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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Santa gives one to [[spoiler:Jermaine]] after the child asks Santa about [[spoiler:being given a lump of coal.]]
-->'''Santa''': [[spoiler:Jermaine Deon Carter]], you have left me ''no'' other choice. You are ''so'' rotten, ''so'' despicable, and ''so'' naughty, I placed you on the ''Permanent''. ''Naughty''. ''List''.
-->'''Santa''': [[spoiler:Jermaine Deon Carter]], you have left me ''no'' other choice. You are ''so'' rotten, ''so'' despicable, and ''so'' naughty, I placed you on the ''Permanent''. ''Naughty''. ''List''.
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* ShoutOut: Santa's dialogue when he [[spoiler:tells Jermaine he's putting him on the Permanent Naughty List]] is word-for-word the same as Santa saying the same thing to Princess Morbucks during [[Recap/ThePowerpuffGirlsTwasTheFightBeforeChristmas Twas the Fight Before Christmas]].
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* ShoutOut: Santa's above-mentioned dialogue when he [[spoiler:tells Jermaine he's putting him on the Permanent Naughty List]] is word-for-word the same as Santa saying the same thing to Princess Morbucks during [[Recap/ThePowerpuffGirlsTwasTheFightBeforeChristmas Twas the Fight Before Christmas]].
* VeryLooselyBasedOnATrueStory: All of Jermaine's questionable actions in the story actually happened in RealLife. Him receiving fewer Christmas gifts each year and meeting Santa are fabrications.
* VeryLooselyBasedOnATrueStory: All of Jermaine's questionable actions in the story actually happened in RealLife. Him receiving fewer Christmas gifts each year and meeting Santa are fabrications.
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* {{Jerkass}}: Santa views [[spoiler:Jermaine]] as such because of some of his past actions, which is why he [[spoiler:places him on the ''Permanent'' Naughty List.]]
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* {{Jerkass}}: Santa views [[spoiler:Jermaine]] as such because of some of his past actions, which is why he the jolly old elf [[spoiler:places him Jermaine on the ''Permanent'' Naughty List.]]
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* {{Jerkass}}: Santa views [[spoiler:Jermaine]] as such because of some of his past actions, which is why he places him on the ''Permanent'' Naughty List.
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* {{Jerkass}}: Santa views [[spoiler:Jermaine]] as such because of some of his past actions, which is why he places [[spoiler:places him on the ''Permanent'' Naughty List.]]
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Artwork for the story can be found [[https://www.deviantart.com/gelefant/art/Nuthin-But-Coal-822636403 here]].
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* {{Jerkass}}: Santa views [[spoiler:Jermaine]] as such because of some of his past actions, which is why he places him on the ''Permanent'' Naughty List.
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* ShoutOut: Santa's dialogue when he [[spoiler:tells Jermaine he's placing him on the Permanent Naughty List]] is word-for-word the same as Santa saying the same thing to Princess Morbucks during [[Recap/ThePowerpuffGirlsTwasTheFightBeforeChristmas Twas the Fight Before Christmas]].
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* ShoutOut: Santa's dialogue when he [[spoiler:tells Jermaine he's placing putting him on the Permanent Naughty List]] is word-for-word the same as Santa saying the same thing to Princess Morbucks during [[Recap/ThePowerpuffGirlsTwasTheFightBeforeChristmas Twas the Fight Before Christmas]].
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[[https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3362619/1/Naughty-Boy Naughty Boy]] is an original fictional story written by Creator/{{Gelefant}}.
It deals with Jermaine getting fewer and fewer Christmas gifts each year, with him not knowing why.
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!!Tropes:
* ChristmasSpecial: Most of the story takes place on or around certain Christmases.
* SantaClaus: He drops by Jermaine's house to [[spoiler:personally deliver a lump of coal to him]].
* ShoutOut: Santa's dialogue when he [[spoiler:tells Jermaine he's placing him on the Permanent Naughty List]] is word-for-word the same as Santa saying the same thing to Princess Morbucks during [[Recap/ThePowerpuffGirlsTwasTheFightBeforeChristmas Twas the Fight Before Christmas]].
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It deals with Jermaine getting fewer and fewer Christmas gifts each year, with him not knowing why.
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!!Tropes:
* ChristmasSpecial: Most of the story takes place on or around certain Christmases.
* SantaClaus: He drops by Jermaine's house to [[spoiler:personally deliver a lump of coal to him]].
* ShoutOut: Santa's dialogue when he [[spoiler:tells Jermaine he's placing him on the Permanent Naughty List]] is word-for-word the same as Santa saying the same thing to Princess Morbucks during [[Recap/ThePowerpuffGirlsTwasTheFightBeforeChristmas Twas the Fight Before Christmas]].
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