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Space Glass, by author Kurt A. Russell, is a heart-wrenching adventure story about four mercenaries who pursue a mad man across the galaxy. Thing is, the Blackstar Mercenaries barely function as a team, whereas the Extragalactic Enthusiasts are as close as family.
It was first published to [[https://www.amazon.com/dp/B097589BP4 Amazon]] on June 12, 2021, as both an e-Book and a paperback.
It was first published to [[https://www.amazon.com/dp/B097589BP4 Amazon]] on June 12, 2021, as both an e-Book and a paperback.
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Space Glass, by author Kurt A. Russell, is a heart-wrenching an adventure story about four mercenaries who pursue a mad man across the galaxy. galaxy.
Thing is, the Blackstar Mercenaries barely function as a team, whereas the Extragalactic Enthusiasts are as close as family.
It was first published to[[https://www.amazon.com/dp/B097589BP4 Amazon]] Amazon on June 12, 2021, as both an e-Book and a paperback.paperback.
Thing is, the Blackstar Mercenaries barely function as a team, whereas the Extragalactic Enthusiasts are as close as family.
It was first published to
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* AwesomeMcCoolName: Marvelous Dagon.
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* AcePilot: Nicora Eidenburg and Marvelous Dagon both show their expertise.
* AdultFear: Ratroe states this as the reason he's so determined to take down Marvelous.
* AdultFear: Ratroe states this as the reason he's so determined to take down Marvelous.
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* AdultFear: Ratroe states this as the reason he's so determined to take down Marvelous.
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* BlatantLies: Amy pulls this number twice, first with Ratroe after he pieces together that she has feelings for Bob, and then with Bob who absent mindedly asks if she likes Ratroe.
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* BlatantLies: Amy pulls this number twice, first with Ratroe after he pieces together that she has feelings for Bob, and then with Bob who absent mindedly absentmindedly asks if she likes Ratroe.
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Another of Marvelous Dagon's favorite tecniques.
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Another of Marvelous Dagon's favorite tecniques.techniques.
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* NotSoDifferent: Marvelous and Ratroe are both fighting to [[spoiler:give their families better lives]].
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* WouldHurtAChild: Marvelous.
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* WouldHurtAChild: Marvelous.Marvelous beats up the professor's daughter, just to get him to talk.
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* Revenge: Reeva and the Marauder's primary desires after the Blackstar Mercenaries [[spoiler:kill Bagok]]. Also, Ratroe's seething with it after [[spoiler:Amy's death]].
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* ParentalAbandonment: Ratroe's father left him, and Bob's parents [[spoiler:killed each other]], and Bagok's parents were eaten.
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* ParentalAbandonment: Ratroe's father left him, and Bob's parents [[spoiler:killed each other]], and Bagok's parents were eaten.
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Several.
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Several.Another of Marvelous Dagon's favorite tecniques.
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* NighInvulnerability: The World Eater.
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* NighInvulnerability: Several examples.
** After their full onslaught of weaponry, Bagok Grinch was only damaged by Ratroe's sniper rounds.
** The Marauder can regenerate and is resistant to most attacks, only getting stumbled most of the time.
** The only way to [[spoiler:defeat the WorldEater.Eater was to get it to eat itself]], being completely resistant to all other attacks.
** After their full onslaught of weaponry, Bagok Grinch was only damaged by Ratroe's sniper rounds.
** The Marauder can regenerate and is resistant to most attacks, only getting stumbled most of the time.
** The only way to [[spoiler:defeat the World
