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* FloatingContinent: The capital city, where the [[TheMagocracy Wizard Council]] rules from, is this.
* FunctionalMagic: All living creatures is born with some form of an inherent magical ability. Some may even cultivate it and make it grow.
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* MagicEater: Gnomes in the setting are this. They are not all that intelligent, roam in packs and cause trouble for the townsfolk and other unsuspecting individuals foolish enough to underestimate them.
* TheMagocracy: Society in Mage Life appears to be ruled by one of these, living in a distant ominous floating city high above the ocean.
* PromotionToParent: Sophia was just Tristan's apprentice at first. Not any more.
* TheMagocracy: Society in Mage Life appears to be ruled by one of these, living in a distant ominous floating city high above the ocean.
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* SupernaturalSensitivity: The main character makes use of additional senses attributed to his capabilities with magic.
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* CreatingLife: It is possible for someone of sufficient knowledge to create feeling, thinking life.
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* GlowingEyes: Every magical being of enough power or skill eventually gain a pair of these.
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* MagicEater: Gnomes in the setting are this. Not all that intelligent, they roam in packs and cause trouble for the townsfolk and other unsuspecting individuals foolish enough to underestimate them.
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* MagicEater: Gnomes in the setting are this. Not They are not all that intelligent, they roam in packs and cause trouble for the townsfolk and other unsuspecting individuals foolish enough to underestimate them.
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* FieryRedhead: Tristan's first sighting of Lyphia literally reduces him to tongue-tied buffoon, barely talking straight. She later shows her temper when she loudly and heatedly explains that she didn't come to her position in the [[WeirdTradeUnion Stone Guild]] by being the daughter of the Guild Master alone.
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* FieryRedhead: Tristan's first sighting of Lyphia literally reduces him to tongue-tied buffoon, barely talking straight. She later shows her temper when she loudly and heatedly explains that she didn't come to her position in the [[WeirdTradeUnion Stone Guild]] by being the daughter of the Guild Master alone.alone.
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* FieryRedhead: Tristan's first sighting of Lyphia literally reduces him to tongue-tied buffoon, barely talking straight. She later shows her temper when she loudly and heatedly explains that she didn't come to her position in the [[WeirdTradeUnion Stone Guild Guild]] by being the daughter of the Guild Master alone.
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* FieryRedhead: Tristan's first sighting of Lyphia literally reduces him to tongue-tied buffoon, barely talking straight. She later shows her temper when she loudly and heatedly explains that she didn't come to her position in the [[TheGuildOfSpecialists Stone Guild]] by being the daughter of the Guild Master alone.
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* FieryRedhead: Tristan's first sighting of Lyphia literally reduces him to tongue-tied buffoon, barely talking straight. She later shows her temper when she loudly and heatedly explains that she didn't come to her position in the [[TheGuildOfSpecialists Stone Guild]] Guild by being the daughter of the Guild Master alone.
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* FieryRedhead: Tristan's first sighting of Lyphia literally reduces him to tongue-tied buffoon, barely talking straight. She later shows her temper when she loudly and heatedly explains that she didn't come to her position in the [[TheGuildOfSpecialists Stone Guild Guild]] by being the daughter of the Guild Master alone.
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[[http://magelifeblog.wordpress.com/ Mage Life]]The Tale of a Punch-Clock Mage
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[[http://magelifeblog.wordpress.com/start/ com/ Mage Life]]The Tale of a Punch-Clock Mage
A story aboutTristan, Tristan Sodden, a newly minted mage. TristanIt follows him starting on his new job as a Junior Mage and dealing with various ordinary problems such a red-faced bosses, irrigation and what to have for dinner.
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