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* WatchOutForThatTree: Subverted with Alkaline. She gets around by skating on the trails and patches of sand littered around the trees, but whenever she gets close to a tree, she grabs hold of its trunk and swings around it, then lets go of it to gain even ''more'' speed on the sand.
* WeirdSun: The Sun that hangs over Quark Island is a giant light bulb. It gets dim to signify noon, flickers to signify evening, and turns off to signify night.
* WeirdSun: The Sun that hangs over Quark Island is a giant light bulb. It gets dim to signify noon, flickers to signify evening, and turns off to signify night.
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* WatchOutForThatTree: Subverted with Alkaline. She gets around by skating on the trails and patches of sand littered around the trees, but whenever she gets close to a tree, she grabs hold of its trunk and swings around it, then lets it go of it to gain even ''more'' speed on the sand.
* WeirdSun: The Sun that hangs over Quark Island is a giant light bulb. It gets dim to signify noon, flickers to signify evening, and turns off to signify night. That, and it's apparently ''within'' the planet's atmosphere instead of being in space, lightyears away from it.
* WeirdSun: The Sun that hangs over Quark Island is a giant light bulb. It gets dim to signify noon, flickers to signify evening, and turns off to signify night. That, and it's apparently ''within'' the planet's atmosphere instead of being in space, lightyears away from it.
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''[[https://www.wattpad.com/story/301602529-memories-of-alkaline Memories of Alkaline]]'' is a [[{{Surrealism}} Surreal ]] {{Fantasy}} WebSerialNovel written by Otneimica. Currently a work in progress, it's hosted on both Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn and Website/{{Wattpad}}, where Otneimica regularly edits and updates it.
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''[[https://www.wattpad.com/story/301602529-memories-of-alkaline Memories of Alkaline]]'' is a [[{{Surrealism}} Surreal ]] {{Fantasy}} WebSerialNovel written by Otneimica. Currently a work in progress, it's hosted on both Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn and Website/{{Wattpad}}, Platform/{{Wattpad}}, where Otneimica regularly edits and updates it.
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* DarkIsEvil: The fittingly-named ''Black'' Sugar Spire, which has the honor of being the only thing on Quark Island that's black, and is seen by the island's inhabitants as something better off avoided.
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* CrapsaccharineWorld: Alkaline and her friends may call it home, but Quark Island is clearly a very dangerous place.
* DarkIsEvil: Thefittingly-named fittingly named ''Black'' Sugar Spire, which has the honor of being the only thing on Quark Island that's black, black and is seen by the island's inhabitants as something better off avoided.
* DarkIsEvil: The
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* GagBoobs: Calcia's got a ''very'' big chest. Nobody seems to care, though.
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* WatchOutForThatTree: Subverted with Alkaline. She gets around by skating on the trails and patches of sand littered around the trees, but when she's about to hit a tree, she grabs hold of its trunks and swings around it, then lets go of it to gain even ''more'' speed on the sand.
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* WatchOutForThatTree: Subverted with Alkaline. She gets around by skating on the trails and patches of sand littered around the trees, but when she's about whenever she gets close to hit a tree, she grabs hold of its trunks trunk and swings around it, then lets go of it to gain even ''more'' speed on the sand.
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* ColorMotif: The story regularly calls attention to colors, as most of the characters are associated with one: Alkaline sports chalk white skin; Lanthan's made of red rock, while Calcia wears a red bodysuit; Noble Oble's made of purple gases; Iron Meister's a yellow furball; Aluminok's a blue-scaled anaconda; the rabbits of Lop Glade are all magenta; and the Black Sugar Spire is, well, black (and the only thing on the entire island that's black).
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However, according to WordOfGod, it is now on indefinite hiatus.
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* {{Bizarrchitecture}}: Alkaline's house is a pyramid built on top of the canopy of a tree that's "not too short, but not too tall". It's also made of "tungwood", a pink, sticky material with the consistency of gum.
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* {{Bizarrchitecture}}: Alkaline's house is house. It's a pyramid made of "tungwood"--a pink, sticky material with the consistency of gum--and built on the top of the canopy of a tree that's "not too short, but not too tall". It's also made of "tungwood", a pink, sticky material with the consistency of gum.tall".
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* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: Each chapter is titled "Memories of [Character, Location, or Landmark]", referencing how the story is [[FramingDevice someone recounting their memories of the island and the people and things they encountered on it]].
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[[caption-width-right:''Have a nice day, Alkaline...'']]
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[[caption-width-right:300:''Have a nice day, Alkaline...'']]
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Alkaline's life on this strange island is as carefree as you can imagine: she spends her days exploring everything the place has on offer, competing with her friends in "sand-skating" races, using her [[OnlyThePureOfHeart unique purification powers]] to heal those who're injured or troubled, and getting into battles with the resident WickedWitch Calcia. But while the island's an overall peaceful little place in the corner of the world... that doesn't mean it isn't without its dangers.
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Alkaline's life on this strange island is as carefree as you can imagine: she spends her days exploring everything the place has on offer, competing with her friends in "sand-skating" races, using her [[OnlyThePureOfHeart unique purification powers]] to heal those who're injured or troubled, and getting into battles with the resident WickedWitch Calcia. But while the island's an overall peaceful little place in the corner of the world...place... that doesn't mean it isn't without its dangers.
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Both the ocean that surrounds it and the sky that hangs over it are magenta; the sand is as cool and as smooth as butter; the trunks of the trees twist and turn every which way; the mountains are piles of spices; and the Sun that shines down on all of this is a giant light bulb.
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Both the ocean that surrounds it and the sky that hangs over it are magenta; the sand is as cool and as smooth as butter; the trees have rainbow-colored canopies and trunks of the trees that twist and turn every which way; the mountains are huge piles of spices; and the Sun that shines down on it all of this is a giant light bulb.
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''[[https://www.wattpad.com/story/301602529-memories-of-alkaline Memories of Alkaline]]'' is a [[{{Surrealism}} Surreal ]] {{Fantasy}} WebSerialNovel written by Otneimica. Currently a work in progress, it's hosted on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn, and Website/{{Wattpad}}, where Otneimica regularly edits and updates it.
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''[[https://www.wattpad.com/story/301602529-memories-of-alkaline Memories of Alkaline]]'' is a [[{{Surrealism}} Surreal ]] {{Fantasy}} WebSerialNovel written by Otneimica. Currently a work in progress, it's hosted on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn, both Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn and Website/{{Wattpad}}, where Otneimica regularly edits and updates it.
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''Memories of Alkaline'' can be read both [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/37110823/chapters/92594686 here on Archive of Our Own]] and [[https://www.wattpad.com/story/301602529-memories-of-alkaline here on Wattpad]].
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As stated above, ''Memories of Alkaline'' can be read both [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/37110823/chapters/92594686 here on Archive of Our Own]] and [[https://www.wattpad.com/story/301602529-memories-of-alkaline here on Wattpad]].
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Alkaline's life on this strange island is as carefree as you can imagine: she spends her days exploding the place, competing with her friends in "sand-skating" races, using her [[OnlyThePureOfHeart unique purification powers]] to heal those who're injured or troubled, and getting into battles with the resident WickedWitch Calcia. But while the island's an overall peaceful little place in the corner of the world... that doesn't mean it isn't without its dangers.
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Alkaline's life on this strange island is as carefree as you can imagine: she spends her days exploding exploring everything the place, place has on offer, competing with her friends in "sand-skating" races, using her [[OnlyThePureOfHeart unique purification powers]] to heal those who're injured or troubled, and getting into battles with the resident WickedWitch Calcia. But while the island's an overall peaceful little place in the corner of the world... that doesn't mean it isn't without its dangers.
