [[spoiler: Cloudfall's FaceHeelTurn.]] Readers who are familiar with the Mage Winds and Mage Storms series, however, [[spoiler: can figure out that she was actually [[GrandTheftMe possessed by Ma'ar]], since directly before her disappearance she had gone to practice the [[BoobyTrap spell for calling fire.fire]].]]

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* DramaticIrony: The Valdemarans and Taleydras can only speculate as to the cause of [[spoiler: Cloudfall's FaceHeelTurn.]] Readers who are familiar with the Mage Winds and Mage Storms series, however, [[spoiler: can figure out that she was actually [[GrandTheftMe possessed by Ma'ar]], since directly before her disappearance she had gone to practice the spell for calling fire.]]


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** In "Into the West," Kordas mentions [[UsefulNotes/{{FlyingSpaghettiMonster}} wearing a sieve on one's head]] as an example of the range of beliefs and practices covered under "No One True Way."
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* DramaticIrony: The Valdemarans and Taleydras can only speculate as to the cause of [[spoiler: Cloudfall's FaceHeelTurn.]] Readers who are familiar with the Mage Winds and Mage Storms series, however, [[spoiler: can figure out that she was actually {{GrandTheftMe possessed by Ma'ar}}, since directly before her disappearance she had gone to practice the spell for calling fire.]]

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* DramaticIrony: The Valdemarans and Taleydras can only speculate as to the cause of [[spoiler: Cloudfall's FaceHeelTurn.]] Readers who are familiar with the Mage Winds and Mage Storms series, however, [[spoiler: can figure out that she was actually {{GrandTheftMe [[GrandTheftMe possessed by Ma'ar}}, Ma'ar]], since directly before her disappearance she had gone to practice the spell for calling fire.]]
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* DramaticIrony: The Valdemarans and Taleydras can only speculate as to the cause of [[spoiler: Cloudfall's FaceHeelTurn.]] Readers who are familiar with the Mage Winds and Mage Storms series, however, [[spoiler: can figure out that she was actually {{GrandTheftMe possessed by Ma'ar}}, since directly before her disappearance she had gone to practice the spell for calling fire.]]
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* BlessedWithSuck: [[FriendToAllLivingThings Lythe Shadowdancer's]] and [[Hunk Rothas Sunsinger's]] lifebond is explicitly portrayed as this.

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* BlessedWithSuck: [[FriendToAllLivingThings Lythe Shadowdancer's]] and [[Hunk [[{{Hunk}} Rothas Sunsinger's]] lifebond is explicitly portrayed as this.
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* BlessedWithSuck: [[FriendToAllLivingThings Lythe Shadowdancer's]] and [[Hunk Rothas Sunsinger's]] lifebond is explicitly portrayed as this.


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**Kordas and Isla's two younger children are named after major secondary characters. Once they start coming into their own as characters in "Valdemar," this can occasionally get confusing.
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** Rothas Sunsinger [[Film/{{MontyPythonAndTheHolyGrail}} just...wants to sing.

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** Rothas Sunsinger [[Film/{{MontyPythonAndTheHolyGrail}} just...wants to sing.]]

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* NoCelebritiesWereHarmed: With his pettiness, LackOfEmpathy, low intelligence, and obsession with size and luxury, the Emperor comes off as an {{Expy}} of Donald Trump, who had recently become the former President at the time of publication. The physical description is similar as well, and upon receiving the False Golds he makes a very Trumpesque speech about how big and impressive they are, while proving Kordas right that he hasn't the brains or knowledge to spot the real thing.

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his pettiness, LackOfEmpathy, low intelligence, and obsession with size and luxury, the Emperor comes off as an {{Expy}} of Donald Trump, who had recently become the former President at the time of publication. The physical description is similar as well, and upon receiving the False Golds he makes a very Trumpesque speech about how big and impressive they are, while proving Kordas right that he hasn't the brains or knowledge to spot the real thing.thing.
**Lythe Shadowdancer is described as looking uncannily like a young Creator/ElizabethTaylor.


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** Rothas Sunsinger [[Film/{{MontyPythonAndTheHolyGrail}} just...wants to sing.
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* AndroclesLion: In ''Beyond'', Kordas saves an infant Earth Elemental and reunites it with it's mother. [[spoiler: In ''Into the West'', the two elementals appear to help Kordas fight a corrupted elemental]]

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* AndroclesLion: In ''Beyond'', Kordas saves an infant Earth Elemental and reunites it with it's its mother. [[spoiler: In ''Into the West'', the two elementals appear to help Kordas fight a corrupted elemental]]elemental.]]



** In ''Into the West'', a magical projection device is used to make evening announcements, seeming very much like television. There's the evening news, followed by various entertainments, including a serial puppet show that sounds like a sitcom.

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** In ''Into the West'', a magical projection device is used to make evening announcements, seeming very much like television.television--or perhaps a theater with newsreels, since the whole population watches the same image, projected over the lake. There's the evening news, followed by various entertainments, including a serial puppet show that sounds like a sitcom. Beltran even rapidly transcribes Kordas's speech onto cards and slides them into the imaging area, to provide captions.
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* ISurrenderSuckers: At the end of the final battle of ''Valdemar'', Herald-Prince Restil pulls one of these on the enemy Adept to get her to try dragging him through a Gate ... along with an enchanted item that is very not compatible with Gate-magic. Cue one Adept sliced in half by a TeleFrag.
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The upcoming ''Valdemar'' will detail the early trials of the titular kingdom, the arrival of the Companions, and the founding of the Heralds.

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The upcoming ''Valdemar'' will detail (2023) details the early trials of the titular kingdom, the arrival of the Companions, and the founding of the Heralds.

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* AndroclesLion: In ''Beyond'', Kordas saves an infant Earth Elemental and reunites it with it's moth. [[spoiler: In ''Into the West'', the two elementals appear to help Kordas fight a corrupted elemental]]

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* SecretTestOfCharacter: [[spoiler: Kordas and the Valdemaran's journey through the Pelagirs was this as the Tayledras observed how Kordas treated the land and its inhabitants to judge whether they were worthy of settling in a Cleansed and decommissioned former Vale.]]
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* RefugeInTheWest: The founding of the titular kingdom come from a group of refugees fleeing TheEmpire, led by Baron Valdemar. The second book is called ''Into the West'' and follows the refugees leaving their original teleport destination for safety.
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* AndroclesLion: In ''Beyond'', Kordas saves an infant Earth Elemental and reunites it with it's moth. [[spoiler: In ''Into the West'', the two elementals appear to help Kordas fight a corrupted elemental]]


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* DeathWorld: Outside of a small village, the forest Kordas Gates into is an incredibly dangerous area filled with corrupted magical monsters constantly trying to kill the group. [[spoiler: It's the Pelagir Wilds and the lands the Tayledras are tasked to cleanse and heal.]]


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* RetCon: One over the history of the Empire. In the ''Mage Storms'' series, the Empire is mentioned to have been formed by some of the remnants of Ma'ar's army. In ''Beyond'', the Empire was never part of the war, survived the mage storms relatively intact and stepped into the EvilPowerVacuum.


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* WrongContextMagic: The Empire is not only capable of immense feats of magic, the Emperor throws magic around to awe and please his followers. Characters will remark and long-time readers will know that this should be impossible. The Mage Storms wiped away node magic and ley lines making near impossible powerful feats of magic and the world only recovers around Vanyel's time. Kordas speculates that the Empire might have made pacts with demons or is using blood magic. [[spoiler: It turns out the the Empire is draining magic from an Earth Elemental.]]
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** Among the people that come through the Gate after the initial landing party are [[WebVideo/EpicNPCMan a fisherman that says, "Mornin'. Nice day fer fishin', ain't it?", a blacksmith, and a confused man with s string of garlic hanging from his belt]].

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** Among the people that come through the Gate after the initial landing party are [[WebVideo/EpicNPCMan a fisherman that says, "Mornin'. Nice day fer fishin', ain't it?", a blacksmith, and a confused man with s a string of garlic hanging from his belt]].
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A prequel to Creator/MercedesLackey's ''Literature/HeraldsOfValdemar'' novels, recounting the founding of the titular kingdom by a small population fleeing an evil Empire, led by Baron Valdemar.

Within the Eastern Empire, Duke Kordas Valdemar rules a tiny, bucolic Duchy that focuses mostly on horse breeding. Anticipating the day when the Empire’s exploitative and militant leaders would not be content to leave them alone, Korda’s father set out to gather magicians in the hopes of one day finding a way to escape and protect the people of the Duchy from tyranny.

Kordas has lived his life looking over his shoulder. The signs in the Empire are increasingly dire. Under the direction of the Emperor, mages have begun to harness the power of dark magics, including blood magic, the powers of the Abyssal Planes, and the binding and "milking" of Elemental creatures.

But then one of the Duchy’s mages has a breakthrough. There is a way to place a Gate at a distance so far from the Empire that it is unlikely the Emperor can find or follow them as they evacuate everyone that is willing to leave.

But time is running out, and Kordas has been summoned to the Emperor's Court.

Can his reputation as a country bumpkin and his acting skills buy him and his people the time they need to flee? Or will the Emperor lose patience, invade to strip Valdemar of everything of worth, and send its conscripted people into the front lines of the Imperial wars?

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A ''The Founding of Valdemar'' is a trilogy of novels that serve as a prequel to Creator/MercedesLackey's ''Literature/HeraldsOfValdemar'' novels, series, recounting the founding of the titular kingdom by a small population fleeing an evil Empire, [[TheEmpire Empire]], led by Baron Duke-turned-Baron-turned-King Kordas Valdemar.

Within The first book, ''Beyond'' (2021), follows the Eastern Empire, Duke Kordas Valdemar rules a tiny, bucolic Duchy that focuses mostly on horse breeding. Anticipating the day when the Empire’s exploitative and militant leaders would not be content to leave them alone, Korda’s father set out to gather magicians in the hopes of one day finding a way to escape and protect the people evolution of the Duchy of Valdemar's long-standing plan to escape from tyranny.

Kordas has lived his life looking over his shoulder. The signs in
the grip of the Empire are increasingly dire. Under the direction of the Emperor, mages have begun to harness the power of dark magics, including blood magic, the powers of the Abyssal Planes, and the binding and "milking" of Elemental creatures.

But then one of the Duchy’s mages has a breakthrough. There is
by perfecting a way to place a Gate at a distance so far from send the Empire that it is unlikely entire population through a [[CoolGate magical Gate]] into the Emperor can find or follow them as they evacuate everyone that western wilderness. The situation is willing to leave.

But time is running out, and
complicated when Kordas has been is personally summoned to the Emperor's Court.

Can his reputation as a country bumpkin and his acting skills buy him and his people the time they need to flee? Or will the Emperor lose patience, invade to strip Valdemar of everything of worth, and send its conscripted people into the front lines of the
Imperial wars?
Court to deliver his tribute of horses to the Emperor, where he must navigate the intrigues of the court and find new allies and opportunities, without being caught.

In ''Into the West'' (2022), having taken the first leap out of Imperial lands, the Valdamaran expedition continues westward, seeking an unpopulated area to settle for their own.

The upcoming ''Valdemar'' will detail the early trials of the titular kingdom, the arrival of the Companions, and the founding of the Heralds.



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* ContinuityNod:
** The crest of Valdemar is a white horse.
** The Vrondi, air elementals who appear frequently in subsequent novels. Here they've been trapped and enslaved by the EvilEmpire, and escape with the Valdemarans while also bolstering the plan immensely. Kordas' narrative also makes it clear that they power the Truth Spells that are used later, which Star notes is pleasurable for them, as the truth is nurturing.
** In ''Into The West'', Kordas makes a speech about tolerance with the words, "There is no one, true way."

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* ContinuityNod:
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** The crest of Valdemar is a white horse.
winged RearingHorse, almost identical to the crest of the Kingdom in later-set stories. It lacks the broken chains around its feet, which will come to symbolize the breakaway of Valdemar's people from Imperial rule.
** The Vrondi, ''vrondi'', air elementals who appear frequently in subsequent novels. Here they've been trapped and enslaved by the EvilEmpire, and escape with the Valdemarans while also bolstering the plan immensely. Kordas' Kordas's narrative also makes it clear that they power the Truth Spells that are used later, which Star notes is pleasurable for them, as the truth is nurturing.
** In ''Into The the West'', Kordas makes a speech about tolerance with centered around the words, "There is no one, true way."way," exhorting his people to follow them as a Path. This credo becomes Valdemar's governing philosophy, followed word-for-word even centuries later.



** One of Valdemar's mages is known for sharing [[TheInternetIsFOrCats funny images of cats]].
** The mirrors Kordas and Isla use to simultaneously scry each other sound very much like tablets, both in appearance and use. Their mutual scrying sessions also sound like Zoom calls.
** In ''Into The West'', a magical projection device is used to make evening announcements, sounding very much like television. There's the evening news, followed by various entertainments, including a serial puppet show that sounds like a sitcom.
* EvilIsPetty: An observation Kordas frequently makes of the casual cruelties employed by the Emperor and his cronies. The Emperor is shown to enjoy humiliating people, and it's noted that the Vrondi were forced into Doll bodies that could feel pain, allegedly so they wouldn't accidentally harm themselves but really so random courtiers can enjoy abusing them.
* ExactWords: The Vrondi are able to be ''highly'' selective in how they interpret their orders. For example, they can neglect to pass on information gained through their HiveMind by treating it as "hearsay," which therefore they can claim not to know for sure.

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** One of Valdemar's mages is known for sharing [[TheInternetIsFOrCats [[TheInternetIsForCats funny images of cats]].
** The mirrors Kordas and Isla use to simultaneously scry each other sound are very much like tablets, both in appearance and use. Their mutual scrying sessions also sound like Zoom calls.
** In ''Into The the West'', a magical projection device is used to make evening announcements, sounding seeming very much like television. There's the evening news, followed by various entertainments, including a serial puppet show that sounds like a sitcom.
* EvilIsPetty: An observation Kordas frequently makes of the casual cruelties employed by the Emperor and his cronies. The Emperor is shown to enjoy humiliating people, and it's noted that the Vrondi ''vrondi'' were forced into Doll bodies that could feel pain, allegedly so they wouldn't accidentally harm themselves but really so random courtiers can enjoy abusing them.
* ExactWords: The Vrondi ''vrondi'' are able to be ''highly'' selective in how they interpret their orders. For example, they can neglect to pass on information gained through their HiveMind by treating it as "hearsay," which therefore they can claim not to know for sure.



* GoneHorriblyRight: [[spoiler:Merrin does too good a job propping up Kordas' "country bumpkin" act, accidentally getting the Duchy of Valdemar assigned to himself instead and Kordas downgraded to Baron.]]

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* GoneHorriblyRight: [[spoiler:Merrin does too good a job propping up Kordas' "country bumpkin" act, accidentally accidentally]] getting the Duchy of Valdemar assigned to himself instead and Kordas downgraded to Baron.]]



* HiveMind: The Vrondi, once they're imprisoned in Doll bodies, are able to share thoughts so that what one knows, they all know. This makes them incredibly useful in ThePlan, as they essentially provide instantaneous long-range communication without security issues. They also have a wealth of information about the working of TheEmpire and are essentially invisible as they go about their business, allowing them to use authorisation seals to rob the empire wholesale.

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* HiveMind: The Vrondi, ''vrondi'', once they're imprisoned in Doll bodies, are able to share thoughts so that what one knows, they all know. This makes them incredibly useful in ThePlan, as they essentially provide instantaneous long-range communication without security issues. They also have a wealth of information about the working of TheEmpire and are essentially invisible as they go about their business, allowing them to use authorisation seals to rob the empire Empire wholesale.



** In ''Into The West'', she turns out to be adept at repairing Dolls. In addition to being a skilled seamstress, she effectively has an extra hand.
* MutantDraftBoard: Mages are automatically taken to work for the Emperor, except for those secretly being sheltered in Valdemar while they work on a means of exacuation. At least, some of them do that; about two thirds are devoted to shielding the estate so the Empire doesn't realise what's going on.
* NoCelebritiesWereHarmed: With his pettiness, LackOfEmpathy, low intelligence, and obsession with size and luxury, he comes off as an {{Expy}} of Donald Trump, who had recently become the former President at the time of publication. The physical description is similar as well, and on receiving the False Golds he makes a very Trumpesque speech about how big and impressive they are, while proving Kordas right that he hasn't the brains or knowledge to spot the real thing.

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** In ''Into The the West'', she turns out to be adept at repairing Dolls. In addition to being a skilled seamstress, she effectively has an extra hand.
* MutantDraftBoard: Mages are automatically taken to work for the Emperor, except for those secretly being sheltered in Valdemar while they work on a means of exacuation.evacuation. At least, some of them do that; about two thirds are devoted to shielding the estate so the Empire doesn't realise what's going on.
* NoCelebritiesWereHarmed: With his pettiness, LackOfEmpathy, low intelligence, and obsession with size and luxury, he the Emperor comes off as an {{Expy}} of Donald Trump, who had recently become the former President at the time of publication. The physical description is similar as well, and on upon receiving the False Golds he makes a very Trumpesque speech about how big and impressive they are, while proving Kordas right that he hasn't the brains or knowledge to spot the real thing.



* PoweredByAForsakenChild: The Vrondi Dolls show Kordas the source of the Imperial Mages' power: an infant Earth Elemental, trapped and tortured so the mages can harvest the magic it gives off as it heals. It's been trapped for decades, as its family are looking for it. At the end of ''Beyond'', Kordas frees it, almost leveling the city as it escapes. Then its family come back and finish the job.

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* PoweredByAForsakenChild: The Vrondi ''vrondi'' Dolls show Kordas the source of the Imperial Mages' power: an infant Earth Elemental, trapped and tortured so the mages can harvest the magic it gives off as it heals. It's been trapped for decades, as and its family are looking for it. it, causing frequent earthquakes. At the end of ''Beyond'', Kordas [[spoiler:Kordas frees it, almost leveling the city as it escapes. Then its family come back and finish the job.]]



* ProperlyParanoid: Those involved with ThePlan take obsessive care not to let the wrong people find out, storing supplies in secret and planning in coded conversations, because if the Emperor ever finds out what they're doing it's all over. Even once they're successfully evacuated far enough away that the Empire finding them is unlikely, they still plan to move on again from the area of the Gate site, just in case someone figures out a way to follow them. This plan is still in place after the Empire is all but ruined at the end of ''Beyond'', because ''someone'' will inherit whatever's left and it's not worth the risk.

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* ProperlyParanoid: Those involved with ThePlan take obsessive care not to let the wrong people find out, storing supplies in secret and planning in coded conversations, because if the Emperor ever finds out what they're doing it's all over. Even once they're successfully evacuated far enough away that the Empire finding them is unlikely, they still plan to move on again from the area of the Gate site, just in case someone figures out a way to follow them.them (and because the land can't support them there long-term). This plan is still in place after the Empire is all but ruined at the end of ''Beyond'', because ''someone'' will inherit whatever's left and it's not worth the risk.



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** In ''Into The West'', there's a reference to a pastime of [[Series/{{Firefly}} juggling goslings]].
** Late in ''Into The West'', after a major mage battle, a mage who got a bit singed in the fight asks [[Series/MythBusters "Am I missing -- an eyebrow?"]]
* SpoiledBrat: {{Downplayed}}. Delia admits to herself that she's led a very sheltered life; she's missed most of the awful things the Empire does to people by being insignificant and protected by her brother-in-law taking her in after her father died and his Barony given to a favourite of the Emperor. She's unhappy about the constant hard work and unpleasant conditions of settling a new place, although she does her work without complaint. In ''Into The West'', she cries while mending clothes, because it's a chance to do so with no one hearing.

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** In ''Into The the West'', there's a reference to a pastime of [[Series/{{Firefly}} juggling goslings]].
** Late in ''Into The the West'', after a major mage battle, a mage who got a bit singed in the fight asks [[Series/MythBusters "Am I missing -- an eyebrow?"]]
* SpoiledBrat: {{Downplayed}}. Delia admits to herself that she's led a very sheltered life; she's missed most of the awful things the Empire does to people by being insignificant and protected by her brother-in-law taking her in after her father died and his Barony given to a favourite of the Emperor. She's unhappy about the constant hard work and unpleasant conditions of involved in settling a new place, although she does her work without complaint. In ''Into The the West'', she cries while mending clothes, because it's a chance to do so with no one hearing.



* TameHisAnger: Kordas wears a storm shirt (dyed in thundercloud colours) under his clothes to remind himself of his dangerous temper. This gets demonstrated in ''Into The West'' when he delivers a CurbStompBattle to someone who tortured a Doll for fun. The narrative notes how good it feels to bestow his anger on someone who so richly deserves it.

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* TameHisAnger: Kordas wears a storm shirt (dyed in thundercloud colours) under his clothes to remind himself of his dangerous temper. This gets demonstrated in ''Into The the West'' when he delivers a CurbStompBattle to someone who tortured a Doll for fun. The narrative notes how good it feels to bestow his anger on someone who so richly deserves it.it.
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* AnimalMotif: Valdemar is known in the Empire for breeding superior horses. The first chapter of ''Beyond'' shows a difficult foal birth, the Valdemar crest is a white horse, and Kordas is ordered to the capital city to personally deliver the Emperor's tribute of horses.

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* AnimalMotif: Valdemar is known in the Empire for breeding superior horses. The first chapter of ''Beyond'' shows a difficult foal birth, the Valdemar crest is a white horse, and Kordas is ordered to the capital city to personally deliver the Emperor's tribute of horses. Of particular note are the Valdemar Golds, a line of such value they're never sold; even when ordered to give some as tribute to the Emperor, Kordas uses magic to create a couple of fakes instead, and even the fakes are magnificent enough beasts that the stablemaster bemoans their being wasted on the Emperor. Presumably, the prominence of horses will have some bearing on the Companions' choice of form.
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* ProperlyParanoid: Those involved with ThePlan take obsessive care not to let the wrong people find out, storing supplies in secret and planning in coded conversations, because if the Emperor ever finds out what they're doing it's all over. Even once they're successfully evacuated far enough away that the Empire finding them is unlikely, they still plan to move on again from the area of the Gate site, just in case someone figures out a way to follow them. This plan is still in place after the Empire is all but ruined at the end of ''Beyond'', because ''someone'' will inherit whatever's left and it's not worth the risk.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Delia is an aristocratic girl with a sheltered upbringing. Faced with the hardships of frontier life, she does her work without complaint but is clearly struggling to adapt.
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* EvilIsPetty: An observation Kordas frequently makes of the casual cruelties employed by the Emperor and his cronies. The Emperor is shown to enjoy humiliating people, and it's noted that the Vrondi were forced into Doll bodies that could feel pain, allegedly so they wouldn't accidentally harm themselves but really so random courtiers can enjoy abusing them.


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* GoneHorriblyRight: [[spoiler:Merrin does too good a job propping up Kordas' "country bumpkin" act, accidentally getting the Duchy of Valdemar assigned to himself instead and Kordas downgraded to Baron.]]
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* CallBack: Kordas gets a history lesson on the Mage Wars from his circle of secret mages.


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** Her sister Isla gets her to help set up a time to communicate with Kordas by long-range Fetching (effectively teleporting) a scrap of parchment with the time written on it into his assistant's notebook. She apparently does so with such gusto that it gives the man a bruise.
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* GrowingUpSucks: Delia's character arc through ''Beyond''. In the first chapter, she's given the foal she helped birth to raise and train herself, which is noted as the first real responsibility she's ever had; up until then, she seems to have mainly been left to her own devices, and usually spent her time reading. Over the course of the novel, she's brought in on ThePlan and given more responsibilities related to it, anything from delivering messages to people involved to helping set up base camp. She soon realises just how much ''work'' will be involved, and that it'll go on for years at least, and wishes to return to the way things used to be.


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* MagicalSecurityCam: The characters are very much aware that they may be being watched by a scrying mage at any moment, so unless someone who knows what they're talking about tells them it's safe they have to be very careful what they do or say. This becomes easier once Kordas allies with the Dolls, whose HiveMind allows them to know when scrying is taking place, as the scrying mage will be attended by a Doll.


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* OneDialogueTwoConversations: A necessity for those involved in ThePlan, who are very much aware that they could be watched by a scrying mage at any time, and thus disguise discussions as innocuous conversations unless they're sure they're safe. Those who've been involved for a while are adept; Kordas is shown understanding in-depth instructions disguised as a history lesson about the Mage Wars that his companion missed. Delia, being only lately informed of the plan, has more trouble.
* OneSteveLimit: {{Averted}}: The foal given to Delia has the same name as the most prominent Doll attending Kordas, Star, although in the foal's case this is an abbreviation of Daystar.
* ThePlan: The plan to evacuate the entire population of a Duchy from the EvilEmpire and start a new country far away is referred to in this way in-universe by all the characters involved.
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* SpoiledBrat: {{Downplayed}}. Delia admits to herself that she's led a very sheltered life; she's missed most of the awful things the Empire does to people by being insignificant and protected by her brother-in-law taking her in after her father died and his Barony given to a favourite of the Emperor. She's unhappy about the constant hard work and unpleasant conditions of settling a new place, although she does her work without complaint. In ''Into The West'', she cries while mending clothes, because it's a chance to do so with no one hearing.

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* SpoiledBrat: {{Downplayed}}. Delia admits to herself that she's led a very sheltered life; she's missed most of the awful things the Empire does to people by being insignificant and protected by her brother-in-law taking her in after her father died and his Barony given to a favourite of the Emperor. She's unhappy about the constant hard work and unpleasant conditions of settling a new place, although she does her work without complaint. In ''Into The West'', she cries while mending clothes, because it's a chance to do so with no one hearing.hearing.
* TameHisAnger: Kordas wears a storm shirt (dyed in thundercloud colours) under his clothes to remind himself of his dangerous temper. This gets demonstrated in ''Into The West'' when he delivers a CurbStompBattle to someone who tortured a Doll for fun. The narrative notes how good it feels to bestow his anger on someone who so richly deserves it.

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* AnimalMotif: Valdemar is known in the Empire for breeding superior horses. The first chapter of ''Beyond'' shows a difficult foal birth, the Valdemar crest is a white horse, and Kordas is ordered to the capital city to personally deliver the Emperor's tribute of horses.



** The crest of Valdemar is a white horse.



** Part of establishing a stable Gate involves her Fetching a small object through a temporary one. The rock is then used as a link to make a ''less'' temporary Gate.
** When she starts to realise just how much hard work will be involved in settling a new land, someone reassures her that she can use her Fetching gift to do all sorts of useful things.
** In ''Into The West'', she turns out to be adept at repairing Dolls. In addition to being a skilled seamstress, she effectively has an extra hand.



** In ''IntoTheWest'', there's a reference to a pastime of [[Series/{{Firefly}} juggling goslings]].

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* GentlemanAdventurer: Ivar, sixth son of one of Valdemar's Counts and possessor of a restless pair of feet. He's mentioned as having made an expedition to the North, not under orders, but just ''because''. He's the natural choice to be first through the newly-established Gate and do some exploring.



* {{Irony}}: Kordas views the Emperor's spy in Valdemar, Merrin, as a moron he's successfully run rings around for years with his ObfuscatingStupidity. [[spoiler:Which Merrin has been on board with from the start, trying to keep Valdemar BeneathNotice.]]
* MindOverMatter: Delia has the Fetching gift, which comes in useful many times.
** In the first chapter, she successfully aids with a mare's breech birth by maneuvering the foal inside the mare so everything is aligned properly.



* ObfuscatingStupidity:
** Kordas cultivates the image of a country bumpkin who won't shut up about horses to avoid being taken too seriously or looked at too closely. It's a fine line to walk, as appearing ''too'' dim would result in his being declared incapable of running the Duchy and having it taken away.
** [[spoiler:Merrin, the Emperor's spy in Valdemar who Kordas has delighted in running rings around for years. Turns out he's running a similar game to Kordas, propping up his country bumpkin façade and hoping to avoid too much notice.]]



* PrecociousCrush: Delia is head-over-heels in love with her brother-in-law and guardian Kordas, who is very much aware of the situation. It's never discussed, but it's awkward and embarrassing for both parties.



* SpoiledBrat: {{Downplayed}}. Delia admits to herself that she's led a very sheltered life; she's missed most of the awful things the Empire does to people by being insignificant and protected by her brother-in-law taking her in after her father died and his Barony given to a favourite of the Emperor. She's unhappy about the constant hard work and

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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: Magic is often shown to be analogous to modern technology.
** One of Valdemar's mages is known for sharing [[TheInternetIsFOrCats funny images of cats]].
** The mirrors Kordas and Isla use to simultaneously scry each other sound very much like tablets, both in appearance and use.
** In ''Into The West'', a magical projection device is used to make evening announcements, sounding very much like television. There's the evening news, followed by various entertainments, including a serial puppet show that sounds like a sitcom.
* ExactWords: The Vrondi are able to be ''highly'' selective in how they interpret their orders. For example, they can neglect to pass on information gained through their HiveMind by treating it as "hearsay," which therefore they can claim not to know for sure.
* HiveMind: The Vrondi, once they're imprisoned in Doll bodies, are able to share thoughts so that what one knows, they all know. This makes them incredibly useful in ThePlan, as they essentially provide instantaneous long-range communication without security issues. They also have a wealth of information about the working of TheEmpire and are essentially invisible as they go about their business, allowing them to use authorisation seals to rob the empire wholesale.



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A prequel to Creator/MercedesLackey's ''Literature/HeraldsOfValdemar'' novels, recounting the founding of the titular kingdom by a small population fleeing an evil Empire, led by Baron Valdemar.

Within the Eastern Empire, Duke Kordas Valdemar rules a tiny, bucolic Duchy that focuses mostly on horse breeding. Anticipating the day when the Empire’s exploitative and militant leaders would not be content to leave them alone, Korda’s father set out to gather magicians in the hopes of one day finding a way to escape and protect the people of the Duchy from tyranny.

Kordas has lived his life looking over his shoulder. The signs in the Empire are increasingly dire. Under the direction of the Emperor, mages have begun to harness the power of dark magics, including blood magic, the powers of the Abyssal Planes, and the binding and "milking" of Elemental creatures.

But then one of the Duchy’s mages has a breakthrough. There is a way to place a Gate at a distance so far from the Empire that it is unlikely the Emperor can find or follow them as they evacuate everyone that is willing to leave.

But time is running out, and Kordas has been summoned to the Emperor's Court.

Can his reputation as a country bumpkin and his acting skills buy him and his people the time they need to flee? Or will the Emperor lose patience, invade to strip Valdemar of everything of worth, and send its conscripted people into the front lines of the Imperial wars?

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!! This work contains the following tropes:

* ContinuityNod:
** The Vrondi, air elementals who appear frequently in subsequent novels. Here they've been trapped and enslaved by the EvilEmpire, and escape with the Valdemarans while also bolstering the plan immensely. Kordas' narrative also makes it clear that they power the Truth Spells that are used later, which Star notes is pleasurable for them, as the truth is nurturing.
** In ''Into The West'', Kordas makes a speech about tolerance with the words, "There is no one, true way."
* NoCelebritiesWereHarmed: With his pettiness, LackOfEmpathy, low intelligence, and obsession with size and luxury, he comes off as an {{Expy}} of Donald Trump, who had recently become the former President at the time of publication. The physical description is similar as well, and on receiving the False Golds he makes a very Trumpesque speech about how big and impressive they are, while proving Kordas right that he hasn't the brains or knowledge to spot the real thing.
* PoweredByAForsakenChild: The Vrondi Dolls show Kordas the source of the Imperial Mages' power: an infant Earth Elemental, trapped and tortured so the mages can harvest the magic it gives off as it heals. It's been trapped for decades, as its family are looking for it. At the end of ''Beyond'', Kordas frees it, almost leveling the city as it escapes. Then its family come back and finish the job.
* ShoutOut:
** Creator/PhilipKDick is referenced when Kordas mentions to the Vrondi the difficulty of remembering all the many-faceted aspects of the plan.
-->'''Star:''' We can remember it for you...\\
'''Kordas:''' Wholesale?

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