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* CameBackWrong: Emperor Antrobus II.
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* CameBackWrong: Johannes is forced to reanimate Emperor Antrobus II.II to hide his death. His public address quickly lapses into a rant about brain-eating, and Johannes makes a discreet exit just as the Antrobus-zombie loses every pretense of reason and tries to chow down on the nearest person.
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* InterrogatingTheDead: Johannes temporarily reanimates a murder victim to question for information about the murderer. It's doubly gruesome for Leonie to watch, since it only provides a brief imitation of life that slowly leaks out of the body, taking the panicked and increasingly incoherent soul with it.
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* ATankardOfMooseUrine: Subverted. Johannes expects the dark, slightly viscous beer he is served in Mirkarvia to be another way for the locals to show off their TestosteronePoisoning, but while it is [[GargleBlaster brewed strong]] (20 proof, which is roughly 10% abv, or double the strength of most beers and on par with many light wines), smells worryingly like coagulated dragon blood and only comes in massive steins, the actual flavor is very pleasant.
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-->'''Leonie:'''She's a bike. A tart. A slut. She'll be buried in a Y-shaped coffin. A baggage. A hussy. She's the good time that was had by all. A wanton floozy. A nymphomaniac."
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-->'''Leonie:'''She's a bike. A tart. A slut. She'll be buried in a Y-shaped coffin. A baggage. A hussy. She's the good time that was had by all. A wanton floozy. A nymphomaniac."nymphomaniac".
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* NoodleIncident: "Cabal could not have been more horrified if she'd pulled off her face to reveal a gaping chasm of eternal night from which glistening tentacles coiled and groped. That had already happened to him once in his life and he wasn't keen to repeat the experience."
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* NoodleIncident: "Cabal could not have been more horrified if she'd pulled off her face to reveal a gaping chasm of eternal night from which glistening tentacles coiled and groped. That had already happened to him once in his life and he wasn't keen to repeat the experience."experience".
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** This is averted when Cabal is approached by Leonie-he doesn't know who she is, as he's looking out a window as they talk, he thinks he might be in the middle of getting "picked up."
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** This is averted when Cabal is approached by Leonie-he doesn't know who she is, as he's looking out a window as they talk, he thinks he might be in the middle of getting "picked up."up".
* TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized: Cabal leaves Mirkarvia in a state of civil war. Both figuratively, and literally.
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** When Cabal suggests re-animating a corpse for information, Leonine is disgusted and says he must be joking. Cabal says "I never joke about my work."
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** When Cabal suggests re-animating a corpse for information, Leonine is disgusted and says he must be joking. Cabal says "I never joke about my work."work".
* ATankardOfMooseUrine: Subverted. Johannes expects the dark, slightly viscous beer he is served in Mirkarvia to be another way for the locals to show off their TestosteronePoisoning, but while it is [[GargleBlaster brewed strong]] (20 proof, which is roughly 10% abv, or double the strength of most beers and on par with many light wines), smells worryingly like coagulated dragon blood and only comes in massive steins, the actual flavor is very pleasant.
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* TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized: Cabal leaves Mirkarvia in a state of civil war. Both figuratively, and literally.
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* BritsLoveTea: Englishwoman Leonie is quite fond of tea, as does Cabal, who while German born, grew-up in England. * CameBackWrong: Emperor Antrobus II.
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* BritsLoveTea: Englishwoman Leonie is quite fond of tea, as does Cabal, who while German born, grew-up in England. England.
* CameBackWrong: Emperor Antrobus II.
* CameBackWrong: Emperor Antrobus II.
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* ASpotOfTea: Englishwoman Leonie is quite fond of it, as is Cabal, who while German born, grew-up in England. They are nonplussed by the Mirkarvia disdain for tea.
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* BritsLoveTea: Englishwoman Leonie is quite fond of tea, as does Cabal, who while German born, grew-up in England. * CameBackWrong: Emperor Antrobus II.
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* ATankardOfMooseUrine: Subverted. Johannes expects the dark, slightly viscous beer he is served in Mirkarvia to be another way for the locals to show off their TestosteronePoisoning, but while it is [[GargleBlaster brewed strong]] (20 proof, which is roughly 10% abv, or double the strength of most beers and on par with many light wines) and only comes in massive steins, the actual taste is very good.
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* ATankardOfMooseUrine: Subverted. Johannes expects the dark, slightly viscous beer he is served in Mirkarvia to be another way for the locals to show off their TestosteronePoisoning, but while it is [[GargleBlaster brewed strong]] (20 proof, which is roughly 10% abv, or double the strength of most beers and on par with many light wines) wines), smells worryingly like coagulated dragon blood and only comes in massive steins, the actual taste flavor is very good.pleasant.
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* ATankardOfMooseUrine: Subverted. Johannes expects the dark, slightly viscous beer he is served in Mirkarvia to be another way for the locals to show off their TestosteronePoisoning, but while it is [[GargleBlaster brewed strong]] (20 proof, which is roughly 10% abv, or double the strength of most beers and on par with many light wines) and only comes in massive steins, the actual taste is very good.
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* Ruritania: Mirkavia and it's neighbors. In fact [[ThePrisonerOfZenda Ruritania]] is actually mentioned in a throwaway line.
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* Ruritania: Mirkavia and it's neighbors. In fact [[ThePrisonerOfZenda [[Literature/ThePrisonerOfZenda Ruritania]] is actually mentioned in a throwaway line.
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* CatapultNightmare: Defied by Cabal, who (awoken by a commotion in the next room and a knock on his door) knows that sitting bolt upright just alerts whatever's after him that he's awake.
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** The narration mentions "the curious case of the defenestrated DeGarre" and "the adventure of the ersatz civil servant" both of which sound like titles to Sherlock Holmes stories.
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** The narration mentions "the curious case of the defenestrated DeGarre" and "the adventure of the ersatz civil servant" both of which sound like titles to Sherlock Holmes stories.stories, and it's mentioned that solving cases rarely depends on encyclopedic knowledge of tobacco ash, something Holmes published a monograph on.
