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* {{Cult}}: The Alucinari often describe themselves as a sect, but of what major religion is left ambiguous. They are devoted to one God in particular - The Dreamer - but do not begrudge the existence of others. The Nocturnes can be described as the esoteric wing of the Alucinari chapter, with secret rites and forbidden knowledge giving them a cult-like status.
* DaylightHorror: The Gol are only active at night, except when they're not. The Dream Eater Gol is seen to be active during the daytime as it gnaws its way through the outer wall.
* DaylightHorror: The Gol are only active at night, except when they're not. The Dream Eater Gol is seen to be active during the daytime as it gnaws its way through the outer wall.
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* {{Cult}}: The Alucinari often describe themselves as a sect, but of what major religion is left ambiguous. They are devoted to one God in particular - The -- the Dreamer - -- but do not begrudge the existence of others. The Nocturnes can be described as the esoteric wing of the Alucinari chapter, with secret rites and forbidden knowledge giving them a cult-like status.
* DaylightHorror: The Gol are only active at night, except when they're not. The Dream Eater Gol is seen to be active during the daytime as it gnaws its way through the outer wall.status.
* DaylightHorror: The Gol are only active at night, except when they're not. The Dream Eater Gol is seen to be active during the daytime as it gnaws its way through the outer wall.
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* DeathOfAChild: Lydia's brother and Wille's younger sibling.
* EatenAlive: [[spoiler:Lydia]], though she wasn't alive for very long.
* EatenAlive: [[spoiler:Lydia]], though she wasn't alive for very long.
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* BittersweetEnding: By the final chapter, [[spoiler: [[KillEmAll almost everyone is dead]], while Isidore remains as the SoleSurvivor to watch over the ruins of Palus Somni and keep the Gol in check. Wille and Claudia may no longer be human, but their Gol forms are spotted in the ruins displaying behaviour which indicates that they are just as much in love and enjoying their undeath together.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: By the final chapter, [[spoiler: [[KillEmAll almost [[spoiler:almost everyone is dead]], dead, while Isidore remains as the SoleSurvivor to watch over the ruins of Palus Somni and keep the Gol in check. Wille and Claudia may no longer be human, but their Gol forms are spotted in the ruins displaying behaviour which indicates that they are just as much in love and enjoying their undeath together.]]
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* BoobyTrap: The main enterprise of the Mallory family was cryptography. No, not [[RealLife that cryptography]]. This cryptography was the study and creaton of booby trapping tombs, making it a StealthPun.
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* BoobyTrap: The main enterprise of the Mallory family was cryptography. No, not [[RealLife that cryptography]]. This cryptography was the study and creaton creation of booby trapping tombs, making it a StealthPun.
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* DaylightHorror: The Gol are only active at night, expect when they're not. The Dream Eater Gol is seen to be active during the daytime as it gnaws its way through the outer wall.
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* DaylightHorror: The Gol are only active at night, expect except when they're not. The Dream Eater Gol is seen to be active during the daytime as it gnaws its way through the outer wall.
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* CannibalLarder: [[Spoiler:Sister Sophie]] has been feeding the corpse of [[spoiler:Sister Harriet]] to the convent throughout the story. She cuts and prepares the meat in the main kitchen, salting and storing it in barrels. The discovery of which lead Lydia (who was already ProperlyParanoid) to FreakOut.
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* CannibalLarder: [[Spoiler:Sister [[spoiler:Sister Sophie]] has been feeding the corpse of [[spoiler:Sister Harriet]] to the convent throughout the story. She cuts and prepares the meat in the main kitchen, salting and storing it in barrels. The discovery of which lead Lydia (who was already ProperlyParanoid) to FreakOut.
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* Cult: The Alucinari often describe themselves as a sect, but of what major religion is left ambiguous. They are devoted to one God in particular - The Dreamer - but do not begrudge the existence of others. The Nocturnes can be described as the esoteric wing of the Alucinari chapter, with secret rites and forbidden knowledge giving them a cult-like status.
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* Cult: {{Cult}}: The Alucinari often describe themselves as a sect, but of what major religion is left ambiguous. They are devoted to one God in particular - The Dreamer - but do not begrudge the existence of others. The Nocturnes can be described as the esoteric wing of the Alucinari chapter, with secret rites and forbidden knowledge giving them a cult-like status.
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* BoobyTrap: The main enterprise of the Mallory family was cryptography. No, not [[RealLife that cryptography]]. [[Fictionary This cryptography]] was the study and creaton of booby trapping tombs, making it a StealthPun.
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* BoobyTrap: The main enterprise of the Mallory family was cryptography. No, not [[RealLife that cryptography]]. [[Fictionary This cryptography]] cryptography was the study and creaton of booby trapping tombs, making it a StealthPun.
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* BoobyTrap: The main enterprise of the Mallory family was cryptography. No, not [[RealLife that cryptography]]. [[Fictionary This cryptography]] was the study and creaton of booby trapping tombs, making it a StealthPun.
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* TempleOfDoom: Palus Somni was built on the remains of an old temple. And that temple was also built on an old temple. And another after that, and another. The ruins go deep.
* TheWormThatWalks: [[spoiler:Claudia]] at the end of her transformation.
* WasOnceAMan: It is hinted very strongly that the Dream Eater Gol is the same worker who was caught eating Pearl Iron by William Montagu and Maid Mina.
* WeakenedByTheLight: The Gol stick to the nighttime hours, though the fact that they have also been sighted abroad in high fog means that it may be the light is their main problem. Sunlight also burns the Dream Eater.
* TheWormThatWalks: [[spoiler:Claudia]] at the end of her transformation.
* WasOnceAMan: It is hinted very strongly that the Dream Eater Gol is the same worker who was caught eating Pearl Iron by William Montagu and Maid Mina.
* WeakenedByTheLight: The Gol stick to the nighttime hours, though the fact that they have also been sighted abroad in high fog means that it may be the light is their main problem. Sunlight also burns the Dream Eater.
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* BittersweetEnding: By the final chapter, [[spoiler: [[KillEmAll almost everyone is dead]], while Isidore remains as the SoleSurvivor to watch over the ruins of Palus Somni and keep the Gol in check. Wille and Claudia may no longer be human, but their Gol forms are spotted in the ruins displaying behaviour which indicates that they are just as much in love and enjoying their undeath together.]]
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* CannibalLarder: [[Spoiler:Sister Sophie]] has been feeding the corpse of [[spoiler:Sister Harriet]] to the convent throughout the story. She cuts and prepares the meat in the main kitchen, salting and storing it in barrels. The discovery of which lead Lydia (who was already ProperlyParanoid) to FreakOut.
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* Cult: The Alucinari often describe themselves as a sect, but of what major religion is left ambiguous. They are devoted to one God in particular - The Dreamer - but do not begrudge the existence of others. The Nocturnes can be described as the esoteric wing of the Alucinari chapter, with secret rites and forbidden knowledge giving them a cult-like status.
* DaylightHorror: The Gol are only active at night, expect when they're not. The Dream Eater Gol is seen to be active during the daytime as it gnaws its way through the outer wall.
* DeathOfAChild: Lydia's brother and Wille's younger sibling.
* DaylightHorror: The Gol are only active at night, expect when they're not. The Dream Eater Gol is seen to be active during the daytime as it gnaws its way through the outer wall.
* DeathOfAChild: Lydia's brother and Wille's younger sibling.
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* NiceDayDeadlyNight: The Gol are only active at nighttime, making daytime activities outside relatively safe.
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* ShoutOut: Lydia oh Lydia, say have you met Lydia? [[MarxBrothers Lydia the tattooed lady]].
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* ShoutOut: Lydia oh Lydia, say have you met Lydia? [[MarxBrothers [[Creator/MarxBrothers Lydia the tattooed lady]].
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* ShoutOut: Lydia oh Lydia, say have you met Lydia? [[MarxBrothers Lydia the tattooed lady]].
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* BodyHorror: Where to begin! The Gol are a strange mess of animal, vegetable and mineral. Often with too many teeth and not enough humanity. [[spoiler:Claudia]]'s transformation into a mess of neurons and teats is particularly gruesome. Sister Mischa has turned almost completely Gol beneath her veil. Not to mention the slug-like remains of [[spoiler:Aloysius Mallory]].
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* FaceFullOfAlienWingWong: [[spoiler:Claudia]]'s initial chapter 1 encounter with the gol-touched bugs ends with a graphic OrificeInvasion.
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* ParasiticHorror: The most obvious choice for this trope is [[spoiler:Claudia]] and her parasite babies, though the Dream Eater Gol could also qualify.
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* NunTooHoly: Sister Magda with her smoking habit and penchant for fortune-telling. Sister Dosifea isn't looking too good either what with all the lies, kidnapping and identity theft.
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* BreakTheCutie: Claudia is in for one hell of a ride after she is [[spoiler:impregnated by the gol-bugs]].
* ChurchMilitant: The Inquisition. Neither Cesca nor Judith are shy when dealing out righteousness in the form of ColdBloodedTorture.
* EyesDoNotBelongThere: Several of the Gol end up having eyes in teeth, eyes on limbs, and even eyes on eyes.
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* BurnTheWitch: Cesca wants to burn Wille alive for her various 'tresspasses', [[spoiler:and she succeeds, though maybe not with the intended consequences]].
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* GettingEatenIsHarmless: In the first chapter, Lydia has a [[OrWasItADream dream]] where the Gol are powerless against her. She crushes their teeth like putty.
* GreaterScopeVillain: Cesca. Lydia thought she could call in the inquisition under her command, but had no idea that unleashing Cesca upon the monastery would lead to her own VillainDecay.
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* SternNun: Lydia, and then Cesca, both lay down the law in what they think is the strictest possible way.
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The story takes place in the convent of [[ThePlace Palus Somni]], an isolated nunnery whose denizens are terrorized by warped, inhuman monsters that stalk the night. Little by little the convent falls into ruin and chaos, as the last remaining nuns struggle to uncover the secrets behind the violent world they find themselves in. The narrative utilises letters, diary entries and notes as well as traditional storytelling techniques. Though there are one or two characters who get protagonist treatment, the story uses multiple viewpoint characters making them one BigScrewedUpFamily.
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The story takes place in the convent of [[ThePlace Palus Somni]], an isolated nunnery whose denizens are terrorized by warped, inhuman monsters that stalk the night. Little by little the convent falls into ruin and chaos, as the last remaining nuns struggle to uncover the secrets behind the violent world they find themselves in. The narrative utilises letters, diary entries and notes as well as traditional storytelling techniques. Though there are one or two characters who get protagonist treatment, the story uses multiple viewpoint characters making them one BigScrewedUpFamily.BigScrewedUpFamily.
Palus Somni launched on June 17th 2019 and is regularly updated, with the story expected to wrap up near the end of 2021. Each chapter also features artwork and a selected atmospheric music track.
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* ADeathInTheLimelight: Abigail was first and last seen in the chapter that led to her imprisonment and presumable death. [[spoiler:Lydia]] also had a more sympathetic chapter from her perspective before she got EatenAlive.
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Palus Somni launched on June 17th 2019 and is regularly updated, with the story expected to wrap up near the end of 2021. Each chapter also features artwork and a selected atmospheric music track.
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* ADeathInTheLimelight: Abigail was first and last seen in the chapter that led to her imprisonment and presumable death. [[spoiler:Lydia]] also had a more sympathetic chapter from her perspective before she got EatenAlive.
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The story takes place in the convent of [[ThePlace Palus Somni]], an isolated nunnery whose denizens are terrorized by warped, inhuman monsters that stalk the night. Little by little the convent falls into ruin and chaos, as the last remaining nuns struggle to uncover the secrets behind the violent world they find themselves in. The narrative utilises letters, diary entries and notes as well as traditional storytelling techniques. Though there are a handful of one or two characters who get protagonist treatment, the story uses multiple viewpoint characters making them one BigScrewedUpFamily.
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''[[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/25475/palus-somni Palus Somni]]'' by Creator/{{Laurie Raye}} is a horror WebSerialNovel that updates every full moon.
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''[[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/25475/palus-somni Palus Somni]]'' by Creator/{{Laurie Raye}} is a horror WebSerialNovel that updates every full moon.moon.
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The story takes place in the convent of [[ThePlace Palus Somni]], an isolated nunnery whose denizens are terrorized by warped, inhuman monsters that stalk the night. Little by little the convent falls into ruin and chaos, as the last remaining nuns struggle to uncover the secrets behind the violent world they find themselves in. The narrative utilises letters, diary entries and notes as well as traditional storytelling techniques. Though there are a handful of characters who get protagonist treatment, the story uses multiple viewpoint characters making them one BigScrewedUpFamily.
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''[[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/25475/palus-somni Palus Somni]]'' by Creator/{{Laurie Raye}} is a horror WebSerialNovel that updates every full moon.”
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''[[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/25475/palus-somni Palus Somni]]'' by Creator/{{Laurie Raye}} is a horror WebSerialNovel that updates every full moon.”
[[caption-width-right:350:The current [[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/25475/palus-somni Royal Road]] cover.]]
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->''The end is already here, you just don't know it yet.''
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''[[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/25475/palus-somni Palus Somni]]'' by Creator/{{Laurie Raye}} is a horror WebSerialNovel that updates every full moon.”