History Literature / MidnightSun

8th Dec '15 9:53:28 AM Tylda
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* StalkingIsLove: Slightly deconstructed in that Edward berates himself for his stalker behavior. Slightly because he still does it anyways.

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* StalkingIsLove: Slightly deconstructed in that Edward berates himself for his stalker behavior. Slightly because he still does it anyways.anyways, and despite acknowledging in words that it is creepy does not seem to have corresponding feelings about it
8th Dec '15 8:10:10 AM Llygodenfawr
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* ConvenientlyCoherentThoughts: Everyone seems to think in (usually) complete, plot-relevant sentences. This seems to be actually treated as how things work rather than a TranslationConvention, as the narration contains statements such as "His thoughts were no longer coherent."

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* ConvenientlyCoherentThoughts: Everyone seems to think in (usually) complete, plot-relevant sentences. This seems to be actually treated as how things work rather than a TranslationConvention, as the narration contains statements such as "His thoughts were no longer coherent."" (as if coherence were the default state.)
8th Dec '15 8:09:21 AM Llygodenfawr
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* ConvenientlyCoherentThoughts: Everyone seems to think in (usually) complete, plot-relevant sentences.

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* ConvenientlyCoherentThoughts: Everyone seems to think in (usually) complete, plot-relevant sentences. This seems to be actually treated as how things work rather than a TranslationConvention, as the narration contains statements such as "His thoughts were no longer coherent."
7th Dec '15 10:03:18 PM Llygodenfawr
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* IWouldSayIfICouldSay: Edward does this in the narration a few times, e.g. "if I'd had the ability to produce tears, they would have filled my eyes now".
7th Dec '15 10:02:44 PM Llygodenfawr
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Edward constantly complains about how shallow teenagers and humans in general are, constantly looking down at them and calling them silly, and yet he's just as shallow when it comes to his thoughts about Bella. Really he's probably more immature than most of the teens in Forks.

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* {{Hypocrite}}: Edward constantly complains about how shallow teenagers and humans in general are, constantly looking down at on them and calling them silly, and yet he's just as shallow when it comes to his thoughts about Bella. Really he's probably more immature than most of the teens in Forks.


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*IWouldSayIfICouldSay: Edward does this in the narration a few times, e.g. "if I'd had the ability to produce tears, they would have filled my eyes now".
28th Nov '15 8:17:55 AM Kytseo
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* StalkingIsLove: Slightly deconstructed in that Edward berates himself for his stalker behavior. Slightly because he still does it anyways.
21st Jul '15 9:58:52 PM Llygodenfawr
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: Intentionally or not, Edward's inner monologue frequently invokes school shooters. Some have compared it to a stalker/pedophile/rapist/serial killer's how-to guide. His inner monologue on going after Bella when she's at home and her father's away comes off as if he's planning to rape her.

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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: Intentionally or not, Edward's inner monologue frequently invokes evokes school shooters. Some have compared it to a stalker/pedophile/rapist/serial killer's how-to guide. His inner monologue on going after Bella when she's at home and her father's away comes off as if he's planning to rape her.
20th Jul '15 6:35:23 AM Llygodenfawr
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->''If I tried to write Midnight Sun now, in my current frame of mind, James would probably win and all the Cullens would die."''

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->''If ->''"If I tried to write Midnight Sun now, in my current frame of mind, James would probably win and all the Cullens would die."''


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*ConvenientlyCoherentThoughts: Everyone seems to think in (usually) complete, plot-relevant sentences.
24th Apr '15 10:06:27 PM Lythande
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* Hypocrite: Edward constantly complains about how shallow teenagers and humans in general are, constantly looking down at them and calling them silly, and yet he's just as shallow when it comes to his thoughts about Bella. Really he's probably more immature than most of the teens in Forks.

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* Hypocrite: {{Hypocrite}}: Edward constantly complains about how shallow teenagers and humans in general are, constantly looking down at them and calling them silly, and yet he's just as shallow when it comes to his thoughts about Bella. Really he's probably more immature than most of the teens in Forks.
27th Dec '14 2:38:39 PM DN26
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* YoureCuteWhenYoureAngry: Edward Cullen is all about this, repeatedly calling Bella a "furious kitten that thinks it's a tiger" and variants. It's rather disrespectful, really.

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* YoureCuteWhenYoureAngry: Edward Cullen is all about this, repeatedly calling Bella a "furious kitten that thinks it's a tiger" and variants. It's rather disrespectful, really.
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