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''I Sit Behind The Eyes'' is a Supernatural Horror novelette written by Nicholas Portwood.
Little Emily is feeling a little weird. She has started enjoying life more and is even [[TookALevelInKindness becoming a better friend]]. However, she has also started hearing a little voice in her head and dreaming about doing horrible things. Convinced that something is trying to possess her, she seeks the help of her best friend and his uncle, an [[{{Cloudcuckoolander}} eccentric parapsychologist]], to identify the nature of the being attempting to control her. However, when the truth eventually comes out, [[GoMadFromTheRevelation not even Emily herself will be ready to face the full horror of her impossible situation]].
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!!This work contains examples of:
* AlternateIdentityAmnesia: Emily starts having nightmares about things she appears to have done while under the Entity’s influence. [[spoiler: It is actually more of a case of AmnesiacDissonance. The Entity was repressing memories of things that the real Emily had done before she was possessed]].
* AndIMustScream: [[spoiler: People possessed by the Entity are essentially trapped in their own bodies for the rest of their lives, with no means of crying out for help except through fragmented one-word yelps, which they can only do while the Entity is distracted by its more alien thoughts. After the real Emily’s soul is destroyed, it is suggested that she might still be trapped in her own body, unable to even do that!]].
* AwfulTruth: The true nature of Emily’s possession.
* BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind: Emily vs. The Entity in the final chapter.
* [[spoiler: BecomingTheMask]]: [[spoiler: The Entity ends up taking over Emily’s life for good (It’s a happier ending than you think)]].
* [[spoiler: BenevolentMonsters / ReluctantMonster]]: [[spoiler: The Entity is an Anti-heroic version of this. It goes around possessing dangerous people with damaged souls or no souls at all, in order to stop them from hurting others]].
* BigBad: [[spoiler: Emily!]]
* BigGood: [[spoiler: The Entity!]]
* BodySurf: The Entity has been possessing people since the dawn of human history.
* ChekhovsGun: One of the giveaways that there is something wrong with Emily is her tendency to go off on tangents about the nature of thought, which she calls ‘Psychology-ology’. [[spoiler: In the finale, there is doubt over whether it was Emily or the Entity that came out on top, until the girl starts going off on an even weirder tangent than before confirming that it is the Entity controlling her.]]
* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: Terry’s uncle is the strangest psychologist ever!
* DemonicPossession: The plot revolves around a little girl being taken over by a creature that is essentially a rogue soul. [[spoiler: However, in an unusual variation, the Entity is actually the narrator and a really friendly one at that. The villain is actually the girl herself, who the Entity possessed in an attempt to stop her from hurting others]].
* EldritchAbomination: The Entity is described as an invisible jellyfish with a small red light at its centre.
* EnfantTerrible: [[spoiler: The real Emily is a genuine Psychopath, who is quite prepared to steal, bully and even KILL to get what she wants!]]
* FateWorseThanDeath: [[spoiler: Emily’s soul is destroyed in the final chapter]].
* [[spoiler: FauxAffablyEvil]]: [[spoiler: Emily puts up a rather thin façade to get what she wants. She only apologizes to Erin for cutting her hair to gain Terry’s sympathy and seemingly plans to visit Dennis in hospital in order to silence him]].
* GrandTheftMe: The Entity is attempting to do this the Emily. [[spoiler: It succeeds…much to everyone’s delight.]]
* HeroicBSOD: Emily[[spoiler: /The Entity]], Terry and his Uncle after the séance with the being responsible for Emily’s strange behavior.
[[spoiler: InterspeciesFriendship]]: [[spoiler: Terry gets on much better with the pan-dimensional entity than the real Emily]].
* IShouldWriteABookAboutThis: The Narrator is the protagonist ([[spoiler: Not the little girl, but the thing possessing her]]).
* {{Jerkass}}: Emily is noted as being much more sociable once the Entity starts to take over. [[spoiler: Though nobody knows just how cruel she actually is]].
* JerkassWoobie: Dennis may be a bully, but drowning him in a river seems a tad extreme!
* LossOfIdentity: The fate of anyone possessed by the Entity.
* [[spoiler: MaybeEverAfter]]: [[spoiler: Emily (possessed) remains good friends with Terry. She claims that she finds the notion of becoming an OfficialCouple disgusting, but also adds that she has not ruled it out entirely]].
* [[spoiler: MayflyDecemberRomance]]: [[spoiler: It is implied at the end of the book that the relationship between Emily and Terry will eventually evolve from friendship into PuppyLove. However, while Emily’s mind and body are those of a little girl, her soul itself is thousands of years old.]]
* MysteriousPast: The Entity is so old, it cannot remember its own origins. It might have been one of TheOldGods, it might he an alien visitor, it might even have started off as a human being.
* NiceGuy: Terry is generally a very good friend.
* NotHimself: Emily is much [[spoiler: friendlier]] after she gets possessed.
* OhCrap: Terry when he finds out the truth about Emily’s possession.
* OurSoulsAreDifferent: The ‘body’ acts, the ‘mind’ thinks about acts and the ‘soul’ thinks about thinking about acts.
* OutOfCharacterAlert: [[spoiler: Although Terry strongly suspects that the real Emily is the evil one, he is not completely convinced until he asks her to recall the most traumatic experience of her life, and she is unable to shed a single tear. Thus, he realizes that she is unable to experience genuine emotion and is actually a Psychopath]].
* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: The Entity is as old as recorded human history.
* RedEyesTakeWarning: The only visible part of the Entity is a small red light at its centre. [[spoiler: Subverted, in that the Entity only possesses people who are a threat to others and makes them kinder]].
* RepeatWhatYouJustSaid: “It was the worst ''MONDAY'' I’ve ever had!”
* SealedEvilInACan: The Entity is trapped in a flask towards the end of the book. [[spoiler: Subverted in that it is actually a SealedGoodInACan]].
* TheSociopath: [[spoiler: The real Emily is one. Her soul reflects this by appearing as a cracked image of herself. This is an important plot point in the final chapter, as her lack of genuine emotion makes her soul extremely weak and fragile, enabling the Entity to smash it]].
* SoulJar: Th Entity is sucked into a flask towards the end of the book.
* TinfoilHat: Terry’s Uncle is a big believer in psychic forces and wears one for protection, much to the bewilderment of his patients.
* [[spoiler: TomatoInTheMirror]]: [[spoiler: The Narrator is not Emily, as one is led to believe, but the Entity possessing her]].
* UncertainDoom: It is unclear what happens to someone when their soul is destroyed. They might still be trapped in their own body, they might be dead, or they might have been [[CessationOfExistence erased]].
* WordSaladHorror: When Emily thinks too hard, she starts blurting out seemingly random words mid-sentence and does not realize until she has stopped talking. This is the first sign that she is being possessed, as the words spell out unnerving sentences like “LET ME OUT!”. [[spoiler: It turns out to be the real Emily trying to warn others that she is possessed]].
* WouldHurtAChild: Dennis, the school bully, took a rather unexpected dive into a river. The one responsible is quite prepared to kill to silence him.
Little Emily is feeling a little weird. She has started enjoying life more and is even [[TookALevelInKindness becoming a better friend]]. However, she has also started hearing a little voice in her head and dreaming about doing horrible things. Convinced that something is trying to possess her, she seeks the help of her best friend and his uncle, an [[{{Cloudcuckoolander}} eccentric parapsychologist]], to identify the nature of the being attempting to control her. However, when the truth eventually comes out, [[GoMadFromTheRevelation not even Emily herself will be ready to face the full horror of her impossible situation]].
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!!This work contains examples of:
* AlternateIdentityAmnesia: Emily starts having nightmares about things she appears to have done while under the Entity’s influence. [[spoiler: It is actually more of a case of AmnesiacDissonance. The Entity was repressing memories of things that the real Emily had done before she was possessed]].
* AndIMustScream: [[spoiler: People possessed by the Entity are essentially trapped in their own bodies for the rest of their lives, with no means of crying out for help except through fragmented one-word yelps, which they can only do while the Entity is distracted by its more alien thoughts. After the real Emily’s soul is destroyed, it is suggested that she might still be trapped in her own body, unable to even do that!]].
* AwfulTruth: The true nature of Emily’s possession.
* BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind: Emily vs. The Entity in the final chapter.
* [[spoiler: BecomingTheMask]]: [[spoiler: The Entity ends up taking over Emily’s life for good (It’s a happier ending than you think)]].
* [[spoiler: BenevolentMonsters / ReluctantMonster]]: [[spoiler: The Entity is an Anti-heroic version of this. It goes around possessing dangerous people with damaged souls or no souls at all, in order to stop them from hurting others]].
* BigBad: [[spoiler: Emily!]]
* BigGood: [[spoiler: The Entity!]]
* BodySurf: The Entity has been possessing people since the dawn of human history.
* ChekhovsGun: One of the giveaways that there is something wrong with Emily is her tendency to go off on tangents about the nature of thought, which she calls ‘Psychology-ology’. [[spoiler: In the finale, there is doubt over whether it was Emily or the Entity that came out on top, until the girl starts going off on an even weirder tangent than before confirming that it is the Entity controlling her.]]
* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: Terry’s uncle is the strangest psychologist ever!
* DemonicPossession: The plot revolves around a little girl being taken over by a creature that is essentially a rogue soul. [[spoiler: However, in an unusual variation, the Entity is actually the narrator and a really friendly one at that. The villain is actually the girl herself, who the Entity possessed in an attempt to stop her from hurting others]].
* EldritchAbomination: The Entity is described as an invisible jellyfish with a small red light at its centre.
* EnfantTerrible: [[spoiler: The real Emily is a genuine Psychopath, who is quite prepared to steal, bully and even KILL to get what she wants!]]
* FateWorseThanDeath: [[spoiler: Emily’s soul is destroyed in the final chapter]].
* [[spoiler: FauxAffablyEvil]]: [[spoiler: Emily puts up a rather thin façade to get what she wants. She only apologizes to Erin for cutting her hair to gain Terry’s sympathy and seemingly plans to visit Dennis in hospital in order to silence him]].
* GrandTheftMe: The Entity is attempting to do this the Emily. [[spoiler: It succeeds…much to everyone’s delight.]]
* HeroicBSOD: Emily[[spoiler: /The Entity]], Terry and his Uncle after the séance with the being responsible for Emily’s strange behavior.
[[spoiler: InterspeciesFriendship]]: [[spoiler: Terry gets on much better with the pan-dimensional entity than the real Emily]].
* IShouldWriteABookAboutThis: The Narrator is the protagonist ([[spoiler: Not the little girl, but the thing possessing her]]).
* {{Jerkass}}: Emily is noted as being much more sociable once the Entity starts to take over. [[spoiler: Though nobody knows just how cruel she actually is]].
* JerkassWoobie: Dennis may be a bully, but drowning him in a river seems a tad extreme!
* LossOfIdentity: The fate of anyone possessed by the Entity.
* [[spoiler: MaybeEverAfter]]: [[spoiler: Emily (possessed) remains good friends with Terry. She claims that she finds the notion of becoming an OfficialCouple disgusting, but also adds that she has not ruled it out entirely]].
* [[spoiler: MayflyDecemberRomance]]: [[spoiler: It is implied at the end of the book that the relationship between Emily and Terry will eventually evolve from friendship into PuppyLove. However, while Emily’s mind and body are those of a little girl, her soul itself is thousands of years old.]]
* MysteriousPast: The Entity is so old, it cannot remember its own origins. It might have been one of TheOldGods, it might he an alien visitor, it might even have started off as a human being.
* NiceGuy: Terry is generally a very good friend.
* NotHimself: Emily is much [[spoiler: friendlier]] after she gets possessed.
* OhCrap: Terry when he finds out the truth about Emily’s possession.
* OurSoulsAreDifferent: The ‘body’ acts, the ‘mind’ thinks about acts and the ‘soul’ thinks about thinking about acts.
* OutOfCharacterAlert: [[spoiler: Although Terry strongly suspects that the real Emily is the evil one, he is not completely convinced until he asks her to recall the most traumatic experience of her life, and she is unable to shed a single tear. Thus, he realizes that she is unable to experience genuine emotion and is actually a Psychopath]].
* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: The Entity is as old as recorded human history.
* RedEyesTakeWarning: The only visible part of the Entity is a small red light at its centre. [[spoiler: Subverted, in that the Entity only possesses people who are a threat to others and makes them kinder]].
* RepeatWhatYouJustSaid: “It was the worst ''MONDAY'' I’ve ever had!”
* SealedEvilInACan: The Entity is trapped in a flask towards the end of the book. [[spoiler: Subverted in that it is actually a SealedGoodInACan]].
* TheSociopath: [[spoiler: The real Emily is one. Her soul reflects this by appearing as a cracked image of herself. This is an important plot point in the final chapter, as her lack of genuine emotion makes her soul extremely weak and fragile, enabling the Entity to smash it]].
* SoulJar: Th Entity is sucked into a flask towards the end of the book.
* TinfoilHat: Terry’s Uncle is a big believer in psychic forces and wears one for protection, much to the bewilderment of his patients.
* [[spoiler: TomatoInTheMirror]]: [[spoiler: The Narrator is not Emily, as one is led to believe, but the Entity possessing her]].
* UncertainDoom: It is unclear what happens to someone when their soul is destroyed. They might still be trapped in their own body, they might be dead, or they might have been [[CessationOfExistence erased]].
* WordSaladHorror: When Emily thinks too hard, she starts blurting out seemingly random words mid-sentence and does not realize until she has stopped talking. This is the first sign that she is being possessed, as the words spell out unnerving sentences like “LET ME OUT!”. [[spoiler: It turns out to be the real Emily trying to warn others that she is possessed]].
* WouldHurtAChild: Dennis, the school bully, took a rather unexpected dive into a river. The one responsible is quite prepared to kill to silence him.
