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* [[Nepotism]]: Yuri's father, Rook, encourages him to employ a cousin in his company. Subverted in that she's actually competent and trustworthy as she becomes the company's accountant.
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* [[Nepotism]]: {{Nepotism}}: Yuri's father, Rook, encourages him to employ a cousin in his company. Subverted in that she's actually competent and trustworthy as she becomes the company's accountant.
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* LadyAndKnight: Yuri tries to set up Dolla and Carol as this, but Yuri ends up being the Knight to Carol's Lady. He first makes an indirect DeclarationOfProtection to the Queen, then later to Carol in private.
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* LadyAndKnight: Yuri tries to set up Dolla and Carol as this, but Yuri ends up being the Knight to Carol's Lady. He first makes an indirect implicit DeclarationOfProtection to the Queen, then later to Carol in private.private.
* LikeFatherLikeSon: Yuri and Rook were both skilled, respected knights while at school. They were also both intensely popular with the girls, with both of them featuring heavily in the fiction written by the [[YaoiFangirl Yaoi Fangirls]].
* LikeFatherLikeSon: Yuri and Rook were both skilled, respected knights while at school. They were also both intensely popular with the girls, with both of them featuring heavily in the fiction written by the [[YaoiFangirl Yaoi Fangirls]].
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* Nepotism: Yuri's father, Rook, encourages him to employ a cousin in his company. Subverted in that she's actually competent and trustworthy as she becomes the company's accountant.
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* Nepotism: [[Nepotism]]: Yuri's father, Rook, encourages him to employ a cousin in his company. Subverted in that she's actually competent and trustworthy as she becomes the company's accountant.
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He's then reborn as Yuri Ho, infant child of Rook and Satsuki Ho, a rancher family in another world. There is no system or levels, no magic, but there are still elements of fantasy. As ranchers, they care for and raise Plainsrunners, flightless birds, and Kingeagles, large flying Eagles, that can both be used as mounts. The Ho's are citizens of the Kingdom of Shiyalta, a nation of Shanti. The Shanti are humanoids with well formed features, long ears with tufts of hair growing at the tips, and longer lifespans than the more familiar humans known as the Kulati; in other words, Elves.
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He's then reborn as Yuri Ho, infant child of Rook and Satsuki Ho, a rancher family in another world. There is no system or levels, no magic, but there are still elements of fantasy. As ranchers, they care for and raise Plainsrunners, flightless birds, and Kingeagles, large flying Eagles, that can both be used as mounts. The Ho's Hos are citizens of the Kingdom of Shiyalta, a nation of Shanti. The Shanti are humanoids with well formed features, long ears with tufts of hair growing at the tips, and longer lifespans than the more familiar humans known as the Kulati; in other words, Elves.
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* TheDragonslayer: There's an in story book that talks about flying lizards commonly known as dragons. Professor Ether explains that those who slay a dragon, especially the old fashioned way with sword and spear instead of gun and cannon, are lauded as heroes by the Dragon Empire and Dragon Kingdom.
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* TheDragonslayer: There's an in story in-story book that talks about flying lizards commonly known as dragons. Professor Ether explains that those who slay a dragon, especially the old fashioned way with sword and spear instead of gun and cannon, are lauded as heroes by the Dragon Empire and Dragon Kingdom.
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* LadyAndKnight: Yuri tries to setup Dolla and Carol as this, but Yuri ends up being the Knight to Carol's Lady. He first makes an indirect DeclarationOfProtection to the Queen, then later to Carol in private.
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* LadyAndKnight: Yuri tries to setup set up Dolla and Carol as this, but Yuri ends up being the Knight to Carol's Lady. He first makes an indirect DeclarationOfProtection to the Queen, then later to Carol in private.
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* YouShallNotPass: Everytime a rearguard is required.
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* YouShallNotPass: Everytime Every time a rearguard is required.
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** [[WarriorPrince Warrior Princess]]: This seems to be Carol's goal, but the Queen appoints Yuri as commander instead during the 15th Crusade in Kilhina, so the trope is partially averted. She's still in a leadership position and participates in the war. Played straight with Angela Sacramenta, she's able to arrange things to allow her fight on the front lines.
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** [[WarriorPrince Warrior Princess]]: This seems to be Carol's goal, but the Queen appoints Yuri another as her commander instead during the 15th Crusade in Kilhina, Crusade, so the trope is partially averted. She's still in a leadership position and participates in the war. Played straight with Angela Sacramenta, she's able to arrange things to allow her a leadership position and fight on the front lines.
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* SweetPollyOliver: [[spoiler:Myalo]]. Women are not forbidden from being knights, but she seems to enjoy being treated as one of the boys. It doesn't seem to be plot important to any of the other characters except for Yuri.
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* SweetPollyOliver: [[spoiler:Myalo]]. Women are not forbidden from being knights, but she seems to enjoy being treated as one of the boys.OneOfTheBoys. It doesn't seem to be plot important to any of the other characters except for Yuri.
