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* TheGreys: Galaxa and the rest of her species, the Grayans, are grey humanoid aliens with large heads.
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* RapidFireNo: Galaxa says "No, no, no, no. No." in response to [[spoiler:Jermaine asking her to erase the last twenty-five years from his mind.]]
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* TheNoseless: Galaxa and other Grayans lack external noses.
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* TheNoseless: Galaxa and other Grayans lack external noses.
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* ExhaustedEyeBags: About halfway through the story, Jermaine gets these [[spoiler:after a night of dealing with negative flashbacks and unwanted memories]].
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: At the end, [[spoiler:Jermaine asks Galaxa to wipe the last twenty-five years from his mind. She refuses on the grounds that she'd be erasing good memories along with the bad ones.]]
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* [[NiceGuy Nice Girl]]: Galaxa gets along well with everybody and enjoys helping those in need.
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* TelepathicSpacemen: Galaxa and other Grayans can read minds.
* {{Telepathy}}: As mentioned directly above, Galaxa and other Grayans can read minds.
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* TelepathicSpacemen: Galaxa and other Grayans can read minds.
* {{Telepathy}}: As mentioned directly above,Galaxa and other Grayans can read minds.minds. [[spoiler:Galaxa does this at the end to see Jermaine's memories.]]
* {{Telepathy}}: As mentioned directly above,
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* Area51: Galaxa and Jermaine visit Area 51 and the nearby Extraterrestrial Highway many months after their spaceship ride.
* BrainCriticalMass: Grayans developed PsychicPowers as a result of their SuperIntelligence.
* CityPlanet: The Grayans' home planet Sinkolor is enveloped in skyscrapers and sprawling cities, with little in the way of plant life.
* BrainCriticalMass: Grayans developed PsychicPowers as a result of their SuperIntelligence.
* CityPlanet: The Grayans' home planet Sinkolor is enveloped in skyscrapers and sprawling cities, with little in the way of plant life.
* FlyingSaucer: Galaxa's spaceship is a silver flying saucer.
* LongLived: Grayans are described as such.
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* PsychicPowers: Grayans developed these as a result of their high intelligence.
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* PsychicPowers: As mentioned above, Grayans developed these as a result of their high intelligence.intelligence.
* ShinyLookingSpaceships: Galaxa's spaceship is bright, pristine, and shiny, evidenced by it glistening in sunlight.
* StargazingScene: After taking a ride in her spaceship, Galaxa and Jermaine sit on top of her spaceship and stargaze later that night.
* SuperIntelligence: Grayans are described as the most intelligent beings in ''five'' galaxies.
* ShinyLookingSpaceships: Galaxa's spaceship is bright, pristine, and shiny, evidenced by it glistening in sunlight.
* StargazingScene: After taking a ride in her spaceship, Galaxa and Jermaine sit on top of her spaceship and stargaze later that night.
* SuperIntelligence: Grayans are described as the most intelligent beings in ''five'' galaxies.
* WeakenedByTheLight: The large black eyes every Grayan has are ''extremely'' sensitive to bright lights.
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* TheXenophile: When Galaxa and Jermaine visit Area 51 and the Extraterrestrial Highway, ''everyone'' is excited to meet an actual alien and see her spaceship.
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The story is about Jermaine hanging out with his space alien friend Galaxa.
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!!Tropes
* DeadpanSnarker: Galaxa is described as having a knack for dishing out biting sarcasm.
* TheEmpath: Grayans can read the emotions of others.
* HigherTechSpecies: Grayans have developed a fair amount of technology far more advanced than what humans have created.
* [[NiceGuy Nice Girl]]: Galaxa gets along well with everybody and enjoys helping those in need.
* TheGreys: Galaxa and the rest of her species, the Grayans, are grey humanoid aliens with large heads.
* TheNoseless: Galaxa and other Grayans lack external noses.
* ThePollyanna: Galaxa always tries to look on the bright side.
* PsychicPowers: Grayans developed these as a result of their high intelligence.
* TelepathicSpacemen: Galaxa and other Grayans can read minds.
* {{Telepathy}}: As mentioned directly above, Galaxa and other Grayans can read minds.
* TomboyishPonytail: Galaxa wears her hair like this, and she's not very feminine.
* WiseBeyondTheirYears: Galaxa is a teenager described as such and doles out good advice to others.
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The story is about Jermaine hanging out with his space alien friend Galaxa.
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!!Tropes
* DeadpanSnarker: Galaxa is described as having a knack for dishing out biting sarcasm.
* TheEmpath: Grayans can read the emotions of others.
* HigherTechSpecies: Grayans have developed a fair amount of technology far more advanced than what humans have created.
* [[NiceGuy Nice Girl]]: Galaxa gets along well with everybody and enjoys helping those in need.
* TheGreys: Galaxa and the rest of her species, the Grayans, are grey humanoid aliens with large heads.
* TheNoseless: Galaxa and other Grayans lack external noses.
* ThePollyanna: Galaxa always tries to look on the bright side.
* PsychicPowers: Grayans developed these as a result of their high intelligence.
* TelepathicSpacemen: Galaxa and other Grayans can read minds.
* {{Telepathy}}: As mentioned directly above, Galaxa and other Grayans can read minds.
* TomboyishPonytail: Galaxa wears her hair like this, and she's not very feminine.
* WiseBeyondTheirYears: Galaxa is a teenager described as such and doles out good advice to others.
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