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* DontFearTheReaper: From her deathbed, Doña Laura claims to see death, but is not afraid: "Death is a woman, and for that reason she's courageous and just, and never makes distinctions between mortals; she'll crush the ignorant, the arrogant, and the wise alike under her icy foot."
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* BittersweetEnding: Carlotta is expelled from school and traumatized by Mother Artigas's attack and Merceditas sacrifices all the academic honors she worked for. But she has put Mother Artigas in her place and she knows Carlotta will be fine. Despite her expulsion.
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* BittersweetEnding: Carlotta is expelled from school and traumatized by Mother Artigas's attack and Merceditas sacrifices all the academic honors she worked for. But she has put Mother Artigas in her place and she knows Carlotta will be fine. Despite fine despite her expulsion.
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* BothSidesHaveAPoint: Don Augusto tells Adriana that the Spaniards and the wealthy plantation owners were oppressing the people of Puerto Rico, which is why the latter welcomed the U.S. when it landed in the island in 1898. Adriana responds that the United States did ally itself with the big corporations that ended up swallowing up the smaller farm owners.
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* HoneyTrap: Barbara, a salsa music supporter, engages in a romantic affair with Candelario, and ends up leading him to his death.
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* UnreliableNarrator.TheMole: Pedro is Candelario's lieutenant in the Missionaries but he is also supporting the salsa movement.
* UnreliableNarrator: The unseen narrator starts out depicting Candelario as a hero who was tragically killed and then describes in full detail how he ''really'' died.
* UnreliableNarrator: The unseen narrator starts out depicting Candelario as a hero who was tragically killed and then describes in full detail how he ''really'' died.
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* FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling: Nicolás and Arístides. Nicolas attends a university in Europe where he studies art; the more pragmatic Arístides studies agriculture at the University of Puerto Rico to assist the FamilyBusiness.
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* FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling: Nicolás and Arístides. Nicolas attends a university in Europe where he studies art; philosophy; the more pragmatic Arístides studies agriculture at the University of Puerto Rico to assist the FamilyBusiness.
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* BittersweetEnding: Carlotta is expelled from school left and traumatized by Mother Artigas's attack and Merceditas sacrifices all the academic honors she worked for. But she has put Mother Artigas in her place.place and she knows Carlotta will be fine. Despite her expulsion.
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* EvilSmellsBad: Less evil, more "classist, snobby, and racist". After Mercedita's strange punishment for hiding the mango, she starts noticing a strange smell in the halls. Both she and Carlotta, who also notices it, agree that it seems to be stronger whenever they are close to a nun.
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* EvilSmellsBad: Less evil, more "classist, snobby, "classism, snobbery, and racist".racism". After Mercedita's strange punishment for hiding the mango, she starts noticing a strange smell in the halls. Both she and Carlotta, who also notices it, agree that it seems to be stronger whenever they are close to a nun.
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* AlternateHistory: Here, the United States is no longer interested in the territory of Puerto Rico. It ends up becoming an independent republic by the name of San Juan Bautista (the name given to Puerto Rico by Christopher Columbus).
* Foil: Captain Candelario and Pedro are foils to each other. The former comes from a very wealthy family and is highly educated. Pedro comes from a slum.
* Foil: Captain Candelario and Pedro are foils to each other. The former comes from a very wealthy family and is highly educated. Pedro comes from a slum.
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* AlternateHistory: Here, The story takes place in an alternate version of 1998 where the United States is no longer interested in the territory of Puerto Rico. It ends up becoming an independent republic by the name of San Juan Bautista (the name given to Puerto Rico by Christopher Columbus).
*Foil: CareerEndingInjury: Pedro's athletic aspirations end when the Missionaries raid Villa Cañona and beat him so roughly he is left with a limp.
* {{Foil}}: Captain Candelario and Pedro are foils to each other.The former Candelario has fair skin and blond hair, comes from a very wealthy family family, and is highly educated. Pedro is darker in skin and comes from a slum.
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* {{Foil}}: Captain Candelario and Pedro are foils to each other.
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* DomesticAbuse: Don Julio towards his wife, Doña Elvira. After they move out from the city, she asks for things that will make the home nicer, like a bathtub or a flush toilet, and he refuses. When he reaches his RageBreakingPoint, he beats her and tells her to stay away from his business.
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* DomesticAbuse: Don Julio towards his wife, Doña Elvira. After According to [[UnreliableNarrator Don Hermenegildo's]] account, after they move out from the city, she asks for things that will make the home nicer, like a bathtub or a flush toilet, and he refuses. When he reaches his RageBreakingPoint, he beats her and tells her to stay away from his business.
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* LetThePastBurn: Gloria sets the old home on fire, destroying Don Hermenegildo's manuscript (and potentially killing him) and encourages Titina to join and watch.
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* HistoricalHeroUpgrade: In-universe. What Don Hermenegildo is trying to do with Don Ubaldino De la Valle.
* LetThePastBurn: Gloria sets the old home on fire, destroying Don Hermenegildo's manuscript (and potentially killinghim) and him). She encourages Titina to join and watch. watch.
* OpenSecret: That Don Julio Font, the great patriarch of the De la Valle family, was a black man. His race was the reason why Don Ubaldino's and Doña Laura's daughters are snubbed by the other families.
* LetThePastBurn: Gloria sets the old home on fire, destroying Don Hermenegildo's manuscript (and potentially killing
* OpenSecret: That Don Julio Font, the great patriarch of the De la Valle family, was a black man. His race was the reason why Don Ubaldino's and Doña Laura's daughters are snubbed by the other families.
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* {{Bookends}}: The story begins with Carlotta giving Merceditas the mango given to her by the carnival committee. It ends by Merceditas taking the fruit she was forced to keep in her desk and handing it off to Mother Artigas.
* ClothingDamage: After giving Carlotta her TraumaticHaircut Mother Artigas tears up her schooluniform.uniform as she slaps and hits her.
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* Foil: Captain Candelario and Pedro are foils to each other. The former comes from a very wealthy family and is highly educated. Pedro comes from a slum.
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* BittersweetEnding: Carlota Carlotta is expelled from school left traumatized by Mother Artigas's attack and Merceditas sacrifices all the academic honors she worked for. But she has put Mother Artigas in her place.
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* DeathGlare: When Merceditas grabs Mother Artigas's hand to stop her attack of Carlota, the mother steps back and delivers one.
* EvilSmellsBad: Less evil, more "classist, snobby, and racist". After Mercedita's strange punishment for hiding the mango, she starts noticing a strange smell in the halls. Both she and Carlota, who also notices it, agree that it seems to be stronger whenever they are close to a nun.
** Just before Carlota leaves the school, the Mother Artigas attacks her, chopping off her hair and delivering both a beatdown and a TheReasonYouSuck speech complete with a racial slur.
* DeathGlare: When Merceditas grabs Mother Artigas's hand to stop her attack of Carlota, the mother steps back and delivers one.
* EvilSmellsBad: Less evil, more "classist, snobby, and racist". After Mercedita's strange punishment for hiding the mango, she starts noticing a strange smell in the halls. Both she and Carlota, who also notices it, agree that it seems to be stronger whenever they are close to a nun.
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** Merceditas is punished for having accepted a mango as a gift from Carlota Carlotta by having to keep it inside her school desk during the rest of the school ''year'' and watching it ripen and finally rot.
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* DeathGlare: When Merceditas grabs Mother Artigas's hand to stop her attack ofCarlota, Carlotta, the mother steps back and delivers one.
* EvilSmellsBad: Less evil, more "classist, snobby, and racist". After Mercedita's strange punishment for hiding the mango, she starts noticing a strange smell in the halls. Both she andCarlota, Carlotta, who also notices it, agree that it seems to be stronger whenever they are close to a nun.
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* LetThePastBurn: Gloria sets the old home on fire fire, destroying Don Hermenegildo's manuscript (and potentially killing him) and encourages Titina to join and watch.
* RaceLift: In-Universe. Don Hermenegildo's account of Don Julio's courtship and marriage to Doña Elvira describes him as a Spaniard with green eyes and fair skin. He... isn't. To perpetuate this false notion, there are no pictures of him, unlike Doña Elvira.
* TheReveal:[[spoiler:Don Don Julio was not the fair-skinned, green-eyed Spaniard that his daughter-in-law Laura had been led to believe he was, but rather dark-skinned and dark-eyed.]]dark-eyed, indicating that he is at least part Black.
* RaceLift: In-Universe. Don Hermenegildo's account of Don Julio's courtship and marriage to Doña Elvira describes him as a Spaniard with green eyes and fair skin. He... isn't. To perpetuate this false notion, there are no pictures of him, unlike Doña Elvira.
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* EvilSmellsBad: Less evil, more "classist, snobby, and racist". After Mercedita's strange punishment for hiding the mango, starts noticing a strange smell in the halls. Both she and Carlota, who also notices it, agree that it seems to be stronger whenever they are close to a nun.
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* FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling: Nicolás and Arístides. Nicolas attends a university in Europe where he studies art; the more pragmatic Arístides studies agriculture at the University of Puerto Rico to assist the FamilyBusiness.
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* FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling: Nicolás and Arístides. Nicolas attends a university in Europe where he studies art; the more pragmatic Arístides studies agriculture at the University of Puerto Rico to assist the FamilyBusiness.
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''Sweet Diamond Dust'', by Puerto Rican authorCreator/RosarioFerre, [[Creator/RosarioFerre Rosario Ferré]], collects in a single book the novel by the same title and three short stories. It was published in Spanish in 1987as 1987 as ''Maldito amor'' ("Cursed love" or "Damned love") and translated by the author herself.
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