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* AdvanceNoticeCrime: Entropy tells Mirabelle in advance that he's going to use his mirror magic to steal two shards of the [[ArtifactOfDoom Heart of Vermiel]] from his [[DatingCatwoman on-and-off girlfriend]] Little Witch. Since Mirabelle is his sister and a non-combatant in the heroes vs villains thing, he doesn't consider it a big secret to keep from her. As Mirabelle has another of the shards and the shards can locate each other, she promptly piggybacks off his mirror magic teleportation with her own to steal one of the shards out from under Entropy's nose.
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* CurseCutShort: Entropy starts complaining about a new superheroine, Pretty Bubbles, who defeated him. His mother, Starshine, cuts off his complaints just before Mirabelle figured he was going to start swearing.
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* CurseCutShort: "Another Character Interrupts" version. Entropy starts complaining about a new superheroine, Pretty Bubbles, who defeated him. His mother, Starshine, cuts off his complaints just before Mirabelle figured he was going to start swearing.
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* DatingCatwoman: Entropy is dating Pretty Bubbles
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* CurseCutShort: Entropy starts complaining about a new superheroine, Pretty Bubbles, who defeated him. His mother, Starshine, cuts off his complaints just before Mirabelle figured he was going to start swearing.
* DatingCatwoman: Entropy (Supervillain) is dating Little Witch (Superhero) and is getting obsessed with PrettyBubblesBubbles (also a hero)
* DatingCatwoman: Entropy (Supervillain) is dating Little Witch (Superhero) and is getting obsessed with Pretty
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* ProfanityPolice: Entropy starts complaining about a new superheroine, Pretty Bubbles, who defeated him. His mother, Starshine, cuts off his complaints [[DownplayedTrope ''just before'']] Mirabelle figured he was going to start swearing.
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* ProfanityPolice: Entropy starts complaining about a new superheroine, Pretty Bubbles, who defeated him. His mother, Starshine, cuts off his complaints ''just before'' Mirabelle figured he was going to start swearing.
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* ProfanityPolice: Entropy starts complaining about a new superheroine, Pretty Bubbles, who defeated him. His mother, Starshine, cuts off his complaints [[DownplayedTrope ''just before'' before'']] Mirabelle figured he was going to start swearing.
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* ProfanityPolice: Entropy starts complaining about a new superheroine, Pretty Bubbles, who defeated him. His mother, Starshine, cuts off his complaints ''just before'' Mirabelle figured he was going to start swearing.
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* ShipTease: Marcie and Claire have some of this with both of them awkwardly flirting over battles.
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* ShipTease: Marcie and Claire have some of this with both of them awkwardly flirting over battles.
* SuperCostumeClothier: {{Downplayed|Trope}} example - Gravitimmy is a MadScientist who creates forcefield devices. While he doesn't make outfits directly, his inventions make impractical superhero/supervillain outfits wearable. Some supers buy his products as shields and armor, but his real fortune comes in from selling tiny forcefield inserts to make outfits not chafe.
* SuperCostumeClothier: {{Downplayed|Trope}} example - Gravitimmy is a MadScientist who creates forcefield devices. While he doesn't make outfits directly, his inventions make impractical superhero/supervillain outfits wearable. Some supers buy his products as shields and armor, but his real fortune comes in from selling tiny forcefield inserts to make outfits not chafe.
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Jed and the Heart merge together to form one being but it means that neither of them is entirely the same person anymore.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Jed Jeb and the Heart merge together to form one being but it means that neither of them is entirely the same person anymore.]]
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* DatingCatwoman: Entropy is dating Pretty Bubbles
* DemotedToExtra: Penny, Claire, Magenta, and Avery all show up in supporting roles to Mirabelle.
* DemotedToExtra: Penny, Claire, Magenta, and Avery all show up in supporting roles to Mirabelle.
* FriendlyEnemy: Supervillain Entropy is in an ill-defined [[DatingCatwoman on-and-off relationship]] with heroes Little Witch and Pretty Bubbles.
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* DatingCatwoman: Entropy is dating Pretty Bubbles
* DemotedToExtra: Penny, Claire, Magenta, and Avery all show up in supporting roles to Mirabelle.
* DemotedToExtra: Penny, Claire, Magenta, and Avery all show up in supporting roles to Mirabelle.
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* ClingyMacGuffin: The Heart of Vermiel is a group of four pieces of a crystal heart. All four pieces are destiny-bonded not just to the person who most recently held that piece, but to each other, meaning each piece is clingy to four entities - a person, and the other three pieces of the Heart. Without powerful binding magics, chance and fate will bend to guarantee they keep returning to their destiny-bound person and causing their destiny-bound holders to keep finding each other.
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* MacGuffin: Namechecked by Marcia in reference to the Heart of Vermiel, though the Heart is an active entity.
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* BewareTheSillyOnes: Mirabelle points out this trope for Pretty Bubbles, who can control suds, but is able to use it to readily defeat Entropy.
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* BewareTheSillyOnes: Mirabelle points and her mother point out this trope for Pretty Bubbles, who can control suds, but is able to use it to readily defeat Entropy.Entropy.
--> '''Starshine''': I've warned the boy it's heroes with silly weak powers you have to watch out for. They have to be smart or they're nothing at all.
--> '''Starshine''': I've warned the boy it's heroes with silly weak powers you have to watch out for. They have to be smart or they're nothing at all.
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* IncompatibleOrientation: After much dancing around it, WordOfGod finally confirms that Penny Akk is heterosexual and Claire is a lesbian.
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* IncompatibleOrientation: After much dancing around it, WordOfGod finally confirms that Cassie has a crush on Penny Akk Akk, but Marcia says Penny is heterosexual and Claire is a lesbian.that Cassie will thus never get close to what she wants.
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* AncestralWeapon: Jebediah uses a rifle that once belonged to his grandfather.
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* LoopholeAbuse: Marcia can't accompany Mirabelle on a supervillain mission due to her pact with Mourning Dove (who is keeping Marcia's powers from killing her). However, once a rival would-be thief attacks Mirabelle, Marcia is able to join in the fray since she is technically intervening to stop a robber, even if she's letting the other intruder escape.
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* CargoShip: Mirabelle and the Heart of Vermiel, which also qualifies as a ToyShip as they're both adolescents (Vermiel's fragment being mentally the same age as her).
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* CargoShip: In-universe. Mirabelle and the Heart of Vermiel, which also qualifies as a ToyShip as they're both adolescents (Vermiel's fragment being mentally the same age as her).
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Mirabelle has many friends with amazing superpowers that let them go on adventures. Her superpower includes being made of glass, and having her body break from such mundane actions as running too much. A chance (or is it?) encounter in school acquaints her with a crystal artifact, part of the heart of a dragon, that offers her power and protection if she allows it to use her. Of course, she rejects the obvious trap, right? Well, sort of... I mean a little power won't corrupt her all that much, will it?
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Mirabelle has many friends with amazing superpowers that let them go on adventures. Her superpower includes being made of glass, and having her body break from such mundane actions as running too much. A chance (or is it?) encounter in school acquaints her with a crystal artifact, part of the heart of a dragon, that offers her power and protection if she allows it to use her.
Of course, she rejects the obvious trap, right? Well, sort of... I mean a little power won't corrupt her all that much, will it?
Of course, she rejects the obvious trap, right? Well, sort of... I mean a little power won't corrupt her all that much, will it?
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Jed and the Heart merge together to form one being but it means that neither of them is entirely the same person anymore.]]
* CargoShip: Mirabelle and the Heart of Vermiel, which also qualifies as a ToyShip as they're both adolescents (Vermiel's fragment being mentally the same age as her).
* CargoShip: Mirabelle and the Heart of Vermiel, which also qualifies as a ToyShip as they're both adolescents (Vermiel's fragment being mentally the same age as her).
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* ShipTease: Marcie and Claire have some of this with both of them awkwardly flirting over battles.
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* FantasticRacism: Jeb was raised by his grandfather, a MadScientist, to hate everyone with superpowers.
* FusionDance: [[spoiler: Jeb and the Heart merge so that they become one person.]]
* FusionDance: [[spoiler: Jeb and the Heart merge so that they become one person.]]
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* NinjaPirateRobotZombie: Mirabelle is a CatGirl made out of glass who can later become a giant monster.
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* NinjaPirateRobotZombie: NinjaPirateRobotZombie:
** Mirabelle is a CatGirl made out of glass who can later become a giantmonster.monster.
** Jeb becomes a giant cyborg dragon teenage boy.
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* SeriousBusiness: Mirabelle drops her normal NiceGirl attitude to warn Jeb he can't use SecretIdentity names casually.
-->“Listen. Listen! The heroes and villains have rules. You don’t need to like the rules or agree with them. The rules seem like a friendly joke but they’re merciless. Do not ever say that name again. Not when you’re talking about her powers. It doesn’t matter if it’s right or wrong. If anybody even thinks you’ve given away a hero or villain’s identity, you’ll be killed. You can hate heroes and villains more for that if you want but it’s true and they don’t forgive or give second chances and I may not be happy with you but I don’t want you to."
* ThisIsUnforgivable: Jeb's awkward attempts at flirting with Mirabelle fail due to the fact he tried to shoot her brother.
-->“Listen. Listen! The heroes and villains have rules. You don’t need to like the rules or agree with them. The rules seem like a friendly joke but they’re merciless. Do not ever say that name again. Not when you’re talking about her powers. It doesn’t matter if it’s right or wrong. If anybody even thinks you’ve given away a hero or villain’s identity, you’ll be killed. You can hate heroes and villains more for that if you want but it’s true and they don’t forgive or give second chances and I may not be happy with you but I don’t want you to."
* ThisIsUnforgivable: Jeb's awkward attempts at flirting with Mirabelle fail due to the fact he tried to shoot her brother.
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* IncompatibleOrientation: After much dancing around it, WordOfGod finally confirms that Penny Akk is heterosexual and Claire is a lesbian.
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* ArtifactOfDoom: The Heart of Vermiel is an object that is believed to be able to resurrect an ancient and hostile dragon.
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* PowerCrystal: The Heart of Vermiel is a pink crystal, broken into four pieces, which is believed to be [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin the heart of the dragon, Vermiel]]. Each piece offers more power to the bearer, but also influences them to act on their more bestial impulses and further transforms them into Vermiel himself. [[spoiler:When the four pieces are finally united in one person, it's indicated that the bearer's personality remains present in the body, melded with Vermiel]].
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* NinjaPirateRobotZombie: Mirabelle is a CatGirl made out of glass who can later become a giant monster.
* PowerCrystal: The Heart of Vermiel is a pink crystal, broken into four pieces, which is believed to be [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin the heart of the dragon, Vermiel]]. Each piece offers more power to the bearer, but also influences them to act on their more bestial impulses and further transforms them into Vermiel himself. [[spoiler:When the four pieces are finally united in one person, it's indicated that the bearer's personality remains present in the body, melded with Vermiel]].
* PowerCrystal: The Heart of Vermiel is a pink crystal, broken into four pieces, which is believed to be [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin the heart of the dragon, Vermiel]]. Each piece offers more power to the bearer, but also influences them to act on their more bestial impulses and further transforms them into Vermiel himself. [[spoiler:When the four pieces are finally united in one person, it's indicated that the bearer's personality remains present in the body, melded with Vermiel]].
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Another follow-up to ''Literature/PleaseDontTellMyParentsImASupervillain'' by Creator/RichardRoberts, following Mirabelle, sister to Entropy, and featuring cameos of characters from all of the previous books.
Mirabelle has many friends with amazing superpowers that let them go on adventures. Her superpower includes being made of glass, and having her body break from such mundane actions as running too much. A chance (or is it?) encounter in school acquaints her with a crystal artifact, part of the heart of a dragon, that offers her power and protection if she allows it to use her. Of course, she rejects the obvious trap, right? Well, sort of... I mean a little power won't corrupt her all that much, will it?
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!!This book provides examples of the following tropes:
* ArtifactDomination: The Heart of Vermiel causes the bearer of the shards to be more destructive, and yearn to seek out the other pieces. It's indicated that possessing all four shards will replace the bearer's mind with that of Vermiel.
* BewareTheSillyOnes: Mirabelle points out this trope for Pretty Bubbles, who can control suds, but is able to use it to readily defeat Entropy.
* CensorSuds: This is Pretty Bubbles's in-universe costume.
* DatingCatwoman: Entropy is dating Pretty Bubbles
* DemotedToExtra: Penny, Claire, Magenta, and Avery all show up in supporting roles to Mirabelle.
* PowerCrystal: The Heart of Vermiel is a pink crystal, broken into four pieces, which is believed to be [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin the heart of the dragon, Vermiel]]. Each piece offers more power to the bearer, but also influences them to act on their more bestial impulses and further transforms them into Vermiel himself. [[spoiler:When the four pieces are finally united in one person, it's indicated that the bearer's personality remains present in the body, melded with Vermiel]].
* {{Kaiju}}: When fully empowered by the heart, Mirabelle is the size of a building, correspondingly strong and tough, and breathes pink flame.
* SealedEvilInASixPack: The Heart of Vermiel has been split into four pieces. The bearers will be influenced to find and unite the other pieces.
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Another follow-up to ''Literature/PleaseDontTellMyParentsImASupervillain'' by Creator/RichardRoberts, following Mirabelle, sister to Entropy, and featuring cameos of characters from all of the previous books.
Mirabelle has many friends with amazing superpowers that let them go on adventures. Her superpower includes being made of glass, and having her body break from such mundane actions as running too much. A chance (or is it?) encounter in school acquaints her with a crystal artifact, part of the heart of a dragon, that offers her power and protection if she allows it to use her. Of course, she rejects the obvious trap, right? Well, sort of... I mean a little power won't corrupt her all that much, will it?
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!!This book provides examples of the following tropes:
* ArtifactDomination: The Heart of Vermiel causes the bearer of the shards to be more destructive, and yearn to seek out the other pieces. It's indicated that possessing all four shards will replace the bearer's mind with that of Vermiel.
* BewareTheSillyOnes: Mirabelle points out this trope for Pretty Bubbles, who can control suds, but is able to use it to readily defeat Entropy.
* CensorSuds: This is Pretty Bubbles's in-universe costume.
* DatingCatwoman: Entropy is dating Pretty Bubbles
* DemotedToExtra: Penny, Claire, Magenta, and Avery all show up in supporting roles to Mirabelle.
* PowerCrystal: The Heart of Vermiel is a pink crystal, broken into four pieces, which is believed to be [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin the heart of the dragon, Vermiel]]. Each piece offers more power to the bearer, but also influences them to act on their more bestial impulses and further transforms them into Vermiel himself. [[spoiler:When the four pieces are finally united in one person, it's indicated that the bearer's personality remains present in the body, melded with Vermiel]].
* {{Kaiju}}: When fully empowered by the heart, Mirabelle is the size of a building, correspondingly strong and tough, and breathes pink flame.
* SealedEvilInASixPack: The Heart of Vermiel has been split into four pieces. The bearers will be influenced to find and unite the other pieces.
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