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''Rainbow'' is an ongoing YoungAdult ScienceFantasy debut (original) novel by Akira Hayashi. Presented as the [[FirstPersonSmartass autobiography]] of the story's protagonist, [[AwesomeMcCoolName Aaron Maitreya Axe]], ''Rainbow'' opens in the distant [[TheFuture future]] with Aaron meeting and falling in LoveAtFirstSight with [[ManicPixieDreamGirl Cinderella Peterson]], who is the first real friend [[LonersAreFreaks Aaron]] has ever had.
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''Rainbow'' is an ongoing YoungAdult ScienceFantasy debut (original) novel by Akira Hayashi. Presented as the [[FirstPersonSmartass autobiography]] of the story's protagonist, [[AwesomeMcCoolName Aaron Maitreya Axe]], Axe, ''Rainbow'' opens in the distant [[TheFuture future]] with Aaron meeting and falling in LoveAtFirstSight with [[ManicPixieDreamGirl Cinderella Peterson]], who is the first real friend [[LonersAreFreaks Aaron]] has ever had.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Both of the leads had ''[[UpToEleven very]]'' tragic and traumatic childhoods.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Both of the leads had ''[[UpToEleven very]]'' ''very'' tragic and traumatic childhoods.
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However, it ''also'' becomes more and more clear that Cinderella- as well as the dictators they fight against- are not what they seem, and that there might even be divine forces vying for control through them. Worse yet, it's possible that if Aaron and Cinderella do not succeed in their revolution, not only might the ''world'' be lost to evil- but that ''everything'' will be lost to the darkness, forever.
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However, it ''also'' becomes more and more clear that Cinderella- Cinderella -- as well as the dictators they fight against- against -- are not what they seem, and that there might even be divine forces vying for control through them. Worse yet, it's possible that if Aaron and Cinderella do not succeed in their revolution, not only might the ''world'' be lost to evil- evil -- but that ''everything'' will be lost to the darkness, forever.
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''Rainbow'' is the ongoing YoungAdult ScienceFantasy debut (original) novel. Presented as the [[FirstPersonSmartass autobiography]] of the story's protagonist, [[AwesomeMcCoolName Aaron Maitreya Axe]], ''Rainbow'' opens in the distant [[TheFuture future]] with Aaron meeting and falling in LoveAtFirstSight with [[ManicPixieDreamGirl Cinderella Peterson]], who is the first real friend [[LonersAreFreaks Aaron]] has ever had.
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''Rainbow'' is the an ongoing YoungAdult ScienceFantasy debut (original) novel.novel by Akira Hayashi. Presented as the [[FirstPersonSmartass autobiography]] of the story's protagonist, [[AwesomeMcCoolName Aaron Maitreya Axe]], ''Rainbow'' opens in the distant [[TheFuture future]] with Aaron meeting and falling in LoveAtFirstSight with [[ManicPixieDreamGirl Cinderella Peterson]], who is the first real friend [[LonersAreFreaks Aaron]] has ever had.
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''Rainbow'' is the ongoing YoungAdult ScienceFantasy debut (original) novel by Morgan Ray Hess. Presented as the [[FirstPersonSmartass autobiography]] of the story's protagonist, [[AwesomeMcCoolName Aaron Maitreya Axe]], ''Rainbow'' opens in the distant [[TheFuture future]] with Aaron meeting and falling in LoveAtFirstSight with [[ManicPixieDreamGirl Cinderella Peterson]], who is the first real friend [[LonersAreFreaks Aaron]] has ever had.
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''Rainbow'' is the ongoing YoungAdult ScienceFantasy debut (original) novel by Morgan Ray Hess.novel. Presented as the [[FirstPersonSmartass autobiography]] of the story's protagonist, [[AwesomeMcCoolName Aaron Maitreya Axe]], ''Rainbow'' opens in the distant [[TheFuture future]] with Aaron meeting and falling in LoveAtFirstSight with [[ManicPixieDreamGirl Cinderella Peterson]], who is the first real friend [[LonersAreFreaks Aaron]] has ever had.
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* {{Gayngst}}: Aaron endures bullying after he comes out as [[BiTheWay bisexual]]. His biggest bully turned out to be an ArmoredClosetGay.
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* {{Gayngst}}: Aaron endures bullying after he comes out as [[BiTheWay bisexual]].bisexual. His biggest bully turned out to be an ArmoredClosetGay.
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''Rainbow'' is the ongoing YoungAdult ScienceFantasy debut ([[FanFiction original]]) novel by Morgan Ray Hess. Presented as the [[FirstPersonSmartass autobiography]] of the story's {{Protagonist}}, [[AwesomeMcCoolName Aaron Maitreya Axe]], ''Rainbow'' opens in the distant [[TheFuture future]] with Aaron meeting and falling in LoveAtFirstSight with [[ManicPixieDreamGirl Cinderella Peterson]], who is the first real friend [[LonersAreFreaks Aaron]] has ever had.
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''Rainbow'' is the ongoing YoungAdult ScienceFantasy debut ([[FanFiction original]]) (original) novel by Morgan Ray Hess. Presented as the [[FirstPersonSmartass autobiography]] of the story's {{Protagonist}}, protagonist, [[AwesomeMcCoolName Aaron Maitreya Axe]], ''Rainbow'' opens in the distant [[TheFuture future]] with Aaron meeting and falling in LoveAtFirstSight with [[ManicPixieDreamGirl Cinderella Peterson]], who is the first real friend [[LonersAreFreaks Aaron]] has ever had.
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The story can be read for free on the author's website: morganrayhess.com[[http://morganrayhess.com/projects/rainbow/]].
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The story can be read for free on the author's website: [[http://morganrayhess.com/projects/rainbow/ morganrayhess.com[[http://morganrayhess.com/projects/rainbow/]].
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* CurbStompBattle: Aaron compares the ease of the Atheist State's victory in the International Revolution against ''[[HolyShitQuotient all of human civilization]]'' to the act of "destroying a beehive with a blowtorch."
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* CurbStompBattle: Aaron compares the ease of the Atheist State's victory in the International Revolution against ''[[HolyShitQuotient all ''all of human civilization]]'' civilization'' to the act of "destroying a beehive with a blowtorch."
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* LightFeminineAndDarkFeminine: Aaron and Cinderella share this dynamic; Cinderella is a cheerful, [[LightIsGood light-themed]] EnglishRose and GenkiGirl who dresses in bright colors, while [[{{Bishonen}} Aaron]] is an [[ShrinkingViolet introverted]] and [[KnightInSourArmour rather cynical]] PerkyGoth [[InTouchWithHisFeminineSide tomgirl]] with a dreary, monochromatic wardrobe, and is essentially a living male incarnation of the Japanese YamatoNadeshiko archetype.
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* CurbStompBattle: Aaron compares the ease of the Atheist State's victory in the International Revolution to the act of "destroying a beehive with a blowtorch."
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* CurbStompBattle: Aaron compares the ease of the Atheist State's victory in the International Revolution against ''[[HolyShitQuotient all of human civilization]]'' to the act of "destroying a beehive with a blowtorch."
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* CurbStompBattle: Aaron compares the ease of the Atheist State's victory in the International Revolution to the act of "destroying a beehive with a blowtorch."
* GreatOffscreenWar: The International Revolution, which was when the [[TheIlluminati Atheistic State]] revealed themselves and conquered all of civilization. See also the entries for WorldWarIII and CurbStompBattle.
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* StrawAtheist: the World Hegemony enforces state atheism, as religion is deemed to be "suicidal madness."
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* StrawAtheist: the World Hegemony enforces state atheism, as religion is deemed to be "suicidal madness.""
* WorldWarIII: The International Revolution, the worldwide conflict that occurred over one thousand years before the events of the novel. It was initiated by a coalition called the "[[TheIlluminati Atheistic State]]," who were reportedly [[WellIntentionedExtremist Well-Intentioned Extremists]] who believed that they [[StrawAtheist must impose enforced atheism]] on all civilization before [[OutgrownSuchSillySuperstitions religion]] could [[EndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt cause humanity to destroy itself]]. The Atheistic State [[CurbStompBattle easily]] won, established the [[TheEmpire World Hegemony]], and has since maintained an uncontested rule over the entire Earth since then until the events of the novel.
* WorldWarIII: The International Revolution, the worldwide conflict that occurred over one thousand years before the events of the novel. It was initiated by a coalition called the "[[TheIlluminati Atheistic State]]," who were reportedly [[WellIntentionedExtremist Well-Intentioned Extremists]] who believed that they [[StrawAtheist must impose enforced atheism]] on all civilization before [[OutgrownSuchSillySuperstitions religion]] could [[EndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt cause humanity to destroy itself]]. The Atheistic State [[CurbStompBattle easily]] won, established the [[TheEmpire World Hegemony]], and has since maintained an uncontested rule over the entire Earth since then until the events of the novel.
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The problem with this is that the world has fallen under the control of a NewWorldOrder who have labeled romantic love as "madness," along with democracy and religion. Aaron soon realizes that Cinderella has come to recruit him into a [[LaResistance revolution]] against the [[TheEmpire world government]]'s tyranny.
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The problem with this is that the world has fallen under the control of a NewWorldOrder OneWorldOrder who have labeled romantic love as "madness," along with democracy and religion. Aaron soon realizes that Cinderella has come to recruit him into a [[LaResistance revolution]] against the [[TheEmpire world government]]'s tyranny.
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* {{Dystopia}}: The [[NewWorldOrder World Hegemony]] is described by Aaron as a cruel dictatorship.
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* {{Dystopia}}: The [[NewWorldOrder [[OneWorldOrder World Hegemony]] is described by Aaron as a cruel dictatorship.
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* LightFeminineAndDarkFeminine: Aaron and Cinderella share this dynamic; Cinderella is a cheerful, [[LightIsGood light-themed]] EnglishRose and GenkiGirl who dresses in bright colors while [[{{Bishonen}} Aaron]] is an [[ShrinkingViolet introverted]] and [[KnightInSourArmour rather cynical]] PerkyGoth [[InTouchWithHisFeminineSide tomgirl]] with a dreary, monochromatic wardrobe, and is essentially a living male incarnation of the Japanese YamatoNadeshiko archetype.
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* LightFeminineAndDarkFeminine: Aaron and Cinderella share this dynamic; Cinderella is a cheerful, [[LightIsGood light-themed]] EnglishRose and GenkiGirl who dresses in bright colors colors, while [[{{Bishonen}} Aaron]] is an [[ShrinkingViolet introverted]] and [[KnightInSourArmour rather cynical]] PerkyGoth [[InTouchWithHisFeminineSide tomgirl]] with a dreary, monochromatic wardrobe, and is essentially a living male incarnation of the Japanese YamatoNadeshiko archetype.
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* LightFeminineAndDarkFeminine: Aaron and Cinderella share this dynamic; Cinderella is a cheerful, [[LightIsGood light-themed]] EnglishRose and GenkiGirl who dresses in bright colors while [[{{Bishonen}} Aaron]] is an [[ShrinkingViolet introverted]] and [[KnightInSourArmour rather cynical]] PerkyGoth [[InTouchWithHisFeminineSide tomgirl]] who with a dreary, monochromatic wardrobe, and is essentially a living male incarnation of the Japanese YamatoNadeshiko archetype.
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* TheEmpire: The World Hegemony, which is implied to have begun as a militaristic MegaCorp as a backlash to [[TheFundamentalist religious fanaticism]].
* TheIlluminati: the World Hegemony began as one of these in the form of the "Atheistic State," which [[CurbstompBattle easily defeated]] the rest of the world's military forces when they [[WorldWarIII declared war against everyone else]]. However, unlike most examples of this trope, the Atheistic State [[RefugeInAudacity made no effort to hide themselves]] when they were founded, and they were created partially ''[[ThenLetMeBeEvil because]]'' atheists had been demonized by doomsday prophets and painted as secretly conspiring to destroy religion, making the World Hegemony a SelfFulfillingProphecy.
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* StrawAtheist: the World Hegemony enforces state atheism, as religion is deemed to be "suicidal madness."
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-->''[[TagLine All stories are true.]]''
''Rainbow'' is the ongoing YoungAdult ScienceFantasy debut ([[FanFiction original]]) novel by Morgan Ray Hess. Presented as the [[FirstPersonSmartass autobiography]] of the story's {{Protagonist}}, [[AwesomeMcCoolName Aaron Maitreya Axe]], ''Rainbow'' opens in the distant [[TheFuture future]] with Aaron meeting and falling in LoveAtFirstSight with [[ManicPixieDreamGirl Cinderella Peterson]], who is the first real friend [[LonersAreFreaks Aaron]] has ever had.
The problem with this is that the world has fallen under the control of a NewWorldOrder who have labeled romantic love as "madness," along with democracy and religion. Aaron soon realizes that Cinderella has come to recruit him into a [[LaResistance revolution]] against the [[TheEmpire world government]]'s tyranny.
However, it ''also'' becomes more and more clear that Cinderella- as well as the dictators they fight against- are not what they seem, and that there might even be divine forces vying for control through them. Worse yet, it's possible that if Aaron and Cinderella do not succeed in their revolution, not only might the ''world'' be lost to evil- but that ''everything'' will be lost to the darkness, forever.
The story can be read for free on the author's website: morganrayhess.com[[http://morganrayhess.com/projects/rainbow/]].
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!!This work contains examples of the following tropes:
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Both of the leads had ''[[UpToEleven very]]'' tragic and traumatic childhoods.
* {{Dystopia}}: The [[NewWorldOrder World Hegemony]] is described by Aaron as a cruel dictatorship.
* EeriePaleSkinnedBrunette: Aaron, his brother Avion, [[spoiler:and their mother]] are all described as having pitch-black hair and being as pale as corpses.
* {{Gayngst}}: Aaron endures bullying after he comes out as [[BiTheWay bisexual]]. His biggest bully turned out to be an ArmoredClosetGay.
* LeParkour: Cinderella teaches Aaron how to freerun and climb buildings.
* PopCulturedBadass / CulturedBadass: Aaron and Cinderella share a love for the pop culture of the late Twentieth and early Twenty-First Centuries. They are also deeply knowledgeable about more "serious" literary figures such as Victor Hugo, Shakespeare, and Confucius.
* ScienceFantasy: In equal parts.
-->''[[TagLine All stories are true.]]''
''Rainbow'' is the ongoing YoungAdult ScienceFantasy debut ([[FanFiction original]]) novel by Morgan Ray Hess. Presented as the [[FirstPersonSmartass autobiography]] of the story's {{Protagonist}}, [[AwesomeMcCoolName Aaron Maitreya Axe]], ''Rainbow'' opens in the distant [[TheFuture future]] with Aaron meeting and falling in LoveAtFirstSight with [[ManicPixieDreamGirl Cinderella Peterson]], who is the first real friend [[LonersAreFreaks Aaron]] has ever had.
The problem with this is that the world has fallen under the control of a NewWorldOrder who have labeled romantic love as "madness," along with democracy and religion. Aaron soon realizes that Cinderella has come to recruit him into a [[LaResistance revolution]] against the [[TheEmpire world government]]'s tyranny.
However, it ''also'' becomes more and more clear that Cinderella- as well as the dictators they fight against- are not what they seem, and that there might even be divine forces vying for control through them. Worse yet, it's possible that if Aaron and Cinderella do not succeed in their revolution, not only might the ''world'' be lost to evil- but that ''everything'' will be lost to the darkness, forever.
The story can be read for free on the author's website: morganrayhess.com[[http://morganrayhess.com/projects/rainbow/]].
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!!This work contains examples of the following tropes:
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Both of the leads had ''[[UpToEleven very]]'' tragic and traumatic childhoods.
* {{Dystopia}}: The [[NewWorldOrder World Hegemony]] is described by Aaron as a cruel dictatorship.
* EeriePaleSkinnedBrunette: Aaron, his brother Avion, [[spoiler:and their mother]] are all described as having pitch-black hair and being as pale as corpses.
* {{Gayngst}}: Aaron endures bullying after he comes out as [[BiTheWay bisexual]]. His biggest bully turned out to be an ArmoredClosetGay.
* LeParkour: Cinderella teaches Aaron how to freerun and climb buildings.
* PopCulturedBadass / CulturedBadass: Aaron and Cinderella share a love for the pop culture of the late Twentieth and early Twenty-First Centuries. They are also deeply knowledgeable about more "serious" literary figures such as Victor Hugo, Shakespeare, and Confucius.
* ScienceFantasy: In equal parts.
