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* TheApprentice:
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** Nip to Thremius
* ArcWords: "It will happen regardless of what you think or do."
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** Nip to Thremius
* ArcWords: "It will happen regardless of what you think or do."
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* AwesomeMomentOfCrowning
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* ClosetKey: Tayven for Khaster.
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* EveryoneLovesBlondes: In a rare male example, Tayven. At least, he starts out this way.
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* TheEvilPrince: Bayard.
* TheFairFolk: The elden. [[FallenAngel It's much more complicated than that.]]
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* HotWitch: Lady Sinaclara.
* IdenticalStranger: Shan looks uncannily like a younger Tayven.
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* KingBobTheNth: Valraven Palindrake is the fifth of his name. Emperor Leonid II.
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** Valraven Palindrake is the fifth of hisname. name.
** Emperor Leonid II.
** Valraven Palindrake is the fifth of his
** Emperor Leonid II.
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* LadyOfBlackMagic: Tatrini is a woman of many talents.
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* TheLostWoods: The Forest of Bree.
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* TheMagicComesBack: But not in the way the characters expect it to.
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* NotSoDifferent: Behind a lot of the conflicts in the series. Most of the rivals in the series e.g. Valraven and Bayard, are very similar.
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* OpposedMentors: Taropat and Sinaclara for Shan.
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* StayInTheKitchen: The Magravandians have this opinion of women.
* StudentAndMasterTeam: Shan and Taropat.
* SuccessionCrisis: The entire basis of the political plot.
* StudentAndMasterTeam: Shan and Taropat.
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* {{Twincest}}:
** Valraven and Pharinet.
** It's implied this will happen between Rav and Elly in the future (as Jia calls Elly "the future sea wife").
** Valraven and Pharinet.
** It's implied this will happen between Rav and Elly in the future (as Jia calls Elly "the future sea wife").
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* WellDoneSonGuy: Shan to Taropat.
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* {{Yandere}}: Pharinet.
* ZeroPercentApprovalRating: Gastern.
* ZeroPercentApprovalRating: Gastern.
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* ZeroPercentApprovalRating: Gastern.
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* DeathOfAChild: [[spoiler: The emperor's youngest three sons are only children, but they die in the end all the same.]]
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* InfantImmortality: Subverted. [[spoiler: The emperor's youngest three sons are only children, but they die in the end all the same.]]
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* DeadlyDecadentCourt: The court in Magrast.
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* DeadlyDecadentCourt: DecadentCourt: The court in Magrast.
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* YourCheatingHeart: All over the place. Pharinet and Valraven carry on an affair while married to the Leckerys, Varencienne sleeps with Merlan [[spoiler: later Shan and Khaster, with the implication that one of them fathered her third child]], Khaster takes up with Tayven while still married to Pharinet, Tatrini implies that she and Leonid both took lovers... basically a side effect of the arranged marriages.
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* LampshadeHanging: Happens frequently, though not enough to make the series a {{deconstruction}} and not quite enough for the characters to be GenreSavvy. The characters just, unknowingly, question normal fantasy novel actions and logic.
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* LampshadeHanging: Happens frequently, though not enough to make the series a {{deconstruction}} and not quite enough for the characters to be GenreSavvy.frequently. The characters just, unknowingly, question normal fantasy novel actions and logic.
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* OutnumberedSibling: Varencienne has eleven brothers (and there was at least one other who died young).
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* {{Twincest}}: Valraven and Pharinet.
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* {{Twincest}}: {{Twincest}}:
** Valraven andPharinet.Pharinet.
** It's implied this will happen between Rav and Elly in the future (as Jia calls Elly "the future sea wife").
** Valraven and
** It's implied this will happen between Rav and Elly in the future (as Jia calls Elly "the future sea wife").
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* TheGoodKingdom: According to legend, Caradore and Magravandias were once like this. The characters question if matters were ever that ideal.
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* TheKingdom: According to legend, Caradore and Magravandias were once like this. The characters question if matters were ever that ideal.
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: Many of the problems in Caradore could have been avoided by the Palindrakes and the Leckerys not marrying in the first place. Pharinet knew it was a bad idea before Valraven or Khaster ever proposed, and after disaster strikes the grieving families grouse that if the weddings had never happened, Ellony and Thomist would still be alive.
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* AManIsNotAVirgin: Pharinet is surprised that both Valraven and Khaster are sexually experienced. She wonders when and how they gained that experience. The only male character who loses his virginity on the page is Shan.
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* BlondGuysAreEvil: The Malagashes are famous for their blonde hair.
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: Many of the problems in Caradore could have been avoided by the Palindrakes and the Leckerys not marrying in the first place. Pharinet knew it was a bad idea before Valraven or Khaster ever proposed, and after disaster strikes the grieving families grouse that if the weddings had never happened, Ellony and Thomist would still be alive.
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: Many of the problems in Caradore could have been avoided by the Palindrakes and the Leckerys not marrying in the first place.
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** Merlan resists any and all attempts people make to say he's like Khaster, even though they look almost exactly alike.
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* RoyalBlood: The Palindrakes, Malagashes, and other royal families. The Mewtish people in particular are proud of their long history and ancient royal dynasty.
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* RoyalBlood: The Palindrakes, Malagashes, and other royal families. The Mewtish people in particular are proud of their long history and ancient royal dynasty. Rather than royal blood being inherently magical, inherently magical people tend to end up in positions of power because of their ability to influence those around them.
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* PolarOppositeTwins: Twins Rav and Elly are opposites physically and mentally. He is golden like his Malagash relatives, bold, adventurous, and talkative. Elly is dark like the Palindrakes, gentle, quiet, and sensitive.
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* PolarOppositeTwins: Valraven and Pharinet are very alike physically, but inwardly are completely different people. She is highly emotional to the point of irrationality, even when she knows her reactions make no sense. Valraven is much more logical and literal in his thinking, and is described as being bewildered by strong emotions.
** Twins Rav and Elly are opposites physically and mentally. He is golden like his Malagash relatives, bold, adventurous, and talkative. Elly is dark like the Palindrakes, gentle, quiet, and sensitive.
** Twins Rav and Elly are opposites physically and mentally. He is golden like his Malagash relatives, bold, adventurous, and talkative. Elly is dark like the Palindrakes, gentle, quiet, and sensitive.
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* PowerTrio: The Brotherhood of the King--Shan the warrior, Taropat the magus, and Tayven the bard.
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* TheThreeFacesOfAdam: The Brotherhood of the King--Shan the warrior, Taropat the magus, and Tayven the bard.
** Shan is the warrior (hunter). He is the youngest of the trio, is sent out into the world to learn on his own, and his role in the trio is to be the physical strength.
** Taropat is the magus (lord). Maintaining stability against the ebb and flow of the world defines magic users in this story. While the oldest of the group, Taropat lacks the wisdom to be the prophet.
** Tayven is the bard (prophet). While he is not the oldest of the three, age is most often associated with him (he is an "old soul" and he is often challenged to think of what he will have left in age when his beauty is gone). The bard's role is to speak truth and wisdom.
** Shan is the warrior (hunter). He is the youngest of the trio, is sent out into the world to learn on his own, and his role in the trio is to be the physical strength.
** Taropat is the magus (lord). Maintaining stability against the ebb and flow of the world defines magic users in this story. While the oldest of the group, Taropat lacks the wisdom to be the prophet.
** Tayven is the bard (prophet). While he is not the oldest of the three, age is most often associated with him (he is an "old soul" and he is often challenged to think of what he will have left in age when his beauty is gone). The bard's role is to speak truth and wisdom.
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* TheReveal: [[spoiler: Khaster, who seemed to be the least mystical and the least likely to become mystical of any of the cast turns out to be the wizard Taropat.]]
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* DespairEventHorizon: [[spoiler: Khaster snaps after he thinks Bayard has brutally murdered Tayven and is presumed dead for the next decade because he just vanishes in the wilderness of Cos.]]
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* FallenAngel: Azcaranoth the peacock angel is likened to [[GreekMythology the myth of Prometheus]] with a touch of {{Satan}}.
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* FallenAngel: Azcaranoth the peacock angel is likened to [[GreekMythology [[Myth/GreekMythology the myth of Prometheus]] with a touch of {{Satan}}.
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* TheWildHunt: Shan rides with the Hunt in a vision.
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* DeathOfTheOldGods: The church of Madragore dissuades and sometiems outright bans local religions. Foy is the most notable example.
* DecoyProtagonist: Arguably, everyone who isn't Valraven, who doesn't get POV chapters until ''The Way of Light''. Shan is this in particular as he is the POV character through the majority of ''The Crown of Silence.''
* DecoyProtagonist: Arguably, everyone who isn't Valraven, who doesn't get POV chapters until ''The Way of Light''. Shan is this in particular as he is the POV character through the majority of ''The Crown of Silence.''
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* DeathOfTheOldGods: The church of Madragore dissuades and sometiems sometimes outright bans local religions. Foy is the most notable example.
* DecoyProtagonist:Arguably, Arguably everyone who isn't Valraven, who doesn't get POV chapters until ''The Way of Light''. Shan is this in particular as he is the POV character through the majority of ''The Crown of Silence.''
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** Shan is gang-raped by soldiers
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** Tayven is nearly assaulted by Bayard before Khaster steps in, and is raped by Bayard later [[SlippingAMickey while drugged]]. [[spoiler: Actually Tayven was not that affected by the drug and reveals to Bayard that he could have killed him during that encounter.]]
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** Shan is gang-raped by soldiers
soldiers, an act so traumatic that he forgets how to ''talk''.
** Tayven is nearly assaulted by Bayard before Khaster steps in, and is raped by Bayard later [[SlippingAMickey while drugged]]. [[spoiler: Actually Tayven was not that affected by the drug and reveals to Bayard that he could have killed him during that encounter. He would probably have killed Bayard if he didn't have other instructions.]]
** Tayven is nearly assaulted by Bayard before Khaster steps in, and is raped by Bayard later [[SlippingAMickey while drugged]]. [[spoiler: Actually Tayven was not that affected by the drug and reveals to Bayard that he could have killed him during that encounter. He would probably have killed Bayard if he didn't have other instructions.]]
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* BlackSheep: Almorante, who is the only dark-haired Malagash in generations. In adulthood he pulled away from his family, becoming interested in the mystic arts, and dressing, as his mother describes, like "a brigand lord" rather than a prince. He would probably be the best candidate to succeed his father, but he just doesn't have a talent for inspiring strong feelings in people like Bayard or the legitimacy of position that Gastern has.
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* SoiledCityOnAHill: Magrast. The city is pretty much the concentrated corruption of the entire Magravandian empire, the palace in particular.
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** Foy: Water
** Efrit: Fire
** Paraga: Air
** Espereth: Earth
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** Espereth: Earth
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** Efrit: King of Fire
** Paraga: Lord of the Air
** Espereth: Lady of the Earth
** Efrit: King of Fire
** Paraga: Lord of the Air
** Espereth: Lady of the Earth
* HappilyMarried: Oddly enough, this does happen in this trilogy. Montimer and Saska were very happy together, Valraven IV and his wife Lerenie were in love, and Everna was very happy with Thomist.
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* YourCheatingHeart: All over the place. Pharinet and Valraven carry on an affair while married to the Leckerys, Varencienne sleeps with Merlan [[spoiler: later Shan and Khaster, with the implication that one of them fathered her third child]], Khaster takes up with Tayven while still married to Pharinet, Tatrini implies that she and Leonid both took lovers... basically a side effect of the arranged marriages.
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Two-hundred years later, Magravandias is [[TheEmpire a vast empire]] and still expanding with the help of Caradorean nobles leading their armies. Pharinet Palindrake, twin sister to Valraven V, begins to learn the truth of her family and her country's history and wants to revive the power of the sea dragons. This is complicated when she becomes insanely jealous of her best friend, who is destined to marry [[TheChosenOne Valraven]] and become the [[InHarmonyWithNature sea]] [[ComesGreatResponsibility wife]], a role she [[BrotherSisterIncest wants for herself]]. It gets worse before it gets better.
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Two-hundred years later, Magravandias is [[TheEmpire a vast empire]] and still expanding with the help of Caradorean nobles leading their armies. Pharinet Palindrake, twin sister to Valraven V, begins to learn the truth of her family and her country's history and wants to revive the power of the sea dragons. This is complicated when she becomes insanely jealous of her best friend, who is destined to marry [[TheChosenOne Valraven]] and become the [[InHarmonyWithNature sea]] [[ComesGreatResponsibility wife]], a role she [[BrotherSisterIncest wants for herself]]. It gets worse before it gets better.
herself]].
The personal drama of Pharinet's love for her brother meets the historical, political, and cultural drama of tensions between Caradore and Magravandias. Tragedy strikes, resulting in the deaths of the Palindrakes' friends and spouses Ellony and Khaster Leckery. Then [[DecoyProtagonist we abandon Pharinet's narration]] for Valraven's [[ArrangedMarriage second wife]], and this is just the beginning of the story.
The personal drama of Pharinet's love for her brother meets the historical, political, and cultural drama of tensions between Caradore and Magravandias. Tragedy strikes, resulting in the deaths of the Palindrakes' friends and spouses Ellony and Khaster Leckery. Then [[DecoyProtagonist we abandon Pharinet's narration]] for Valraven's [[ArrangedMarriage second wife]], and this is just the beginning of the story.
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* KeepingTheEnemyClose: Valraven, the emperor's most valued general, is married to Princess Varencienne for this purpose.
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* CynicismCatalyst: Ellony's death triggers a very nasty shift in Khaster. It could have been healed, except then Tayven happened and it got worse.
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** Ellony, Valraven's first wife, is innocent and virginal, unable to handle the harsh realities of the world.
** Varencienne, Valraven's second wife, is Valraven's life partner and the mistress of Caradore, but their marriage is ultimately a partnership and not love.
** Pharinet, Valraven's sister, is the most sexually driven of the three, and it is their forbidden passion that sets the tragedy into motion.
** Varencienne, Valraven's second wife, is Valraven's life partner and the mistress of Caradore, but their marriage is ultimately a partnership and not love.
** Pharinet, Valraven's sister, is the most sexually driven of the three, and it is their forbidden passion that sets the tragedy into motion.
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** Ellony, Valraven's first wife, is innocent and virginal, unable to handle the harsh realities of the world.
world and ultimately breaks over the harsh reality of her husband's nature.
** Varencienne, Valraven's second wife, is Valraven's lifepartner partner. He trusts her and the respects her, and she does well in her role as mistress of Caradore, but their marriage is ultimately a partnership and not love.
** Pharinet, Valraven's sister, is the most sexually driven of the three,and it even portrayed by her husband Khaster as the archetypal black-haired vixen. It is their the forbidden passion between her and Valraven that sets the tragedy into motion.
** Varencienne, Valraven's second wife, is Valraven's life
** Pharinet, Valraven's sister, is the most sexually driven of the three,
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* TheThreeFacesOfEve: The three women in Valraven's life--Ellony (child), Varencienne (wife) and Pharinet (seductress).
** Ellony, Valraven's first wife, is innocent and virginal, unable to handle the harsh realities of the world.
** Varencienne, Valraven's second wife, is Valraven's life partner and the mistress of Caradore, but their marriage is ultimately a partnership and not love.
** Pharinet, Valraven's sister, is the most sexually driven of the three, and it is their forbidden passion that sets the tragedy into motion.
** Ellony, Valraven's first wife, is innocent and virginal, unable to handle the harsh realities of the world.
** Varencienne, Valraven's second wife, is Valraven's life partner and the mistress of Caradore, but their marriage is ultimately a partnership and not love.
** Pharinet, Valraven's sister, is the most sexually driven of the three, and it is their forbidden passion that sets the tragedy into motion.
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* TheThreeFacesOfEve: The three women in Valraven's life--Ellony (child), Varencienne (wife) and Pharinet (seductress).
** Gastern has a dream of three queens--one green, one red, and one black. This is possibly TheHecateSisters or a combination of the two, the matter is never clarified.
** Gastern has a dream of three queens--one green, one red, and one black. This is possibly TheHecateSisters or a combination of the two, the matter is never clarified.