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''Ketrin'' is an ongoing erotic WebSerialNovel by Leem, alias Troper Lee M, which he has been writing sporadically since 1999. As of October 2012 the story comprises twelve novella-length instalments, with a thirteenth pending. The story combines his interest in Creator/RudyardKipling's original ''[[Literature/TheJungleBook Jungle Books]]'' with his fetish for petrification and immobility.
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''Ketrin'' is an ongoing erotic WebSerialNovel by Leem, alias Troper Lee M, which he has been writing sporadically since 1999. As of October 2012 March 2013 the story comprises twelve thirteen novella-length instalments, with a thirteenth fourteenth and (hopefully) final one pending. The story combines his interest in Creator/RudyardKipling's original ''[[Literature/TheJungleBook Jungle Books]]'' with his fetish for petrification and immobility.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: In his flashback in Part Eight, this is the young hunter Lendrin's reaction when he first succeeds in killing a lupinoid. He's obviously a bit slow on the uptake, though, because it's not until the third time that he's too overcome with guilt to continue.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: In his flashback in Part Eight, this is the young hunter Lendrin's reaction when he first succeeds in killing a lupinoid. He's obviously a bit slow on the uptake, though, because it's not until the third time that he's too overcome with guilt to continue.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: In his flashback in Part Eight, this is the young hunter Lendrin's reaction when he first succeeds in killing a lupinoid. He's obviously a bit slow on the uptake, though, because it's not until the third time that he's too overcome with guilt to continue.
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* {{Slurpasaur}}: The giant 'gwanna' that gives some of the good guys a hard time in Part Ten is a ShoutOut to the "dimetrodons" in the 1959 film of ''JourneyToTheCentreOfTheEarth'' (though as a nod to RealLife reptile biology it also has septic saliva like a komodo dragon).
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* DudeShesLikeInAComa: This is certainly Mavrida's opinion when she finds the young hunter Lendrin apparently making out with the paralysed [[spoiler:Suvanji]]. That's not the whole story, though... that hasn't been told yet.
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* BackFromTheDead: The Maiden somehow resurrects [[spoiler:Shadow the lupinoid]] after he is killed by a striagon after he is killed by a striagon (a big, psychotic, tiger-like beastie), because she knows his wounded companion [[spoiler:Sherinel]] won't make it without his support. Later on he comforts the dying [[spoiler:Night (another lupinoid)]] by telling him "I've been there. [[Film/TheLordOfTheRings It isn't so bad]]."
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* BackFromTheDead: The Maiden somehow resurrects [[spoiler:Shadow the lupinoid]] after he is killed by a striagon after he is killed by a striagon (a big, psychotic, tiger-like beastie), because she knows his wounded companion [[spoiler:Sherinel]] won't make it without his support. Later on he comforts the dying [[spoiler:Night (another lupinoid)]] by telling him "I've been there. [[Film/TheLordOfTheRings It isn't so bad]]."
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* BackFromTheDead: The Maiden somehow resurrects [[spoiler:Shadow the lupinoid after he is killed by a striagon]], because she knows the wounded [[spoiler:Sherinel]] won't make it without his support. Later on he comforts the dying [[spoiler:Night (another lupinoid)]] by telling him "I've been there. [[Film/TheLordOfTheRings It isn't so bad]]."
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* BackFromTheDead: The Maiden somehow resurrects [[spoiler:Shadow the lupinoid lupinoid]] after he is killed by a striagon]], striagon after he is killed by a striagon (a big, psychotic, tiger-like beastie), because she knows the his wounded companion [[spoiler:Sherinel]] won't make it without his support. Later on he comforts the dying [[spoiler:Night (another lupinoid)]] by telling him "I've been there. [[Film/TheLordOfTheRings It isn't so bad]]."
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* BackFromTheDead: The Maiden somehow resurrects [[spoiler:Shadow the lupinoid after he is killed by a striagon]], because she knows the wounded [[spoiler:Sherinel]] won't make it without his support.]] Later on he comforts the dying [[spoiler:Night (another lupinoid)]] by telling him "I've been there. [[Film/TheLordOfTheRings It isn't so bad]]."
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* BackFromTheDead: The Maiden somehow resurrects [[spoiler:Shadow the lupinoid after he is killed by a striagon]], because she knows the wounded [[spoiler:Sherinel]] won't make it without his support.]] Later on he comforts the dying [[spoiler:Night (another lupinoid)]] by telling him "I've been there. [[Film/TheLordOfTheRings It isn't so bad]]."
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* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:Shadow the lupinoid is somehow resurrected by the Maiden after being killed by a striagon, because Sherinel can't survive without his support.]] Later on he consoles the dying [[spoiler:Night (another lupinoid)]] by telling him "I've been there. [[Film/TheLordOfTheRings It isn't so bad]]."
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* BackFromTheDead: The Maiden somehow resurrects [[spoiler:Shadow the lupinoid is somehow resurrected by the Maiden after being he is killed by a striagon, striagon]], because Sherinel can't survive she knows the wounded [[spoiler:Sherinel]] won't make it without his support.]] Later on he consoles comforts the dying [[spoiler:Night (another lupinoid)]] by telling him "I've been there. [[Film/TheLordOfTheRings It isn't so bad]]."
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* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:Shadow the lupinoid is somehow resurrected by the Maiden after being killed by a striagon, because Sherinel can't survive without his support.]] Later on he consoles the dying [[spoiler:Night (another lupinoid)]] by telling him "I've been there. [[Film/TheLordOfTheRings It isn't so bad]]."
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''Ketrin'' is an ongoing erotic WebSerialNovel by Leem, alias Troper Lee M, which he has been writing sporadically since 1999. As of August 2012 the story comprises eleven novella-length instalments, with a twelfth pending. The story combines his interest in Creator/RudyardKipling's original ''[[Literature/TheJungleBook Jungle Books]]'' with his fetish for petrification and immobility.
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''Ketrin'' is an ongoing erotic WebSerialNovel by Leem, alias Troper Lee M, which he has been writing sporadically since 1999. As of August October 2012 the story comprises eleven twelve novella-length instalments, with a twelfth thirteenth pending. The story combines his interest in Creator/RudyardKipling's original ''[[Literature/TheJungleBook Jungle Books]]'' with his fetish for petrification and immobility.
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* FantasyWorldMap: Drawn, or rather scrawled, by the author, and expanded and updated as the characters move further afield.
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* FantasyWorldMap: Drawn, or rather scrawled, by the author, and expanded and updated in successive instalments as the characters move further afield.
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* FantasyWorldMap: Drawn, or rather scrawled, by the author, and expanded and updated as the characters move further afield.
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* YouNoTakeCandle: Ketrin [[spoiler:and Suvanji and Pyrri]], but only briefly, because the author gets fed up writing it. Therefore his [[spoiler:and their]] grammar improves rapidly, handwaved as either rapid learning or some kind of telepathic osmosis.
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* YouNoTakeCandle: Ketrin [[spoiler:and Suvanji and Pyrri]], but only briefly, because the author gets fed up writing it. Therefore his [[spoiler:and their]] grammar improves rapidly, swiftly, handwaved as either rapid learning or some kind of telepathic osmosis.
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* YouNoTakeCandle: Ketrin [[spoiler:and Suvanji]], but only briefly, because the author got fed up writing it.
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* YouNoTakeCandle: Ketrin [[spoiler:and Suvanji]], Suvanji and Pyrri]], but only briefly, because the author got gets fed up writing it.it. Therefore his [[spoiler:and their]] grammar improves rapidly, handwaved as either rapid learning or some kind of telepathic osmosis.
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-->--[[TheBeatles John Lennon / Paul McCartney]], "Paperback Writer"
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* PurpleEyes: Anybody possessing lupinoid telepathy and ancestral memories. I.E., lupinoids, Ketrin, [[spoiler:other wild humans]], and anybody who drinks lupinoid milk or mixes their blood with anyone belonging to the aforesaid categories.
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* PurpleEyes: Anybody possessing Indicate possession of lupinoid telepathy and ancestral memories. I.E., Obviously shared by all lupinoids, and also any human who drinks lupinoid milk such as Ketrin, [[spoiler:other wild humans]], and anybody who drinks lupinoid milk or humans]],or mixes their blood with anyone belonging to the aforesaid categories.
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''Ketrin'' is an ongoing erotic WebSerialNovel by Leem, alias Troper Lee M, which he has been writing sporadically since 1999. The story currently comprises ten novella-length instalments, with an eleventh pending. The story combines his interest in Creator/RudyardKipling's original ''[[Literature/TheJungleBook Jungle Books]]'' with his fetish for petrification and immobility.
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''Ketrin'' is an ongoing erotic WebSerialNovel by Leem, alias Troper Lee M, which he has been writing sporadically since 1999. The As of August 2012 the story currently comprises ten eleven novella-length instalments, with an eleventh a twelfth pending. The story combines his interest in Creator/RudyardKipling's original ''[[Literature/TheJungleBook Jungle Books]]'' with his fetish for petrification and immobility.
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* ShoutOut: Obviously to ''TheJungleBook'', but there are also some subtle and not-so-subtle nods to ''ElfQuest'' and ''WolfsRain''.
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* ShoutOut: Obviously to ''TheJungleBook'', ''[[Literature/TheJungleBook Jungle Books]]'', but there are also some subtle and not-so-subtle nods to ''ElfQuest'' ''ElfQuest'', ''WolfsRain'' and ''WolfsRain''.the French WildChild comic ''Pyrénée''.
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* ShoutOut: Obviously to ''TheJungleBook'', but there are also some subtle and not-so-subtle nods to ''ElfQuest'' and ''WolfsRain''.
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* ItsNotRapeIfYouEnjoyedIt: Sort of. Ketrin is worshipped as a god while paralysed and this includes both men and women having sex with him. They don't consider it rape, and he's having lots of orgasms, so... [[spoiler:Also, Lendrin embraces Suvanji while she's paralysed (it's not clear how far he goes with her), but apparently that's because she was seducing him telepathically.]]
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* NotIfTheyEnjoyedItRationalization: Sort of. Ketrin is worshipped as a god while paralysed and this includes both men and women having sex with him. They don't consider it rape, and he's having lots of orgasms, so... [[spoiler:Also, Lendrin embraces Suvanji while she's paralysed (it's not clear how far he goes with her), but apparently that's because she was seducing him telepathically.]]
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''Ketrin'' is an ongoing erotic WebSerialNovel by Leem, alias Troper Lee M, which he has been writing sporadically since 1999. The story currently comprises ten novella-length instalments, with an eleventh pending. The story combines his interest in RudyardKipling's original ''[[Literature/TheJungleBook Jungle Books]]'' with his fetish for petrification and immobility.
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''Ketrin'' is an ongoing erotic WebSerialNovel by Leem, alias Troper Lee M, which he has been writing sporadically since 1999. The story currently comprises ten novella-length instalments, with an eleventh pending. The story combines his interest in RudyardKipling's Creator/RudyardKipling's original ''[[Literature/TheJungleBook Jungle Books]]'' with his fetish for petrification and immobility.
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''Ketrin'' is an ongoing erotic WebSerialNovel by Leem, alias Troper Lee M, which he has been writing sporadically since 1999. The story currently comprises ten novella-length instalments, with expansions to the tenth and an eleventh pending. The story combines his interest in RudyardKipling's original ''[[Literature/TheJungleBook Jungle Books]]'' with his fetish for petrification and immobility.
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''Ketrin'' is an ongoing erotic WebSerialNovel by Leem, alias Troper Lee M, which he has been writing sporadically since 1999. The story currently comprises ten novella-length instalments, with expansions to the tenth and an eleventh pending. The story combines his interest in RudyardKipling's original ''[[Literature/TheJungleBook Jungle Books]]'' with his fetish for petrification and immobility.
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''Ketrin'' is an ongoing erotic WebSerialNovel by Leem, alias Troper Lee M, which he has been writing sporadically since 1999. The story currently comprises ten novella-length instalments, with expansions to the tenth and an eleventh pending. The story combines his interest in RudyardKipling's original ''[[TheJungleBook Jungle Books]]'' with his fetish for petrification and immobility.
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''Ketrin'' is an ongoing erotic WebSerialNovel by Leem, alias Troper Lee M, which he has been writing sporadically since 1999. The story currently comprises ten novella-length instalments, with expansions to the tenth and an eleventh pending. The story combines his interest in RudyardKipling's original ''[[TheJungleBook ''[[Literature/TheJungleBook Jungle Books]]'' with his fetish for petrification and immobility.
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* TheQuest: After Ketrin goes missing Sherinel goes looking for him accompanied by some lupinoids of his pack. [[spoiler:Later on Mavrida has the same idea.]]
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''Ketrin'' is an ongoing erotic WebSerialNovel by Leem, alias Troper Lee M, which he has been writing sporadically since 1999. The story currently comprises nine novella-length instalments, with a tenth (and by no means last) in the works. The story combines his interest in RudyardKipling's original ''[[TheJungleBook Jungle Books]]'' with his fetish for petrification and immobility.
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''Ketrin'' is an ongoing erotic WebSerialNovel by Leem, alias Troper Lee M, which he has been writing sporadically since 1999. The story currently comprises nine ten novella-length instalments, with a expansions to the tenth (and by no means last) in the works.and an eleventh pending. The story combines his interest in RudyardKipling's original ''[[TheJungleBook Jungle Books]]'' with his fetish for petrification and immobility.
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* PurpleEyes: Anybody possessing lupinoid telepathy and ancestral memories. I.E., lupinoids, Ketrin, [[spoiler:other wild humans]], and anybody who drinks lupinoid milk or mixes their blood with anyone belonging to the aforesaid categories.
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* AndIMustScream: Subverted, insofar as being paralysed doesn't drive victims insane.
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* AndIMustScream: Subverted, insofar as being paralysed doesn't drive victims insane.insane, though some of them have occasion to wish they could scream with ecstasy.
* RomancingTheWidow: Mavrida successfully manages to avoid relationships for ''years'' after her husband's apparent death. Then before she knows it, she manages to end up in a ''threesome''. (And then, just as she thinks her new relationship has brought closure to her mourning, she discovers that her long-vanished husband is (almost but) NotQuiteDead.
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* YouNoTakeCandle: Ketrin [[spoiler:and Suvanji]] , but only briefly because the author got fed up writing it.
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* YouNoTakeCandle: Ketrin [[spoiler:and Suvanji]] , Suvanji]], but only briefly briefly, because the author got fed up writing it.
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That listing is accompanied by an extremely lukewarm Editor's Note (not a full review). An earlier review on the now-defunct Pages Unbound site praised the story's prose but found it overly preachy.
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That listing is accompanied by an extremely lukewarm Editor's Note (not a full review).and an equally lukewarm review. An earlier review on the now-defunct Pages Unbound site praised the story's prose but found it overly preachy.