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* ACupAngst: Feng Lang ''really'' doesn't like people with C-cups.
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* ACupAngst: Feng Lang Lang, who has a flat chest, ''really'' doesn't like people with C-cups.
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* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: Yang Ming, Lan's twin brother.
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* BerserkButton: You got something against clams, huh?
* BewareTheNiceOnes: Doll is rather cute and adorable, and is treated like everyone's little sister. But [[spoiler:when someone attacks Prince, she sets Bonds of Endless Torment on her, and in response to the protest of "Don't kill her, we need to question her," Doll deadpans, "Don't worry. She'll just suffer, she won't die. But her player herself will be in so much pain she'll wish she was dead."]]
** She gets pretty pissed too when [[spoiler:Wolf and Yulian]] are killed.
* BewareTheNiceOnes: Doll is rather cute and adorable, and is treated like everyone's little sister. But [[spoiler:when someone attacks Prince, she sets Bonds of Endless Torment on her, and in response to the protest of "Don't kill her, we need to question her," Doll deadpans, "Don't worry. She'll just suffer, she won't die. But her player herself will be in so much pain she'll wish she was dead."]]
** She gets pretty pissed too when [[spoiler:Wolf and Yulian]] are killed.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Doll is rather cute and adorable, and is treated like everyone's little sister. But [[spoiler:when someone attacks Prince, she sets Bonds of Endless Torment on her, and in response to the protest of "Don't kill her, we need to question her," Doll deadpans, "Don't worry. She'll just suffer, she won't die. But her player herself will be in so much pain she'll wish she was dead.
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* ChickMagnet: Wherever Prince goes, legions of fangirls follow. Then they get the bright idea to start the game's first band, starring all the Odd Squad's {{bishonen}}.
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* ChildhoodMarriagePromise: Though Lan no longer remembers asking Zhou to marry her.
* CranialEruption
* CranialEruption
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* ChildhoodMarriagePromise: Though Lan no longer remembers asking asks Zhou to marry her.
*her when they grow up, but Lan forgets about it.
%%* ComesGreatResponsibility: Something Prince has trouble with for a few chapters.
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%%* ComesGreatResponsibility: Something Prince has trouble with for a few chapters.
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* {{CrossPlayer}}: The main characteristic of the protagonist.
* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: At the beginning of the game, Prince would be this.
* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: At the beginning of the game, Prince would be this.
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*
%%** At the beginning of the game, Prince would be this.
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* CurbStompBattle: A nice example is during the tournament arc - the Odd Squad do this to their opponent after eating some delicious roasted meat.
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* DeathIsCheap: Justified because it is all in a RPG. Averted when [[spoiler:the [=NPCs=] start rebelling]].
* [[spoiler:DiseaseBleach: Happens to the BigBad as a result of his chronic illness.]]
* TheDividual: Feng Lan's mom and dad, Jing and Yun, and Wacko and Dandan.
* DudeLooksLikeALady: Miwa's BerserkButton
* [[spoiler:DiseaseBleach: Happens to the BigBad as a result of his chronic illness.]]
* TheDividual: Feng Lan's mom and dad, Jing and Yun, and Wacko and Dandan.
* DudeLooksLikeALady: Miwa's BerserkButton
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* DeathIsCheap: Justified because it is all in a RPG.RPG, where extra lives are available. Averted when [[spoiler:the [=NPCs=] start rebelling]].
* [[spoiler:DiseaseBleach: Happens %%* DiseaseBleach: [[spoiler:Happens to the BigBad as a result of his chronic illness.]]
* %%* TheDividual: Feng Lan's mom and dad, Jing and Yun, and Wacko and Dandan.
* %%* DudeLooksLikeALady: Miwa's BerserkButton
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* EvenTheGuysWantHim: Prince is just ''that'' pretty.
* {{Expy}}: "Demon Lord Kenshin" is an obvious reference to Rurouni Kenshin. Kenshin even has his trademark scar.
** Let's not forget "I must return this hair ribbon".
* {{Expy}}: "Demon Lord Kenshin" is an obvious reference to Rurouni Kenshin. Kenshin even has his trademark scar.
** Let's not forget "I must return this hair ribbon".
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** "Demon Lord Kenshin" is an obvious reference to
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* FailedASpotCheck: Lolidragon fails these a lot.
* {{Fangirl}}: Wherever Prince goes, legions of fangirls follow. Then they get the bright idea to start the game's first band, starring all the Odd Squad's {{bishonen}}.
* {{Fangirl}}: Wherever Prince goes, legions of fangirls follow. Then they get the bright idea to start the game's first band, starring all the Odd Squad's {{bishonen}}.
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* {{Fangirl}}: Wherever Prince goes, legions of fangirls follow. Then they get the bright idea to start the game's first band, starring all the Odd Squad's {{bishonen}}.
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* GenderBender
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* HappilyMarried: Feng Lan's parents, who constantly go on numerous honeymoons and are also SickeninglySweethearts.
** The resolution of the Love Triangle going on reveals that [[spoiler: Lan and Gui]] end up as this.
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler: It just takes one request from Doll to get Caelus to switch sides...[[SubvertedTrope or not]].]]
** The resolution of the Love Triangle going on reveals that [[spoiler: Lan and Gui]] end up as this.
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler: It just takes one request from Doll to get Caelus to switch sides...[[SubvertedTrope or not]].]]
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* HappilyMarried: HappilyMarried:
** Feng Lan's parents, who constantly go on numerous honeymoons and are also SickeninglySweethearts.
** The resolution of theLove Triangle LoveTriangle going on reveals that [[spoiler: Lan and Gui]] end up as this.
* HeelFaceTurn:[[spoiler: It just takes one request from Doll to get Caelus [[spoiler:Caelus to switch sides...[[SubvertedTrope or not]].]]
** Feng Lan's parents, who constantly go on numerous honeymoons and are also SickeninglySweethearts.
** The resolution of the
* HeelFaceTurn:
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* [[spoiler:IfItsYouItsOkay: Gui's side story reveals that he feels this way about Prince.]]
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* LampshadeHanging: "Where'd that table come from?"
* LongHairedPrettyBoy: Gui and Wicked, for starters.
* LoveTriangle: Prince is in one somewhere between a type 3 and type 7 with Gui and Wicked. He's initially irked by Gui's affection/under the impression that they're actually competing for Yang Ming, and later finds likable qualities in both and doesn't want to hurt either of them by picking the other.
** [[spoiler:She chooses Gui]]
* LongHairedPrettyBoy: Gui and Wicked, for starters.
* LoveTriangle: Prince is in one somewhere between a type 3 and type 7 with Gui and Wicked. He's initially irked by Gui's affection/under the impression that they're actually competing for Yang Ming, and later finds likable qualities in both and doesn't want to hurt either of them by picking the other.
** [[spoiler:She chooses Gui]]
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* LoveTriangle: Prince is in one somewhere between a type 3 and type 7 with Gui and Wicked. He's initially irked by Gui's affection/under the impression that they're actually competing for Yang Ming, and later finds likable qualities in both and doesn't want to hurt either of them by picking the
**
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* MiserAdvisor: Yu Lian
* MistakenForGay: [[spoiler:Gui pretends to act gay for Prince. Later, when Feng Lan overhears Gui and Zhuo talking out in real life, she thinks the two are in love with her brother. Further misunderstandings cause her to think her brother is in love with Zhuo.]]. Prince is also a victim of this, being surrounded by guys who love "him".
* MistakenForGay: [[spoiler:Gui pretends to act gay for Prince. Later, when Feng Lan overhears Gui and Zhuo talking out in real life, she thinks the two are in love with her brother. Further misunderstandings cause her to think her brother is in love with Zhuo.]]. Prince is also a victim of this, being surrounded by guys who love "him".
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** [[spoiler:Gui pretends to act gay for Prince. Later, when Feng Lan overhears Gui and Zhuo talking out in real life, she thinks the two are in love with her brother. Further misunderstandings cause her to think her brother is in love with Zhuo.]]. Prince is also a victim of this, being surrounded by guys who love "him".
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* MrFanservice: Prince, of course, for starters...There's also Kenshin, Arctic Fox, Gui...we'll just go with the entire male cast.
* [[spoiler: MisterSeahorse: In the epilogue, Gui reveals just how okay he is with the genderbending aspects of his relationship with Feng Lan; because she can't stand the thought of the pain of giving birth, he's the one who gets pregnant, so he can give birth to them for her.]]
* [[spoiler: MisterSeahorse: In the epilogue, Gui reveals just how okay he is with the genderbending aspects of his relationship with Feng Lan; because she can't stand the thought of the pain of giving birth, he's the one who gets pregnant, so he can give birth to them for her.]]
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* {{NPC}}: [[spoiler:Prince picks up two very powerful NPC allies during an unplanned excursion to another continent/server. They are self-aware, [[{{Foreshadowing}} hinting that]] [[AIIsACrapshoot something]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} deeper may be going on]] in the depths of the game.]]
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname
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* {{NPC}}: [[spoiler:Prince [[spoiler:Prince]] picks up two very powerful NPC allies during an unplanned excursion to another continent/server. They [[spoiler:They are self-aware, [[{{Foreshadowing}} hinting that]] [[AIIsACrapshoot something]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} deeper may be going on]] in the depths of the game.]]
*]]]]
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* RedBaron
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* SecretlyWealthy: [[spoiler: Doll is a princess, and Lolidragon is the President's daughter.]]
** Actually subverted with the latter. [[spoiler: Lolidragon was cut off from her father before the story began and she had to take up several jobs to afford her expensive tastes.]]
** Actually subverted with the latter. [[spoiler: Lolidragon was cut off from her father before the story began and she had to take up several jobs to afford her expensive tastes.]]
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* SecretlyWealthy: [[spoiler: Doll is a princess, and Lolidragon is the President's daughter.]]
**]] Actually subverted with the latter. [[spoiler: Lolidragon was cut off from her father before the story began and she had to take up several jobs to afford her expensive tastes.]]
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* SummonMagic: Doll.
* SuperDeformed: Gui, whenever he's acting especially stupid for Prince.
* SuperDeformed: Gui, whenever he's acting especially stupid for Prince.
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* SuperDeformed: Gui, whenever he's acting especially stupid for
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* TournamentArc
* TrueCompanions: Prince naturally attracts them.
* TrueCompanions: Prince naturally attracts them.
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* UnnamedParent: Feng Lan's mom and dad.
* UnwantedHarem: Both male and female for Prince.
* [[spoiler:WhatMeasureIsANonHuman]]
* [[ComesGreatResponsibility With Lordship comes great responsibility]]: Something Prince has trouble with for a few chapters.
* UnwantedHarem: Both male and female for Prince.
* [[spoiler:WhatMeasureIsANonHuman]]
* [[ComesGreatResponsibility With Lordship comes great responsibility]]: Something Prince has trouble with for a few chapters.
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* UnnamedParent: Feng Lan's mom and dad.
*dad have no names.
%%* UnwantedHarem: Both male and female for Prince.
* [[spoiler:WhatMeasureIsANonHuman]]
* [[ComesGreatResponsibility With Lordship comes great responsibility]]: Something Prince has trouble with for a few chapters.%%* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman
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%%* UnwantedHarem: Both male and female for Prince.
* [[ComesGreatResponsibility With Lordship comes great responsibility]]: Something Prince has trouble with for a few chapters.
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%%* {{Bishonen}}: The sheer number of them is astounding.
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* DarkSkinnedBlond: Wicked and Sunshine.
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Feng Lang plays as the bloodthirsty elfin warrior "Prince", who just happens to be one of the most {{Bishonen}} beings ever witnessed. He soon acquires a large UnwantedHarem of both male and female admirers, a strange pet shaped like a meat bun, and a group of TrueCompanions. A surprising number of characters love him/her in a gender-confused way, and those who don't are pulled towards his honest and admirable personality (or to his unique and bloody skills on the battlefield).
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Feng Lang Lan plays as the bloodthirsty elfin warrior "Prince", who just happens to be one of the most {{Bishonen}} beings ever witnessed. He soon acquires a large UnwantedHarem of both male and female admirers, a strange pet shaped like a meat bun, and a group of TrueCompanions. A surprising number of characters love him/her in a gender-confused way, and those who don't are pulled towards his honest and admirable personality (or to his unique and bloody skills on the battlefield).
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Dewicked trope
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: 50 and counting.
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* ADarkerMe: "Blood Elf" Prince [[RedBaron earns his title]] by being far more violent than Feng Lang is in Real Life, going over and above what you'd normally see in an MMO.
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* ADarkerMe: "Blood Elf" Prince [[RedBaron earns his title]] by being far more violent than Feng Lang is in Real Life, going over and above what you'd normally see in an MMO.
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** And ''[[http://www.mangafox.com/manga/1_2_prince/v02/c010/4.html this]]''
* AffectionateParody: Of fantasy {{RPG}}s.
* AffectionateParody: Of fantasy {{RPG}}s.
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* ArchEnemy
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* {{Bishonen}}: The sheer number of them is astounding.
* CallingYourAttacks: Justified by the fact that they're in a game.
* ChildhoodFriendRomance: Between Lan and Zhou. [[spoiler:Zhou ends up being the unlucky childhood friend.]]
* CallingYourAttacks: Justified by the fact that they're in a game.
* ChildhoodFriendRomance: Between Lan and Zhou. [[spoiler:Zhou ends up being the unlucky childhood friend.]]
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* OdangoHair: Doll wears her hair like this.
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* [[spoiler: MrSeahorse: In the epilogue, Gui reveals just how okay he is with the genderbending aspects of his relationship with Feng Lan; because she can't stand the thought of the pain of giving birth, he's the one who gets pregnant, so he can give birth to them for her.]]
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* [[spoiler: MrSeahorse: MisterSeahorse: In the epilogue, Gui reveals just how okay he is with the genderbending aspects of his relationship with Feng Lan; because she can't stand the thought of the pain of giving birth, he's the one who gets pregnant, so he can give birth to them for her.]]
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* HeroicAlbino: "Prince" is a textbook example, as Prince's quest to be a legendary hero is what drives the story.
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Compare with ''Literature/{{Yureka}}''. Also see ''Literature/EclipseHunter'' and ''Literature/TheLegendOfSunKnight'', two other novel series by the same author.
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Compare with ''Literature/{{Yureka}}''.''Manhwa/{{Yureka}}''. Also see ''Literature/EclipseHunter'' and ''Literature/TheLegendOfSunKnight'', two other novel series by the same author.
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* PronounTrouble: An epic case. Gui thinks Prince is male while Zhuo knows she's female. When they have a conversation in real life, they refer to Prince as "he" and "she" respectively without letting the secret out; while the third person pronouns in the written ChineseLanguage can properly distinguish genders, when spoken, they sound the same.
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* PronounTrouble: An epic case. Gui thinks Prince is male while Zhuo knows she's female. When they have a conversation in real life, they refer to Prince as "he" and "she" respectively without letting the secret out; while the third person pronouns in the written ChineseLanguage UsefulNotes/ChineseLanguage can properly distinguish genders, when spoken, they sound the same.
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* HeroicAlbino: "Prince" is a textbook example, as Prince's quest to be a legendary hero is what drives the story.
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Feng Lang plays as the bloodthirsty elfin warrior "Prince", who just happens to be one of the most {{Bishonen}} beings ever witnessed. He soon acquires a large UnwantedHarem of both male and female admirers, a strange pet shaped like a meat bun, and a group of TrueCompanions. A surprising number of character love him/her in a gender-confused way, and those who don't are pulled towards his honest and admirable personality (or to his unique and bloody skills on the battlefield).
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Feng Lang plays as the bloodthirsty elfin warrior "Prince", who just happens to be one of the most {{Bishonen}} beings ever witnessed. He soon acquires a large UnwantedHarem of both male and female admirers, a strange pet shaped like a meat bun, and a group of TrueCompanions. A surprising number of character characters love him/her in a gender-confused way, and those who don't are pulled towards his honest and admirable personality (or to his unique and bloody skills on the battlefield).
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* ThePresidentsDaughter: [[spoiler: Lolidragon is secretly the daughter of the Company's president, who was made a hidden GM because her father said she didn't understand the hardships of people.]]
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* SecretlyWealthy: [[spoiler: Doll is a princess, and Lolidragon is ThePresidentsDaughter.]]
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* SecretlyWealthy: [[spoiler: Doll is a princess, and Lolidragon is ThePresidentsDaughter.the President's daughter.]]
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-->-- '''[[{{IfItsYouItsOkay}} Guiliastes]]'''
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-->-- '''[[{{IfItsYouItsOkay}} '''[[IfItsYouItsOkay Guiliastes]]'''
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Feng Lang plays as the bloodthirsty elfin warrior "Prince", who just happens to be one of the most {{Bishonen}} beings ever witnessed. He soon acquires a large {{Unwanted Harem}} of both male and female admirers, a strange pet shaped like a meat bun, and a group of TrueCompanions. A surprising number of character love him/her in a gender-confused way, and those who don't are pulled towards his honest and admirable personality (or to his unique and bloody skills on the battlefield).
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Feng Lang plays as the bloodthirsty elfin warrior "Prince", who just happens to be one of the most {{Bishonen}} beings ever witnessed. He soon acquires a large {{Unwanted Harem}} UnwantedHarem of both male and female admirers, a strange pet shaped like a meat bun, and a group of TrueCompanions. A surprising number of character love him/her in a gender-confused way, and those who don't are pulled towards his honest and admirable personality (or to his unique and bloody skills on the battlefield).
* AttackItsWeakPoint: One of the perks of the 99% realistic game, knowing the weak points of mobs results in quick and easy wins. Examples include the eyes of the Wolf King and the heads of lesser demons.
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* ForMassiveDamage: One of the perks of the 99% realistic game, knowing the weak points of mobs results in quick and easy wins. Examples include the eyes of the Wolf King and the heads of lesser demons.
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Compare with ''{{Yureka}}''. Also see ''EclipseHunter'' and ''Literature/TheLegendOfSunKnight'', two other novel series by the same author.
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Compare with ''{{Yureka}}''. ''Literature/{{Yureka}}''. Also see ''EclipseHunter'' ''Literature/EclipseHunter'' and ''Literature/TheLegendOfSunKnight'', two other novel series by the same author.
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* HappilyMarried: Feng Lan's parents, who constantly go on numerous honeymoons and are also SickenlySweethearts.
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* HappilyMarried: Feng Lan's parents, who constantly go on numerous honeymoons and are also SickenlySweethearts.SickeninglySweethearts.